Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/Featured log/May 2022

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List of Billboard number-one R&B songs of 1949

Nominator(s): ChrisTheDude (talk) 09:29, 27 April 2022 (UTC)

Presenting another year in the history of Billboard's R&B charts. Feedback as ever will be gratefully received and acted upon promptly -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 09:29, 27 April 2022 (UTC)

Comments by Pseud 14

I could not find anything to nitpick on this list. Another fine and excellent work from your Billboard R&B charts series that earns my support. Pseud 14 (talk) 16:03, 29 April 2022 (UTC)

Aoba47

• For the File:JohnLeeHooker1997.jpg caption, I would use the exact year that the photo was taken to provide the reader with a more exact context.
• For the Billboard magazine citations, I think it would be helpful to clarify that they were accessed through Google Books by using the via= parameter. I would also add the ISSN to the citations as well as the volume and issue numbers so the information is more complete.

Wonderful work with this list. Once everything has been addressed, I will be more than happy to support this FLC for promotion. Have a great rest of your weekend. Aoba47 (talk) 01:32, 30 May 2022 (UTC)

@Aoba47: - done! -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 07:30, 30 May 2022 (UTC)

• Thank you for addressing everything. I support this FLC for promotion. If possible, I would greatly appreciate any feedback for my current peer review. Either way, have a great rest of your week! Aoba47 (talk) 11:14, 30 May 2022 (UTC)

Dank

• Standard disclaimer: I don't know what I'm doing, and I mostly AGF on sourcing.
• In the 3rd and 5th columns, Paul Williams should sort after Washington.
• "arwulf, arwulf": not sure what that means.
• "Big Jay McNeeley" or "Big Jay McNeely"? Even if "Big Jay McNeeley" is on the label, couldn't we make the case that that was a typo? Your call.
• Checking the FLC criteria:
• 1. I've done a little copyediting; feel free to revert or discuss. I checked sorting on all sortable columns and sampled the links in the table.
• 2. The lead meets WP:LEAD and defines the inclusion criteria.
• 3a. The list has comprehensive items and annotations.
• 3b. The article is well-sourced to reliable sources, and the UPSD tool isn't indicating any actual problems (but this isn't a source review). All relevant retrieval dates are present.
• 3c. The list meets requirements as a stand-alone list, it isn't a content fork, it doesn't largely duplicate another article (that I can find), and it wouldn't fit easily inside another article.
• 4. It is navigable.
• 5. It meets style requirements. At a glance, the images seem fine.
• 6. It is stable.
• Close enough for a support. Well done. - Dank (push to talk) 20:34, 30 May 2022 (UTC)

@Dank: - thanks for your review. I fixed the sorting on Williams and the spelling of McNeely (both just dumb typos on my part). If you look at the AllMusic page that is ref 8, it lists the author as arwulf arwulf, who would seem to be this chap...... -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 07:09, 31 May 2022 (UTC)

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List of awards and nominations received by Judy Ann Santos

Nominator(s): Pseud 14 (talk) 16:04, 23 April 2022 (UTC)

Having worked and brought Judy Ann Santos's filmography to FL status, here's another one of her related list article that I am nominating, with my earlier FLC seeing substantial support and no outstanding issues. This article had a complete rework done, including adding a concise and readable introduction/lead, formatted to a singular table, thoroughly searched for RS (publications, newspapers, etc.) that are available online, since sourcing can be a challenge, especially for Filipino subject(s). Happy to address your comments and thanks to all who take the time to review the list. Pseud 14 (talk) 16:04, 23 April 2022 (UTC)

Minor comment by Ixtal

I'd recommend shortening width-wise the first column in the table as it takes up a bit too much real estate. Allowing more space between the other columns would improve readability. — Ixtal ⁂ (talk) 16:32, 23 April 2022 (UTC)

Ixtal, I think I found where the issue lies, I removed style="width: 100%; after the plainrowheaders parameter so the columns adjust to the text. Let me know if that fixes the issue from your view. Pseud 14 (talk) 17:07, 23 April 2022 (UTC)

That looks much better Pseud 14 :D — Ixtal ⁂ (talk) 17:32, 23 April 2022 (UTC)

I'd also recommend adding the posters of some of the films she's won awards for or other such images if possible (copyright and such) for just making the article look nicer. Those are the drive-by comments from me really. — Ixtal ⁂ (talk) 17:33, 23 April 2022 (UTC)

Thanks Ixtal, while that seems a genuinely nice recommendation, I don't think that format is generally deemed suitable for FLs since movie posters fall under non-free images and we try to avoid using those in FLs or FAs (unless necessary in the article) IMHO. See examples of our most recently promoted FLs (Anne Hathaway, Pretty Zinta, Gwyneth Paltrow). Pseud 14 (talk) 17:44, 23 April 2022 (UTC)

Comment

• Literally my only nitpick is that in the table you where someone appears more than once you link it every time (which is correct for a sortable table) with the exception of Kay Tagal Kang Hinintay, which is linked once but not the other time. That's literally all I could find - awesome work! -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 19:57, 25 April 2022 (UTC)

Thanks for the catching that ChrisTheDude and for your review. It should be linked now. Pseud 14 (talk) 20:46, 25 April 2022 (UTC)

• Support -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 07:30, 26 April 2022 (UTC)

Pamzeis

I will try not to screw this up

• "Three years later, she starred opposite Fernando Poe Jr. in the comedy drama Isusumbong Kita sa Tatay Ko (1999), the first Filipino film to earn more than ₱100 million at the box office,[4] for which she was awarded the Box Office Queen title." — I'm having trouble following this sentence, since it has quite a few facts in it. Can it be split?

Done

• "for which she was nominated at the FAMAS and Star Awards and garnered a Comedy Actress of the Year win at the Box Office Entertainment Awards" — feels... kinda clunky and awkward

Reworded to include just the win

• Per MOS:CONFORMTITLE, titles of works should be italicised and citations

Fixed

Hope this helps :) Pamzeis (talk) 04:51, 26 April 2022 (UTC)

@Pamzeis: thank you for your review. I have addressed the above comments. Let me know if there's anything I may have missed. Pseud 14 (talk) 15:19, 26 April 2022 (UTC)

• Support. Pamzeis (talk) 01:12, 27 April 2022 (UTC)

• Support I made a small edit but other than that, everything is in order. FrB.TG (talk) 19:44, 19 May 2022 (UTC)

FrB.TG, thank you for your edits and support! Much appreciated! Pseud 14 (talk) 21:03, 19 May 2022 (UTC)

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List of accolades received by The Lego Movie

Nominator(s): Chompy Ace

I am nominating this for featured list because I have expanded and reworked the table at The Lego Movie article and then I provided sources with verdicts for each award in this list. Chompy Ace 13:44, 6 April 2022 (UTC)

Comments from Kavyansh

• "a 2014 computer-animated adventure comedy film" — Perhaps, avoid linking two or more adjacent words.
• "Lord, Miller, and Dan and Kevin Hageman" — is the first "and" necessary?
  • Question for you, Kavyansh. If Chompy wanted to emphasize the first two names rather than the last two, how do we write that ... "Dan, Kevin Hageman, Lord and Miller"? But then the readers would have no way of knowing that "Hageman" is Dan's last name (until they read on, and then it's too late). But if "Dan and Kevin Hageman, Lord and Miller" is right, then why should one "and" disappear if we switch the names around? Either the second "and" is necessary or it's not ... it would be better to be consistent ... and it appears to be necessary here. - Dank (push to talk) 16:32, 6 April 2022 (UTC)
    • I don't know why there is a need to emphasize the first two names when it is already mentioned that the film was "written and directed by Phil Lord and Christopher Miller" [emphasis added]. So, "from a story by Lord, Miller, Dan and Kevin Hageman" reads fine to me. Moreover, this article already has usage of oxford comma. So not adding a comma in 'Dan and Kevin Hageman' would automatically imply that it is "Dan Hageman and Kevin Hageman". Does that work? – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 17:16, 6 April 2022 (UTC)
      • I'll try to raise a discussion on the general question at WT:FLC ... might not work, but it's worth a shot. - Dank (push to talk) 18:51, 6 April 2022 (UTC)
• Note 1 needs a citation
• The image needs ALT text.
• That is pretty much all there is to say. Great work!

– Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 15:25, 6 April 2022 (UTC)

@Kavyansh.Singh:  Done for all Chompy Ace 21:51, 6 April 2022 (UTC)

Support, all concerns addressed. – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 11:59, 7 April 2022 (UTC)

Comments

• There are some issues with the sorting in the Recipient(s) column. Anything that starts with a quotation mark should ignore that and sort based on the actual first word. And anything that starts with "The" should ignore that and sort on the next word.
• That's all I got! -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 07:31, 7 April 2022 (UTC)

@ChrisTheDude:  Done Chompy Ace 09:11, 7 April 2022 (UTC)

• Support - nice one! -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 11:43, 7 April 2022 (UTC)

Accessibility review (MOS:DTAB)

• For row scopes, e.g. !scope=row, if the cell spans multiple rows via 'rowspan' then the scope should be changed to use !scope=rowgroup instead.
• Please see MOS:DTAB for example table code if this isn't clear. I don't return to these reviews until the nomination is ready to close, so ping me if you have any questions. --PresN 23:33, 7 April 2022 (UTC)

@PresN:  Done; I used this table from List of accolades received by Soul (2020 film). Chompy Ace 03:06, 8 April 2022 (UTC)

Yeah, rowgroup has been around for a long time, but it only got put on the ACCESS examples last fall, and I only started checking for it in these reviews in the last couple months (so, after Soul was promoted). --PresN 13:17, 8 April 2022 (UTC)

AK

• Disclaimer: I haven't checked references and will be claiming credit at the Wikicup.
• "Lord, Miller, Dan and Kevin Hageman" → I think it should be "Lord, Miller, and Dan and Kevin Hageman". The use of the Oxford comma elsewhere means that it isn't really confusing and omitting the first "and" reads weirdly.
• "international co-production between the United States, Australia, and Denmark" → This makes it sound like a collab between the countries instead of production houses from those countries.
• That's all I could really find. AryKun (talk) 07:16, 9 April 2022 (UTC)

@AryKun:  Done Chompy Ace 23:23, 9 April 2022 (UTC)

• Support on the basis of prose. AryKun (talk) 03:52, 10 April 2022 (UTC)

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Snooker world rankings 1977/1978

Nominator(s): BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 09:30, 21 April 2022 (UTC)

I am nominating this for featured list because I think it meets the same standards as the recently-promoted Snooker world rankings 1976/1977. Coverage of the 1977/1978ranking list seems to be confined to snooker-specific sources, with only brief passing mentions in the press. Any suggestions for improvements are welcome. Relevant extracts from sources can be provided on request. Thanks and regards, BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 09:30, 21 April 2022 (UTC)

Comment

• The only significant thing I can see at first glance is that the article does not explain how three players with 0 total points got into the rankings - why were these players ranked and the other (presumably dozens) of professional players who had not gained any points at the last three WSCs were not......? -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 19:08, 22 April 2022 (UTC)

• I'll see if I can find anything in sources about this. Regards, BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 09:17, 23 April 2022 (UTC)
• I've checked other sources that cover the rankings (including Jack Karnehm's World Snooker, Ian Morrison's Hamlyn Encyclopedia of Snooker, the Snooker Scene article on the rankings for 1978/1979, snooker.org (link), and none of them list anyone beyond 25th for that year. Nor does cuetracker, which while not accepted as a reliable source, is worth consulting IMO. Kobylecky's The Complete International Directory of Snooker Players – 1927 to 2018 mentions seedings for each player at each World Championship. He has Marcus Owen as seeded 23rd and Bennett as 24th for the 1978 tournament, but Morgan "unranked"; I looked at a couple of other players from the 1977 championship not on the list of 25, and they were also "unranked" according to Kobylecky. I can't think of anywhere else that is likely to cover this. Mysterious. Any suggestions ChrisTheDude? Thanks and regards, BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 12:12, 23 April 2022 (UTC)

• I would suggest adding a sentence above the table saying something like "It is unclear why three players with 0 points were included in the rankings" or similar. I presume there was a reason for it, which just hasn't made it into available sources, but it just looks really odd to see someone like M.Owen listed there whereas someone like David Greaves, who also seems to have competed in two WSCs during the relevant period without achieving any ranking points, is not included....... -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 07:51, 24 April 2022 (UTC)

• In fact, Greaves actually did better in the 1976 WSC than Owen did, which makes it even odder that the latter got a place in the 1978 rankings but the former did not....? -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 07:54, 24 April 2022 (UTC)

• I've added the text as you suggested. I had a look through Snooker Scene magazine for the year following the list, as that would be the most likely place to report on any changes or further details, but without getting anything else relating to this. Regards, BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 20:21, 24 April 2022 (UTC)

• Support -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 11:07, 25 April 2022 (UTC)

Comments by MWright96

• Lede: players eliminated in the quarter-finalists gained two" - this sentence can be written as players eliminated in the quarter-finals gained two, defeated quarter-finalists gained two or something similar MWright96 (talk) 10:28, 23 April 2022 (UTC)
• Lede: "Ray Reardon retained top place in the rankings from the 1976/1977 'rankings' ." - try not to repeat the same word when they are close together MWright96 (talk) 10:28, 23 April 2022 (UTC)
• Lede: Perhaps state in the prose how many points Reardon and Spencer had in the season's rankings list MWright96 (talk) 10:35, 23 April 2022 (UTC)
• Lede: "The eight-highest ranked players were placed directly into the last-16 round of the 1978 World Snooker Championship, whilst all other entrants were placed in a qualifying competition" - repetition of the word "placed" MWright96 (talk) 10:28, 23 April 2022 (UTC)
• Table: scope=col(s) are missing from the 1975, 1976, 1977 columns in the table MWright96 (talk) 10:28, 23 April 2022 (UTC)

That is all I have MWright96 (talk) 10:28, 23 April 2022 (UTC)

• Many thanks, MWright96. I've acted on all of the points you raised; let me know if there is anything esle. Regards, BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 11:31, 23 April 2022 (UTC)
  • @BennyOnTheLoose: Support Have no more issues to raise; note I've made a minor edit to the article MWright96 (talk) 16:59, 23 April 2022 (UTC)

AK

• Disclaimer: I haven't checked references and will be claiming credit at the Wikicup.
• Support since I don't really have anything actionable, although I wonder if there could be a source added for the last line in Rankings ("It is unclear why three players with 0 points were included in the rankings."). AryKun (talk) 12:15, 25 April 2022 (UTC)
  • @AryKun: - see discussion above in response to my query. No sources have been found to indicate why these players were included and others with 0 points were not. If any sources said why they were included then that sentence wouldn't need to be there. In essence, it's hard to produce a source to explain why something can't be sourced. Does that make sense.....? -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 13:34, 25 April 2022 (UTC)
    • Hi AryKun - Thanks for reviewing the article. I think ChrisTheDude has summed up why that sentence isn't sourced. Let me know if there's anything else. Regards, BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 15:17, 27 April 2022 (UTC)

Source review passed; promoting. --PresN 22:50, 26 May 2022 (UTC)

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Richard Dawkins Award

Nominator(s): Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 20:24, 5 April 2022 (UTC)

Rewrote this list recently, and feel that it meets the FL criteria. If promoted, this might be the first Category:FL-Class Atheism articles. Over to the community for their constructive feedback. – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 20:24, 5 April 2022 (UTC)

Comments by Dudley

• Oppose. This article just lists the recipients with no information about what they have done which the Center for Enquiry regards as deserving the award. It falls far short of the requirement for comprehensiveness. Dudley Miles (talk) 21:35, 5 April 2022 (UTC)
  • Hi @Dudley Miles, thanks for your review. I have worked at FL awards like Darwin Medal and Gabor Medal. The standard practice is that we include, in direct quotation, the "citation" or the rationale for the award, which the presenting organisation provides. In this case, I have checked at the official websites of both the former and current presenting organization (Atheist Alliance of America and Center for Inquiry) and the Dawkins Foundation. None has any citation/rationale. To add to the above issue, we even don't have a fixed reason as so why is this award awarded. Atheist Alliance of America says it is awarded to "honor an outstanding atheist whose contributions raise public awareness of the nontheist life stance; who, through writings, media, the arts, film, and/or the stage, advocates increased scientific knowledge; who, through work or by example, teaches acceptance of the nontheist philosophy". Center for Inquiry says it is awarded to a "distinguished individual from the worlds of science, scholarship, education or entertainment, who publicly proclaims the values of secularism and rationalism, upholding scientific truth wherever it may lead". It simply changes from limited criteria of "outstanding atheist" to broad criteria of "distinguished individual". From "nontheist philosophy" to "values of secularism and rationalism". In other words, for me to write information about what they have done which the Center for Enquiry regards as deserving the award when the Center for Inquiry has no information on that would definitely be Original research, and this is the reason it only has name and portrait. – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 04:27, 6 April 2022 (UTC)
    • Adding to that, I see that the comprehensiveness FL criteria (WP:FL#3a) requires having a defined scope and "providing at least all of the major items and, where practical, a complete set of items". Here we do have a complete set of all winners. "where appropriate, it has annotations that provide useful and appropriate information about the items": Here, we do have mentioned everything that is relevant and what WP:RS report. Because I think this does meet the requirement for comprehensiveness. We have had recent featured lists (1, 2, etc.) which just mention that name/title and image, because that is all what is relevant. Do you have any sources which are not present in the article and have the information you are requesting for? – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 07:27, 6 April 2022 (UTC)

