Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/Failed log/July 2012
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The list was not promoted by Giants2008 20:25, 25 July 2012 [1].
- Nominator(s): Hahc21 [TALK][CONTRIBS] 17:43, 6 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
I am nominating this for featured list because i think it's ready and contains all information that could be found, correctly sourced. Hahc21 [TALK][CONTRIBS] 17:43, 6 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Resolved comments from Erick (talk) 04:18, 4 July 2012 (UTC)[reply] |
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Oppose: Several changes have been made for the discography style, many of which can be found on the Jennifer Lopez discography article. In addition to those changes, other stuff that needs to be change include:
I'm sorry, but I really don't think it satisfies the FLC criteria at this time. I would suggest a withdraw and get it peer reviewed. I've asked Michael Jester to provide assistance for you and he said he is willing to help. Erick (talk) 19:49, 6 June 2012 (UTC)[reply] |
- Support All issues resolved and article has been copy-edited. Erick (talk) 04:18, 4 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Resolved comments from Michael Jester (talk · contribs) 05:32, 4 July 2012 (UTC)[reply] |
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Comments from Michael Jester
Good work on the article so far, but I do see some issues.
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- Great work on the article! I'm going to assume all the sources are right, so it's a support from me.
—Michael Jester (talk · contribs) 05:33, 4 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
- Comment Why you say that the m-dash "denotes items which were not released in that country or failed to chart", while you only use them in the Singles section?--GoPTCN 11:39, 7 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
- They were on all the tables, but were changed to n-dashes. Fixed and Thanks for the comment. --Hahc21 [TALK][CONTRIBS] 14:50, 7 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Resolved comments from Statυs (talk) 03:03, 4 July 2012 (UTC)[reply] |
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- Support Everything looks good. Statυs (talk) 03:03, 4 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Resolved comments from The Rambling Man (talk) 16:38, 27 June 2012 (UTC)[reply] |
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Oppose some quick comments, but overall this isn't ready yet. Suggest a WP:PR.
Sorry, but the prose is really, really poor. I suggest you ask a copyeditor to have a look over it, or as I said above, ask for a peer review, and then bring it back to FLC. The Rambling Man (talk) 16:28, 14 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
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- I've done a ce of the lead as requested by you, Hahc. Ty. Till 03:01, 19 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
- Thanks Till. I appreciate the help. —Hahc21 03:40, 19 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
- I've done a ce of the lead as requested by you, Hahc. Ty. Till 03:01, 19 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
- Support prose issues have been addressed apparently. Till 07:03, 4 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
- Support Now as the list was copyedited. Good work! ;) Regards.--GoPTCN 17:36, 4 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
- Support. It looks good enough to be a featured list. Good work Hahc :)! — Tomica (talk) 23:41, 4 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Resolved comments from Giants2008 (Talk) 17:14, 6 July 2012 (UTC)[reply] |
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- Ref 22 has a dead link tag. I'd be very hesitant to promote the list as long as this is present. Giants2008 (Talk) 16:37, 5 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
- Fixed all but this: No.2 doesn't need a space between the period and the number. The argentinian site was hacked and is dead until they restore it. There's no other source that could replace it, since it's the official argentinian certification entity's website. Thanks for your comments. Cheers! —Hahc21 17:05, 5 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
So what's the verdict? There hasn't been activity for 10 days. If the CAPIF site is still being an issue, then an archive version of it can be used, right? Erick (talk) 07:31, 15 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
- Well, if an archived version showing all certifications is available, then i think it might be good to go. —Hahc21 15:01, 15 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
- The Internet Archive is probably your best bet in finding an archived version, assuming nobody made a copy of the page through WebCite. If that fails, you can always remove the CAPIF certifications until the site comes back. That's not the ideal, but if there's no good source for them there's no good source for them, and I don't believe comprehensiveness requires us to add details that can't be adequately cited. Giants2008 (Talk) 21:07, 16 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
- Yes, I found an archive on the WayBack machine. Before the search option was required to view the certifications, the CAPIF site allowed you to search for certifications by year. Unfortunately, it only goes from 2001 to late 2007 (selecting 2000 does not work). This means that certifications before 2000 and after 2007 will probably have to taken off. At any rate, here it is. Erick (talk) 21:45, 16 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
- Any update here? I don't want to see this left at FLC forever while we're waiting for the site to come back up. Giants2008 (Talk) 20:04, 23 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
- I didn't found the way to see some years.
