Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/Featured log/April 2021
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The list was promoted by PresN via FACBot (talk) 00:28, 29 April 2021 (UTC) [1].[reply]
- Nominator(s): CodingCyclone [citation needed] 19:23, 20 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
I am nominating this for featured list because... This timeline of the 2019 Atlantic hurricane season was worked on by many different editors. Upon finding this list, I realized with the help of Drdpw that it is ready for an FLC. I will address all comments/concerns, but most of the work has been done by other editors. Thank you for your time. CodingCyclone [citation needed] 19:23, 20 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- I'm afraid that this list is far from becoming an FL. I would not rate it anything above C. 🐔 Chicdat Bawk to me! 11:30, 21 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- No. This is a good list, and the flaws are very few. I agree with Hurricane Noah: the article needs a little editing but otherwise looks good. ~ AC5230 talk 15:09, 21 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Support from Hurricane Noah
- If you are going to mention Lorenzo in the lead with Dorian, you should explain what it did too. NoahTalk 13:27, 21 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Another thing... add alt text for images. NoahTalk 15:35, 21 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- @Hurricane Noah: I believe that these have all been addressed to the best of my abilities. CodingCyclone! 🌀 📘 19:56, 21 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Drive-by comment
- Notes 1 and 2 are identical so could be combined into one..... -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 18:55, 21 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- @ChrisTheDude: I tried to do that, but for some reason when I open the editor it shows that they are the same note. For reference, I'm using the visual editor. CodingCyclone! 🌀 📘 19:56, 21 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- @ChrisTheDude: I'm sorry for pinging you again, but I just wanted to let you know: LightandDark2000 showed me another way to do it. The notes have now been merged. Thank you for your comments! CodingCyclone! 🌀 📘 22:34, 23 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Nice! I'll try to have a full look at the article later today........ -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 10:32, 24 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Comments
- "By convention, meteorologists one time zone" - think there's a word missing here
- Last entry under September 23 is missing a full stop
- First entry under October 2 randomly ends in a comma
- That's all I got! -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 17:02, 24 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- @ChrisTheDude: Hi there! Thank you for the comments. These have all been resolved. Your input is greatly appreciated. :) CodingCyclone! 🌀 📘 23:28, 24 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Support -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 08:20, 25 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Comments Support from KN2731
- Don't bold 2019 Atlantic hurricane season in the first sentence, according to MOS.
- According to the description at Template:Main, it seems more appropriate to use
{{broader|2019 Atlantic hurricane season}}
instead of{{main|2019 Atlantic hurricane season}}
. - Use en dashes for ranges instead of hyphens (e.g. 5–9 hurricanes).
- Missing capital M in ref 8.
- Perhaps mention which local time zones are used and where?
- I feel like there could be more images or track maps in the body.
~ KN2731 {talk · contribs} 06:11, 3 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- @KN2731: Thank you for your comments! These are pieces of advice that I will certainly use in the future. The only one that I couldn't do was the one about time zones, since I can't find a source for that. If you do have something for that, feel free to tell me :) CodingCyclone! 🌀 📘 03:12, 8 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Source review passed; promoting. --PresN 19:05, 28 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
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- Nominator(s): LOVI33 20:10, 16 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
I am nominating this for featured list because I believe it fits the criteria. I first created this article last year but I have spent some time this year fitting it to the criteria. I have used other song lists as references for this article and I have made sure this uses reliable sources. Any comments would be great! LOVI33 20:10, 16 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
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- Support -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 21:27, 17 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Comments
- File:Roskilde Festival Dua Lipa-13.jpg: there is some funky stuff going on in the Deutsch description of the file.
- I've replaced it. There was some sort of template there that I didn't understand. I hope the new one looks okay.
- What's the difference between a single and a promotional single? Isn't a single inherently promotional?
- Promotional singles usually are released to promote sales of another project (usually an official single). For example, "Future Nostalgia" was released to push sales of "Don't Start Now". Not all of song list article differentiate between promo singles and non-singles. Do you think I should remove the key for them?
- I wouldn't recommend using color-code keys to indicate tracks served as single or promo single; that makes the tables feel overly single-centric, and this isn't supposed to be a singles discography. You'd be better off using keys to highlight whether something was a cover of another person's previous work. SNUGGUMS (talk / edits) 01:53, 22 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- File:J Balvin 2015, Austin (cropped).jpg, File:20161119 블랙핑크 멜론뮤직어워드 (1).jpg, File:The Black Madonna at All Points East Festival 2018 (cropped).jpg, File:Miley Cyrus Primavera19 -226 (48986293772) (cropped).jpg, File:DaBaby - The Know Show.png, File:Martin Garrix @ Web Summit 2017.jpg, File:Chelceegrimes.jpg, File:Calvin Harris - Rock in Rio Madrid 2012 - 09.jpg, File:Tove Lo (1) By Daniel Åhs Karlsson.jpeg, File:Madonna by David Shankbone cropped.jpg, File:Chris-martin.jpg, File:Julia Michaels (cropped).jpg, File:Singer Miguel 2013 2.jpg, File:Kylie Minogue - Summer 2019 - Step Back In Time Tour - Castlefield Bowl - Manchester - 11.07.19 - 236.jpg, File:MNEK Glatsonbury Festival 2014 by neal whitehouse piper cropped.jpg, File:Seanpaul01.jpg, File:Mark-Ronson.jpg, File:Songwriter Emily Warren.png, and File:FKA twigs (16391770926) (cropped).jpg all need Template:Personality rights at the Commons like File:Roskilde Festival Dua Lipa-13.jpg has.
- Added in.
- Perhaps link "middle eight" in note 2 to Thirty-two-bar_form#Middle_eight
- Added.
- I believe more references are needed generally, for instance there is nowhere mentioned that Sonny Bono wrote "Bang Bang" in the reference provided, unless I'm missing something, which is entirely possible. Therapyisgood (talk) 01:57, 19 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Everything should now be backed up.