Comments moved from below

• Outgrowing God: A Beginner's Guide is more relevant than The Selfish Gene
  • Done. – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 18:17, 7 April 2022 (UTC)
• "The most recent individual to be awarded is Tim Minchin in 2021." This is recentism as it will soon be out of date. You can just say "In 2021..."
  • Done. – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 18:17, 7 April 2022 (UTC)
• "She had an early interest in science stemmed from a fascination with Karl Marx" I think [6] is more relevant. It clarifies that she is an agnostic, not an atheist.
  • Done. Although I was a bit hesitant on using WP:SALON.COM as it has no consensus on its reliability. Upon further thinking, I'd say this is usually decided on case-by-case basis. Here, we directly quote Druyan's, and specify her self stated agnostic views. So, I'd say no issues with using it. – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 18:17, 7 April 2022 (UTC)
• "Dennett was a professor". I would take "was" to mean he has died. If he has retired then "is an emeritus professor" would be correct.
  • Changes to "he served as a professor", that would be better, I think. – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 18:17, 7 April 2022 (UTC)
• This looks much better now - just a few queries. Dudley Miles (talk) 17:50, 7 April 2022 (UTC)
  • @Dudley Miles: Thanks for the comments; done most of it. How does it look now? – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 18:19, 7 April 2022 (UTC)

• Support. Looks fine now. Dudley Miles (talk) 18:49, 7 April 2022 (UTC)

• Thanks a lot! Just for the record, I un-boldfaced and striked your initial oppose in this edit, merely to avoid any confusion by anyone reading this FLC. – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 18:52, 7 April 2022 (UTC)

Wretchskull

• Comment: I unfortunately have to concur with the above, Kavyansh.Singh. Have you checked everywhere to make sure there isn't any info on the rationales (browser search, google scholar, google books, internet archive, TWL, profile websites of each recipient's institutions, etc.)? If so, comprehensiveness is probably met. Wretchskull (talk) 22:10, 5 April 2022 (UTC)
  • @Wretchskull: Mostly yes, and yes, they have no official rationale or citation. See my response above. – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 04:28, 6 April 2022 (UTC)

• There is information about at least some of the awards. On a quick search I have found Tim Minchin] and Lawrence Krauss. I do not think your other examples are comparable. The Gallup poll by its nature does not give reasons and the birds of Nauru has links to relevant further information. This article does not provide links to information specifically relevant to the award. It would be helpful to give a summary where it is available, even if you have to mark some recipients as 'information not available'. Dudley Miles (talk) 08:41, 6 April 2022 (UTC)
• @Kavyansh.Singh: Have you perhaps considered adding small quotes of Dawkins' speech of each recipient from the YouTube video attached to each source? For example, here? Not sure if this would fly under FLC. Wretchskull (talk) 08:52, 6 April 2022 (UTC)

• @Giants2008: are Youtube videos allowed as references? Dudley Miles (talk) 10:37, 6 April 2022 (UTC)

• @Dudley Miles: See WP:RSPYT. Also, I don't think adding parts of Dawkins speech would be helpful. How about if I add 2-3 lines on every recipient of the award, detailing their contributions to, well, secularism and rationalism? – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 10:44, 6 April 2022 (UTC)

• Hi @Dudley Miles and @Wretchskull: How does the list look now? – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 12:30, 6 April 2022 (UTC)

  Excellent work! Support. Wretchskull (talk) 12:32, 6 April 2022 (UTC)

FrB.TG

Support on all criteria except 3a. I haven't heard of this award before so I cannot judge its comprehensiveness. Other than that, I find the list to be well-written, well-sourced and in compliance with other FL criteria. Just one minor suggestion below.

• "The Richard Dawkins Award is named in honor of evolutionary biologist Richard Dawkins." Perhaps we could avoid repeating Richard Dawkins by rephrasing to something like: "The Richard Dawkins Award is named in honor of the eponymous evolutionary biologist." FrB.TG (talk) 14:42, 6 April 2022 (UTC)
  • Done. Thanks a lot! – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 14:59, 6 April 2022 (UTC)

Oppose from TRM

• "the Center for Inquiry. It was" what is that? Some context would be useful here, i.e. what they are, where they're based etc.
  • Done.
• "awarded by the Atheist Alliance of America coordinating" according to our article it was called "Atheist Alliance International" at that time.
  • The source refers it as "Atheist Alliance of America", and our article on the same is a redirect to "Atheist Alliance International"
• You link nontheism but not atheism?
  • Fixed.
• I would avoid the "according to" for the organisation's own reason for giving the award, maybe stick with "The award is presented for ..." and just reference it to the organisation.
  • Fixed.
• "by Dawkins." maybe "by Dawkins himself." to ensure no confusion over him individually and his organisation.
  • Done, but I was reluctant as I don't think 'Dawkins' could be confused with his organisation.
• "by the Prospect magazine" reads odd to me, no need for "the".
  • Done; I believed having a definite article is not an issue as long as it is consistent within the article.
• Oh you do link atheism, just not first time.
  • Fixed.
• "and wrote books like" -> "has written books including".
  • Done.
• Probably also worth noting up front that Dawkins is British as this article's ENGVAR is USEng (for the awarding organization I assume).
  • Done.
• Why did you pick one of his bibliography that isn't considered notable enough for an article on Wikipedia??
  • Well, it is notable book, we just don't have an article. Redlinked.
• "received by James Randi.[7] In" who is Randi? Where is he from? What did he do?
  • All that is in the table. Added a line here as well.
• "jointly as Penn & Teller received" comma after Teller, and suggest you note them as "television magicians" or something.
  • Done.
• "due to Maher's views on vaccines" no need to repeat Maher, and what were his views, it's unclear here.
  • Done.
• "David Gorski referred" why does his opinion count here?
  • Specified (maybe)
• "became the first Indian" were all recipients to that point American then?
  • Here is the case: Almost no WP:RS report that "XYZ was first American/British/Canadian/etc" to receive the award. But, there are a whole bunch of sources ([7], [8], [9], [10], [11], [12], [13], [14], [15], etc., etc.) referring that particular person as the "first Indian" to receive the award. I have just summarized what many of WP:RS report.
• "awards have been awarded" awful repetition.
  • Sorry, fixed.
• "was an magician" -> "a magician".
  • Fixed (I honestly don't know what I was thinking then!)
• Why is "mind reading" not hyphenated while "fortune-telling" is?
  • Done.
• "he was a recipient of the MacArthur award.[13]" what was that for?
  • The source does not mention that.
• Odd you have a ref column but most of the refs are in the notes column.
  • That is because the "Ref." column has references supporting that the individual has received the award in that particular year. The "Notes" column has biography and views of the individual. Almost none of the sources in the "Notes" column mention the Dawkins award.
• "early interest in science stemmed from a fascination" grammar and tone issues.
  • Removed.
• "are Emmy Award winning magician-duo" really odd grammar here, maybe "are an Emmy Award-winning magician duo".
  • Done.
• "famous for her work" famous? Notable perhaps?
  • Done.
• " the Tufts University" I don't think anyone ever refers to it as "the Tufts University"...
  • Removed 'the'. But strange, because the University itself refers as "the Tufts University" [16].
• "converted to an atheism" nope, no need for "an".
  • Removed.
• "critic of Quran" of the Quran.
  • Done.
• Jacoby's notes have literally no explanation as to why she might have been suitable for the award.
  • Added that she is an atheist.
• "who famously wrote the book" tone issues.
  • Done.
• "which Susan Sontag called" who is she?
  • Specified.
• "at the Harvard University; he has" not "the" Harvard...
  • Okay.
• " an author holding Ph.D. in philosophy" again, weird grammar, I would say "an author with a Ph.D. in philosophy".
  • Done.
• "book 36 Arguments for the Existence of God" this is interesting, so she argued in favour of God?
  • Not entirely; specified.
• "supporter of Evolution, and" no need for capital E.
  • Done.
• "quality, ... and" delete the comma and ensure the ellipsis meets the requirements of MOS:ELLIPSIS.
  • Done.
• "referred by Melissa Pugh as" who is this non-notable person and why do we care what she thinks?
  • Because she was the president of Atheist Alliance of America; specified.
• "an American has served " grammar.
• "Fry is an comedian" British.
  • Done.
• Perhaps (since you made a big deal out of the "first Indian" recipient) nationalities should be included as a new column here.
  • I don't think that would be helpful for the reader. And I have explained my reasoning for "first Indian" above.
• "who received the Richard Dawkins Award because of" I don't think you need to use the full formal title here, just "the award" probably as that's what this entire article is about.
  • Sure.
• "Gervais is an comedian" not "an" and add British in here again.
  • Sure.
• "Indian to receive the Richard Dawkins Award" so why not the first Briton? Or the first "American-Canadian"? And again, no need to repeat the full name of the award.
  • Reasoning specified above.
• "comedian, who received the Richard Dawkins Award for "inspiring" same again re: award.
  • Done.

That's it for content for me at the moment. I'm a little disappointed to find so many fundamental issues in a list which appears to already have sufficient support to promote. Maybe standards aren't quite what they used to be. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 16:21, 12 April 2022 (UTC)

@The Rambling Man: Thanks a lot for your review. I think I have replied to your every comment. Please let me know if there is anything else that needs attention. – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 06:45, 13 April 2022 (UTC)

@The Rambling Man: Hi! Can you please take another look? – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 08:56, 25 April 2022 (UTC)

@The Rambling Man: Hi! Apologies for pressing you, but is there anything else required? Thanks! – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 12:21, 2 May 2022 (UTC)

Certainly much improved. If I have time to re-review in detail I will, but happy to strike the oppose and go with whatever my colleagues decide upon review for promotion. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 16:06, 17 May 2022 (UTC)

Comments by Pseud 14

General non-expert review. I have very few comments as it seems the major ones have been addressed above. So apologies if it comes across as nitpick-y.

• In 2005, Penn Jillette and Teller, jointly as Penn & Teller, received the award.[10][11] In 2009, Bill Maher received the award; due to his views on vaccines and his criticism of evidence-based medicine, oncologist David Gorski referred to him receiving the award as "inappropriate".[12] In 2020, Javed Akhtar became the first Indian to receive the award.[13] -- I would avoid this so the prose does not come across as listing dates, as the year is already in the table itself. Since the inclusion of some recipients in the lead is because it is notable, perhaps you can mention that Penn & Teller was jointly awarded, or were the first co-winners.
  • Well, the recipients are also in the table. I feel that since we have few notable people in the lead, mentioning the year is not a big issue. It would rather feel incomplete without years. Thoughts? – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 08:53, 25 April 2022 (UTC)

Fair point. Perhaps just switch it up a bit, so that every sentence doesn't begin with the year. E.g. [recipient] received the award for his work/contribution on ... in 2009. Something along those lines, to make the flow better. Otherwise, doesn't hinder my support for this work.

• In 2021, Tim Minchin received the award -- perhaps it's worth mentioning that he is the current recipient of the award, similar to other FLs like Academy Award for Best Actress, Academy Award for Best Actor.
  • Done.
• Since 2003, 19 awards have been received by 20 people. -- I think it would read much better with "Since its inception, the award has been given to 20 individuals.", as you've already mentioned at the onset of the lead that the award was established in 2003.
  • Done.
• In the table, the abbreviation should be "Ref(s)" since you are using "Reference(s)" as the full form.
  • Done.
• That's all I have. A very interesting read! --Pseud 14 (talk) 20:29, 21 April 2022 (UTC)

@Pseud 14: Thanks for the review! – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 08:54, 25 April 2022 (UTC)

• Just a very minor (nitpick-y) suggestion on the first point. Otherwise, I'm happy to provide my support. Good job. By the way, if you have some spare time or inclination, would appreciate feedback on my FLC. Pseud 14 (talk) 15:21, 25 April 2022 (UTC)

Query

@PresN: I am not sure how this nomination would proceed. TRM gave a comprehensive feedback, for which I am much obliged. I pinged him thrice over a span of 20 days, and do not wish to ping him again (he probably is busy in real life). It has been a month since I responded to the comments. What would you advice? – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 15:38, 13 May 2022 (UTC)

When this nomination is evaluated (probably in the next wave of promotions, unless Giants gets to it first) I'll evaluate if the review was addressed to my satisfaction and if I have any additional concerns. It's not unknown to have addressed opposes where the opposer never returns, so don't worry about it. --PresN 16:13, 13 May 2022 (UTC)

Thanks! – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 16:20, 13 May 2022 (UTC)

Comments from Maile66

Re the "scope row", wouldn't it make more sense to have that next to the names column? The years are already in chron order and sortable. — Maile (talk) 15:45, 19 May 2022 (UTC)

@Maile66: Perhaps yes; done. – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 15:52, 19 May 2022 (UTC)

Support - — Maile (talk) 18:49, 19 May 2022 (UTC)

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List of female 24 Hours of Le Mans drivers

Nominator(s): MWright96 (talk) 19:19, 16 February 2022 (UTC)

Following the successful promotion of the List of 24 Hours of Le Mans winners to featured list status, I hereby present to you a list of all the women and all-women teams who have competed in the iconic French automobile endurance motor race. I welcome all comments for this review. MWright96 (talk) 19:19, 16 February 2022 (UTC)

Comments

Resolved comments from ChrisTheDude (talk) 10:28, 18 February 2022 (UTC)

*Check for image captions which are complete sentences and therefore need full stops Added more full stops MWright96 (talk) 09:37, 18 February 2022 (UTC) "There have been six countries who" => "There have been six countries which" Done MWright96 (talk) 09:37, 18 February 2022 (UTC) "Of every crew that has started the event since the first race in 1923, 28 were composed of entirely women drivers" - this reads oddly, as obviously the 28 female crews are a subset of every crew ever to race Reworded MWright96 (talk) 09:37, 18 February 2022 (UTC) It still read weirdly IMO. WHy not just "Since the first race in 1923, there have been 28 all-women squads"? I can't see any benefit in the "Of every crew that has started the event since the first race...." part, as it's completely obvious that the 28 all-female squads are a subset of "every squad ever"..... -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 10:15, 18 February 2022 (UTC) @ChrisTheDude: Done MWright96 (talk) 10:23, 18 February 2022 (UTC) "The highest overall finish achieved by an individual woman at Le Mans was Siko" => "The highest overall finish by an individual woman at Le Mans was achieved by Siko" Done MWright96 (talk) 09:37, 18 February 2022 (UTC) "Small number in the best finish column denotes a driver's highest finish" - I don't see any small numbers in that column, just regular-sized ones Reworded MWright96 (talk) 09:37, 18 February 2022 (UTC) "Odette Siko was one of first two women" => "Odette Siko was one of the first two women" Done MWright96 (talk) 09:37, 18 February 2022 (UTC) Vanina Ickx is not linked in her image caption Done MWright96 (talk) 09:37, 18 February 2022 (UTC) Miss D. Champney is linked in the team column of the second table, but the earlier instances of the team name being that of one of the drivers are not Added extra wikilinks MWright96 (talk) 09:37, 18 February 2022 (UTC) "Gilberte Thirion was barred from competing for Equipe Gordini in the 1954 race because she was a woman." - the lead says that women were only banned after a disaster in 1955. SO why was Thirion banned earlier than that? Clarified that in the lede MWright96 (talk) 09:37, 18 February 2022 (UTC) That's all I got :-) -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 17:04, 17 February 2022 (UTC) @ChrisTheDude: Replies are above MWright96 (talk) 09:37, 18 February 2022 (UTC)

• Support -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 10:28, 18 February 2022 (UTC)

Accessibility review (MOS:DTAB)

• Tables need row scopes on the "primary" column for each row, which in combination with column scopes lets screen reader software accurately determine and read out the headers for each cell of a data table. You have it on the "by name" table, but they're missing on the "by country" table.
• Please see MOS:DTAB for example table code if this isn't clear. --PresN 00:54, 21 February 2022 (UTC)
  • @PresN: Added extra scope="row"s MWright96 (talk) 08:11, 21 February 2022 (UTC)

CommentsSupport from TRM

• Is it "female" drivers or "woman" drivers?
  • Made changes to this MWright96 (talk) 15:28, 22 February 2022 (UTC)
• "were officially not permitted to enter the event until the restriction was lifted" what provoked the change that led to banning women?
  • It was because a woman driver was killed at the 1956 12 Hours of Reims as well as spectator deaths in two events MWright96 (talk) 15:28, 22 February 2022 (UTC)
    • Could we add something to that effect, even if it's a footnote? The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 20:36, 26 February 2022 (UTC)
      • Added an accompanying note to go what I have written MWright96 (talk) 20:32, 27 February 2022 (UTC)
• "1954 race" in note [a], make race part of the link.
  • Done MWright96 (talk) 15:28, 22 February 2022 (UTC)
• "in 2021.[7]" overlinked.
  • Delinked MWright96 (talk) 15:28, 22 February 2022 (UTC)
• "all-women squads" first mention of squad here, worth noting to the readers that not one single driver competes for the whole drive.
  • Clarified MWright96 (talk) 15:28, 22 February 2022 (UTC)
• "the 1974 edition" edition inside link.
  • Done MWright96 (talk) 15:28, 22 February 2022 (UTC)
• Same for the following three.
  • Done MWright96 (talk) 15:28, 22 February 2022 (UTC)
• Best Finish -> Best finish
  • Done MWright96 (talk) 15:28, 22 February 2022 (UTC)
• Class Wins -> Class wins
  • Done MWright96 (talk) 15:28, 22 February 2022 (UTC)
• "Société Esso" you linked Esso in other names, not here?
  • Added extra links MWright96 (talk) 15:28, 22 February 2022 (UTC)
• " pp. page 1, page 2" you don't need those two "page"s.
  • Reformatted ref MWright96 (talk) 15:28, 22 February 2022 (UTC)

That's it for a first pass. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 13:42, 22 February 2022 (UTC)

• • @The Rambling Man: Replies are above MWright96 (talk) 15:28, 22 February 2022 (UTC)

Support my primary concerns addressed, one comment above but not critical. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 20:36, 26 February 2022 (UTC)

Comments by Z1720

I am still new to commenting on FLCs, so feedback and questions about my comments are welcome. I will be focusing on the lede, prose, and understandability.