I will use the archived version for some albums and delete the rest until the site comes back up.UPDATE: Still confused with the archive. I'm not able to see the certifications. I think that, as a complete substitute is not available, then you might close this and then, in a future, i will renominate it. —Hahc21 20:10, 23 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
- I didn't found the way to see some years.
- Any update here? I don't want to see this left at FLC forever while we're waiting for the site to come back up. Giants2008 (Talk) 20:04, 23 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
- Yes, I found an archive on the WayBack machine. Before the search option was required to view the certifications, the CAPIF site allowed you to search for certifications by year. Unfortunately, it only goes from 2001 to late 2007 (selecting 2000 does not work). This means that certifications before 2000 and after 2007 will probably have to taken off. At any rate, here it is. Erick (talk) 21:45, 16 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
- The Internet Archive is probably your best bet in finding an archived version, assuming nobody made a copy of the page through WebCite. If that fails, you can always remove the CAPIF certifications until the site comes back. That's not the ideal, but if there's no good source for them there's no good source for them, and I don't believe comprehensiveness requires us to add details that can't be adequately cited. Giants2008 (Talk) 21:07, 16 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
2007, 2006, 2005, 2004, 2003, 2002, [2001. That's all I got for now. Erick (talk) 23:03, 23 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
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The list was not promoted by The Rambling Man 14:04, 22 July 2012 [2].
- Nominator(s): MatheusLPereira (talk) 01:23, 27 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
I am nominating this for featured list because I think it meets the criteria in general. I'm interested in music criticism, so making this list was enjoyable and worthwhile. --MatheusLPereira (talk) 01:23, 27 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
- Comments - there's an awful lot of rather tortured English, to wit.....
- determined by a votation realized by the editors - there's no such word as "votation", better would be "determined by a vote conducted among the site's editors"
- The list is organized since 1999, resulting in 13 editions, from the first year to 2011. - better would be "the list has been published annually since 1999", the bit about there being 13 editions is unnecessary IMO
- In 2000, the site made a Top 20 - "made" is a bit weak, better would be "in 2000 the list was expanded to a top 20"
- In 2002 they began the Top 50 format that continues until now - better would be "in 2002 the list was further expanded to a top 50 and has remained in that format"
- Bon Iver was placed number-one with their self-titled album - here Bon Iver is being treated as both plural and singular in the same sentence, you need to pick one and stick with it. So either "Bon Iver was placed number-one with its self-titled album" (sounds terrible to me but might be correct in American English) or "Bon Iver were placed number-one with their self-titled album"
- Thom Yorke, the vocalist of Radiohead, the awarded band in 2000 for their album Kid A. - I would replace "the awarded band" with "winners". Also, as the article seems to be written in American English, should Radiohead not be treated as a singular noun (correct me if I'm wrong, I'm British......)
Hope this helps -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 11:37, 29 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
- Done. I corrected all the mistakes. Thanks, man, sorry about that. English is not my native language, so I ended up making some confusion in grammar and agreement. See ya! --MatheusLPereira (talk) 14:19, 29 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
- Comments
- The clumsy lead needs a copyedit.
- Partially done. --MatheusLPereira (talk) 13:18, 30 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
- Use n-dashes (–) for year ranges instead of m-dashes. See WP:NDASH.
- Done. --MatheusLPereira (talk) 13:18, 30 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
- Table currently does not meet WP:DTT.
- Why not? Could you specify the flaw in question? --MatheusLPereira (talk) 13:18, 30 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
- Thanks for the comments! --MatheusLPereira (talk) 13:18, 30 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Strong oppose: without independent, reliable sources, this article does not pass WP:Notability. This article is about Pitchfork's annual best-album list, so Pitchfork itself cannot be used as a source to determine this list's notability. However this article uses only Pitchfork sources.—indopug (talk) 09:45, 10 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
- I'll provide external sources as far as I can. --Matheus Pereira (talk / contribs) 00:42, 11 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
- Hello Matheus, it's been nearly a week, can you confirm that you will be providing some third-party verifiable refs to substantiate the notability of this list or would you rather withdraw it? The Rambling Man (talk) 10:56, 17 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
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The list was not promoted by Giants2008 00:34, 19 July 2012 [3].