Thank you for the comments Therapyisgood. All have been addressed. LOVI33 17:58, 20 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
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Mainly due to an inadequate lead, I oppose for now. That could change after the page is revised. SNUGGUMS (talk / edits) 01:53, 22 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
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Much better looking now! It's enough for me to support. I made one minor change here since 2014 isn't her first professional endeavor overall, just when the musical part of Lipa's life began (she did some modelling beforehand). SNUGGUMS (talk / edits) 23:01, 22 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Comments from MaranoFan
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Support - This is ready to become an FL in my opinion.--NØ 03:06, 25 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Source review passed; promoting. --PresN 19:05, 28 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
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The list was promoted by PresN via FACBot (talk) 00:26, 29 April 2021 (UTC) [3].[reply]
- Nominator(s): - Dank (push to talk) 20:31, 15 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
When I finished with the previous 6 lists (see User:Dank), I thought I was done with these ... then I discovered that Lotte Burkhardt did some phenomenal work in 2016 and 2018 on plant genera named for people. That tipped the scales in favor of writing 4 or 5 more lists ... and maybe, hopefully, there will be a longer series of lists to follow. AFAIK, her work has never been translated into English, not even snippets ... until now, by me. The main purpose of this list is to connect her work and other academic work with Wikipedia pages in various languages (usually English, German, French, Spanish, Italian and Portuguese). When I couldn't find a suitable page on any Wikipedia, I checked Wikidata, and the results of that search are on the talk page of the list. It may be that this sails through FLC, or it could run into difficulties ... either way, this is submitted for your approval, and your feedback will be important. Unlike in the previous lists, these lists represent (for me) one of the ways that good science gets done in the 2020s ... I hope you feel the same. - Dank (push to talk) 20:31, 15 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Grrr, I just found out that Template:Interlanguage link uses "expensive parser function calls" (mentioned at the top of that page). That's a potential issue in long lists, such as this one. Working on it. - Dank (push to talk) 13:36, 26 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- ChrisTheDude and Aza24, apologies, I've just made a change after you two okayed the list, replacing all the interlanguage links. My {{ill}} links were pointing to one or two non-English Wikipedias, in cases where the en.wp article on an author is red-linked; what I'm doing now duplicates the function of using {{ill}} with its Wikidata parameter, that is, the second link now sends the reader to the last section of the relevant Wikidata page, with links to other Wikipedias and to Commons, Wikispecies, Wikisource, etc. I now think this is better than what I had, because it sends readers of the English Wikipedia to a page that's in English, and it includes all the links they might find useful, not just one or two. But I didn't make the change because it's better, I did it because it's necessary: as you know, I like to cram as many rows in as I can, stopping just short of the point where the page is so long that images stop loading for some readers, so that I don't need too many pages to cover A to Z. I just found out that {{ill}} has a warning about its "expensive parser function calls", and I need to avoid those. What I lose by tossing {{ill}} is that the second link doesn't magically disappear at the point where the relevant article is created here on en.wp ... but it's not as important now for the second link to disappear, because I'm not sending readers to a foreign-language Wikipedia any more (I'd be happy to manually remove them as needed, or leave them in.) Any questions or problems with this? - Dank (push to talk) 23:04, 26 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Given that there doesn't seem to be much uniformaty in which Wikipedias have links for which articles, the decision makes sense to me. If this were a Chinese history list and every missing article had site links when they all have Chinese articles, that might be an issue, but this type of scenario doesn't seem to be present here. Aza24 (talk) 23:43, 26 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Comments
- "portrait of Christoph Jacob Trew" caption is missing a capital letter
- Identical image of Alice Eastwood is used twice in the article
- "French agricultural engineer and head of the French colonial administration in Madagaskar" - last word is spelt incorrectly
- That's all I got :-) -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 08:31, 16 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- That was fast! All fixed, thanks. Hope you enjoyed it. - Dank (push to talk) 13:17, 16 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- I don't mess about :-) Now happy to support. Don't suppose you might have a few spare minutes to look at this one? Not to worry if not..... -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 13:46, 16 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Happy to review it,
but these days I prefer to wait until someone has mentioned that they've looked at prose specifically ... I'm taking a break from the TFA job and that seems to be translating into taking a break from prose work in general.Btw, I inadvertantly left a few rows off from this table, I'll be adding them within the hour ... I'll try not to screw it up and give you extra work :) - Dank (push to talk) 13:56, 16 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]- OK, no worries -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 14:54, 16 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Happy to review it,
- I don't mess about :-) Now happy to support. Don't suppose you might have a few spare minutes to look at this one? Not to worry if not..... -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 13:46, 16 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- That was fast! All fixed, thanks. Hope you enjoyed it. - Dank (push to talk) 13:17, 16 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Drive by comments from MeegsC
- Some of the pictures don't have alt text.
- All of the images have the "alt=" parameter, and almost all of them have text after that. Whether there should be text and what the text should be continues to be something that some Wikipedians (not me) like to fight about. But my position is "the reviewer is always right" ... if you can pick out some of the blank ones that you think would be improved by alt text, I'll be happy to try to oblige. - Dank (push to talk) 15:26, 17 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Thought I'd answer this, since I'm not sure MeegsC will since it was just a drive-by, and honestly after following your FLC's for a while, I'm really disappointed in the effort gone to the alt text on these images. Examples include man, seated, flowers, flowering plant, portrait of a man, residential building, tree to name a few (or in some cases multiple images). None of these descriptions tell me anything about the images used, and what they contain to any great extent. Certain ones while minimal at least give some detail to what the picture contains portrait of Rear Admiral Bligh in uniform, plant with berries small palm tree and some of them are just nonsense to people out of context like inflorescence. There are at least ten images that are missing alt text here as well, all of which are easily found using the alt text tool in the toolbox for the nomination.
- All of the images have the "alt=" parameter, and almost all of them have text after that. Whether there should be text and what the text should be continues to be something that some Wikipedians (not me) like to fight about. But my position is "the reviewer is always right" ... if you can pick out some of the blank ones that you think would be improved by alt text, I'll be happy to try to oblige. - Dank (push to talk) 15:26, 17 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- What's more I went through some of the other lists you've nominated to find alt text just plain missing, the alt= are there, but there is no description of the content of the picture at all and I'm honestly shocked that not a single person has brought it up before. --Lightlowemon (talk) 12:42, 24 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Different people have different views of alt text. I try not to start any fights, and I try to be responsive to the reviewers I get. Do you plan to submit any of the previous 6 lists to WP:FLRC to de-feature them over alt text, or are we just looking at this list? - Dank (push to talk) 14:38, 24 March 2021 (UTC) (I'm asking because I think those 6 lists are special cases. In those, each image is a plant, sitting there looking like a plant, usually without any relevant context. In the current nomination, we've got images of people, which is a different matter. If you can tell me what kind of alt text you're looking for in the plant images, that will help get us started.) - Dank (push to talk) 17:10, 24 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Alt text rules are complicated and not agreed upon, especially for more decorative images like here. Remember that it's alt text + caption, not just alt text, so it's not just "man, seated", it's "man, seated; Daguerreotype of Adrien-Henri de Jussieu". WP:ALTTEXT says "Often the caption fully meets the requirements for alternative text", and I'd argue that pretty much every image has a caption that "describe[s] or identif[ies]" the image. That said, again per ALTTEXT, none of them should be blank, as otherwise screen readers will try to read out the image file name instead. The question in my mind, then is: is "flowers, Aaronsohnia" enough of a description? Alt text is supposed to describe what an image is, not what it looks like, so that caption does that well enough, in my opinion. --PresN 18:41, 24 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- That's my understanding too. Does everyone agree that captions and alt text for people and places are, in general, more problematic than the ones for plants? If so: would anyone like to suggest alt text for some of the people and places? We can't always get people to agree on the best alt text, but it doesn't hurt to try ... and if it becomes clear that the positions are far apart and not getting any closer, I have no objection at all to pulling problematic images. - Dank (push to talk) 19:07, 24 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Wait, grrr, I may not be up to speed here. I thought that the point of adding
alt=
(in cases where the caption is sufficient without alt text) was to avoid the bug of the screen reader reading out the name of the image file ... following the links at WP:ALT, it appears thatalt=""
may now be necessary to avoid the screen reader bug. If anyone needs more than that, let me know. - Dank (push to talk) 20:42, 24 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Alt text rules are complicated and not agreed upon, especially for more decorative images like here. Remember that it's alt text + caption, not just alt text, so it's not just "man, seated", it's "man, seated; Daguerreotype of Adrien-Henri de Jussieu". WP:ALTTEXT says "Often the caption fully meets the requirements for alternative text", and I'd argue that pretty much every image has a caption that "describe[s] or identif[ies]" the image. That said, again per ALTTEXT, none of them should be blank, as otherwise screen readers will try to read out the image file name instead. The question in my mind, then is: is "flowers, Aaronsohnia" enough of a description? Alt text is supposed to describe what an image is, not what it looks like, so that caption does that well enough, in my opinion. --PresN 18:41, 24 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Different people have different views of alt text. I try not to start any fights, and I try to be responsive to the reviewers I get. Do you plan to submit any of the previous 6 lists to WP:FLRC to de-feature them over alt text, or are we just looking at this list? - Dank (push to talk) 14:38, 24 March 2021 (UTC) (I'm asking because I think those 6 lists are special cases. In those, each image is a plant, sitting there looking like a plant, usually without any relevant context. In the current nomination, we've got images of people, which is a different matter. If you can tell me what kind of alt text you're looking for in the plant images, that will help get us started.) - Dank (push to talk) 17:10, 24 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- What's more I went through some of the other lists you've nominated to find alt text just plain missing, the alt= are there, but there is no description of the content of the picture at all and I'm honestly shocked that not a single person has brought it up before. --Lightlowemon (talk) 12:42, 24 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Source review – Pass
[edit]Another list from Dank... it never ends... you better name a plant genus after me for this... :) Aza24 (talk) 09:42, 18 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Not source related; I'm not a fan of "see ..." it kind of defeats the sorbability for the column (as all the Bolusafra ones don't sort together), I would suggest just copying the same entry over.