• "and were ranked under the same performance standards for its part in advocating sexual equality" I don't understand what this sentence is telling me. Was the race ranked by some external agency for its advocacy? Is sentence saying that women and men were treated equally? Please clarify in the article
  • Clarified MWright96 (talk) 06:29, 24 April 2022 (UTC)
• "the ACO officially refused to allow women" Before the 1956 race, were they unofficially refusing female entries? If not, remove officially.
  • Done MWright96 (talk) 06:29, 24 April 2022 (UTC)
• " to enter the event as a consequence of the fatal accident of" -> "to enter the event after the fatal accident of" to tighten up the language.
  • Done MWright96 (talk) 06:29, 24 April 2022 (UTC)
• "The restriction was lifted when the women's liberation movement had reached French motorsport in 1971." This sentence is hinting at events as part of the women's liberation movement, but is not very specific. What actions did the movement take to get Le Mans to reversal their ban? This doesn't have to be very long, perhaps a half-sentence.
  • Reworded sentence since I could not find any further details MWright96 (talk) 06:29, 24 April 2022 (UTC)
• " followed by the United Kingdom in second with 16 female drivers and Belgium in third with five female racers." Since you say "followed by" the reader will automatically assume the UK is second and Belgium third, so "in second" and "in third" can be removed.
  • Done MWright96 (talk) 06:29, 24 April 2022 (UTC)
• "There have been six countries which have been represented by just one woman racer." I think this is going into too much detail in the lede, as it makes the reader wonder why countries with four, three or two entries have not been talked about.
  • Done MWright96 (talk) 06:29, 24 April 2022 (UTC)
• " driving for Richard Mille Racing in the Le Mans Prototype 2 (LMP2) category." I don't think this is necessary, as the article has not mentioned other racing companies earlier in the lede.
  • Done MWright96 (talk) 06:29, 24 April 2022 (UTC)
• "Since the first race in 1923, there have been 28 all-female squads, all consisting of either two or three drivers." delete the second all.
  • Done MWright96 (talk) 06:29, 24 April 2022 (UTC)

Those are my comments. Z1720 (talk) 20:50, 23 April 2022 (UTC)

• @Z1720: Have made changes in accordance with the above queries MWright96 (talk) 06:29, 24 April 2022 (UTC)

• Support my comments have been addressed. Z1720 (talk) 15:13, 24 April 2022 (UTC)

Source and image review (BennyOnTheLoose)

Sources

• ISBN format for McCarthy (2007) should be changed to match the others in the bibliography (i.e. "978...")
  • Appears the same to me and the ISBN links direct it to the book in question EnthusiastWorld37 (talk) 14:46, 25 May 2022 (UTC)
    • It wss amended by Kavyansh.Singh. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 15:01, 25 May 2022 (UTC)
• Motorsport Stats and Automobile Club de l'Ouest are both used multiple times. They seem to be suitable reliable sources, as do the books in the bibliography.
• Spot checks on McCarthy (2007), Vergeer (2009), O'Kane (2012), Porsche (2018), Monteal Gazette (1971), Motor Sport re:Colleen Eaton". All good. (assisted by an online translation tool).
• Looks like there is some editorial oversight at racingsportscars.com, but what confirms that this is a reliable source?
• Author Isabelle Griffon is missing from the France 3 reference.

Images

• All PD or CC. I was a bit dubious about the picture of Lombardi but, looking back to the flickr page, it seems fine.
• "Michèle Mouton won her class in the 1975 24 Hours of Le Mans." - as the picture is quite a bit later than the race, perhaps add "(pictured in 2011)"
• I suggest amending "Sarah Bovy is the most recent driver to debut at the event." to avoid this becoming outdated when this is no longer the case.
• "The Moynet LM75 car that Christine Dacremont, Mouton and Marianne Hoepfner used to win their class at the 1975 24 Hours of Le Mans." - I think this would read better if Mouton's first name was included, even though this is on the top picture in the article.
• Otherwise, captions and placement are fine.

Other comments

• The Canada and South Africa flags in the 24 Hours of Le Mans female drivers by country table is the new one, whilst the one next the drivers are the old ones. As all these wins were before the new flag was introduced, should the same one be used in both places? (Perhaps not, per "Consistency is not paramount" and "Overbroad use of flags with politicized connotations" in MOS:FLAG.)

MWright96 (now renamed to CatRacer22) has retired as of last week; is anyone willing to take over this nomination to sort out the source/image problems raised by BennyOnTheLoose? --PresN 15:13, 13 May 2022 (UTC)

• @BennyOnTheLoose: Have addressed most of your concerns except for one that I don't believe there is no fault EnthusiastWorld37 (talk) 14:46, 25 May 2022 (UTC)
  • Many thanks, @EnthusiastWorld37:. I'm happy to pass for source and image review, and to support the nomination. Regards, BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 15:01, 25 May 2022 (UTC)

Source review passed; promoting. --PresN 22:50, 26 May 2022 (UTC)

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List of awards and nominations received by Shah Rukh Khan

Nominator(s): —Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:08, 1 April 2022 (UTC)

I am nominating this for featured list because I think it is comprehensive enough. —Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:08, 1 April 2022 (UTC)

Comment

• "Besides acting awards, he has been awarded with a number of state honours" => "Besides acting awards, he has received a number of state honours" would avoid the repetition
• "falls in love with the character of Kajol" => "falls in love with the character played by Kajol"
• "He was later awarded with the IIFA Award for Best Actor" => "He later received the IIFA Award for Best Actor" (as above)
• None of the notes are complete sentences, so they should not have full stops
• Ref 1 - I don't think "PR" is a person, so don't list it as the author
• That's all I got! -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 08:46, 2 April 2022 (UTC)

Done. —Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 10:49, 2 April 2022 (UTC)

• Support -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 20:24, 2 April 2022 (UTC)

Comments by Pseud 14

• his first Screen Award of the category. -- "his first Screen Award" should suffice and link it to the award for Best Actor.
• as a Bachelor of Law student-turned-alcoholic -- as an alcoholic law student
• he received many Best Actor awards - received various
• Khan was nominated for a Filmfare award under the Best Actor category -- To make the lead a little less repetitive. I would replace a few instances of "Best actor category" with the "Award for Best Actor"
• which he ultimately won the award -- it is not clear which film won him the award. If it is the last, then mention as the latter film
• He later received with the IIFA Award for Best Actor -- He later received the IIFA Award for Best Actor
• That's it from me. --Pseud 14 (talk) 16:12, 18 April 2022 (UTC)

@Pseud 14: Done. —Nicholas Michael Halim (talk)

• Support --Pseud 14 (talk) 02:13, 19 April 2022 (UTC)

If you have some spare time or inclination, would appreciate feedback on my FLC as well. Though not mandatory at all

TRM

• Overlinking in lead for Zee Cine Awards.
• "next year Khan won" he won, no need to repeat Khan.
• Then instead of "His most significant..." go for "Khan's most significant..."
• "significant release of the 1990s came with " this may be ENGVAR, but I would say "significant performance of the 1990s came in " or "significant release of the 1990s was "
• "for the latter of which he ultimately won the" -> "the latter for which he won the"
• "for which he also earned" as this happened before perhaps "for which he had also earned"

Good list. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 16:03, 17 May 2022 (UTC)

Done. —Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 01:36, 18 May 2022 (UTC)

• Support Yashthepunisher (talk) 17:49, 24 May 2022 (UTC)

Source review passed; promoting. --PresN 22:50, 26 May 2022 (UTC)

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GLAAD Media Award for Outstanding Comedy Series

Nominator(s): PanagiotisZois (talk) 16:29, 12 April 2022 (UTC)

Not wasting any time y'all, lol. This article is about the GLAAD Media Award for Outstanding Comedy Series, one of the categories at the GLAAD Media Awards that recognize various works of media across many mediums for their positive depictions of the LGBT community. As one can infer from the title, this award is about comedy series. One unique aspect about this category is that it is one of the few to have been present at every single ceremony since 1990. I worked on this article during my FLC of GLAAD Media Award for Outstanding Drama Series, and incorporated many of the comments I received there (such as ones relating accessibility) for this page. I believe this page has what it takes to become a featured list, and hope anyone who comes across it might uncover a comedy series they weren't aware of before; one that gets a good laugh out of them. PanagiotisZois (talk) 16:29, 12 April 2022 (UTC)

Comments

• Great work - the only thing I would suggest is to merge the final one-sentence "paragraph" of the lead with the one before..... -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 20:17, 12 April 2022 (UTC)

@ChrisTheDude: Done. :) --PanagiotisZois (talk) 21:18, 12 April 2022 (UTC)

• Support -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 07:19, 13 April 2022 (UTC)

Comments by Pseud 14

• Fantastic work on this article - only have a couple comments. Since some rows have single citations while others have multiple the abbreviation should be "Ref(s)", the full form should also be called "Reference(s)".
• Since it is a sortable table, suggest linking every instance of television networks.
• That's it for me. --Pseud 14 (talk) 16:59, 16 April 2022 (UTC)

@Pseud 14: Thank you for your kind words. :D I did change it to "Ref(s)." and "Reference(s)". Regarding linking every instance of the networks, this was something that was brought up during the FLC of the GLAAD Media Award for Outstanding Drama Series, where it was suggested that, in a given year, if a specific network appears twice or more only the first instance should be linked. Do you think it's better to leave it as such, or link it every time? Since you brought up that it's a sortable list, I personally do consider that to be a good argument for linking every instance, but I'd like yoru thoughts on it. --PanagiotisZois (talk) 21:54, 16 April 2022 (UTC)

• Thanks for bringing this to my attention as well, I've come across this from one of the coords comments, for sortable tables there's no way of knowing which repeated item will come first so they need linking every time. It wouldn't fall under WP:Overlinking. --Pseud 14 (talk) 22:45, 16 April 2022 (UTC)

• @Pseud 14: Done. I might go back to the other two GLAAD featured lists and do the same thing there at some point. --PanagiotisZois (talk) 23:12, 16 April 2022 (UTC)

• Happy to support this for promotion. Great work! --Pseud 14 (talk) 23:16, 16 April 2022 (UTC)

If you have some spare time or inclination, would appreciate feedback on my FLC as well. Though not mandatory at all

Pamzeis

Let's not screw this up :)

• "only twice has there ever been a tie" — this wording feels rather awkward and clunky to me...
• Per MOS:CONFORMTITLE, titles of works in citations like Glee should be italicised
• There are a few MOS:QWQ issues within the refs
• Can the citation capitalisation be consistent, per MOS:SMALLCAPS, I guess?

Not a lot; great article. I hope you don't mind, but I've made a few tweaks myself, which you can revert if you disagree with. Ping me when these are resolved :) Pamzeis (talk) 00:38, 20 April 2022 (UTC)

@Pamzeis: All right, I changed the wording to something I feel, albeit longer, is an improvement. In every instance where a show or other work was mentioned, I italicised it. Regarding the capitalization of citations, I capitalzied nouns and whatnot leaving only words such as "of" or "and" completely in lowercase format.

As for the QWQ, I'm not really sure what the issue there is. From my understanding, it has to do with quotations. But none of the sources quote something in their title, right? --PanagiotisZois (talk) 19:37, 20 April 2022 (UTC)

There were quote marks in the title... but they're gone now; regarding capitalisation, words like "with" should not be capitalised per MOS:5LETTER. Since this issue is very minor, however, you got my support! Pamzeis (talk) 06:36, 21 April 2022 (UTC)

Oh, I think I understand what you mean. Those quote marks were probably there to indicate a specific work, where italicizing it was not possible. Funnily enough, I remember having a discussion years ago with one of my instructors about which words are never capitalized and whatnot, but I lost track of the link she had given me. Anyway, thank you for the support, and I'll go fix "with" as quickly as possible. --PanagiotisZois (talk) 09:51, 21 April 2022 (UTC)

Source review passed; promoting. --PresN 22:50, 26 May 2022 (UTC)

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List of accolades received by Encanto (film)

Nominator(s): Pamzeis (talk) 06:21, 13 April 2022 (UTC)

Encanto is... well, you probably already know. It's huge... oh, whatever! Just read my previous nom statement! OK, so since the previous nomination, Encanto has won an Oscar and a lot more awards. Now, there's only one award left, which will be announced in... five months. I personally don't see it as much of a problem since the Hugos seem to mostly be well-documented in RSes and, really, it's only one or two sources that'll change. Hopefully, this one'll pass! Pinging previous participants: ChrisTheDude, AryKun, The Rambling Man and Bilorv. Pamzeis (talk) 06:21, 13 April 2022 (UTC)

• Support Can't see any changes from last time that would make me change my mind. Although should "$228 million" be put in inflation templates (I know it released only a year ago, but future-proofing or something). AryKun (talk) 08:42, 13 April 2022 (UTC)

Source review by Bilorv

I'm happy that my previous oppose reason (stability) no longer applies. Thanks for the ping and I've enjoyed doing a source review on this list. All ref numbers as of Special:Permalink/1082471235.

• No issues with the reliability of any sources—I had a look at the NextBestPicture and Cinema Daily US websites and journalists (previously unfamiliar to me) and am satisfied that each is reliable for the claim they are cited for.
• Link Variety in ref #23.

Spotchecks on refs #2, #5–6, #23, #29–30, #33–35:

• "Premiered at the El Capitan Theatre in Los Angeles on November 3, 2021, the film was released theatrically in the United States and Canada on November 24 for a limited 30-day run due to the COVID-19 pandemic" – I can't see that either Variety or Box Office Mojo verifies this in full (the latter just says it debuted in some places on November 24).
• Ref #23 doesn't say that it was Lin-Manuel Miranda who received the nomination (just the song "Dos Oruguitas").
• Ref #30 doesn't say that it was Germaine Franco who received the nomination.

Thanks for your work so far—the sources are good and the reference section and list are excellently formatted. I see no issues with the prose. Once the above are resolved, please check for any other issues with name credits missing from references to the awards, as I'll be doing more specific spotchecks on these in a second round. — Bilorv (talk) 14:54, 13 April 2022 (UTC)

@Bilorv:  Done Chompy Ace 08:15, 14 April 2022 (UTC)

Great, all my issues are resolved and more spotchecks turned up no other problems, so I'm happy to support on sourcing. — Bilorv (talk) 19:05, 15 April 2022 (UTC)

Accessibility review (MOS:DTAB)

• There's not much to change, but: If the row header cell spans multiple rows (e.g. has rowspan=3 or whatever), then use !scope=rowgroup instead of !scope=row.
• Please see MOS:DTAB for example table code if this isn't clear. I don't return to these reviews until the nomination is ready to close, so ping me if you have any questions. --PresN 00:36, 14 April 2022 (UTC)

@PresN:  Done Chompy Ace 08:00, 14 April 2022 (UTC)

• Support - I got nothing :-) -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 16:00, 14 April 2022 (UTC)

• Support my concerns have been addressed. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 16:27, 17 May 2022 (UTC)

• Image review – The lone image in the article has an appropriate free license. It would be nice if it had alt text, but FAC hasn't required it for many years, so I don't feel comfortable mandating it before calling this review a pass, which I'm doing now. Please consider adding it, though, as accessibility is very important. Giants2008 (Talk) 21:23, 17 May 2022 (UTC)

  @Giants2008: Done. Pamzeis (talk) 00:42, 18 May 2022 (UTC)

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Snooker world rankings 2018/2019

Nominator(s): Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 16:31, 24 March 2022 (UTC)

I am nominating this for featured list because it follows the same layout as current FL Snooker world rankings 2019/2020. Welcome your comments to this article. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 16:31, 24 March 2022 (UTC)

Accessibility review (MOS:DTAB)

• Tables need captions, which allow screen reader software to jump straight to named tables without having to read out all of the text before it each time. Visual captions can be added by putting |+ caption_text as the first line of the table code; if that caption would duplicate a nearby section header, you can make it screen-reader-only by putting |+ {{sronly|caption_text}} instead. "Seeding list" and "Ranking points" are missing this.
• Tables need column scopes for all column header cells, which in combination with row scopes lets screen reader software accurately determine and read out the headers for each cell of a data table. Column scopes can be added by adding !scope=col to each header cell, e.g. | Party becomes !scope=col | Party. If the cell spans multiple columns, then use Example text instead. "Revision dates" has 'column' instead of 'col', while the other two tables have a different problem- when you have 2-layer column headers like that, both layers should bother have scopes so that screen readers read out e.g. "Season 18/19" as a prefix rather than just "18/19". Though, actually, why is it "17/18 Season" as a single cell, but "Season" and "18/19" as separate ones? Should be just one or the other.
• Please see MOS:DTAB for example table code if this isn't clear. I don't return to these reviews until the nomination is ready to close, so ping me if you have any questions. --PresN 17:01, 24 March 2022 (UTC)
  • Thanks for these. i have made the changes. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 14:59, 29 March 2022 (UTC)

Comments from ChrisTheDude

• Don't think you need the "main" template at the top given that it's linked in the lead
• "Start ranking released by World Snooker doesn't match" => "Start ranking released by World Snooker does not match"
• Think that's all I got :-) -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 23:17, 24 March 2022 (UTC)

No issues, resolved ChrisTheDude Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 15:15, 29 March 2022 (UTC)

• Support -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 10:52, 30 March 2022 (UTC)

AK

• Disclaimer: I haven't checked references and will be claiming credit at the Wikicup.
• "Certain tournaments were given" → Shouldn't this be "are given"?
  • Hmm, I think the reason for this is that it is future proof. Ranking status can change, with some events which were once non-ranking becoming ranking, and vise versa. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 15:22, 29 March 2022 (UTC)
• Footnote 13 needs a reference.
  • I went ahead and removed it. Seems a bit irrelevant to me. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 15:22, 29 March 2022 (UTC)
• I've mainly just glanced over the tables since they're so large.
• That's all. AryKun (talk) 15:18, 29 March 2022 (UTC)
• Support. All my concerns have been resolved. AryKun (talk) 16:03, 29 March 2022 (UTC)