- Nominator(s): Arsenikk (talk) 06:11, 23 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
This article is based on similar Olympic venue lists and I believe that it meets the criteria. Arsenikk (talk) 06:11, 23 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
- Quick note, tables need scope row and scope col tags, see MOS:DTT for more information and examples. Town Plaza under "Non-competition venues", the ndash isn't lining up with the others as well. Albacore (talk) 22:57, 25 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
- Thanks, these issues have been dealt with. Arsenikk (talk) 14:17, 1 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
- Comment I think this article meets the criteria, but I am concerned by the fact that it can easily fit into the 2016 Winter Youth Olympics, and thus violates criteria 3b. I know that venue articles are usually separated, but considering there is next to no content on the parent article, it seems that, at least at this point, this article would be better placed on the parent. Interested in what others may think. Ravendrop 19:52, 27 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
- Oppose on 3b, this won't happen for four years and there seems no logical reason to split this out from the (very brief) main article as Ravendrop has noted above. The Rambling Man (talk) 21:14, 27 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
- If the 2016 Winter Youth Olympics article was expanded, there would not be room to include all the information in this article, as venues is only a small part any given article about large sports tournaments, which usually center around the sports events themselves. This article allows details not permitted in the main article, especially related to non-competition venues. Even given that the event has not taken place, large amounts of the organization, bids, events, calendar and venue information could be included, and the medal table would be the only significant part which could not be created until the actual events. I am concerned that the review of this article is based on the quality of another article, not the article up for nomination. The reason for my interest is that I have been working on the venues of the 1994 Lillehammer Olympics and this article, along with for instance the heritage venue operator company, become natural extensions of this work. Arsenikk (talk) 14:17, 1 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
- I understand your concerns, and yes, I think in perhaps 2015, the main article will not be able to sustain all this information about venues, but right now, the main article is pretty much 50% intro and templates, and 50% venues (and it's very, very short, almost stub-like). This article, while excellent, is also very short indeed, and I honestly believe it still could be merged into the main article. I'm sorry to keep my position because I know how hard you work on all FLCs here, but as I say to many people, my opinion is just that, my opinion. Let's see what others have to say about it. The Rambling Man (talk) 19:06, 1 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
- If the 2016 Winter Youth Olympics article was expanded, there would not be room to include all the information in this article, as venues is only a small part any given article about large sports tournaments, which usually center around the sports events themselves. This article allows details not permitted in the main article, especially related to non-competition venues. Even given that the event has not taken place, large amounts of the organization, bids, events, calendar and venue information could be included, and the medal table would be the only significant part which could not be created until the actual events. I am concerned that the review of this article is based on the quality of another article, not the article up for nomination. The reason for my interest is that I have been working on the venues of the 1994 Lillehammer Olympics and this article, along with for instance the heritage venue operator company, become natural extensions of this work. Arsenikk (talk) 14:17, 1 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
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The list was not promoted by Giants2008 00:34, 19 July 2012 [4].
- Nominator(s): Pantera5FDP (talk) 04:52, 14 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]
I am nominating this for featured list because I believe it now meets featured list criteria. Pantera5FDP (talk) 04:52, 14 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Resolved comments from The Rambling Man (talk) 11:23, 19 May 2012 (UTC)[reply] |
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The Rambling Man (talk) 18:37, 14 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]
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Resolved comments from NapHit (talk) 22:11, 21 June 2012 (UTC)[reply] |
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NapHit (talk) 18:43, 16 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
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- Support NapHit (talk) 22:11, 21 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
- Image review: No complaints. Goodraise 22:18, 27 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Comments
- Is it fine to use a YouTube video as a citation per WP:YT?
Not sure why a forum is used for certain Billboard citations. For instance, I searched Ref 24's title and got a direct link to the Billboard.biz website. Should do the same for Ref 25.
- Scratch that, notice it lists the album and singles charts. Lemonade51 (talk) 14:55, 13 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
- Is Allmusic's publisher Allrovi or Rovi Corporation? Lemonade51 (talk) 14:52, 13 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Comments
- "joined shortly after.[1] After searching for" – Unnecessary repetition. Please reword.