- Really, really appreciate your work on source reviews.
I admit that my way isn't the usual way of doing it, and that there are reasons not to do it my way. I'm teetering between "I trust your judgment and it's not a big deal" and "Consistency (database systems) is important, on and off Wikipedia". (And given that anyone can edit, and most people aren't too careful when they edit, and identical lines provide no clue that there's a separate line with the same information that needs to be updated, it will take about two seconds for the list to start contradicting itself if we do it your way.) Give me a few days to mull it over. If I change the sorting parameters so that "See X" always sorts just below "X", does it become a non-issue for you, or are the aesthetics still wrong even if it sorts right? - Dank (push to talk) 11:52, 18 March 2021 (UTC)[reply] It just occurred to me (not enough sleep) that the usual solution at FLC for problems like this is to combine cells. It's not a perfect solution (in this case), and it makes formatting a little harder, and it won't fix the consistency problem, but there's value in doing things in the format people are expecting to see ... and it's probably prettier. I'll think it over when I get up. - Dank (push to talk) 12:12, 18 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]- Okay, I'm collapsing cells where possible, and otherwise getting rid of "see ...". That should work for now. - Dank (push to talk) 17:19, 18 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Done, I think. - Dank (push to talk) 18:31, 18 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Looks great! Aza24 (talk) 05:47, 22 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Really, really appreciate your work on source reviews.
- Formatting
- New Jersey should probably have a city like the other refs
- Royal Botanic Gardens, Kew seems to be the only ref you don't have a location for, worth adding?
- Added Princeton. Kew location is almost certainly London so I added it, but I can't guarantee it. - Dank (push to talk) 11:52, 18 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Reliability
- Is there a really a need for "See http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by/4.0/ for license."—
- 1. If you're saying that I should say this in a more compact way, or use a different parameter ... sure, I can do that. 2. If you're saying we shouldn't mention licensing at all ... I realize it's not one of the parameters at {{cite book}}, and that seems unfortunate to me (and maybe hypocritical, given that we're Wikipedians and we expect people to respect our copyleft license? Not sure.) But I'm fairly ignorant about source review issues. Does it ever cause problems to mention that a source is copyleft rather than copyright?
- Verifiability
- I can't remember if there was a reason in the other lists for this (or if it happened there) but why no page numbers for so many of the citations? If it's because they cover a lot, maybe a page range could be included? It is a big dubious to point readers to an entire book for verification, even more so when this list is only for A-C people Aza24 (talk) 09:42, 18 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Giants and other reviewers seem to be on board; see for instance WP:Featured list candidates/List of plant genus names (D–K)/archive1. Two issues: 1. This list, and my sources, are alphabetical reference works (except for Christenhusz, who starts off with an alphabetical index ... and he's rarely used in this list). If you're looking something up in a printed dictionary, do you ask for a page number or look it up alphabetically? 2. Most readers aren't going to put up with a list spread out over many pages, for the same reasons that people are turned off by multi-volume reference works. So I'm cramming as many rows as I can get into each list. Adding templates to every row reduces the number of rows I can have before some reviewers start noticing problems with page loading (in particular, the images stop loading correctly). - Dank (push to talk) 11:52, 18 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- I agree, but that's not really what I meant. If the sources are alphabetical, surely there is a smaller page range that covers all of them? What I'm wondering is if you can put the page range for all the entries in the citation in the References, not as individual templates for each entry. Does that make sense? I understand your sentiment, I think, but this seems less dubious than essentially citing an entire encyclopedia, and I don't think it's too much to ask...? Aza24 (talk) 05:49, 22 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Okay, I see. Done, I think. I omitted "A-1 through Z-12" from Burkhardt; as a reader, I wouldn't know what that meant. - Dank (push to talk) 13:03, 22 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Now I'm having doubts about my comment above... oh well :) Pass for source review. Aza24 (talk) 21:32, 22 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Okay, I see. Done, I think. I omitted "A-1 through Z-12" from Burkhardt; as a reader, I wouldn't know what that meant. - Dank (push to talk) 13:03, 22 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- I agree, but that's not really what I meant. If the sources are alphabetical, surely there is a smaller page range that covers all of them? What I'm wondering is if you can put the page range for all the entries in the citation in the References, not as individual templates for each entry. Does that make sense? I understand your sentiment, I think, but this seems less dubious than essentially citing an entire encyclopedia, and I don't think it's too much to ask...? Aza24 (talk) 05:49, 22 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Giants and other reviewers seem to be on board; see for instance WP:Featured list candidates/List of plant genus names (D–K)/archive1. Two issues: 1. This list, and my sources, are alphabetical reference works (except for Christenhusz, who starts off with an alphabetical index ... and he's rarely used in this list). If you're looking something up in a printed dictionary, do you ask for a page number or look it up alphabetically? 2. Most readers aren't going to put up with a list spread out over many pages, for the same reasons that people are turned off by multi-volume reference works. So I'm cramming as many rows as I can get into each list. Adding templates to every row reduces the number of rows I can have before some reviewers start noticing problems with page loading (in particular, the images stop loading correctly). - Dank (push to talk) 11:52, 18 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Comments from HAL
- Could the lede be expanded further?
- Thanks for the review. Here's my thinking: this lead is the same length as the ones in my 4 genus lists that are FLs, so I think people have been okay with the leads so far. This list is intended to fill a void on the web as a reference work ... I'm hoping people will use it to look things up ... and I'm thinking they won't want a long intro, because then they'll feel obligated to read it in case it has unintuitive instructions or disclaimers, when what they really want to do is jump straight to what they're looking for ... no one reads the instructions in a dictionary unless they think for some reason they have to. I can say more, I guess, but I'm interested in your thoughts. Is there anything specific you'd like to see? - Dank (push to talk)
- Why are the lifespans and occupation/importance of the namesakes only sometimes included?