Dank

• Standard disclaimer: I don't know what I'm doing, and I mostly AGF on sourcing.
• Refs 4 and 8 are missing retrieval dates.
• Checking the FLC criteria:
• 1. I've done very minor copyediting; feel free to revert or discuss. The table coding seems fine. Normally I eyeball the sort orders in the table columns, but the ones here are almost all numbers (which are probaby going to sort correctly), and there are a lot of them. I sampled the links in the tables.
• 2. The lead meets WP:LEAD and defines the inclusion criteria.
• 3a. The list has comprehensive items and annotations.
• 3b. The article is well-sourced to reliable sources, and the UPSD tool isn't indicating any actual problems (but this isn't a source review). Except as noted above, all relevant retrieval (or archive) dates are present.
• 3c. The list meets requirements as a stand-alone list, it isn't a content fork, it doesn't largely duplicate another article (that I can find), and it wouldn't fit easily inside another article.
• 4. It is navigable.
• 5. It meets style requirements. At a glance, the images seem fine.
• 6. It is stable.
• Close enough for a support. Well done. - Dank (push to talk) 04:34, 30 March 2022 (UTC)

Comments from BennyOnTheLoose

• "The events that made up the 1976–77 snooker season were the first to award players with ranking points" - as per my comment at the Snooker world rankings 2020/2021 review, this isn't correct. 1976 World Championship was before that season, as an example.
  • Done Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 20:12, 13 May 2022 (UTC)
• Suggest wikilining "Seeding" in "Seedings for each event were..."
  • Linked. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 20:12, 13 May 2022 (UTC)
• Note 12: "Start ranking released by World Snooker does not match with the points at the end of last season." - is there a source for this? Is it known why?
  • Not really. I suppose this might be OR? Happy to remove. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)}
    • I think it's helpful to keep the note. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 16:48, 14 May 2022 (UTC)
• Ref 4 is incomplete.
  • Fixed Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 20:12, 13 May 2022 (UTC)
• Ref 8 produces a "CS1 maint: url-status (link)"
  • IABot has fixed. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 20:12, 13 May 2022 (UTC)
• I think that World Snooker refs should have World Snooker as the publisher, rather than WPBSA. (WPBSA is only the second largest shareholder in World Snooker's ownership company, behind Matchroom Sport, as mentioned here).
  • Still pending. Yhe other responses are fine and I can't see any other issues. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 16:48, 14 May 2022 (UTC)
• Some of the linked sources aren't archived. I suggest running IABot.
  • Done Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 20:12, 13 May 2022 (UTC)

Regards, BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 09:42, 31 March 2022 (UTC)

@Lee Vilenski: Poke. --PresN 15:20, 13 May 2022 (UTC)

Sorry, Benny reminded me earlier today. I've left some responses. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 20:12, 13 May 2022 (UTC)

Support. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 22:20, 14 May 2022 (UTC)

PresN - looks like Benny is happy with sources, text and images. Do I need anything else on this nomination? Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 09:49, 15 May 2022 (UTC)

Source review from BennyOnTheLoose

• This is the sort of topic that attracts little detailed coverage in independent sources. I consider that range of sources is suitable and that they are reliable. Hendon's blogspot source meets SELFPUB criteria, IMO.
• As per my comments above, World Snooker refs should be attributed to that organisation rather than to the WPBSA.
• Sources:[6][7] - shouldn't the references be against "Revision dates"?
  • I'm pretty sure either is acceptable.Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 19:06, 14 May 2022 (UTC)
• "- snooker.org" should be removed from the title of the "snoo_Hist" ref.
• I checked a couple of table entries against sources and found no issues.
  • Can't see any other issues. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 18:05, 14 May 2022 (UTC)
    • I think I've covered all of these. Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 19:06, 14 May 2022 (UTC)
      • Pass for source review. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 22:19, 14 May 2022 (UTC)

Image review from BennyOnTheLoose

• The picture of O'Sullivan is larger than the one of Selby. I think it could be cropped to match without affecting the usefulness of the image.
  • I had a look in MOS:IMAGES and I couldn't see that this is in breach of anything there, so take the comment as optional. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 20:35, 14 May 2022 (UTC)

For the record:

• The brief alt texts seem to be in line with WP:MOSALT
• Images have CC licenses.
• Images date from close to 2018/2019 that I don't think any "(pictured in...)" addtions to the captions are necessary.
• Caption and placement OK.
• Suitable number of images for the article, and IMO the two most appropriate players to include.
  • Can't see anything else. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 18:36, 14 May 2022 (UTC)
    • Pass for image review. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 20:35, 14 May 2022 (UTC)

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List of commanders of the British 3rd Division

Nominator(s): EnigmaMcmxc (talk) 00:56, 6 December 2021 (UTC)

Another list of British commanders, this time for the 3rd Division. This formation was initially raised in 1809, and has since been raised and disbanded on several occasions. During this time period, it has had 67 permanent commanders (including several temporary and acting commanders, who are also listed), with the most recent being appointed in 2021. This list used the previously promoted (FL) List of commanders of the British 2nd Division as a basis, so hopefully everything meets muster.EnigmaMcmxc (talk) 00:56, 6 December 2021 (UTC)

Image review — Pass

• The only image in the article is appropriately licenced, and has ALT text. Pass for image review. – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 07:04, 7 December 2021 (UTC)

  Thank you for your image reviewEnigmaMcmxc (talk) 16:34, 14 December 2021 (UTC)

Comments by ChrisTheDude

• "In addition to directing the tactical battle the division is involved in" - "In addition to directing the tactical battle in which the division is involved"
• "As of 18 October 2021" - that was nearly two months ago. Maybe just say "As of late 2021" rather than being as specific as a single day? Or just note the date since when he has been in charge?
• "Craufurd's brigade was used to form the Light Division, which he took command of." => "Craufurd's brigade was used to form the Light Division, of which he took command."
• "When Picton returned to the peninsular" => "When Picton returned to the peninsula"
• "On returning to the peninsular" => "On returning to the peninsula"
• "Kielmansegg took" - different spelling to the name column
• "Ten days after taking command, Mackenzie was invalided back to the UK on 29 October 1914." - yet it says he was appointed on the 15th?
• "As the 3rd Canadian Division would be working in close proxmitity" - typo on last word
• Ah I now understand why the lead says "As of 18 October 2021". My earlier point stands :-)
• That's all I got - great work! -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 16:58, 9 December 2021 (UTC)

  Thank you for your comments and review. I have worked through to address the various concerns that you raised (as for the ten-day comment, must have been a brain fart on my behalf!)EnigmaMcmxc (talk) 16:34, 14 December 2021 (UTC)

• Support -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 08:36, 15 December 2021 (UTC)

Comments by RunningTiger123

Resolved comments from RunningTiger123 (talk) 22:19, 3 February 2022 (UTC)

* "Picton, the commanding officer of the 3rd Division, for the majority of the Peninsular War" → "Thomas Picton, the commanding officer of the 3rd Division for the majority of the Peninsular War" Also wikilink Thomas Picton in that caption "The 3rd Division was an infantry division of the British Army, which was first formed in 1809." → "The 3rd Division was an infantry division of the British Army and was first formed in 1809." (current sentence implies British Army wasn't formed until 1809) "20th Century" → "20th century" and "21st Century" → "21st century" Table should probably have sorting capabilities for "No.", "Appointment date", "Rank", and "General officer commanding" (be sure to sort the last one by last name) "Alten resumed command of the division once combat ended" can end with a period Same for "During this period, no one held the title of divisional commander"; "The division was evacuated via Dunkirk to the UK, following the Allied defeat in the Battle of France"; "In February 1964, the division HQ was temporarily deployed to Cyprus"; and "By this point, the division was also known as the 3rd (UK) Mechanised Division" Why is the note "The division was disbanded in Germany, on 1 December 1992" included for Wallace when Pike was the commander at that point? — RunningTiger123 (talk) 20:24, 11 December 2021 (UTC) Thank you for your comments and review. I have also tried to address all of your concerns (re the disbanding issue, I think that may have been a copy and paste error? I have updated, after re-reviewing the sources).EnigmaMcmxc (talk) 16:34, 14 December 2021 (UTC)

Apologies for forgetting about this for so long; more than happy to support this list for promotion. RunningTiger123 (talk) 22:19, 3 February 2022 (UTC)

Comments from TRM

• "The 3rd Division was an..." so I immediately thought it was defunct, but apparently not. It might have changed names/roles etc, but in essence it's still active, right?

  Correct. Over-zealous with the copy and the paste. I have changed to "is an"

• "commanding (GOC). In this role, the GOC receives" can't you just merge, e.g. "commanding (GOC) who receives"?

  Updated per your suggestionEnigmaMcmxc (talk) 14:17, 14 March 2022 (UTC)

• "over a history that has spanned over " over/over, maybe make the second one "more than"?

  TweakedEnigmaMcmxc (talk) 14:17, 14 March 2022 (UTC)

• "was broken-up, once" is that really hyphenated?
• "was broken-up to provide" ditto.

  Not sure, to be honest. The Cambridge English Dictionary, for example, uses a hyphen when discussing a break-up of an entity.EnigmaMcmxc (talk) 14:17, 14 March 2022 (UTC)

  A "break-up" is not the same as something being "broken up". The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 20:30, 18 March 2022 (UTC)

• Plus quick repeat, perhaps use "disbanded" the second time?

  Wording switched per your suggestionEnigmaMcmxc (talk) 14:17, 14 March 2022 (UTC)

• "permanent standing formation" what is one of those? Is it similar/the same as Standing army?

  I have made a couple of tweaks to the existing sentence, but not major changes. Basically, the UK had a standing army, but it was on based on battalions. In a time of crisis, these were formed into brigades and divisions. At the end of a crisis, the division would be disbanded. In 1902, the British Army enacted some reforms to ensure that the army always had divisions at the ready and a handful were formed (that a decade later would form the basis of the BEF). Thoughts on wording changes to try and capture that?EnigmaMcmxc (talk) 14:17, 14 March 2022 (UTC)

• Could link Mechanized infantry as it's jargon.

  Link addedEnigmaMcmxc (talk) 14:17, 14 March 2022 (UTC)

• "mid-90s" 1990s.

  TweakedEnigmaMcmxc (talk) 14:17, 14 March 2022 (UTC)

• "part in peacekeeping operations in Bosnia and Herzegovina.[9] " isn't there a specific article about that UN mission available to be linked?

  I have added an extra link at the end of the sentence in parenthesisEnigmaMcmxc (talk) 14:17, 14 March 2022 (UTC)

• The row scope element should be unique so the name of the officer, rather than the number of the appointment (as "acting" appears a few times...)

  I have updated per your commentEnigmaMcmxc (talk) 14:17, 14 March 2022 (UTC)

• There is also the problem that when sorting by "No.", all the "acting" etc disappear off to the bottom because it's sorting alphanumerically, so you need to force a hidden sort on those to make sure they sort in the correct order.

  I checked out the Help:Sorting page and made a change, does this work (I'm not entirely sure)?EnigmaMcmxc (talk) 14:17, 14 March 2022 (UTC)

• You have a mix of unhyphenated and hyphenated "Major(-)General" in the table, why?

  In the late 90s, hyphens were dropped from ranks per the official records (the Gazette). There is a note, when the table is not sorted, on the first entry (Richard Dannatt) that this occurs on to briefly explain.EnigmaMcmxc (talk) 14:17, 14 March 2022 (UTC)

• Items which are linked in a sortable table should be linked every time because after re-sorting, there's no guarantee the linked item will appear first.
• In a sortable table, you can't assume that text retains its context, so "When Picton returned to the peninsula" is like "which peninsula? Where??" And "of the division once combat ended." which combat? Where?

  I have worked through the table and added in some additional links, including the items mentioned.EnigmaMcmxc (talk) 14:17, 14 March 2022 (UTC)

A few fundamental issues here, but happy to re-review once they're dealt with. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 20:54, 11 March 2022 (UTC)

Thank you for your review and comments. I have worked on the list to enact the changes you suggested. I have also left some comments above to address outstanding concerns.

Source review passed; TRM never came back to this (and the nominator hasn't edited in 6+ weeks) but I'm satisfied with the list as-is. Promoting. --PresN 16:25, 13 May 2022 (UTC)

@PresN: Seems like you missed adding the template. – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 17:19, 14 May 2022 (UTC)

Whoops, thanks! --PresN 21:36, 14 May 2022 (UTC)

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Melon Music Award for Album of the Year

Nominator(s): ɴᴋᴏɴ21 ❯❯❯ talk 23:02, 4 February 2022 (UTC)

I am nominating this for featured list because the Melon Music Awards is one of the biggest K-pop award ceremonies, and the Album of the Year category consists of one of the top prizes at the event. This list contains many quality sources and I believe it satisfies the criteria for featured lists. ɴᴋᴏɴ21 ❯❯❯ talk 23:02, 4 February 2022 (UTC)

Comments

• "Beginning in 2009, it consists of one of the daesang" => "Since 2009, it has comprised one of the daesang"
• "although there was no album accolade given in 2007–08" => "although there was no album accolade given in 2007 or 2008"
• "Album of the Year consisting of one of the ceremony's grand prizes" => "Album of the Year being one of the ceremony's grand prizes"
• "The criteria for the accolade currently consists" => "The criteria for the accolade currently consist" (criteria is a plural word, the plural of criterion)
• "having won four times in 2016 and 2018–20" => "having won four times in 2016, 2018, 2019 and 2020"
• In the table, why is 2009 designated as the 1st awards when it was actually the 5th?
• That's what I got! -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 08:17, 5 February 2022 (UTC)

Copyediting done, the reason why 2009 is listed 1st is that the awards were not well recognized in its online period, and many South Korean sources refer to 2009 as the first award ceremony as it was the first time it was held in a traditional format. ɴᴋᴏɴ21 ❯❯❯ talk 01:21, 6 February 2022 (UTC)

@ChrisTheDude Are you able to take a look again? Are there additional concerns? ɴᴋᴏɴ21 ❯❯❯ talk 18:18, 16 February 2022 (UTC)

• Support -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 19:33, 16 February 2022 (UTC)

Comments Support from Gerald Waldo Luis

This is a relatively short article so I don't have much concerns on this; at first glance the layout is neat! GeraldWL 06:48, 20 March 2022 (UTC)

• "an award presented by Kakao M" --> "an award presented by South Korean entertainment company Kakao M". This I think is important to establish that it's South Korea, dont want readers to constantly click article links. As a result, for "held offline in Seoul, South Korea" I think you can drop the "South Korea".
• "in 2007 or 2008"-- what about "from 2007 to 2008" (or use dash if you please)?
• "starting with the 2009 awards"-- "since 2009"
• "having both been nominated"-- is the "both" needed?
• Why is daesang linked in "Winners and nominees" but not in the lead?
• In the second table, why are the nominees text small?

@Gerald Waldo Luis: Done except for the last bullet point, as I've seen several FLs with nominees that have small text. But I'll remove them if needed. ɴᴋᴏɴ21 ❯❯❯ talk 17:49, 20 March 2022 (UTC)

I see, I see. No problem then-- I was just wondering. Anyways, the article looks all good now for me, so support. GeraldWL 01:44, 21 March 2022 (UTC)

Comment from Z1720

This is my first FLC review, so I welcome feedback on my comments. This review will focus on prose jargon and understandability.

• "which was first introduced at its inaugural online ceremony in 2005." This can be shortened to "with its inaugural online ceremony in 2005." As inaugural online ceremony indicates that it is the first ceremony.
• "Since its inception, Album of the Year has been given to nine artists." Delete Since its inception. I would assume that the award was not given before its inception, so it is not necessary.
• "From 2005 to 2008, award winners of the event were announced online," Delete "of the event". It is assumed that award winners are for this award, and this article is not about an event, so it is unusual that this language would be used.
• "given from 2007 to 2008." -> given in 2007 or 2008. The article already establishes that this is an annual award, so having a two year range is unusual.
• "with Album of the Year being one of the ceremony's grand prizes." Replace "being" with "becoming"?
• "Since then, the ceremony has been held at various venues throughout Seoul." I don't think "Since then" is necessary and can be deleted.
• " (along with Song of the Year and Artist of the Year)" I think this is a little off-topic, and isn't necessary for the reader to understand this list. I recommend deleting it.
• "which spawned the best-selling single "Cherry Blossom Ending"" I'm unsure how this information relates to this award, and is perhaps off topic. Consider deleting.
• "Furthermore, IU and BTS are the most nominated artists in the category," I don't think furthermore is necessary in this sentence and can be removed.
• "having each been nominated four times." -> with four nominations each. This tightens up the language.
• "From 2005 to 2008, the Melon Music Award winners were announced online; nominees for the awards were not made available during this period. In 2007 and 2008, there was no album accolade announced by the event committee." This information needs a citation.