- "...was released in 2007. The album peaked..." – Consider combining these sentences.
- The lead appears to be written like a history section. It could be made clearer that these events are presented in chronological order.
- Is there a reason why this article doesn't employ sortable tables?
- "This single was only released in the United Kingdom." – Please provide links to both uses of this note. This can be done, for example, by using {{note label}}.
I'm still uncomfortable with the placement of the "'—' denotes releases that did not chart or were not released in that country" note in regard to accessibility, but as this objection did not garner consensus support in the past, I won't let it keep me from supporting. I may return with more comments. Goodraise 11:14, 15 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
- What makes KornSpace.com a reliable source? Who is the publisher?
- What makes Metal Hammer a reliable source? Who is the publisher? (Could it be Future Publishing?)
- Reference titles aren't arbitrary. For instance, I don't see "Australian charts portal" anywhere on the linked page.
- I'm fairly certain that Chart Stats shouldn't be considered a reliable source. It will have to be replaced.
- Refs. 19–21 are incorrectly cited. See WP:SAYWHEREYOUGOTIT. Furthermore, the linked pages (on canadianrockalt.blogspot.de) do not strike me as reliable.
I'm not all the way through yet, but at this point, I'll have to oppose. Goodraise 21:23, 15 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
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The list was not promoted by The Rambling Man 10:47, 17 July 2012 [5].
- Nominator(s): Merlaysamuel : Speechify 08:57, 10 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
I am nominating this for featured list because I have made changes to this list as per the suggestions from the previous nomination request here and think it is now ready to become a Featured List. I look forward to your comments and suggestions. Thanks! Merlaysamuel : Speechify 08:57, 10 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Comments
- WP:OVERLINK: Words like writer, actor, member, ambassador are linked too many times. --Redtigerxyz Talk 06:02, 16 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
- fixed Thank for bringing this to my notice. I have fixed the issue.--Merlaysamuel : Speechify 17:35, 16 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
- That list was not comprehensive. More exist: Chairman, MD, CEO etc. Scan whole article. --Redtigerxyz Talk 03:50, 17 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
- Doing... Apologies, I'll just fix that.--Merlaysamuel : Speechify 09:53, 17 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
- That list was not comprehensive. More exist: Chairman, MD, CEO etc. Scan whole article. --Redtigerxyz Talk 03:50, 17 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
- Sorting: Armed forces is not ordered by class year nor alphabetical name. Check all sections and standardize. Also, add sorting facility for reader as in Works of Rambhadracharya eg. Khaṇḍakāvyas (minor poems): year, title etc. are sortable
--Redtigerxyz Talk 14:04, 17 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
- Comment by Fowler&fowler: Sorry for being impatient with you, but this is not the first time it has been pointed out to you that all princely titles and privileges were abolished in India in 1971. In spite of being told this repeatedly, you continue to stuff garbage in the princely alumni section, with grandiloquent reigns, some lasting into the 1980s. Shatrujit Singh, whose page, in spite of the paring-down snow job that I've just undertaken, is a excellent candidate for AfD, is typical of these claimants. Also, royalark.net is not even remotely a reliable source for royalty claims. Fowler&fowler«Talk» 10:01, 20 June 2012 (UTC)
I've fixed the princely pretenders, I'm traveling again now and consequently unable to follow up. You have my support. Hope others weigh in.Fowler&fowler«Talk» 10:35, 30 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Comment suggest given the strength of feeling here (and in the previous FLC), that Fowler&Fowler's issue needs to be discussed and resolved before this FLC can be satisfactorily progressed. There's little point in having an open nomination which just keeps repeating the same arguments without resolving them. The Rambling Man (talk) 16:53, 27 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
- I completely agree with you. After having read Fowler's comments closely in the last FLC nomination, I do not believe that he is an unbiased reviewer. His previous arguments were more along the lines of WP:IDONTLIKEIT. This FLC needs fresh eyes.--Merlaysamuel : Speechify 17:13, 27 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
- Either that, or it needs an honest peer review where we can gauge the opinions of a number of other editors who aren't list- or Doon-biased. The Rambling Man (talk) 18:04, 28 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
- It is possible that my presence is a wet blanket, but it's not the case that editors galore have been champing at the bit to have a go here and I have their stalls locked up. A peer-review might be good, but I shall soon be also posting on WT:INDIA. A year ago something similar had to done with Indian caste-related articles, which too were written by SPAs, who had exaggerated, textually and visually, and used for sources social snippets in India's popular press.