- Good catch ... if you've clicked on the hatnote you'll see that all the lifespans are included there, even when there are blue links ... I intentionally did it two different ways to see if it prompted a request to do it one way or the other .... do you have a preference? Other than dates, when there's a blue link, I'd prefer not to repeat (or worse, contradict) the information available at the link ... this isn't a matter of appearance so much as knowing what tends to piss Wikipedians off ... in this case, a long list of bio material by one editor from just a few sources that contradicts or supplants the work of many Wikipedians from many sources, collected and hashed out over decades in some cases. (Also, there's already about as much text as the page will hold without causing image-loading problems for some readers, and I want to focus readers' attention on the entries that need more attention. But these are secondary points.) - Dank (push to talk)
- Up to you in the end. Not a huge issue. ~ HAL333 00:54, 6 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Good catch ... if you've clicked on the hatnote you'll see that all the lifespans are included there, even when there are blue links ... I intentionally did it two different ways to see if it prompted a request to do it one way or the other .... do you have a preference? Other than dates, when there's a blue link, I'd prefer not to repeat (or worse, contradict) the information available at the link ... this isn't a matter of appearance so much as knowing what tends to piss Wikipedians off ... in this case, a long list of bio material by one editor from just a few sources that contradicts or supplants the work of many Wikipedians from many sources, collected and hashed out over decades in some cases. (Also, there's already about as much text as the page will hold without causing image-loading problems for some readers, and I want to focus readers' attention on the entries that need more attention. But these are secondary points.) - Dank (push to talk)
- Does the futher reading The Names of Plants contain anything relevent that could be included in this list?
- Gledhill is an excellent source, but in all my previous lists, I haven't made specific reference to him except in special cases ... and, generally, I found that those special cases don't occur in these lists. There are better sources for these things. I can remove him from the Further Reading if you prefer. - Dank (push to talk)
- I would keep it - it doesn't detract from the article. ~ HAL333 00:54, 6 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Gledhill is an excellent source, but in all my previous lists, I haven't made specific reference to him except in special cases ... and, generally, I found that those special cases don't occur in these lists. There are better sources for these things. I can remove him from the Further Reading if you prefer. - Dank (push to talk)
- I would cut back on a few of the images. They, at least on my screen, continue past the references section and create a large blank space at the bottom...
- Sure. I found that on any large screen at any zoom, and on small laptops screens at a zoom of 110% or higher, the pictures didn't create white space at the bottom, but I'll be happy to trim a couple. - Dank (push to talk)
- For consistency, I would link Uppsala, London, and Madrid.
- Great work ... done. - Dank (push to talk)
- Since Queensland is linked, also link Burgundy.
- Done. - Dank (push to talk)
That's all I got. Nice work as usual. ~ HAL333 00:02, 6 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Thanks much for reviewing. Sorry I've been distracted with my own work for a month, I'll watch FLC more closely now. - Dank (push to talk) 00:34, 6 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- No worries—I've been quite busy irl as well. And, I'm happy to support this nomination. ~ HAL333 00:54, 6 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Comments
- The phrase "including many women and non-Westerners" in the lead feels off. I fully understand the sentiment, but I think it's unnecessary. I personally think it's better to cut this; as it currently stands, it makes it seem like this should be unexpected, which doesn't help to normalize the inclusion of women and non-Westerners in the field.
- Done.
- No need for the table of contents at both the beginning and end
- I'm happy either way, but this is my seventh plant list at FLC and the previous 6 had it in the See also section, so I'd need to check with previous reviewers before removing it ... happy to do that if you want me to. I did it that way following the example of some of Wikipedia's botanical lists, for instance, List of botanists by author abbreviation (A). (And IIRC, at least one reviewer either commented on it or requested it, that's why I'd have to go back and ask.) - Dank (push to talk)
- In that case, leave it; it's not a huge issue, and consistency is more important. RunningTiger123 (talk) 20:10, 17 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- I'm happy either way, but this is my seventh plant list at FLC and the previous 6 had it in the See also section, so I'd need to check with previous reviewers before removing it ... happy to do that if you want me to. I did it that way following the example of some of Wikipedia's botanical lists, for instance, List of botanists by author abbreviation (A). (And IIRC, at least one reviewer either commented on it or requested it, that's why I'd have to go back and ask.) - Dank (push to talk)
- Christenhusz is not the only author of Plants of the World, at least according to what I can see. All of the authors should be listed.
Otherwise, great work! RunningTiger123 (talk) 23:47, 16 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Thanks for the review! All done, except for my one question above. - Dank (push to talk) 00:22, 17 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Support – nice job! RunningTiger123 (talk) 20:10, 17 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Promoting. --PresN 19:05, 28 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
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The list was promoted by PresN via FACBot (talk) 00:26, 29 April 2021 (UTC) [4].[reply]
- Nominator(s): Ashleyyoursmile! 18:47, 19 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
I am nominating List of awards and nominations received by Harry Styles for featured list because it is a comprehensive list of all awards received by the artist, and is sourced, well-organised, and easy to navigate through. I have spent quite some time in expanding and cleaning up the article, which I now believe meets the featured list criteria. For reference, I've used both List of awards and nominations received by Meghan Trainor and List of awards and nominations received by Dua Lipa. I look forward to the comments. Ashleyyoursmile! 18:47, 19 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
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You're welcome, and I now support following its improvements. SNUGGUMS (talk / edits) 04:33, 20 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
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- Support — Lirim | Talk 13:58, 26 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Table accessibility review (MOS:DTAB): The table is missing a caption.