Those are my thoughts. Please ping when the above are responded to. Z1720 (talk) 20:30, 23 April 2022 (UTC)

@Z1720: Done ɴᴋᴏɴ21 ❯❯❯ talk 03:18, 24 April 2022 (UTC)

Support. My concerns have been addressed. Z1720 (talk) 21:02, 25 April 2022 (UTC)

• Source review – All of the references are sufficiently reliable and well-formatted, and the link-checker tool shows no issues. The source review has been passed. Giants2008 (Talk) 22:23, 11 May 2022 (UTC)

Promoting. --PresN 15:22, 13 May 2022 (UTC)

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List of Billboard number-one R&B songs of 1948

Nominator(s): ChrisTheDude (talk) 19:06, 1 April 2022 (UTC)

Here's number 7 in my series of nominations for the early years of what is now the Billboard R&B/hip hop chart. In this particular year we start to see some of the earliest rumblings of rock and roll as Wynonie Harris hits the top spot with "Good Rockin' Tonight". As ever, feedback most gratefully received! -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 19:06, 1 April 2022 (UTC)

Support with a few minor comments:

• Hot R&B/Hip Hop Songs redirects to Hot R&B/Hip-Hop Songs. Better to stick with the official title.
• "two weeks later Lee returned to the top of the chart with the song "King Size Papa", which had a nine-week run at number one" - could be condensed to "two weeks later Lee returned to the top of the chart with the song "King Size Papa" for nine weeks". FrB.TG (talk) 20:32, 2 April 2022 (UTC)
  • Changed the first one, would prefer to leave the second one as is if that's OK as although it's a bit longer I think it's slightly more grammatically correct -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 20:37, 2 April 2022 (UTC)

Comments Support from Gerald Waldo Luis

Like it has always and forever been, after all the comments got resolved I'll support. GeraldWL 02:17, 12 April 2022 (UTC)

• "Lonnie Johnson had the first number one on the best sellers chart." Full sentence no?
  • Indeed. Not sure what point is being made here -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 07:19, 12 April 2022 (UTC)
• "in the United States in rhythm and blues (R&B)"-- repetitive use of "in"
• "In the issue of Billboard dated January 3"-- you gotta establish that from here and beyond, you're concerning the year 1948.
• "topped the juke box chart." But why is the previous mention of "jukebox" not have any spaces?
• For the column headers ("Juke Box" & "Best Sellers"), shouldn't it be sentence case ("Juke box" & "Best sellers")?
  • This is reflecting how the charts were titled -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 07:19, 12 April 2022 (UTC)
• I don't quite understand the "pictured in later life" phrases in the captions. Perhaps just say what year it was and do it for all the other images for consistency?
• At the end of the "Chart history" section, perhaps a "Notes" subsection would be useful?
• Link the publishers in the "Works cited" per consistency with the above references.

@Gerald Waldo Luis: - all done other than as noted above -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 07:19, 12 April 2022 (UTC)

Apologies for the late reply. Regarding the first point, I initially thought it was a sentence fragment so I was referring to MOS:CAPFRAG, but I feel like it does make up its own sentence so ignore that. But overall it looks better now, so support :) GeraldWL 02:21, 13 April 2022 (UTC)

Dank

• Standard disclaimer: I don't know what I'm doing, and I mostly AGF on sourcing.
• "Bandleader/pianist Sonny Thompson": This is probably a WP:SLASH problem, and even if there's a technical reason that it's not, slashes like these still draw unwelcome scrutiny.
• "'Long About Midnight" in the 4th column isn't sorting correctly.
• Checking the FLC criteria:
• 1. Otherwise, the prose checks out. I checked sorting on all sortable columns and sampled the links in the table.
• 2. The lead meets WP:LEAD and defines the inclusion criteria.
• 3a. The list has comprehensive items and annotations.
• 3b. The article is well-sourced to reliable sources, and the UPSD tool isn't indicating any actual problems (but this isn't a source review). All relevant retrieval dates are present.
• 3c. The list meets requirements as a stand-alone list, it isn't a content fork, it doesn't largely duplicate another article (that I can find), and it wouldn't fit easily inside another article.
• 4. It is navigable.
• 5. It meets style requirements. At a glance, the images seem fine.
• 6. It is stable.
• Close enough for a support. Well done. - Dank (push to talk) 14:37, 13 April 2022 (UTC)
  • @Dank: - thanks as ever for your review, both the points you raised above should have been addressed -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 14:52, 13 April 2022 (UTC)
    • Looks good, thanks. - Dank (push to talk) 12:39, 17 April 2022 (UTC)

@FLC director and delegates: - just to let you know, I will be logging off shortly and will be off WP until some time on Friday. If any more comments are raised here, I will address them upon my return..... -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 07:12, 17 April 2022 (UTC)

Comments by Z1720 (including a source review)

I am still new to reviewing FLCs, so feedback and comments are appreciated. I read through the lede and have no notes on that.

Source review:

• The author of the AllMusic source is a freelance journalist who has written for several reputable publications, so I am not concerned about that.
• The other sources are of high-quality and reliable.
• I have no concerns about formatting.

Overall, I support this nomination. Z1720 (talk) 13:25, 25 April 2022 (UTC)

AK

• Disclaimer: I haven't checked references and will be claiming credit at the Wikicup.
• Support nothing I could find to complain about. AryKun (talk) 11:21, 26 April 2022 (UTC)

Promoting. --PresN 15:22, 13 May 2022 (UTC)

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List of awards and nominations received by Daddy Yankee

Nominator(s): Brankestein (talk) 01:21, 3 March 2022 (UTC)

I am nominating this for featured list because it wasn't promoted in 2017 and I have since followed the comments made by the reviewer in order to improve the list. Comparing it to that version, I think it now meets the criteria. Brankestein (talk) 01:21, 3 March 2022 (UTC)

Drive-by comment

• This is not the format now deemed suitable for a FL in this area. All the awards should be in one table like List of awards and nominations received by Kylie Minogue, not dozens of little tables -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 11:32, 3 March 2022 (UTC)

Thanks for your comment. Is there a discussion about the format's change? I would like to read it.--Brankestein (talk) 17:43, 3 March 2022 (UTC)

I honestly don't know, but I will take a look around. I do know, though, that every "awards and nominations" list promoted to FL for at least the last three years has used the "one table" format..... -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 08:35, 4 March 2022 (UTC)

As far as I can see, the change can be traced to this FLC from 2018..... -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 13:05, 4 March 2022 (UTC)

Thank you very much!--Brankestein (talk) 16:05, 4 March 2022 (UTC)

More comments

• "80....28....nine" - as these are all in the same sentence and directly comparable, they should all be written as numbers
• "eight Billboard Music Awards—the most by any Latin artist—," - that "-," looks really weird, is there a way to avoid that? It also occurs a bit further on
• Wikilink reggaeton
• "garnering his first and only recipient" - recipient is not the right word here. Probably just say "his first and only win"
• "Daddy Yankee received the Latin Songwriter of the Year award by the" => "Daddy Yankee received the Latin Songwriter of the Year award from the"
• In the table, all the entries starting with a " sort at the top followed by everything else. They should all sort based on the first actual letter(s), ignoring punctuation marks
• The Big Boss Tour should sort under B
• As the table is sortable, anything that is linked should be linked every time
• Notes d and e should not have full stops as they are not complete sentences
• "As of April 2018, the stream count for "Despacito" is 7.5 billion" - that was nearly four years ago, is there not a more up to date figure? If not, change "is" to "was"
• That's what I got :-) -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 20:26, 4 March 2022 (UTC)

Thanks again for your input! :) I have followed your comments, but is there a quick way to link everything? Also, I'm not managing to sort "¿Qué Tengo Que Hacer?" correctly, possibly due to the "¿". (EDIT: Nevermind, I just kind of sorted that song successfully). --Brankestein (talk) 00:09, 5 March 2022 (UTC)

I added a bunch of links for you. Usually when I need to add a load of links to the same thing, I open the page to edit, copy the appropriate chunk into WordPad and then do a search and replace. So I copied the whole of the table then did a s+r to replace "|Daddy Yankee" with "|[[Daddy Yankee]]" and it linked them all in one go -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 10:41, 5 March 2022 (UTC)

Thanks a lot! :) --Brankestein (talk) 12:56, 5 March 2022 (UTC)

I also fixed the sorting for "Despacito" but the other song titles still need doing so that they sort based on just the words, not including the inverted commas..... -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 16:38, 5 March 2022 (UTC)

I sorted the rest of the songs but "El Amante" and "Problema", since they don't have Wikipedia pages, are automatically linked to wrong articles. Also, other songs with no Wikipages appear red and I can't add inverted commas without messing up the sorting. (EDIT: Nevermind, I resolved that). --Brankestein (talk) 21:51, 5 March 2022 (UTC)

• Support - gracias por tolerarme :-) -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 10:16, 6 March 2022 (UTC)

Thanks a lot! No sabía que hablabas español :P --Brankestein (talk) 22:00, 12 March 2022 (UTC)

Google Translate es muy útil :-) -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 16:27, 14 March 2022 (UTC)

Comments by AJona1992

• Latin music should be wikilinked
• Article is riddled with weak prose: "all of them", "but none of them won", "as the only one to receive a", "his non-album singles"
• "without wins." - unnecessary
• "his singles" - he is not part of any group, not sure why emphasis is needed here.
• Didn't know they gave out awards for songs that earned the title "Latin Song of the Decade". This is a list compiled by Billboard using MRC data, it's not a separate award that is voted on, but a distinguished feat.
• Not sure why Time magazine's annual list of most influential people is even mentioned here.
• Since when are hall of fame inductions included in the list of awards articles? – jona ✉ 18:46, 6 March 2022 (UTC)

Thanks for your comments. Do you suggest to remove Billboard's "Latin Song of the Decade" award? Also, the Hall of Fame induction is included because Daddy Yankee received a physical award for it (the same goes for the Latin Song of the Decade award). --Brankestein (talk) 15:49, 7 March 2022 (UTC)

I am not familiar with any FL lists that contain that information. It is usually found in the artist's main article, that is why I found it strange. Unless any FL moderator or guideline suggest it is fine, then I'd suggest to remove it. – jona ✉ 16:10, 7 March 2022 (UTC)

Thanks for the feedback. I don't know how to change "his singles". Maybe "the singles" or "the albums' singles"? --Brankestein (talk) 22:11, 7 March 2022 (UTC)

I am concerned about Note A, Billboard doesn't give out physical plaques for any music chart achievement and the Guinness Book of World Records did specify that he holds "the most nominations" not wins, which you wrote that he "had not received a physical award for those records." so not sure why a note is needed here if the record was for "most nominated" and not "most wins"? Did you mean that Daddy Yankee has never received a plaque from Guinness Book of World Records? Any reason why Notes D and E are missing periods? I also went ahead and c/e the lead to the area problems that were still present. – jona ✉ 17:01, 10 March 2022 (UTC)

Thank you for editing the lead. Regarding the Note A, Daddy Yankee did not receive a plaque for the most Lo Nuestro Award nominations from Guinness World Records, while he did receive plaques for the records included on the table. The periods on the Notes D and E were removed following a suggestion by another editor. Brankestein (talk) 17:39, 10 March 2022 (UTC)

Notes D and E don't need full stops (as I call them) as they are sentence fragments, not complete sentences -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 20:53, 10 March 2022 (UTC)

Thanks for the clarification. I now support the article's nomination. – jona ✉ 12:40, 11 March 2022 (UTC)

Thank you very much for your feedback and support. --Brankestein (talk) 22:00, 12 March 2022 (UTC)

Accessibility review (MOS:DTAB)

• Tables need captions, which allow screen reader software to jump straight to named tables without having to read out all of the text before it each time. Visual captions can be added by putting |+ caption_text as the first line of the table code; if that caption would duplicate a nearby section header, you can make it screen-reader-only by putting |+ {{sronly|caption_text}} instead.
• Please see MOS:DTAB for example table code if this isn't clear. I don't return to these reviews until the nomination is ready to close, so ping me if you have any questions. --PresN 19:17, 10 March 2022 (UTC)

Comments by FrB.TG

• "He rose to prominence with the release" - suggest starting a new paragraph with his name.
• "All of which were nominated" - this reads strangely when it's not part of an independent clause in a sentence. Suggest replacing "which" with "these".
• I would probably mention (one/some of) the Grammy categories "Despacito" was nominated in since he was nominated for a Grammy only once and two of these are for the Big Four.
• Why does the infobox only include five organizations? Either include all or refrain from the infobox altogether. This selectivity implies that these are more important than the others and pushes POV that we as encyclopedia should refrain from.
• Source 1 - Billboard needs linking.
• What makes chronicle.augusta a reliable source?
• Source 6 - Access Hollywood needs to be italicized and linked.
• Source 7 - latimes.com -> Los Angeles Times (and wiki-link)
• Source 8 - PR Newswire is an unreliable source per WP:RSP.
• What makes http://www.hispanicallyyours.com/ a high-quality reliable source? Its website is not even secure.
• awardsandwinners.com is definitely not a high-quality reliable source.
• Source 23 - same as source 7 (without wiki-link)
• Source 35 - Telemundo needs linking.
• Source 36 - AXS needs to link to AXS (company)
• I haven't looked to the end of references but so far I see a lot of mal-formatting, some questionable sources, there is an instance of WP:SHOUTING and one source even appears to be dead with no archived link.

I am going to have to oppose for now because of sourcing issues. FrB.TG (talk) 18:14, 21 March 2022 (UTC)

Thanks for the feedback. I have followed your comments, linked the articles and replaced the unreliable and dead sources you mentioned. --Brankestein (talk) 18:37, 23 March 2022 (UTC)

It looks better although there's still quite some work to be done. More comments below.

• Source 4 - Tucson.com -> Arizona Daily Star and it needs a language parameter
• Source 12 - the language is not Spanish.
• Source 49 - QX needs to link to QX (magazine) and requires a language (Swedish) parameter.
• Source 57 - BBC News needs linking.
• Source 68 - iHeart → iHeartRadio
• Source 96 - Remezcla needs linking.
• Source 106 - Latin Songwriters Hall of Fame needs linking
• Source 108 - Terra needs to link to Terra (company)
• I'm afraid Hispanic PR Wire can't be considered reliable since according to the website, it's "a service of PR Newswire", on whose reliability I commented in my initial review.
• Source 123 - Univision needs linking.
• Source 140 is dead; Monitor Latino needs linking.
• Source 151 - MTV needs linking.
• Source 159 - WP:SHOUTING in title.
• I am not sure about the reliability of HispanicAd.com.
• Source 203 - the link is dead.
• What makes latinfluencers a reliable source?
• Source 221 is not formatted properly. The main link is to the archive link. We normally use the |archive-url and |archive-date for this and for |url we use the original link and mark the source as dead in |url-status. FrB.TG (talk) 11:32, 24 March 2022 (UTC)

  Thanks again for your comments. I have followed them and it's hard to replace some unrealiable sources because the articles made by the awards' organizers were deleted and not archived. For example, I can't find an alternative article for the Tecla Awards nominations (the Latinfluencers.com one) because the event's organizers deleted theirs and the one I used as a source is literally the only one I can find. Brankestein (talk) 21:16, 24 March 2022 (UTC)

Sadly, this is not the first time where an online source isn't available for such information. I have come across this problem several times. We usually cite sources without any external links. This is not the ideal practice but it has been accepted in the past. See this for what I mean. FrB.TG (talk) 08:26, 25 March 2022 (UTC)

I replaced the Latinfluencers.com source with the original title from the Tecla Awards organizers' article that was deleted. Brankestein (talk) 18:22, 25 March 2022 (UTC)

Have you tried accessing sources that are normally behind a paywall? What I mean is, if you go through WP: LIBRARY, you get exclusive privilege as a Wikipedia user to access news articles that are otherwise unavailable to an average person. Specifically, I'm talking about Proquestv( free to use for us Wikipedia users)!as well as newspaper.com and newspaperarchive.com, which you can get access to by requesting. Erick (talk) 16:27, 25 March 2022 (UTC)

Brankestein and Magiciandude, I personally searched for it both in ProQuest an Newspapers.com but found regrettably nothing for this. Brankestein, I have struck my oppose above. Although my review had a rigorous sources check, I would still like this to go through a formal source review before this is considered for promotion. Now that my concerns have been addressed, I can support this for promotion. I myself have an FLC on an awards page. If possible, review it but it's not mandatory in any way. FrB.TG (talk) 17:23, 28 March 2022 (UTC)

Thanks a lot! Brankestein (talk) 17:35, 28 March 2022 (UTC)

Support by magiciandude

I 'support this list on the basis of sources being archived and the date format being consistent. Erick (talk) 22:17, 29 March 2022 (UTC)

Comments from TRM

• How do we know that licensing a screenshot from that professional video uploaded to Vimeo is covered by CC 3.0?
• "Latin Grammy Award for Record of the Year " is overlinked in the lead.
• Awards such as "El Premio de la Gente" which aren't deemed notable enough to have their own Wikipedia article shouldn't be included in a list like this.
• ""De Vuelta Pa' La Vuelta"" is linked but redirects back to his discog while "Problema" is unlinked. I'd be consistent.
• "Sígueme y Te Sigo" appears to have a lower case "y" in our article.
• Likewise, the "en" in "Barrio Fino En Directo" appears to be in lower case for us.
• Several spaced hyphens in the refs which should be spaced en-dashes per MOS.

That's all I have for a quick read. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 15:54, 12 April 2022 (UTC)

Thanks for your comments. I've edited the list following most of them except the awards without Wikipedia articles. I thought that any award could be included. Also, how do I check if an image is covered by CC 3.0? Brankestein (talk) 16:09, 12 April 2022 (UTC)

No, I don't believe "non-notable" awards should be included. And If you can't check that image is covered by CC 3.0 then you shouldn't use it. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 16:29, 28 April 2022 (UTC)

I replaced the image with one that is covered by CC 3.0 according to WordPress' Openverse. Also, to clarify, any awards without a Wikipedia page should be removed? (Does this apply to the Puerto Rican Walk of Fame and Harvard University's Presencia Latina?) Brankestein (talk) 03:28, 3 May 2022 (UTC)

Pamzeis

Hopefully, not gonna screw this up

• "his third studio album Barrio Fino in 2004" — commas around "Barrio Fino" per MOS:COMMA?
• "following singles" — ...uh, what does this mean?
• "won every nomination he received for the song at the Billboard Latin Music Awards" — is there a... simpler way to say this? It feels kinda long-winded and clunky at the moment
• "Daddy Yankee received a Billboard Music Award for Top Latin Song for "Con Calma". ... Daddy Yankee received the Latin Songwriter" — a bit repetitive
• Per MOS:CONFORMTITLE, titles of works should be italicised in citations
• Check for MOS:QWQ issues in citations

Hope this helps :) Pamzeis (talk) 23:52, 26 April 2022 (UTC)

Thanks for the feedback. I followed your comments but I don't understand if song titles should also be italicised in citations. Brankestein (talk) 01:19, 27 April 2022 (UTC)

Source review passed; song titles shouldn't be italicized in general and I don't usually see any italicization in reference titles outside of biology areas. It would be nice to have trans-titles filled in for the non-English reference titles, but that's not required. Promoting. --PresN 15:22, 13 May 2022 (UTC)

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List of accolades received by The Tragedy of Macbeth (2021 film)

Nominator(s): Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 14:33, 3 April 2022 (UTC)

I am nominating this for featured list because awards season is over and I have provided sources for each award in this list. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 14:33, 3 April 2022 (UTC)

Comments

• Nothing in the lead is sourced. I think you need sources for everything up to ".....the performances of Washington and Hunter." (the rest is sourced in the table)
• Actually that's all I got :-) -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 18:26, 3 April 2022 (UTC)
  • @ChrisTheDude: Done. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 22:55, 3 April 2022 (UTC)
• Support -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 20:30, 4 April 2022 (UTC)

Support from Aoba47

• I'd add a link to the Three Witches article to the lede.
• There is a red link for the 2021 IndieWire Critics Poll. That is okay as red links are helpful, but I am just curious if you think that a separate list could be created in the future?
• I'd archive web sources like Rotten Tomatoes and Metacritic to avoid any future headaches.
• The citations are not consistent with including work/website and publisher or just the website. For instance, Citation 1 only has Deadline Hollywood while Citations 5 and 6 have Rotten Tomatoes and Metacritic with their respective publishers. It looks like Citations 5 and 6 are the only ones that do this, but apologies if I overlooked one. I do not think the publishers for those two are necessary as they are very recognizable sites to a majority of readers.