- Doon is one of some two dozen elite schools in India that all have alumni of more or less equal notability. That a veritable horde of Doon school unknowns (see, for example, CG Devashar, Inder Pal Khosla, Trilochan Singh Brar) have been recently pushed, by Merlaysamuel, into the realm of dubious notability, speaks to the dangers that lie ahead. This is not just my assessment, user:Stfg, who copyedited the Doon School article for GOCE, wondered if some parts of it were not written to appeal to prospective parents. Fowler&fowler«Talk» 01:19, 29 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
- PS Consider, for example, the first of the dubious notables above, CG Devashar. His page has two sentences: "Air Marshal Charandas Gurudas Devashar PVSM was the head of the Indian Air Force from 1977 to 1981, as Air Marshal (India). He completed his schooling from The Doon School." I became suspicious when I saw the words "head of the Indian Air Force," (for Chief of the Air Staff), so I checked. It turns out Devashar was never chief of staff; it was another gentleman, Idris Hasan Latif, who is a great deal more notable. Fowler&fowler«Talk» 01:46, 29 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
- PPS Now that I've become aware of the other schools-for-the-privileged in India, I have also just realized that Merlaysamuel (talk · contribs) has been removing names of notable alumni from at least one of those schools, Modern School (New Delhi). See this edit with edit summary "removing many false entries." Well it turns out that the first two names he has removed, the musician, Amjad Ali Khan and the author, Amitava Kumar, did in fact go to that school. (See evidence here for Amjad Ali Khan and here for Amitava Kumar. These are pretty water-tight sources: the journal of India's national academy of music and an author's own web site.) I'm afraid, I don't know what is going on, but it does not bode well for this nomination. Fowler&fowler«Talk» 02:25, 29 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
- I removed Amjad Ali Khan because his Wiki page says he received homeschooling (and your reference for his attending Modern does not show anything). And as for Amitava Kumar, his Wiki page says he attended St. Michael's school. It was my fault that I didn't bother to check out if he actually did. Sorry for that. --Merlaysamuel : Speechify 11:06, 29 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
- Maybe that link is not good. I've now added three more there. I accept your explanation. Fowler&fowler«Talk» 12:00, 29 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
- I removed Amjad Ali Khan because his Wiki page says he received homeschooling (and your reference for his attending Modern does not show anything). And as for Amitava Kumar, his Wiki page says he attended St. Michael's school. It was my fault that I didn't bother to check out if he actually did. Sorry for that. --Merlaysamuel : Speechify 11:06, 29 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
- PPS Now that I've become aware of the other schools-for-the-privileged in India, I have also just realized that Merlaysamuel (talk · contribs) has been removing names of notable alumni from at least one of those schools, Modern School (New Delhi). See this edit with edit summary "removing many false entries." Well it turns out that the first two names he has removed, the musician, Amjad Ali Khan and the author, Amitava Kumar, did in fact go to that school. (See evidence here for Amjad Ali Khan and here for Amitava Kumar. These are pretty water-tight sources: the journal of India's national academy of music and an author's own web site.) I'm afraid, I don't know what is going on, but it does not bode well for this nomination. Fowler&fowler«Talk» 02:25, 29 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
- PS Consider, for example, the first of the dubious notables above, CG Devashar. His page has two sentences: "Air Marshal Charandas Gurudas Devashar PVSM was the head of the Indian Air Force from 1977 to 1981, as Air Marshal (India). He completed his schooling from The Doon School." I became suspicious when I saw the words "head of the Indian Air Force," (for Chief of the Air Staff), so I checked. It turns out Devashar was never chief of staff; it was another gentleman, Idris Hasan Latif, who is a great deal more notable. Fowler&fowler«Talk» 01:46, 29 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
- Either that, or it needs an honest peer review where we can gauge the opinions of a number of other editors who aren't list- or Doon-biased. The Rambling Man (talk) 18:04, 28 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
- Oppose Spot checking three references resulted in all three failing to verify the content:
- Surendhra Kandhari, the ref only mentions that they were 18 when they met at Doon, not that either was an alumni.