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- PresN, thank you for the notice. I've added a hidden caption to the table. --Ashleyyoursmile! 06:12, 3 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Source review passed; promoting. --PresN 19:05, 28 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
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The list was promoted by PresN via FACBot (talk) 00:25, 29 April 2021 (UTC) [5].[reply]
- Nominator(s): Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 21:47, 19 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
I am nominating this for featured list because I have updated the list to include past nominations, and have expanded the lead along with archiving sources. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 21:47, 19 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Comments
- H Jon Benjamin should sort under B, not J (his surname is Benjamin, not "Jon Benjamin")
- That's all I could find :-) -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 07:24, 20 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- @ChrisTheDude: All Done. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 15:01, 20 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Support - good article. I had never previously heard of this show but maybe I will check it out..... -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 17:40, 20 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Comments
- Lead
- Bob's Burgers: The Movie should only be mentioned if you anticipate including potential awards/nominations for it here (I wouldn't recommend it)
- Done Removed. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 12:15, 8 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- "season" instead of "production cycle" in the lead - more accessible, used in source, consistent with other show pages
- I count nine Outstanding Animated Program Emmy noms in the table but the lead says eight
- You should note at the bottom of the lead or right above the table that the listed years refer to when the awards were presented
- Is there another list with this included? Haven't heard of people asking for it so just wondering. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 12:15, 8 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- List of awards and nominations received by 30 Rock has a note in the lead and Writers Guild of America Award for Television: Animation has one right above the table. The WGA article actually lists year of airing, not award. Firefangledfeathers (talk) 16:06, 8 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Again, as mentioned below, the 30 Rock list might not be up to today's standards, and the articles I've mentioned that have reached FL didn't require a note. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 16:16, 8 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- How about List of awards and nominations received by The Good Place, promoted in January with a footnote? Stepping away from consistency for a moment, would you disagree that a note could be helpful to readers? Firefangledfeathers (talk) 16:39, 8 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Guess I wouldn't. Note has been added. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 16:43, 8 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- How about List of awards and nominations received by The Good Place, promoted in January with a footnote? Stepping away from consistency for a moment, would you disagree that a note could be helpful to readers? Firefangledfeathers (talk) 16:39, 8 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Again, as mentioned below, the 30 Rock list might not be up to today's standards, and the articles I've mentioned that have reached FL didn't require a note. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 16:16, 8 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- List of awards and nominations received by 30 Rock has a note in the lead and Writers Guild of America Award for Television: Animation has one right above the table. The WGA article actually lists year of airing, not award. Firefangledfeathers (talk) 16:06, 8 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Is there another list with this included? Haven't heard of people asking for it so just wondering. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 12:15, 8 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Table
- Probably, all the Annie "Best..." awards should say Television instead of TV to reflect the Annie's official name, otherwise the 2019 Annie nom for The Bleakening should say TV instead of Television for consistency
- The 2013 Annie "Best..." award didn't have "/Broadcast" in the name (supported by your source and the Annie site)
- Done Removed. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 12:34, 8 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- I'd argue the Libera awards for the album are outside the scope of this list, otherwise
- The Creative Packaging award went to: Sub Pop (for The Bob's Burgers Music Album) and
- The Marketing Genius award went to: Marketing Lead Jon Strickland (Sub Pop) (for The Bob's Burgers Music Album)
- Done Removed. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 12:34, 8 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- WGA awards don't seem to have reliable naming style but other wiki articles seem to have settled on "Writers Guild of America Award for Television: Animation"
- Am I supposed to change it? "Television: Animation" doesn't tell a reader much more than "Best Television Writing in Animation". Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 12:34, 8 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- It's a puzzler! A reader who hasn't run into your phrasing before might check the source and the wikilink to the WGA awards and question why neither contains "Best Writing..." Firefangledfeathers (talk) 16:06, 8 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Done Changed to "Television: Animation" as seen in this article. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 16:16, 8 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- It's a puzzler! A reader who hasn't run into your phrasing before might check the source and the wikilink to the WGA awards and question why neither contains "Best Writing..." Firefangledfeathers (talk) 16:06, 8 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Am I supposed to change it? "Television: Animation" doesn't tell a reader much more than "Best Television Writing in Animation". Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 12:34, 8 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Table would be more readable without Bob's Burgers repeatedly linked; List of awards and nominations received by 30 Rock handles this by leaving the nominee column blank when it's the show and only listing episode titles
- Not done per consistency with three currently promoted lists (for Better Call Saul, BoJack Horseman, and Brooklyn Nine-Nine). The example you gave was promoted in 2008, so I'm not sure if it's still reliable or up to today's standards. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 12:34, 8 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Fair enough! Firefangledfeathers (talk) 16:06, 8 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Not done per consistency with three currently promoted lists (for Better Call Saul, BoJack Horseman, and Brooklyn Nine-Nine). The example you gave was promoted in 2008, so I'm not sure if it's still reliable or up to today's standards. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 12:34, 8 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Thanks for all your hard work on this list! Firefangledfeathers (talk) 07:21, 8 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- @Firefangledfeathers: I have responded to your suggestions. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 12:34, 8 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- @Some Dude From North Carolina: I have responded to your responses. Firefangledfeathers (talk) 16:06, 8 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- @Firefangledfeathers: I have responded to your responses. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 16:16, 8 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- @Some Dude From North Carolina: Re:re:re:re:comments. Firefangledfeathers (talk) 16:39, 8 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- @Firefangledfeathers: Re:re:re:re:re:comments. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 16:43, 8 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- @Some Dude From North Carolina: Looks great! Feel free to collapse this section if you want.
- @Firefangledfeathers: Re:re:re:re:re:comments. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 16:43, 8 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- @Some Dude From North Carolina: Re:re:re:re:comments. Firefangledfeathers (talk) 16:39, 8 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- @Firefangledfeathers: I have responded to your responses. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 16:16, 8 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- @Some Dude From North Carolina: I have responded to your responses. Firefangledfeathers (talk) 16:06, 8 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- @Firefangledfeathers: I have responded to your suggestions. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 12:34, 8 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Support Well-referenced, comprehensive, and clean. Firefangledfeathers (talk) 16:58, 8 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Comments from Dank
- Go Heels! (Not really relevant, but ...)
- Standard disclaimer: I don't know what I'm doing, and I mostly AGF on sourcing.
- FLC criteria:
- 1. The prose is fine. The coding at the top of the table seems fine. I checked sorting on all columns and sampled the links in the table.
- 2. The lead meets WP:LEAD and defines the inclusion criteria.
- 3a. The list has comprehensive items and annotations.
- 3b. The UPSD tool isn't indicating any problems (but this isn't a source review). All relevant retrieval dates are present. I'm not good with sourcing on articles like this one, but the other reviewers and the source review are likely to catch any problems.
- 3c. The list meets requirements as a stand-alone list, it isn't a content fork, it doesn't largely duplicate another article (that I can find), and it wouldn't fit easily inside another article.
- 4. It is navigable.
- 5. It meets style requirements. The one image can't be a copyright problem because it doesn't meet the "originality" test for copyright.
- 6. It is stable.
- Support. Well done. (I hope you'll drop by my plant list nominations every now and then, but they tend to be long, so don't sweat it.) - Dank (push to talk) 20:56, 13 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Source review passed; promoting. --PresN 19:05, 28 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
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The list was promoted by The Rambling Man via FACBot (talk) 00:25, 25 April 2021 (UTC) [6].[reply]
- Nominator(s): PresN 03:07, 11 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
For nearly two years, I've been nominating lists of species in Carnivora (felids/canids/mustelids/procyonids/ursids/mephitids/viverrids/herpestids/pinnipeds), covering all of the families of animals in the order that could support a list. Above them, however, was a parent list: List of carnivorans (ex. List of species in order Carnivora), which was a simple bulleted list of all of the species in the order. It couldn't be supplanted by the child lists: 4 of the 15 families are too small to support a list, and the concept of "everything in the order" made sense. But a list that had 11 "main" templates and 4 tiny sections wasn't much use to readers, nor was a mile-long duplicative series of tables. So, we arrive at a capstone FLC: Instead of duplicating the child lists by using the same tables to cover all 285 species, we pull back a level to match the scope going up a level, and have tables covering the 129 genera in the order Carnivora, letting viewers see the relationships at that level with child lists to drill down further into individual families. I hope it is interesting to read! Thanks for reviewing. --PresN 03:07, 11 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Good choice to do by genus!
- "different" before "body plans" is superfluous
- Collage selection is nice
- Subfamily Ailurinae (Gray, 1843) – one genera" and elsewhere: should be one genus
- "Members of the Canidae family are canids, and include..." and similar elsewhere shouldn't have a comma.
- "Members of the Mustelidae family are mustelids, and are composed of" It's not 'members are composed of', should be 'members include' like the others
- I see the pattern for those with multiple species but it's not clear why some genus names have a common name under them and not others
- I think the diets overuse the word "Primarily". I think it can generally be assumed these are not exhaustive or exclusive lists of everything they can eat. Heck, you can leave off the "eats" and just have a plain list without being a sentence. Though looking at some of the other lists this is used in all of them and I'm surprised I hadn't noticed it before.