You have done wonderful work with this list. My comments are incredibly nitpick-y and I would be more than happy to support this for promotion based on the prose. I really should watch this film one day as the cast and crew are excellent and I have always enjoy the play, although admittedly it has been years since I last read it or saw an adaptation of it. Best of luck with this FLC! Aoba47 (talk) 23:22, 3 April 2022 (UTC)

@Aoba47: Link added. Template:IndieWire Critics Poll exists so that's why there's a red link. Sources have been archived. I am using Template:Cite Rotten Tomatoes and Template:Cite Metacritic, which add the publishers automatically and cannot be removed. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 02:23, 4 April 2022 (UTC)

Thank you for responding to my points. I honestly keep forgetting about those templates and your response makes sense to me. I support this FLC for promotion based on the prose. Aoba47 (talk) 02:47, 4 April 2022 (UTC)

Dank

• Standard disclaimer: I don't know what I'm doing, and I mostly AGF on sourcing.
• Checking the FLC criteria:
• 1. I've done a little copyediting; feel free to revert or discuss. The table coding seems fine. I checked sorting on all sortable columns and sampled the links in the table.
• 2. The lead meets WP:LEAD and defines the inclusion criteria.
• 3a. The list has comprehensive items and annotations.
• 3b. The article is well-sourced to reliable sources, and the UPSD tool isn't indicating any actual problems (but this isn't a source review). All relevant retrieval dates are present.
• 3c. The list meets requirements as a stand-alone list, it isn't a content fork, it doesn't largely duplicate another article (that I can find), and it wouldn't fit easily inside another article. (The number of accolades is sufficient to justify a separate page from the film itself, I think.)
• 4. It is navigable.
• 5. It meets style requirements. At a glance, the one image seems fine.
• 6. It is stable.
• Support. Well done. - Dank (push to talk) 20:35, 4 April 2022 (UTC)

Accessibility review (MOS:DTAB)

• For row scopes, e.g. !scope=row, if the cell spans multiple rows via 'rowspan' then the scope should be changed to use !scope=rowgroup instead.
• Please see MOS:DTAB for example table code if this isn't clear. I don't return to these reviews until the nomination is ready to close, so ping me if you have any questions. --PresN 23:30, 7 April 2022 (UTC)

  @PresN: Done. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 23:40, 7 April 2022 (UTC)

AK

• Disclaimer: I haven't checked references and will be claiming credit at the Wikicup.
• I've added a link I thought would be helpful, but nothing else to pick at here, so happy to support. AryKun (talk) 12:50, 10 April 2022 (UTC)

Comments by Z1720 (with a source review)

I am still new to reviewing FLCs, so feedback and comments are appreciated.

The last sentence of the lede should probably have a citation.

Source review:

• Refs 5 and 6 are supporting the following statement: "The film was critically acclaimed, with praise aimed towards Coen's screenplay and direction, Bruno Delbonnel's cinematography, the production design and score, and the performances of Washington and Hunter." However, Rotten Tomatoes and Metacritic are review aggregates and they don't have editorial oversight of what they publish (since lots of their information is from an algorithm). Instead, I would quote two specific reviews that say this information. These reviews can be found from the links in Rotten Tomatoes and Metacritic.
• I have no concerns about the formatting.

Those are my thoughts. Z1720 (talk) 14:37, 25 April 2022 (UTC)

• @Z1720: Done. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 15:12, 25 April 2022 (UTC)

• Support. My concerns have been addressed. Z1720 (talk) 16:07, 25 April 2022 (UTC)

• Image review – The only photo used in the article is appropriately licensed, as is the image it was derived from, and has alt text included, which is always nice to see. No issues here. Giants2008 (Talk) 22:36, 10 May 2022 (UTC)

Promoting. --PresN 15:22, 13 May 2022 (UTC)

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Angel Locsin filmography

Nominator(s): Pseud 14 (talk) 21:26, 22 March 2022 (UTC)

With my earlier nomination having at least four supports and no outstanding issues, here's another filmography of a Filipino actress. Angel Locsin started her career over two decades ago and has achieved considerable success in film and television. Prolific in fantasy and action adventure genres, perhaps she is best known for her portrayals of superheroines and mythological creatures. An avian-hybrid, a sorceress, a werewolf, and a comic book superhero to name a few.

Created early in March, this list article has been expanded to include an interesting and readable introduction of the subject's work. I’ve tried my best to thoroughly search for RS (publications, newspapers, etc.) that are available online, since sourcing can be a challenge, especially for Filipino subject(s). Happy to address your comments and thanks to all who take the time to review the list. Pseud 14 (talk) 21:26, 22 March 2022 (UTC)

Comments

• "Critical success followed with Locsin's performances in high-profile directors' collaboration" => "Critical success followed with Locsin's performances in collaborations with high-profile directors"

Done

• "Locsin's portrayals of the grief-stricken title character in the drama series The Legal Wife (2014), and the indoctrinated military nurse in the spy-action thriller series The General's Daughter (2019)," - don't need either of those commas

Removed commas

• Titles starting with The should sort based on the next word of the title

Fixed

• That's all I've got! -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 09:02, 23 March 2022 (UTC)

@ChrisTheDude: thanks very much for your review. I have addressed the above. Let me know if there's anything I may have missed. Thanks Pseud 14 (talk) 13:09, 23 March 2022 (UTC)

• Support -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 13:32, 23 March 2022 (UTC)

Comments by FrB.TG

• "Locsin gained wider recognition and received praise for portraying Darna in the 2005 television series based on Mars Ravelo's comics superheroine of the same name." It's not clear what the television series is called. We do get the name Darna but it's not 100% clear that the series is called as the character. Perhaps something like "...portraying the title character in the 2005 television series Darna..."?

Fixed per suggestion

• "During this period, Locsin also appeared alongside Dennis Trillo,[7] co-starring in the horror thriller Txt (2006) and playing a.." - co-starred, played; no need for the verb-ing modifier.

Done

• "Locsin's portrayals of the grief-stricken title character in the drama series The Legal Wife (2014)[18] and the indoctrinated military nurse in the spy-action thriller series The General's Daughter (2019)[19] earned her nominations at the Star Awards, winning Best Actress .." - the "winning Best Actress" refers to "Locsin's portrayals", which makes no sense. Her portrayal did not win the award but won her the award.

I have reworded this

• "Aside from acting, Locsin also" - also is unneeded when we have "aside from acting".

Done

• "She has also provided" - past tense should be better since you have provided the year the film was released.

Done

• Since the abbreviation is "Ref(s)", the full form should also be called "Reference(s)". FrB.TG (talk) 17:05, 23 March 2022 (UTC)

Done

Thank you FrB.TG, I have addressed above comments. Let me know if there's anything I may have missed or misunderstood. Pseud 14 (talk) 18:32, 23 March 2022 (UTC)

Support. Good work. FrB.TG (talk) 18:45, 23 March 2022 (UTC)

Comments by Maile66

I've read through this multiple times. It's a really tight, well-done piece of work. The only thing that stands out to me, is that the last paragraph of the lead has no inline source. — Maile (talk) 22:08, 22 April 2022 (UTC)

@Maile66: thank you for your kind words and review. I have added citations to the last paragraph in the lead. Pseud 14 (talk) 23:39, 22 April 2022 (UTC)

Support. — Maile (talk) 23:48, 22 April 2022 (UTC)

Thank you very much for your support and I appreciate your time in doing the review. Pseud 14 (talk) 23:50, 22 April 2022 (UTC)

Comments by Z1720

I am still new to FLC, so feedback and comments on my review are appreciated. This review will focus on the lede, prose, and understandability of the article.

• " as the young Robina Gokongwei in the biopic Ping Lacson: Super Cop (2000)." I don't like the wikilink for Ping Lacson: Super Cop because it links to an article about Ping Lascon and not the movie, creating an MOS:EGG situation. I suggest removing the wikilink or redlinking it.

Unlinked

• "Locsin subsequently had minor appearances" Delete subsequently, as the years in the Mano Po movies will inform the reader that these were subsequent to her previous work, and thus the word is redundant.

Done

• "a role she later reprised in its 2005 film adaptation." Delete later, as the reader will know this is later based on the dates.

Done

• 'She then starred opposite Richard Gutierrez in the romantic dramas Let the Love Begin (2005)" Delete "then"

Done

• "The following year, she reunited with Richard Gutierrez in the coming-of-age drama The Promise (2007)" Delete "The following year" as the year after The Promise will inform the reader of this information.

Done

• "In 2016, she appeared in the comedies Everything About Her and The Third Party." This needs a citation.

Added

• Why is her role blank in "Twin Hearts", "Love to Love" and "All Together Now"? What character name was she credited with in these shows?

A previous source review from one of the coords mention that if you can't reliably source the name, remove it and put a dash in the table. There are no high-quality sources for these character names outside of IMDb that I could find, and Wikipedia:Citing IMDb is considered unreliable.

Yeah, IMDB is unreliable. Perhaps there's a Filipino film board that stores this type of information? Regardless, this is not a big deal. Z1720 (talk) 12:41, 25 April 2022 (UTC)

I've tried, unfortunately it isn't available on any internet archives. And sadly there isn't a Filipino board that maintains these types of information. News sources are generally my go to, aside from TV Guide, Rotten Tomatoes, movie reviews or press releases from the film studio/production/network.

Those are my comments. Please ping when the above are addressed. Z1720 (talk) 22:44, 24 April 2022 (UTC)

@Z1720: thank you for your review. I have actioned the above. Let me know if there are things that remain unaddressed. Pseud 14 (talk) 03:16, 25 April 2022 (UTC)

Support. My concerns have been addressed. Z1720 (talk) 12:41, 25 April 2022 (UTC)

@Z1720: much appreciate your support! Pseud 14 (talk) 14:08, 25 April 2022 (UTC)

AK

• Disclaimer: I haven't checked references and will be claiming credit at the Wikicup.
• Just a note, Template:' is for placement after something in italics, not something that is just linked.

Thanks for this and noted.

• "2005 television series Darna based on Mars Ravelo's comics" → "2005 television series Darna, which is based on Mars Ravelo's comics"

Changed

• That's all I could find. AryKun (talk) 15:29, 26 April 2022 (UTC)

@AryKun: thanks for your review. I have actioned the above. Let me know if I might have missed something. Pseud 14 (talk) 15:47, 26 April 2022 (UTC)

• Nothing else I could find, so support on the basis of prose. AryKun (talk) 15:52, 26 April 2022 (UTC)

Source review passed; promoting. --PresN 15:22, 13 May 2022 (UTC)

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58th Academy Awards

Nominator(s): Birdienest81talk 08:05, 5 March 2022 (UTC)

I am nominating the 1986 Oscars for featured list because we believe it has great potential to become a Featured List. I followed how the 1929, 1979, 1984, 1987, 1988, 1989, 1990, 1991, 1992, 1993, 1994, 1995, 1996, 1997, 1998, 1999, 2000, 2001, 2002, 2003, 2004, 2005, 2006, 2007, 2008, 2009, 2010, 2011, 2012, 2013, 2014, 2015, 2016, 2017, 2018, 2019, 2020, and 2021 ceremonies were written. Birdienest81talk 08:05, 5 March 2022 (UTC)

Comments

Resolved comments from ChrisTheDude (talk) 09:50, 25 March 2022 (UTC)

*"The Color Purple joined The Turning Point as the most nominated films in Oscar history without a single win, as well as the most nominations without one for Best Director" - does this mean that TCP joined TTP in achieving both those things? Or only the first? Fixed: Both films only accomplished most nominations without a win. The latter film only achieved most nominations without a Director nominations. However, I cannot find a citation for that fact. "By virtue of his father Walter's previous wins, John's daughter Anjelica's victory in the Best Supporting Actress category made her the first third-generation Oscar winner in history" - it wasn't just by virtue of Walter's wins, it was by virtue of both that and whatever win(s) John had at some point...... Fixed: Modified fact so that a footnote indicates that John and Walter Huston previously won Oscars. This is for better sentence flow. "Regarding Alda, Fonda, and Williams hosting performance" - missing 's before hosting Fixed: Added an apostrophe and an s to "Williams" and before "hosting". "various musicals numbers" - presume that should be "musical numbers".....? Fixed: Changed "musicals" to singular. "27.3% of households watching with a 43% share" - a 43% share of what? Not of total households, as that was 27%.......? @ChrisTheDude: Again, I don't know if I can explain it any clearer. The first number (27.3) represents the rating or the percentage of households with a TV (REGARDLESS of if the television set was on or off) that were tuned in to the program. The second number (43), the share, ONLY counts television sets/households that had their TV turned on during the program's duration. So 43 percent of TV's that were in USAGE DURING THE LENGTH OF THE CEREMONY were tuned in to that program. Again, I can remove the share number if you find it confusing or unnecessary. The reason newer ceremonies don't have the share number is because fewer media outlets don't report the share number as often. They focus on the viewership total and 18-49 rating. This problem was also brought up during the featured list candidacy for the 56th Academy Awards. Oh, that was me! I didn't remember that :-P -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 08:31, 11 March 2022 (UTC) Think that's all I got :-) -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 17:11, 10 March 2022 (UTC)

• Support -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 08:46, 13 March 2022 (UTC)

Accessibility review (MOS:DTAB)

• Tables (specifically, the "Multiple nominations and awards" tables) need row scopes on the "primary" column for each row, which in combination with column scopes lets screen reader software accurately determine and read out the headers for each cell of a data table. Row scopes can be added by adding !scope=row to each primary cell, e.g. | style=" color:white;" | 1 becomes !scope=row style="color:white;" | 1.
• Please see MOS:DTAB for example table code if this isn't clear. I don't return to these reviews until the nomination is ready to close, so ping me if you have any questions. --PresN 19:19, 10 March 2022 (UTC)

• @PresN: Done: Added scope="row" to the tables.

--Birdienest81talk 02:50, 11 March 2022 (UTC)

Comments by FrB.TG

• "During the ceremony, AMPAS presented Academy Awards (commonly referred to as Oscars)" - suggest wiki-linking Academy Awards and isn't it the Oscars?
• I think it's worth mentioning in the lede that out of the whopping 11 nominations the film The Color Purple received, it won none.
• I would mention the viewership in the lede.
• I would mention the year the film The Turning Point was released.
• In "Box office performance of nominated films", there need to be NBSP's between the numbers and "million".
• There are some unnecessarily large quotes in critical reviews. Some can easily be paraphrased. Examples: ""The show regrettably returned to its old bad habits with a boring onstage production number intended...", ""Suddenly, it seemed, somebody had listened to the complaints that had grown deadeningly familiar over the years." (this part only).
• The racism that the LA Times source (#9) discusses seems worth mentioning somewhere in the article. Also, the source should be marked as dead since the main link redirects to its archive page.

Otherwise good work as always. FrB.TG (talk) 18:39, 21 March 2022 (UTC)

• @FrB.TG: - Done: I've read your comments and made corrections and adjustments based on them. By the way, the primary name of the award is still the Academy Awards. The Oscars are just a secondary nickname for promotional and marketing purposes.

--Birdienest81talk 09:39, 25 March 2022 (UTC)

My comment was rather directed at "commonly referred to as Oscars". I was asking if it should be "the Oscars" instead of simply "Oscars". FrB.TG (talk) 09:47, 25 March 2022 (UTC)

Jumping in here, that sentence is talking about the formal and informal names of the actual prizes awarded i.e. the statuettes. I think it is correct as it is and saying "AMPAS presented Academy Awards (commonly referred to as the Oscars)" would actually be incorrect -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 08:21, 26 March 2022 (UTC)

@ChrisTheDude: I ask of this because according to this source, it was once rebranded as "the Oscars". However, this does not keep me from supporting this. I would appreciate comments on my FLC, Birdie, but this is obviously not obligatory in any way. FrB.TG (talk) 17:50, 26 March 2022 (UTC)

Source review – Pass

Will do soon. Aza24 (talk) 05:49, 26 March 2022 (UTC)

Formatting

• Since the NYT is not fully subscription based, those refs should be marked as "url-access=limited"
• assuming ref 8 shouldn't have the LAT linked as you seem to be only linking the first mentions
• BoxOfficeMojo is formatted differently in refs 25 & 26
• In the biblio, the location use is inconsistent, sometimes its city, sometimes its city and state, and sometimes its city, state and country. Any of the three are find, just needs to be consistent.