- Roshan Seth, ref doesn't mention anything about the school.
- MA Murugappan, ref only mentions Vellayan was on the board of governors of Doon, not any alumni verification for Murugappan.
- Also, if people are notable enough to be included in the list, the ought to be notable enough to be linked.
- With the ref issues, I'm not sure it's ready to be discussed for FL currently, at least not until every individual ref is checked out. —SpacemanSpiff 09:02, 4 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Comment as the main contributor to the list hasn't edited since 2 July, I will archive this nomination. Of course, once suitable attention can be given to comments here, the nominator is welcome to return to FLC. The Rambling Man (talk) 10:46, 17 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]
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The list was not promoted by Giants2008 22:29, 2 July 2012 [6].
Well, as you can see, Miles Davis was a prolific jazz musician. He started his career as a sideman, but he later formed his first nonet. Davis is known for his complex music style, ranging from bebop to hip-hop jazz; no wonder that he is one of the who-is-who of jazz music. But yet this discography is incomplete and it is unlikely it will ever be complete, but I believe it is an overview of his most important albums and compositions. The lead is, unlike other leads of discographies, a very short and concise summary of his musical career, and it does not contain any duplicated information already mentioned in the several tables. GoPTCN 15:57, 19 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]
- Quick query why is there a separate section for "vinyl records" when almost every album on the rest of the page was released on vinyl? Were these releases actually singles? If so, they should be labelled as such, as "vinyl records" is a confusing heading....... -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 20:18, 19 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]
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"By 1945 he had abandoned his academic studies making his first recordings as a sideman." Comma needed before "making".
- What is intended to source "although the data is not conclusive"? Without a reference, it sounds like original research.
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- In that case there should be a footnote here giving some of the various numbers. My point about that part sounding like OR stands without some evidence to the contrary, such as a note. Giants2008 (Talk) 01:11, 31 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Who says his second quintet was "great"? That seems to be editorializing.
Below multiple charts: "denotes releases that did not chart or was not released." Tense conflict between "releases" (plural) and "was" (singular).
In the Singles table, the footnotes don't need to be sortable.
- Done
Below the Video albums table, consider removing the unnecessary comma after "denotes".
- What makes All About Jazz (reference 3) a reliable source?
- Encyclopedia Brittanica (ref 6) is not unreliable per se, but it is a tertiary source and I feel a stronger secondary source could be found for such biographical information.
- What makes 78discography (ref 18) a reliable source?
- Also unsure about kind-of-blue.de (many refs).
- And Jazz Discography Project (several refs). Giants2008 (Talk) 21:22, 27 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]
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- I'll leave the source comments out for others to consider, but for my own education why wouldn't the liner notes themselves be considered a reliable source? Sounds to me like they would be roughly equivalent to primary sources. Giants2008 (Talk) 01:11, 31 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]
- I agree about the liner notes. There is even a template for citing them at Template:Cite album-notes Michael miceli (talk) 02:20, 7 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Oppose for now
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*His "major" discog? Is there a minor one? I think I know what you mean but if you're picking a subset of his work then you need to define the inclusion criteria.
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- I can't easily see where all the info is referenced in the tables. For instance, for every single release that hasn't charted anywhere in the world, where can I find it referenced?
- The new Allmusic is crap but I will think about that. (Is this really necessary?)
- It is. I ask it of every discog. The Rambling Man (talk) 14:13, 2 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
- "Columbia/Warner Bros., 1981–1991" table needs to be formatted correctly.
- Not sure what you mean...
- Looks like the last cell isn't formatted right. The Rambling Man (talk) 14:13, 2 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
- I share Giants2008 concerns over the use of those sources he has picked out as dubious. Even if they're "back up", we shouldn't be using sources that we don't consider reliable.
- These are the only sources available. The source are the liner notes. As I said before, the content there is maintained and the German kindofblue.de has even covers. Otherwise I can put a general reference from a German book.