- Odobenidae: lowercase walrus
- Looking forward to supporting at FTC as well! Reywas92Talk 20:16, 11 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- @Reywas92: Addressed all issues, thanks for the compliment! The common names are where the genus has one (and has more than one species); most don't- for example, Canis includes both some wolves and the coyote and golden jackal; there's no common name for the group. It's uncommon enough that I'm willing to drop the whole thing as being awkward for readers. --PresN 03:36, 12 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- I would otherwise suggest removing the parentheses and putting the common name with every genus but yeah since many don't have a single one maybe someone else has a suggestion. Nice work, Support. If you have a chance, a review at Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/National recreation area/archive1 would be appreciated. Reywas92Talk 19:28, 12 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- @Reywas92: Addressed all issues, thanks for the compliment! The common names are where the genus has one (and has more than one species); most don't- for example, Canis includes both some wolves and the coyote and golden jackal; there's no common name for the group. It's uncommon enough that I'm willing to drop the whole thing as being awkward for readers. --PresN 03:36, 12 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Comments
- "Carnivora can be divided into two suborders: the cat-like Feliformia and the dog-like Caniformia, which are differentiated based on the structure of their ear bones and cranial features." - is there a ref for that sentence in the lead, particularly the last clause? I can't see it sourced anywhere in the body of the article (everything else not cited in the lead seems to be covered by citations in the tables)
- I can see both "molluscs" and "mollusks" used - personally I didn't even realise it could be spelt both ways but better to be consistent on one or the other
- That's all I got - fantastic work on this list (and the whole topic)! -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 09:22, 13 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- @ChrisTheDude: Now cited; fixed spelling to "molluscs" - that's the 'correct' scientific spelling (since the genus is mollusca), even if 'mollusks' is a used variant, and it was actually a typo- I didn't realize the k version was a thing and my browser's spellcheck didn't flag it. Thanks! --PresN 03:32, 14 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Support -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 10:02, 14 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Support Nothing caught my eye. Admirable work. ~ HAL333 15:59, 15 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Support and thank you for making these lists so wonderful. --SilverTiger12 (talk) 20:26, 19 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Support passes my source review --Guerillero Parlez Moi 03:48, 14 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
@The Rambling Man: Since this is mine I can't promote it without a signoff from you (since Giants is still off) that it's okay. --PresN 22:41, 23 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- PresN sure, I'll take a look first. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 06:35, 24 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Comments
- Plenty of duplicate links, even in the lead, e.g. cats, dogs, Eupleridae, Viverridae, Herpestidae ...
- Removed the duplicate links in the lead and overview sections
- Why is only one sentence of the lead cited?
- Most of the lead is a summary of the tables; the part that isn't (how Caniformia and Feliformia are differentiated) is cited. There was another sentence, but that should have been cited outside of the lead and now is.
- "Caniformia" is sometimes capitalised mid-sentence, sometimes not, what's the approach?
- Should be capitalized, now is
- "'divided into 14 genera and placed inside a single extant subfamily, Caninae" vs "Subfamily Caninae (G. Fischer de Waldheim, 1817) – thirteen genera" i.e. 14 v 13.
- Fixed, and checked all the other sections for that as well
- "tail (Wolf)[10]" in sentence case, no need to capitalise.
- At first I had wanted them all to be capitalized as it's not quite a sentence, but as per below I drifted away from that. Now all in sentence case.
- "neritic marine" what is that?
- Moved link to first instance
- "plus 1 cm (0 in) tail" unhelpful conversion.
- Removed unhelpful 1 cm conversions
- "Racoon" typo.
- Fixed
- "(brown bear) " etc, you have previously capitalised first word of these names... Quite a few of these.
- Fixed per above
- "composed of a two extant species" eh? And one shown.
- Fixed
- ISBNs should be consistently formatted.
- They are (well, fixed one that was off)- ISBNs are formatted a-b-c-d-e, where each section isn't a consistent length but the total length is 13. I formatted all of these using the Library of Congress ISBN formatter.
The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 08:23, 24 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- @The Rambling Man: Thank you so much! Some embarrassing inconsistencies here. All fixed now, I think. --PresN 13:55, 24 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
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The list was promoted by PresN via FACBot (talk) 00:29, 24 April 2021 (UTC) [7].[reply]
- Nominator(s): Cowlibob (talk) 10:27, 23 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Philip Seymour Hoffman was one of the greatest actors of his generation. This list describes his roles in film, television and the stage. As always I welcome all constructive comments on how to improve it. Cowlibob (talk) 10:27, 23 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
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- No worries - support. What a shame this is one list that won't need any updating going forward........ -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 11:08, 26 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Table accessibility review (MOS:DTAB): The tables are missing a caption.
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- @PresN: Added table captions. Cowlibob (talk) 23:11, 2 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Comments from Dank
- Standard disclaimer: I don't know what I'm doing, and I mostly AGF on sourcing.
- FLC criteria:
- 1. The prose is fine. I've done a little copyediting; feel free to revert or discuss. The coding at the top of the table seems fine. I checked sorting on some columns and sampled the links in the table.
- 2. The lead meets WP:LEAD and defines the inclusion criteria.
- 3a. The list has comprehensive items and annotations.
- 3b. At a glance, the article seems well-sourced to reliable sources ... I'm not good with film sources, but they seem to be okay for what you're using them for. The UPSD tool isn't indicating any problems (but this isn't a source review). Refs 16 and 30 need retrieval dates; the other relevant retrieval dates are all present.
- 3c. The list meets requirements as a stand-alone list, it isn't a content fork, it doesn't largely duplicate another article (that I can find), and it wouldn't fit easily inside another article.
- 4. It is navigable.
- 5. It meets style requirements. The one image seems fine.
- 6. It is stable.
- Support, since this is close enough to the finish line. Well done. (I hope you'll drop by my plant list noms every now and then, but they tend to be long, so don't sweat it.) - Dank (push to talk) 14:27, 5 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Support: This looks like a well written career history of PSH. I cannot see errors or glaring issues with this list.
Source review passed; promoted. --PresN 22:41, 23 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
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The list was promoted by PresN via FACBot (talk) 00:28, 24 April 2021 (UTC) [8].[reply]
We are continuing our goal of bringing all lists of municipalities in Mexico up to a consistent, high standard (9 states already have their municipality lists featured using this standardized format, along with dozens of other list of municipalities in North America). We have updated the information to reflect the most recent census and tried to incorporate changes from previous nominations. The page should be pretty standardized but there can always be improvements. Thanks to everyone who regularly reviews these lists! Mattximus (talk) 16:00, 21 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
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- It's not really a big deal so support -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 16:03, 23 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Thanks again for your review! Mattximus (talk) 18:40, 24 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Comments
- Is note i written correctly? Same goes with note o and v - not sure the second "and" is needed. Done
- I would rewrite note j
San Gabriel was renamed Venustiano Carranza between 1934 and 1993.