Reliability

• No issues

Verifiability

• A lot of the refs are marked as "url-access=live" when they should be marked as dead. 2 and 6 for instance, though there are others
• Checked a few, no issues Aza24 (talk) 06:03, 26 March 2022 (UTC)

• @Aza24: I have addressed your comments and made some adjustments based on them. For the LA Times sources, I found new links to the same article. Birdienest81talk 08:21, 4 April 2022 (UTC)

• Looks good, pass for source review. Aza24 (talk) 23:33, 5 April 2022 (UTC)

Comments by Gerald Waldo Luis

Nothing much, just that Will Smith really hit it hard yesterday, huh? Will also do an image review. GeraldWL 17:15, 29 March 2022 (UTC)

• "The ceremony, televised in the United States by ABC, was produced by Stanley Donen and directed by Marty Pasetta." This is the lead and you cited a source, which makes sense since it's not written about in the body, but is there any way it can be moved to the Ceremony info section? Similarly to the succeeding sentences.

• Fixed: Added a sentence about Pasetta's role as director since Donen is mentioned in the first paragraphy. As for the sentences regarding the Sci-Tech awards, it feels out of place since the Ceremony Information section deals only with the main ceremony itself.

• A summary of the reviews would be nice to see in the lead, maybe the second paragraph.

• Fixed: Added phrase that mentions the ceremony received both positive and negative reviews similar to the 93rd Oscars intro.

• At what parts do you think it should be referred to as the Academy Awards, and what parts as the Oscars?

• Both terms should be used interchangeably. The Academy Awards should be used in the intro since it is formally introducing the reader to the award itself. The Oscars is used only for simplicity as an adjective like "Oscar history" or "Oscar winning".

• "Flying Down to Rio" --> "Flying Down to Rio (1933)"

• Fixed: Linked song to said film.

• "MGM" --> "Metro-Goldwyn-Mayer"

• Fixed: Changed abbreviation to full name.

• "Of the 50 grossing movies of the year"-- change movies to films for consistency.

• Fixed: Changed "movies" to "films".

• Rotten Tomatoes has a critics consensus and bundle on the 58th Oscars you might wanna check out. There are 20 sampled reviews which you might be interested in to expand the review scope. Additionally I would suggest reading WP:RECEPTION on making the reviews section more engaging.

• I'm extremely weary of using Rotten Tomatoes as a way to objectively generalize the critical consensus of a ceremony. I'm perfectly fine with using the Rotten Tomatoes listing for Oscars ceremonies to obtain an individual review of the show for reference. However, I caution make any sort of generalization In an earlier discussion on my talk page, I with other editors determined that using Rotten Tomatoes to measure the critical consensus of a particular show is pretty sketchy at best since its sample of reviews of a ceremony is quite small compared to say film reviews or television reviews. An example would be the 72nd Academy Awards which is missing some positive reviews from the Boston Herald and the Los Angeles Times. Furthermore, according to Inside Oscar 2 by Damien Bona, reviews of the show were more on the positive side of things as opposed to lukewarm as Rotten Tomatoes suggests. So the score of Rotten Tomatoes may have missed other reviews of the show that were positive. Finally, I think that three positive and three critical reviews are enough to maintain a neutral point of view or objectivity regarding ceremonies that aren't completely on the acclaimed side of things but not on the reviled side of thing either.

• In the external links, "Official" --> "official"

• Fixed: Un-capitalized "official".

• "Channel" --> "channel"

• Fixed: Un-capitalized "channel".

• "at YouTube" --> "on YouTube"

• Fixed: Changed "at" to "on".

• Is the YT channel parentheses needed?

• Fixed: Removed parentheses.

• The Filmsite link is not needed, as it's just a repetition of the list table in this Wikipedia article, not an analysis of the telecast.

• Fixed: Removed Filmsite link.

• The first IMDb link is a 404 error; even with an archive it feels kinda redundant as it's IMDb, a generally unreliable source. I think the second IMDb link should cover it well.

• Fixed: Removed the first IMDb. Anyways, like the Filmsite link, it was just a rundown of the winners.

• The Exlink subsections are redundant.

• Fixed: Removed Exlink subsections.

• Infobox: in the duration, there shouldn't be a comma

• Fixed: Removed comma,

• Credit roles must be in sentence case: "Art Director" --> "Art director"; "Set Decoration" --> "set decorator"

• Fixed: Un-capitalized "director" and "decorator".

• In the presenters table, I think you can put the Hank ref to the preceding sentence.

• Fixed: Moved the Hank ref to the end of the sentence.

• "Announcer of the 58th Annual Academy Awards" --> "Announcer of the award"

• Sims was the announcer for the entire ceremony. Using the phrase above would imply he only announced the awards for the ceremony. In fact, Sims role in the ceremony did not involve awards. He simply introduced a few presenters, introduced the telecast, or announced what was coming up next or the telecast's sponsors ("Live from the Dorothy Chandler Pavilion in Downtown Los Angeles...", "Ladies and Gentle the president of the Academy of..." "The 58th Annual Academy Awards are being brought to you by...").

• In the performance table, suggest adding year brackets to the films..

• I don't see how that is necessary given that almost all of the songs performed on the telecast are were the Best Original Song nominees which were presumably from films released in 1985 (implied since the ceremony was meant to reward achievements from said year).

• "MGM" --> "Metro-Goldwyn-Mayer"

• Fixed: Likewise in the peformers table, changed abbreviation to full name.

• "Here's to the Losers" "Once a Star, Always a Star" "Oh, Lady Be Good!" from what film?

• Here's to the Losers is not originally from any film. It's actually a song by Frank Sinatra which I attributed to in the table. "Once a Star, Always a Star" was an song that was written exclusively for this ceremony. "Oh, Lady Be Good!" is from the musical Lady, Be Good which I attributed to in the table.

• @Gerald Waldo Luis: I have made changes based on your comments unless stated otherwise.

--Birdienest81talk 10:13, 6 April 2022 (UTC)

Comments by RunningTiger123

• "3 hours 11 minutes" → "3 hours, 11 minutes"
• Link to John Huston in footnote a can be removed
• If the multiple nominations table is supposed to be alphabetized, A Chorus Line is out of order
• "Announcer of the 58th Annual Academy Awards" – any reason why "Annual" is included here but not elsewhere?
• Source 20 from The Philadelphia Inquirer needs a date
  • Source 38 from the Los Angeles Times could also use a date
• "$13.4 million" → "$13.4 million" (double space should be removed)
• "...a very good year - the year the Academy..." – replace hyphen with proper dash

Overall, this seems to be yet another solid Oscars list. RunningTiger123 (talk) 13:42, 27 April 2022 (UTC)

• @RunningTiger123: - Done: I have addressed all your comments by taking the appropriate measures to correct the issues brought up by them.

--Birdienest81talk 02:45, 28 April 2022 (UTC)

Support – RunningTiger123 (talk) 19:55, 28 April 2022 (UTC)

Promoting. --PresN 15:22, 13 May 2022 (UTC)

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Timeline of the 2020 Pacific hurricane season

Nominator(s): TropicalAnalystwx13 (talk · contributions) 01:21, 24 January 2022 (UTC)

This article contains the timeline of all tropical cyclones during the 2020 Pacific hurricane season. Thank you in advance for your review. TropicalAnalystwx13 (talk · contributions) 01:21, 24 January 2022 (UTC)

Image review from Kavyansh — Pass

• The infobox image can take ALT text
• File:2020 Pacific hurricane season summary map.png — It says that "This file may be updated to reflect new information."
• All the own work images are fine, thanks to FleurDeOdile.
  • Pass for image review. – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 18:49, 25 January 2022 (UTC)

Comments from Kavyansh

• "The season officially started on May 15" — What does "officially" mean here? Who determines it?
• "Accumulated Cyclone Energy" — our article does not capitalize it
• "Four time zones are utilized in the basin ... and dissipations during the season." — I wonder is this information necessary for the lead? I'll move it to the "Timeline" section instead, just below that graph
• "35 mph (55 km/h)" v. "111 miles per hour (179 km/h)" — be consistent on whether both units should be in abbreviation or not.
• "of a kelvin wave" — our article capitalizes 'K'
• "According to the NHC's protocol" — spell 'NHC'
• That is it; nice work! – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 09:40, 24 January 2022 (UTC)

  Kavyansh.Singh, I have addressed your comments. Thanks. :) TropicalAnalystwx13 (talk · contributions) 03:26, 25 January 2022 (UTC)

  I see that image review comments are not addressed; particularly that does File:2020 Pacific hurricane season summary map.png needs to be updated? – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 07:18, 25 January 2022 (UTC)

  Whoops sorry Kavyansh.Singh, I completely forgot about that part. Added alt text to the season track map. The file itself does not need to be updated at this point--all data is finalized. That notice is just there to encompass the time before seasonal data is finalized (which occurs a few months after the season ends). TropicalAnalystwx13 (talk · contributions) 18:47, 25 January 2022 (UTC)

  No issues. Looks good; Supporting! – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 18:49, 25 January 2022 (UTC)

Comments

• "in the Central Pacific—the region between the International Date Line and 140°W, and ended" - the clause starts with a dash but ends with a hyphen
• "The season officially started on May 15 [....] The season began with the formation of Tropical Depression One-E, which developed on April 25" - do these two sentences not contradict each other......?
• That's all I got! -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 17:38, 31 January 2022 (UTC)

  Hi, ChrisTheDude, I believe I have addressed these comments. Thanks for the review! TropicalAnalystwx13 (talk · contributions) 21:28, 31 January 2022 (UTC)

• Support -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 09:24, 1 February 2022 (UTC)

CommentsSupport from TRM

• Funny, I would think we could link Pacific Ocean in the lead as that's a principle component of the context of the list.
• "eastern Pacific Ocean" vs "Eastern Pacific basin" Eastern/eastern? In the latter case, the Eastern, if part of the formal name, really ought to be inside the pipe.
• It's only just struck me after all these years that it's odd calling it a "hurricane" season when it's all about "tropical cyclones". I think a footnote would be useful explaining that these are (in this case) synonymous, because where I'm from, we have the odd hurricane, but that's never a "tropical cyclone"...
• "four. Accumulated Cyclone Energy, an index" our article doesn't over-capitalise this.
• "Baja California Peninsula" our article doesn't capitalise peninsula.
• "e Madden–Julian Oscillation " likewise "oscillation".

That's all I have. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 16:52, 14 March 2022 (UTC)

Sorry for the delay, The Rambling Man, I have addressed these comments. Thank you. TropicalAnalystwx13 (talk · contributions) 20:43, 1 April 2022 (UTC)

No worries. Support from me. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 15:57, 28 April 2022 (UTC)

AK

• Disclaimer: I haven't checked references and will be claiming credit at the Wikicup.
• Added some links, but I can't find anything else to grouse about, so a support from me. AryKun (talk) 13:15, 27 April 2022 (UTC)

• Source review – The references used are reliable and well-formatted across the board, and no dead links were detected by the link-checker tool. The source review has been passed. Giants2008 (Talk) 01:12, 4 May 2022 (UTC)

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List of songs written by Alexandru Cotoi

Nominator(s): Sebbirrrr (talk) 16:31, 28 February 2022 (UTC)

I am nominating this for featured list because it as an extensive list of the songs he has (co-)written which are referenced. Even though he mostly wrote for Romanian singers, he did write songs for some internationally known artists as well. I have used the other "list of songs written by..." FLs as reference. Sebbirrrr (talk) 16:31, 28 February 2022 (UTC)

Comments on the lead

• Image caption is not a complete sentence so does not need a full stop
• "and has been releasing music" => "and has released music"
• "Cotoi became a registered composer in 2003" - what does it mean to be a "registered composer"? Never heard of such a thing before
• "In 2015, he contributed on" => "In 2015, he contributed to"
• "for which he won a Grammy Award for Best Latin Rock, Urban or Alternative Album" - Cotoi did not win this award
• "at number seven in Bulgaria as well" - last two words are not needed
• "The album's lead single "Flashbacks"," => "The album's lead single, "Flashbacks","
• "was the most played song in 2021 in the country" - which country? Two countries were mentioned in the first half of the sentence
• "The Motans's and Emaa's "Insula"" => ""Insula" by the Motans and Emaa" is better IMO
• I will look at the rest later -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 18:09, 28 February 2022 (UTC)

@ChrisTheDude: Hi there, thanks for reviewing the lead. I edited the lead accordingly except for your third point. By "registered composer" I meant that that was when he became a member of the Romanian union for composers and songwriters, which would allow him to legally publish songs and earn the rights to whatever song would have him as one of the composers. Sebbirrrr (talk) 18:58, 28 February 2022 (UTC)

Hmm, never heard of that as a thing. I would just say that he published his first songs in 2003. Also, I would remove the reference to the Grammy Award for Best Latin Rock, Urban or Alternative Album completely. Cotoi was one of seven credited co-writers of one song on a 12-track album, so his contribution to the whole album was relatively small and it's UNDUE to talk about the award the album won -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 19:21, 1 March 2022 (UTC)

Fixed. Sebbirrrr (talk) 20:00, 1 March 2022 (UTC)

Comments on image captions

• "Cotoi was one of Baddest Girl in Town's songwriters, which appears on Pitbull's (pictured) studio album Dale." => "Cotoi was one of the writers of Baddest Girl in Town, which appears on Pitbull's (pictured) studio album Dale." Again, I would remove the mention of the album's Grammy, as it isn't really relevant to Cotoi.
• "He further co-wrote her 2021 single "Up"." => "He also co-wrote her 2021 single "Up"." -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 19:26, 1 March 2022 (UTC)

Done. Sebbirrrr (talk) 20:00, 1 March 2022 (UTC)

Comments on the table

• Anything that starts with the word "The" should sort based on the next word
• That's it :-) -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 13:12, 2 March 2022 (UTC)

Fixed! Sebbirrrr (talk) 13:40, 2 March 2022 (UTC)

• Support -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 13:49, 2 March 2022 (UTC)

Comments on references

• If possible replace Tidal references to credits with articles (a lot of work to check if there is article about particular song and exactly mentions "Writer(s)" not composers etc.) or other store with no login required. To the rest of Tidal's references add note like "login required to acces content" or is there other way to acces credits? From what I can see there is no way to access data with "View page source" option. I think credits were available at Tidal a few years ago so you can check if there are old archived versions in Web Archive. Eurohunter (talk) 07:11, 7 April 2022 (UTC)
• There are links to archived versions of Tidal pages to credits but you can't login there to access content so there is no rason to keep them (atleast that one I have checked). As above they would have to be replaced with older open archived version or replaced with article or the other store. Eurohunter (talk) 07:13, 7 April 2022 (UTC)

  Didn't have any luck with the web archive but I replaced all Tidal sources with Spotify, where you don't need to log in. Sebbirrrr (talk) 18:06, 7 April 2022 (UTC)

  @Eurohunter: apologies for pinging but does it look better now? Sebbirrrr (talk) 11:05, 12 April 2022 (UTC)

  @Sebbirrrr: Thanks for notify me. To be honest Spotify mentions just "authors" instead of exactly "writers". Eurohunter (talk) 13:45, 12 April 2022 (UTC)

  @Eurohunter: would it be better if the "writers" column was renamed to "writer(s)/author(s)" then? Sebbirrrr (talk) 17:09, 12 April 2022 (UTC)

  @Sebbirrrr: No. We want there "writers" than just "authors". I assume by writers it mean lyricists than music writers? Eurohunter (talk) 17:30, 12 April 2022 (UTC)

  @Eurohunter: I assume so. However as spotify has both "written by" and "produced by" listed in the credits, wouldn't "written by" then be synonymous with lyricists rather than authors? And in your last comment, are you saying that authors would be the same thing as music writers? Sebbirrrr (talk) 18:28, 12 April 2022 (UTC)

  @Sebbirrrr: The last qustion - for sure we distinguish author of lyrics and author of music (these are two aspects of song). Summarizing if someone just wrote lyrics and music for project - he need to produce and master it yet. Eurohunter (talk) 18:55, 12 April 2022 (UTC)

  @Eurofan: Aren't the "author of music" and the producer different from each other? The author is the one who creates lyrics and compositional elements (the music) for the song while the producer is the one responsible for the final sound of the song. Going back to what I said about spotify's distinction, they credit the ones who wrote the song and the ones who produced the song separately. Sebbirrrr (talk) 22:38, 12 April 2022 (UTC)

  @Sebbirrrr: Yes as you said the author is the one who creates lyrics and compositional elements (the music) but it not always mean it's the same person. There are lyricists who never write music so that's why we can distinguish two different writers (lyricist vs composer). Eurohunter (talk) 23:49, 12 April 2022 (UTC)

  @Eurohunter: I wanted to bring up that in some album's liner notes, the credits are listed like spotify, having both "written by" and "produced by" separately. In that case, what would you consider the people under "written by" as? Sebbirrrr (talk) 11:12, 13 April 2022 (UTC)

  @Eurohunter: I assume we've reached a roadblock? I pointed out in my last message that the way some albums list their credits is similar to how spotify lists them. Sebbirrrr (talk) 15:19, 19 April 2022 (UTC)

  @Sebbirrrr: I probably overly complicated it. In case if both "written by" and "produced by" exist I would said "written by" lists lyricists. Eurohunter (talk) 15:33, 19 April 2022 (UTC)

  @Eurohunter: does everything look alright then? Sebbirrrr (talk) 15:59, 19 April 2022 (UTC)

  @Eurohunter: sorry for pinging again, but is this sorted out then? Sebbirrrr (talk) 14:33, 21 April 2022 (UTC)

  @Sebbirrrr: No problem. Yes I remember but I wasn't sure what to say exactly so from my perspective - I would search for source where it strictly shows "writer/s" and "producer/s". Eurohunter (talk) 16:51, 25 April 2022 (UTC)