- It doesn't really matter if they're the only sources available. Can you prove them to be WP:RS? If not, we shouldn't be using them as references, especially as you already link to them as external links. The Rambling Man (talk) 14:13, 2 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
- Good, then I will simply remove the references; is this what you want me to do? --GoPTCN 09:34, 3 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
- I want you to use reliable sources. That is all. The Rambling Man (talk) 09:40, 3 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
- The references are the liner notes, and they are reliable. So either I remove all references or I keep them.--GoPTCN 10:50, 6 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
- But you're not referencing liner notes, you're referencing unreliable sources. The Rambling Man (talk) 11:16, 6 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Opposeon sourcing - the entire Prestige/Debut table is completely unsourced, and many many other releases further down are not sourced -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 20:03, 2 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
- Click on the several articles listed in that table and you will see they are not hoaxes. We simply do not need sources here as self-evident.--GoPTCN 09:32, 3 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
- What exactly do you mean "unsourced"? The other tables do not have any references, apart from the chart footnotes; this is not a requirement to add those. Regards.--GoPTCN 09:36, 3 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
- Well where are the release dates sourced from? That's not "self-evident" is it? And what about those releases which don't even have an article e.g. in the Live albums table? The Rambling Man (talk) 09:41, 3 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
- I will try to add sources from the online (!) liner notes I recently discovered. Please don't close this list; I will work on it soon. Regards.--GoPTCN 14:00, 3 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
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- What I do not understand is that I need to cite the release dates; we have articles and several sources such as Plosin and jazzdiscography and they use the same release dates, as their are from the liner notes. An example is this, it clearly says that the recording took place from January 17, 1951 to October 5, 1951, and the dates are even linked to the session details. So explain why these references are not reliable and name me the type of references you think are reliable. Regards.--GoPTCN 10:55, 6 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
- I need to you to provide evidence that sources used are reliable. I need to see a source which references each release date (or otherwise how do I know you haven't made the whole lot up?). It's pretty straightforward what I'm asking for. The Rambling Man (talk) 11:16, 6 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
- Not a single discography cites the release dates! It is pretty clear it is nonsensical; the release dates are correct and several sources agree with me. Regards.--GoPTCN 11:30, 6 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
- "or otherwise how do I know you haven't made the whole lot up?" -> ?? You really believe I would put hoax recordings? --GoPTCN 11:32, 6 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
- No, of course not, it was a hypothetical question. How does any reader know that those dates are genuine? By the way, discogs which have releases that have charted use the chart references for release dates. You can't do that if the single/album in question has never charted anywhere. The Rambling Man (talk) 11:36, 6 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
- It does not need to be charted if released... I am not sure when the Top Jazz Albums chart was created, but it seems like Jazz albums and singled did not chart in 40s, but there was only Billboard 200 at that time. The release dates are all from Allmusic--GoPTCN 11:54, 6 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
- Yes, I'm aware that a song may not chart if released, but the links to the various chart organisations used at the top of those tables will provide a release date for the songs that do chart in that territory. Songs which aren't released or don't chart need independent verification as the charts won't list them because, obviously, they didn't chart. The Rambling Man (talk) 12:28, 6 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
- Have you done this yet? For instance, where is the specific reference for the recording dates, release dates and formats of Milestones? The Rambling Man (talk) 11:16, 14 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
I finished the first and the live albums table; will do the compilation tomorrow.--GoPTCN 21:08, 6 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
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- ref 37 doesn't seem to be formatted properly
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- I also share the concerns raised above about the sourcing, its not evident what makes kind of blue for instance a reliable source.