The "between sounds like the date of renaming is sometime within a date range. Done
That's all. Solid work. I'll go ahead and support given the above is addressed. ~ HAL333
- Thanks for the review! Mattximus (talk) 23:09, 1 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
CommentsSupport from Aza24
[edit]- I'll be back to do a source review, but some non-source comments first:
- An RFC recently passed a few months ago asking for captions on all tables (MOS:DTAB) Done
- The pictures look rather odd on my screen, on my smaller screen they're stacked 2 on top of 3 on top of 1; on my bigger screen they're stacked 4 on top of 2–both leave huge white space, and looking very awkward. I don't really know what a solution for this would look like, but the current formatting is less than ideal
- Part of the issue here is this is all happening before the table—a.k.a the main part of the article—creating a weird buffer in between
- Yep I see what you mean. I experimented with a bunch of different formats, this seems to be the best one for my screen, how does the new format look for you? Mattximus (talk) 20:37, 18 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- It's better but still a little awkward—I think the root of the problem is the second, Municipalities of Jalisco image. I see some of your other FLs (though I haven't checked the all) don't have such a map, perhaps remove? Though it is a cool map, the fact that its without labels for the various municipalities makes its actual helpfulness negligible imo. Aza24 (talk) 22:27, 24 March 2021 (UTC) Done[reply]
- Yep that did it. It fixed it on my screen too. Since it's unlabeled, I agree that it serves little value. Mattximus (talk) 19:35, 30 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- I don't really get the lack of TOC; if the vertical one is messing up formatting, why not add a horizontal one.
- Otherwise seems solid. Aza24 (talk) 09:50, 18 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- This is very strange, I see nothing in the code indicating the removal of the default TOC. I have no idea why it was removed. Do you know how to get it back? Mattximus (talk) 20:37, 18 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- I believe articles with 3 or less sections makes the TOC not show up, in that sense I would suppose it's alright to not have one. However, if you're so inclined, you could add __FORCETOC__ or for a horizontal one, simply, add {{horizontal TOC}} anywhere. Aza24 (talk) 22:27, 24 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Thanks for the info. I tried adding the FORCETOC and I see now why the default is no TOC with 3 sections, it looks kinda funny. But I don't hold a strong opinion. I'm inclined to just leave it off as the default recommends. Mattximus (talk) 19:38, 30 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Thanks for the review! I have two questions for you above. Mattximus (talk) 20:37, 18 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Just a friendly ping for User:Aza24, wondering if you had a chance to see my two questions above? Mattximus (talk) 22:17, 24 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Thank you for the ping! I forgot to add this one to my list to check back on Aza24 (talk) 22:27, 24 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Thanks again Aza24 for your great suggestions! I believe all your concerns are now addressed. Mattximus (talk) 19:38, 30 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Happy to support Aza24 (talk) 05:03, 2 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Thanks again Aza24 for your great suggestions! I believe all your concerns are now addressed. Mattximus (talk) 19:38, 30 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Thank you for the ping! I forgot to add this one to my list to check back on Aza24 (talk) 22:27, 24 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Just a friendly ping for User:Aza24, wondering if you had a chance to see my two questions above? Mattximus (talk) 22:17, 24 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
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- Nominator(s): Aza24 (talk) 02:25, 15 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
It may seem like a niche list to work on, but it has a purpose, or at least had one. Beethoven's 250th anniversary was last year and I was trying to get this as the TFL (for 17 December) but only got as far as a DYK... Oh well. Anyways, Beethoven's central status in the history of Western classical music has made him the subject of a lot of monuments. And I mean a lot—so this is a dynamic list; regardless, I'm confident I have entries for the most important and well-known monuments. Another point of interest might be the 45 or so busts by Antoine Bourdelle; I opted to limit them in a separate list as to not overwhelm the main list with entries by them. The list should be fully sortable. Thanks in advanced to any who review. Aza24 (talk) 02:25, 15 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Dynamic list template should go before the list, not at the top of the page
- I think a more appropriate title would be List of sculptures of Ludwig van Beethoven. Like the Beethoven House has eight sculptures of him, but they aren't all individually monuments. "Monument" is not necessarily a synonym for "three-dimensional artwork of a person".
- The "Type" category isn't that clear: all of these are sculptures, including the busts and statues, so there shouldn't necessarily just be a subset of them called sculptures. E.g. it seems to me the one at Plaza Lavalle looks like it would be a relief, and at Alter Zoll is a statue. I guess some of them aren't as categorizable but this needs some work.
- "arist" typo
- " supposably" is not a word
- Three links of types are actually links to the specific artwork. This is not expected and should perhaps be linked in the location instead.
- I don't mind the splitting of the Bourdelle works (which are likewise generic artworks and not monuments per se), but seven out of "at least 45" is very incomplete. Although generally it may be hard to say for sure "this list is complete" and that's permissible, this seems quite inadequate for an FL. Unless it's it's redefined to be specially "monuments" and not just any old sculptures, which would remove several in the main list too, this section should be more comprehensive.
- I take pause at the Unexecuted monuments. For example the Friedrich von Amerling and Drake ones were just an alternate proposal to the one by Hähnel that was chosen. Surely many of the other monuments went through multiple design proposals too, so this also suggests a greater degree of incompleteness. They should be included at Beethoven Monument but I'm not so sure about here.
Reywas92Talk 03:35, 15 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Reywas92 many thanks for your comments. I've addressed your minor ones (though I will note that supposably is a word—but certainly not the right one, in this case).
- I will ponder over the unexecuted monuments suggestion, though most of these are important enough (e.g. they have some history behind them, perhaps I add some notes to each of them?) that I would advocate their inclusion.
- Yes notes are nice
- For the Bourdelle works I actually forgot that I only had 7 (they're hard to find, as there's not list of them anywhere I could find) so I will surely add plenty more when I have time.
- As for the other two points (type & article name) you seem to be stumbling onto two problems I've pondered over myself, but struggled to find a satisfactory conclusion, so maybe we can help each other here:
- For type, my goal here is primarily to be able to sort busts, reliefs and (probably) statues; as you say some are ambiguous, so I've opted for the equally ambiguous "sculpture", any advice here would be appreciated, but I'm really not sure if there is going to be a perfect way to go about this.
- Maybe whatever can't fit into the other categories would be "other sculpture"?
- The name used to be List of statuary of Ludwig von Beethoven but I moved it. I would disagree with your interpretation of the word "monument"—OED says it is a "A statue, building, or other structure erected to commemorate a famous or notable person or event." which seems to cover the content... I'm not opposed to changing it to "sculptures" should that be a more direct title, but I would aim for keeping the reliefs. Busts and Statues are surely sculptures; our relief article says it's a "sculptural technique" so I am left unsure. - Aza24 (talk) 04:56, 15 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Right, statues with pedestals and plaques or other public commemoration would be a monument, but the regular sculptures and depictions don't quite fit that, like not every sculpture in a museum is a monument. Yes, reliefs are definitely sculptures to be included.
- An additional comment would be that unknown artists don't need gray backgrounds. Reywas92Talk 19:28, 15 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Reywas92, sorry for my untimely update. I believe I've addressed all of your comments now; I pondered over adding notes, but decided such information would be better for the artist's articles, and it looks odd to have notes for the unexecuted, but not the executed. They're all included in the lead anyways. Aza24 (talk) 00:57, 11 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- I concur with the reviewer below that the flags aren't really necessary, otherwise support Reywas92Talk 05:27, 12 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
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Comments by Ham II
[edit]- I like the change of title to "List of sculptures of Ludwig van Beethoven", which better reflects the scope.
- Presumably Karlsbad would be a more appropriate name for Karlovy Vary in 1929?
- Changed
- "A large number of busts reside in the Beethoven House" – MOS:ART advises against "currently resides in", and I think this is a bit too close to that. Possibly change it to something like "There is a collection of busts of the composer in the Beethoven House"?