  @Eurohunter: I think you are getting confused, I've said that spotify shows both "written by" and "produced by" separately, like some albums do. Sebbirrrr (talk) 20:02, 25 April 2022 (UTC)

  @Sebbirrrr: I know but it shows just "authors" and "producers" so there is no direct source. If there are "authors" instead of "writers" there is always a question what they meant. I think author or whole authorship has greater meaning than writer. You can also distinguish writers and performers at American Society of Composers, Authors and Publishers. Eurohunter (talk) 22:11, 25 April 2022 (UTC)

  @Eurohunter: I don't understand why you think spotify shows authors for "written by" instead of writers. Sebbirrrr (talk) 09:03, 26 April 2022 (UTC)

  @Sebbirrrr: It shows "Authors" in Polish version. Could you provide name in Romananian and/or English version? Eurohunter (talk) 16:02, 26 April 2022 (UTC)

  @Eurohunter: in the Romanian version it's "scrisă de" which translates as "written by", and on the English version it's "written by" Sebbirrrr (talk) 16:31, 26 April 2022 (UTC)

  @Sebbirrrr: So everything is all right just Polish version has wrong translation. I wonder if any note could and if it should be added for it. Eurohunter (talk) 17:27, 26 April 2022 (UTC)

  @Eurohunter: I think the links go to the English version (could you check?) but I could add one which says something like "in some countries, Spotify lists writers as authors" if that's not the case Sebbirrrr (talk) 17:55, 26 April 2022 (UTC)

  @Sebbirrrr: Spotify automatically recognise language you use. If you can force Spotify to show in English but I don't know how to do it or if it is even possible. Eurohunter (talk) 17:59, 26 April 2022 (UTC)

  @Eurohunter: I was asking because it appears in English on my laptop but I have the app in Romanian. I will add the note then Sebbirrrr (talk) 18:00, 26 April 2022 (UTC

  @Sebbirrrr: It has to recognise your location as US, UK, Australia etc. Eurohunter (talk) 18:02, 26 April 2022 (UTC)

  @Eurohunter: what should the note say then? Sebbirrrr (talk) 18:04, 26 April 2022 (UTC)

  @Eurohunter: I've added a note, does that suffice? Sebbirrrr (talk) 18:30, 27 April 2022 (UTC)

  @Eurohunter: does the note suffice or should I add something else? Sebbirrrr (talk) 18:12, 29 April 2022 (UTC)

  @Sebbirrrr: Good idea but I would limit it just to Polish version because we don't have other examples. If you could check other languages it would be perfect. Eurohunter (talk) 18:18, 29 April 2022 (UTC)

  @Eurohunter: I don't think I can verify all language versions of Spotify but I'll limit it to the Polish version. Sebbirrrr (talk) 19:34, 29 April 2022 (UTC)

• References 152 and 154 works only after second reload or it's just my specification? Eurohunter (talk) 17:38, 26 April 2022 (UTC)
  • They worked fine for me. Sebbirrrr (talk) 19:34, 29 April 2022 (UTC)
• Authors in references - "Arvunescu, Victor" - just name and surname so Victor Arvunescu without the comma. Eurohunter (talk) 17:38, 26 April 2022 (UTC)
  • Aren't authors supposed to be written as "Arvunescu, Victor", with the comma, on the English wikipedia? Sebbirrrr (talk) 19:34, 29 April 2022 (UTC)
    • @Sebbirrrr: No need to like names in articles. Eurohunter (talk) 15:34, 30 April 2022 (UTC)

      @Eurohunter it's just that in most quality articles the authors are written with the comma. For example, in List of Airplay 100 number ones, which includes "Arvunescu, Victor", the name is written like that Sebbirrrr (talk) 16:23, 30 April 2022 (UTC)

      • @Sebbirrrr: Okey but it doesn't make sense, looks bad and it's just useless. Eurohunter (talk) 17:16, 30 April 2022 (UTC)

        @Eurohunter fixed them Sebbirrrr (talk) 17:33, 30 April 2022 (UTC)

• Use "website" instead of "publisher". Eurohunter (talk) 17:47, 26 April 2022 (UTC)
  • For which sources? Sebbirrrr (talk) 19:34, 29 April 2022 (UTC)
    • @Sebbirrrr: All website references. Eurohunter (talk) 15:34, 30 April 2022 (UTC)

      @Eurohunter fixed. Sebbirrrr (talk) 16:22, 30 April 2022 (UTC)

• There is ro:Uniunea Compozitorilor și Muzicologilor din România for reference 2 and other if there is any more. Eurohunter (talk) 17:47, 26 April 2022 (UTC)
  • Added. Sebbirrrr (talk) 19:34, 29 April 2022 (UTC)

@Eurohunter I've addressed all of your points, is everything alright now?

@Eurohunter sorry for tagging again but I want to make sure everything is fine now

• • @Sebbirrrr: "By September 2009, the group had published five songs on their Myspace profile and announced that they were working on their debut album, which was released on 16 April 2011" - if the album is introduced it would be good to add its name. Apart from that everything is fine now. Eurohunter (talk) 18:56, 2 May 2022 (UTC)
    • @Eurohunter: Fixed Sebbirrrr (talk) 19:09, 2 May 2022 (UTC)

@Eurohunter everything fine now? @Eurohunter sorry for the constant pinging but I would like to know if everything is alright now. Sebbirrrr (talk) 17:16, 4 May 2022 (UTC)

@Sebbirrrr: No problem. Yes. Eurohunter (talk) 18:27, 4 May 2022 (UTC)

@Eurohunter: I assume you're supporting, then? Sebbirrrr (talk) 18:59, 4 May 2022 (UTC)

@Sebbirrrr: I thought it's obvious but yes - I definitelly support this nomination. Eurohunter (talk) 19:04, 4 May 2022 (UTC)

Image review

• The ALT text for double-dagger should not be 'dagger', but what it represents, in this case: 'single release'

I'm a bit confused since I'm using a dagger (not a double-dagger) and the alt text for it is 'Song released as a single'. Sebbirrrr (talk) 21:09, 1 March 2022 (UTC)

Per [31], only one dagger has ALT text "Song released as a single". – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 21:14, 1 March 2022 (UTC)

Fixed. Sebbirrrr (talk) 21:38, 1 March 2022 (UTC)

• File:Sickotoy 2021.jpg — shouldn't there be an OTRS conformation, as the image is received by the nominator via direct e-mail?

The image was not uploaded nor received by me though. Sebbirrrr (talk) 21:09, 1 March 2022 (UTC)

My bad, I mistaken "uploaded" with "nominator". Though I can WP:AGF on its licencing. – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 21:14, 1 March 2022 (UTC)

• File:Arena Corinthians Opening (cropped-Pitbull).jpg — I cannot access the source link.

Fixed. Sebbirrrr (talk) 21:09, 1 March 2022 (UTC)

But that archived link does not verifies the licencing ... – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 21:14, 1 March 2022 (UTC)

Changed the image to File:Pitbull,_2012_(2).jpg whose licensing is verified.Sebbirrrr (talk) 21:38, 1 March 2022 (UTC)

– Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 20:44, 1 March 2022 (UTC)

Pass for image review. – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 06:19, 2 March 2022 (UTC)

Comments from Kavyansh

• Add a short-description for the page

Done. Sebbirrrr (talk) 09:33, 2 March 2022 (UTC)

• Why is 'Sickotoy' bolded twice in the lead?

Fixed. Sebbirrrr (talk) 09:33, 2 March 2022 (UTC)

• Are any of "Radu Dumitriu, Răzvan Gorcinski, and Victor Bourosu" notable enough to red-link?

Bourosu is still an active songwriter, two of the songs he wrote are "Amnesia" and "Rampampam" but I don't know if that's notable enough. The other two not really. Sebbirrrr (talk) 09:33, 2 March 2022 (UTC)

Check if it meets WP:NSINGER, but that is not an important point here. – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 09:41, 2 March 2022 (UTC)

• "and Russia," — linking Russia appears over-linking; CIS and Romania links are probably fine

Fixed. Sebbirrrr (talk) 09:33, 2 March 2022 (UTC)

• "Minelli" is linked twice in the lead.

Fixed. Sebbirrrr (talk) 09:33, 2 March 2022 (UTC)

That is it! – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 06:26, 2 March 2022 (UTC)

Happy to support. Any comments for this nomination would be appreciated. Thanks! – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 09:41, 2 March 2022 (UTC)

Accessibility review (MOS:DTAB)

• Tables need captions, which allow screen reader software to jump straight to named tables without having to read out all of the text before it each time. Visual captions can be added by putting |+ caption_text as the first line of the table code; if that caption would duplicate a nearby section header, you can make it screen-reader-only by putting |+ {{sronly|caption_text}} instead.
• Please see MOS:DTAB for example table code if this isn't clear. I don't return to these reviews until the nomination is ready to close, so ping me if you have any questions. --PresN 19:08, 10 March 2022 (UTC)
  • Done. Sebbirrrr (talk) 20:43, 11 March 2022 (UTC)

• Closing note: This candidate has been promoted, but there may be a delay in bot processing of the close. Please see WP:FLC/ar, and leave the {{featured list candidates}} template in place on the talk page until the bot goes through. Giants2008 (Talk) 21:14, 8 May 2022 (UTC)

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The list was promoted by Giants2008 via FACBot (talk) 00:25, 3 May 2022 (UTC) [32].

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List of Robin Williams performances

Nominator(s): Birdienest81talk & FrB.TG (talk) 08:56, 31 March 2022 (UTC)

We are nominating the list because we believe it provides an exhaustive list of Robin Williams's roles on stage and screen as well as other performances in video games. Please note that this is one of the co-nominators (Birdienest81) first filmography to be nominated for featured list status. This list was drafted over at User:Birdienest81/sandbox thirty-one. Warning: I have wisdom tooth removal on April 1, and therefore responses might be slow. Birdienest81talk 08:56, 31 March 2022 (UTC)

Comments

Resolved comments from ChrisTheDude (talk) 07:04, 23 April 2022 (UTC)

*"Williams then took on more serious parts in the comedy-drams" - typo on last word "the musical animated" - animated musical, surely? "Cameo, credited as Marty Fromage." - this doesn't need a full stop "Frank|Reverend Frank}}" - what's going on here? Well, since "Reverend" is merely a form of address and not actually his name, it should be sorted by Frank, don't you think? Yes I do, but the issue was that the template was broken...... -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 20:35, 31 March 2022 (UTC) There are two Harv errors in the refs That's what I got :-) -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 18:04, 31 March 2022 (UTC) Thank you, Chris, as always. All done except the Reverent part. FrB.TG (talk) 18:49, 31 March 2022 (UTC)

• Support -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 20:35, 31 March 2022 (UTC)

Comments from User:SNUGGUMS

• While I don't see any licensing problems with File:Robin Williams 2011a (2).jpg, it feels somewhat repetitive to use a very similar shot to what's used in the infobox at Robin Williams. I'd recommend using a pic from a different film-related event rather than the same one the main page uses one from.

The ones I found worth using were from as early as 2006 and I wanted to use an image from his later years.

• Contrary to what your use of the word "but" in "a critical failure but earned thrice its budget" implies, what critics think of a movie is a separate matter from how much money it grosses.
• The body's last sentence (talking about work in the 2010s) misuses semi-colons. They're not supposed to be used for separating titles.

I thought the overuse of commas and and's might confuse readers but there do not seem to be many so changed to commas.

• Using rowspans within filmography tables is bad practice and frowned upon.
• You shouldn't use episode counts for main starring/major recurring roles.
• "Bibliography" is discouraged as a vague section title that could also refer to works written by a subject. You're better off renaming it.

I believe the above can be resolved within a reasonable time. SNUGGUMS (talk / edits) 02:01, 1 April 2022 (UTC)

Many thanks, Snuggums. All done unless stated otherwise. FrB.TG (talk) 10:19, 1 April 2022 (UTC)

My pleasure, and now I can support this nomination. The image review also passes. SNUGGUMS (talk / edits) 12:02, 1 April 2022 (UTC)

Dank

• Standard disclaimer: I don't know what I'm doing, and I mostly AGF on sourcing.
• Best of luck with the dentist visit!
• Many titles beginning with "The" (and one that starts with "A") aren't sorting correctly when I click on the sort arrows.

Done.

• I fixed some double-redirects but I didn't get them all (such as Louie (U.S. TV series) -> Louie (American TV series)). Check for double redirects in sortable table columns.

Checked all and found another one. Fixed.

• Check for retrieval dates; I see that ref #125 needs one (and "Philadelphia" is misspelled, too).

The ref. has no external link so it wouldn't need a retrieval date. The other ones missing it also don't have URLs.

• Checking the FLC criteria:
• 1. I really like the lead. I've done a little copyediting; feel free to revert or discuss. The table coding seems fine. I checked sorting on all sortable columns and sampled the links in the tables.
• 2. The lead meets WP:LEAD and defines the inclusion criteria.
• 3a. The list has comprehensive items and annotations.
• 3b. The article is well-sourced to reliable sources, and the UPSD tool isn't indicating any actual problems (but this isn't a source review).
• 3c. The list meets requirements as a stand-alone list, it isn't a content fork, it doesn't largely duplicate another article (that I can find), and it wouldn't fit easily inside another article.
• 4. It is navigable.
• 5. It meets style requirements. At a glance, the one image seems fine.
• 6. It is stable. - Dank (push to talk) 02:31, 2 April 2022 (UTC)

Thank you, Dank. :) FrB.TG (talk) 07:53, 2 April 2022 (UTC)

We're close enough for a support now, but check the sorting again. When I click on the sort arrow in the "Title" column in the first table, it sorts as follows: "... The Survivors, the Aristocrats, The Big Wedding ...". I looked at the coding and I'm not sure what's going on; someone may have broken Template:Sort ... which is used constantly at FLC, so that would be a problem. - Dank (push to talk) 13:26, 2 April 2022 (UTC)

My bad, I only looked under roles. They should be fixed now. Thank you for the support. FrB.TG (talk) 15:23, 2 April 2022 (UTC)

That does fix it, thanks, and I'm no longer seeing any evidence that Template:Sort is acting up. Strange. - Dank (push to talk) 17:36, 2 April 2022 (UTC)

Comments from Kavyansh

• "starred in films, television and video games throughout a career" — Suggesting to add Oxford comma after 'television' (if the article is in American English, which I'd assume as the subject actor is American)
• "earned him his first Golden Globe Award and a Primetime Emmy Award nomination" — 'earned him his first Golden Globe Award and a nomination for Primetime Emmy Award' or 'earned him his nominations for first Golden Globe Award and Primetime Emmy Award"?
• Suggesting to add an em-dash in the "Notes" column wherever there is nothing.
• Ref#135 in the "Theatre" table is not center-aligned.
• "p. 192-194" should be (1) pp. (2) en-dash instead of hyphen
• "Crump, William D. (2017), How the Movies Saved Christmas: 228 Rescues from Clausnappers, Sleigh Crashes, Lost Presents and Holiday Disasters, Jefferson, North Carolina, United States: McFarland & Company, ISBN 978-1-4766-6488-0 " is listed, but there is no link pointing to that citation.
• "Single Season Sitcoms, 1948-1979" — en-dash instead of hyphen
• "TV Guide: Guide to TV {2006)" — something wrong with brackets?

– Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 11:46, 5 April 2022 (UTC)

All done except for the third point. I find the use of em-dash redundant since it's just as meaningless as an empty note. Not to mention it doesn't look very pretty either. Thank you for your review. FrB.TG (talk) 13:36, 5 April 2022 (UTC)

The first line of this review doesn't look right to me; I've left a comment and question on the reviewer's talk page. - Dank (push to talk) 15:26, 5 April 2022 (UTC)

Thanks for fixing most of it. I support the list for its promotion as a FL. I have reverted back the addition of serial comma, as suggested at my talk page. – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 16:30, 5 April 2022 (UTC)

Comments by Z1720

I am still new at reviewing FLCs, so comments and feedback are appreciated. This review will focus on the lede, prose, and understandability.

• "he was described by Screen Actors Guild president Ken Howard as "a performer of limitless versatility, equally adept at comedy and drama, whether scripted or improv".[1][2][3]" Are three citations necessary for this quotation? If some of these references are for preceeding sentences, I suggest that they be moved to be placed after the sentence that it is verifying, to avoid WP:OVERCITE.
• "To expand his horizons as an actor," expand his horizons feels a little MOS:IDIOM. Perhaps, "Persuing more diverse roles,"
• "Leszczak, Bob (2012)" All of the references have ISBN numbers that contain dashes except this one. Suggest adding the dashes for consistency.

Please ping me when the above are addressed. Z1720 (talk) 13:03, 25 April 2022 (UTC)

All done, Z1720, thank you for your comments. FrB.TG (talk) 15:35, 25 April 2022 (UTC)

Support. My concerns have been addressed. Z1720 (talk) 16:10, 25 April 2022 (UTC)

Pamzeis

Hopefully not gonna screw this up

• Williams' → Williams's (MOS:'S)
• "he wanted to do more serious work as an actor" — ...in 1997? When?
• Per MOS:CONFORMTITLE, titles of works should be italicised in citations... I see some are and some aren't?

Hope this helps :) Pamzeis (talk) 05:29, 26 April 2022 (UTC)

All done, Pamzeis, thank you. FrB.TG (talk) 17:32, 26 April 2022 (UTC)

• Support. Pamzeis (talk) 23:40, 26 April 2022 (UTC)

• Source and image reviews – All of the references are to reliable sources and formatted well, and the link-checker tool shows no issues. The one photo in the article is a freely licensed image from Flickr. Everything passes on both fronts. Giants2008 (Talk) 21:39, 30 April 2022 (UTC)

• Closing note: This candidate has been promoted, but there may be a delay in bot processing of the close. Please see WP:FLC/ar, and leave the {{featured list candidates}} template in place on the talk page until the bot goes through. Giants2008 (Talk) 01:08, 2 May 2022 (UTC)

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