NapHit (talk) 22:21, 21 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
- Fully disagree. Please look properly. You can clearly see the covers on that site.--GoPTCN 10:58, 22 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
- The website seems to be a fan site maintained by one person, just because all the information is factually correct does not make the source reliable. It is for the nominator to prove the site is reliable, I see no indication of this, nor does it seem this is used by others to verify data, so I don't think it can be considered a reliable source. NapHit (talk) 22:32, 22 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
- The covers are the sources. Period.--GoPTCN 08:18, 23 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
- If it is a fansite, it is indeed reliable as the author does the work voluntarily. Again, the covers are the sources, so do not even start to view the website body but only the covers. It is impossible that a fan would falsify the covers.--GoPTCN 08:21, 23 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
- Fansites are not considered reliable sources, plus stating the covers are the sources does not solve anything as on those scans there is no mention of miles davis anywhere. Anyway you use Allmusic for the majority of the sources, why not use it for the majority. For instance ref 95(which is a kind of blue.de), that info can be sourced at Allmusic see here just use that source instead. That's the problem using sources which can have their reliability questioned when reliable sources are available. NapHit (talk) 15:42, 24 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
- I was not aware that some information on allmusic was updated. I replaced nearly every kind-of-blue.de site with allmusic. I replaced the normal pages with the one showing the cover with his name.--GoPTCN 19:02, 24 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
- There are still a few kind of blue sources there, one in particular is troubling. The kind of blue source states that the la villette dvd was released in 2001, yet allmusic has the release date as 2009. As all music is a reliable source I'm going to go with them on the release date, there are still a few kind of blue sources remaining and these will need to be replaced and checked against allmusic to ensure we are displaying the correct info. NapHit (talk) 12:16, 26 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
- I was not aware that some information on allmusic was updated. I replaced nearly every kind-of-blue.de site with allmusic. I replaced the normal pages with the one showing the cover with his name.--GoPTCN 19:02, 24 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
- Fansites are not considered reliable sources, plus stating the covers are the sources does not solve anything as on those scans there is no mention of miles davis anywhere. Anyway you use Allmusic for the majority of the sources, why not use it for the majority. For instance ref 95(which is a kind of blue.de), that info can be sourced at Allmusic see here just use that source instead. That's the problem using sources which can have their reliability questioned when reliable sources are available. NapHit (talk) 15:42, 24 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
- If it is a fansite, it is indeed reliable as the author does the work voluntarily. Again, the covers are the sources, so do not even start to view the website body but only the covers. It is impossible that a fan would falsify the covers.--GoPTCN 08:21, 23 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
- The covers are the sources. Period.--GoPTCN 08:18, 23 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
- The website seems to be a fan site maintained by one person, just because all the information is factually correct does not make the source reliable. It is for the nominator to prove the site is reliable, I see no indication of this, nor does it seem this is used by others to verify data, so I don't think it can be considered a reliable source. NapHit (talk) 22:32, 22 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
- I'm holding back until after the referencing issues are fixed, but a quick comment: etc. should generally not be in articles (first sentence) — Crisco 1492 (talk) 04:37, 27 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
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The list was not promoted by Giants2008 22:29, 2 July 2012 [7].
- Nominator(s): Idiotchalk (talk) 23:22, 20 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]
I am nominating this for featured list because My Bloody Valentine is of significant interest to a number of groups, especially alternative rock fans, Irish music fans and fans of shoegazing - a subgenre the band pioneered. Idiotchalk (talk) 23:22, 20 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]
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"The band recruited bassist Debbie Gorge after its release...". Sounds like the band was released instead of the album, which surely wasn't the intention.I see an "ithe" in there, which needs fixing.Giants2008 (Talk) 16:16, 14 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Excess period after ref 4.Feels like "has" is missing from "Loveless since sold over 250,000 copies...".The lead image could use alt text.- I agree with Albacore that mybloodyvalentine.net is probably unreliable, and am concerned that the site may not have had the right to republish the book excerpt used here. Would really like to see another source found for this, perhaps from a copy of the book itself. Giants2008 (Talk) 01:43, 4 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]
- I replaced the mybloodyvalentine.net source with a reliable source. Which book excerpt are you referring to exactly? Idiotchalk (talk) 02:24, 23 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
- The one in ref 2, which is still there and hasn't been removed. It's formatted just like a book, and even has an ISBN. Giants2008 (Talk) 14:15, 23 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
- I replaced the mybloodyvalentine.net source with a reliable source. Which book excerpt are you referring to exactly? Idiotchalk (talk) 02:24, 23 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
- Image review – No complaints. Goodraise 23:22, 13 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
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Comment - WP:CONTEXTLINK frowns against the use of bold links, adding plainrowheaders to sortable wikitable will fix the issue. NapHit (talk) 22:04, 21 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
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- Support NapHit (talk) 12:03, 26 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]
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