- Good catch, adjusted this
- There are more public sculptures, including architectural sculpture, here – I count twelve sculptures there which aren't in this list. de:Liste der Beethoven-Denkmäler has works in the Pasqualati House, the Walhalla, Cuxhaven, Hradec nad Moravicí and Teplice which aren't here. The Royal Philharmonic Society in London has this bust by Johann Nepomuk Schaller, and its many contemporary copies are covered here. Also in London, the Royal Academy of Music has this marble bust by Hähnel (as well as one of the plaster copies of the Schaller). Have you looked for sources for everything in c:Category:Sculptures of Ludwig van Beethoven and its subcategories?
- Thanks for these, I'll add them and give you an update when I do, I had already gone through the German list and added all I could find sources for. Aza24 (talk) 02:02, 24 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- After a bit of digging I've found a source for the Walhalla bust: search for "Kat. Nr. 13" in this doctoral dissertation. The attribution seems to be Arnold Hermann Lossow after Anton Dietrich. Here are some more: La Scala, Milan; GAM, Turin – which is a cast of this sculpture in Milan; a Bourdelle in Bonn; Beijing; a full-length photo of Beethoven in the Wind in the Musée Bourdelle. Ham II (talk) 20:39, 24 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Thanks for these, I'll add them and give you an update when I do, I had already gone through the German list and added all I could find sources for. Aza24 (talk) 02:02, 24 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- There should be more specific locations for Fernkorn's bust and Klinger's sculptures in Vienna and Leipzig.
- Done
- The majority of authority control files on Wikidata refer to Jacques de Braekeleer with a lowercase "d" and, where the sorting of his name is indicated, sort it as "Braekelaer, Jacques de": Union List of Artist Names, Allgemeines Künstlerlexikon Online, Benezit Dictionary of Artists, Christie's. I should note that both the Dutch-language files (RKD and Inventaris), like the Dutch Wikipedia article you've linked to, do have "Jacques De Braekeeler", but "Jacques de Braekeleer", sorted under "B", seems to be the majority English-language usage.
- Agreed and fixed
- There's an online source for another Bourdelle here. This seems to be the book that covers all Bourdelle's works on the theme of Beethoven. This seems to be the current catalogue raisonné for the artist, and this seems to be the most recent one in English – in case either of these books is easier to get hold of than the first. I appreciate that these would be very difficult to check at the moment. Is every relevant sculpture currently at List of works by Antoine Bourdelle covered here?
- I looked around for a catalogue raisonné as well, but found them not easily available. I've added the one you found and yes I had gone through the works list. Aza24 (talk) 02:02, 24 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Is there anything to be said (in the lede, not the list itself) about mass-produced busts of Beethoven? They do seem to be "iconic", and they certainly come up a lot in pop culture: 1, 2, 3. Ham II (talk) 10:21, 20 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Sorry for the delay Ham II, I looked in a book about Beethoven sculpture and couldn't find anything about the pop culture appearances. I think I've addressed your other comments though, and added the appropriate works. Aza24 (talk) 07:03, 12 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- If reliable sources don't cover this, that's fair enough. I've never looked into Beethoven's reception history before (art history is my field), but I am struck by the popularity of plaster busts of the composer. I still count nine works on vanderkrogt.net that are missing here: at the Alte Oper, Frankfurt; the Grand Théâtre de Genève; the Conservatoire de Musique de Genève; Graz; the Staatsoper Hannover; the Frieze of Parnassus on the Albert Memorial, London; Nuremberg; the Latvian National Museum of Art; and Uffenheim. I've added the Walhalla bust. Ham II (talk) 06:42, 15 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Following the image improvement and ref adjustments, I give my support for the nomination and media review passes. While I would also prefer not to use an image multiple times here, that's not enough to keep me from saying it's ready to become FL. SNUGGUMS (talk / edits) 12:46, 25 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Many thanks! Aza24 (talk) 01:35, 26 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Comments from Gerda
[edit]Impressive list! Only very minor things:
- In the introduction, we have two Vienna in a row.
- Sorted
- I don't care about the little flags, especially since at Beethoven's (and some artists') time, these flags didn't yet exist.
- My rationale is that the location column might be confusing otherwise when sorted. Usually when columns are sorted, one expects to see a clear group of items, but since these are sorted by country (and the specific location or city is put first) I was concerned that this might not be obvious enough without the flags. Maybe this makes sense? Otherwise, if you still disagree, I'm open to removing.
- Well, we are used to sorting by year having a date fist, and by surname, having a given name first. You could also explain the sort. For me, the little flags are both sometimes wrong in history, and always a little coloured distraction from the artwork, but that may be just me.
- My rationale is that the location column might be confusing otherwise when sorted. Usually when columns are sorted, one expects to see a clear group of items, but since these are sorted by country (and the specific location or city is put first) I was concerned that this might not be obvious enough without the flags. Maybe this makes sense? Otherwise, if you still disagree, I'm open to removing.
- How about "Liszt and Brahms"?
- Done
- I wonder if we could have a link from the introduction to the monument in the table, instead to other articles, which could be reserved to the table entries. Just an idea. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 22:21, 10 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- It's tempting... but I'd rather not complicate the table anymore, if that's okay...?
- I'll tempt you further by doing it for one. It won't change the table appearance, so be only additional bits in edit mode.
- I did it for the first. If that doesn't tempt you enough consider how great it will to link to a position in the table from elsewhere, especially for sculptures without an article, for which you can make easy redirects, such as List of sculptures of Ludwig van Beethoven#Klein. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 07:35, 12 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- ... or easier Beethoven sculptures#Klein --Gerda Arendt (talk) 07:39, 12 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- I think I'll adapt it, great idea! I need to get of WP now but will do so in tomorrow and let you know. Aza24 (talk) 07:42, 12 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- It's tempting... but I'd rather not complicate the table anymore, if that's okay...?
- I've responded above Gerda Arendt, many thanks for your (as usual) helpful comments. Aza24 (talk) 07:10, 12 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Thank you! --Gerda Arendt (talk) 07:24, 12 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Support excellent list, as it is, and sure can get even better ;) --Gerda Arendt (talk) 08:00, 12 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
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I made one little fix which it was easier to just do than to point out here, and am more than happy to support -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 07:53, 14 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Source review passed; promoted. --PresN 22:41, 23 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
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- Nominator(s): Jovian Eclipse (talk) 14:31, 13 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Imelda Staunton is an English actress. Recognised internationally for portraying Dolores Umbridge in the Harry Potter film series, Staunton has earned numerous accolades in her forty-year career including four Olivier awards for her work in London theatre. Jovian Eclipse (talk) 14:31, 13 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
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I think that's it. GagaNutellatalk 22:06, 15 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
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- Support, my pleasure. GagaNutellatalk 16:45, 16 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
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Support – from what I can tell, this is your first FLC; well done! RunningTiger123 (talk) 04:26, 17 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Table accessibility review (MOS:DTAB): The tables are missing a caption (they have the line but it's empty).
- Please add `|+ table caption` to the top of the tables, or if it would duplicate a nearby section header you can visually hide the caption as `|+ {{sronly|table caption}}`
- --PresN 14:31, 2 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Done. Thanks PresN! Jovian Eclipse (talk) 17:42, 2 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Sorry, I meant you should put in an actual caption, like
Awards and nominations
, nottable caption
. --PresN 22:15, 2 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]- @PresN Oops! My bad. Fixed it :) Jovian Eclipse (talk) 11:17, 3 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Sorry, I meant you should put in an actual caption, like
- Done. Thanks PresN! Jovian Eclipse (talk) 17:42, 2 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Source review passed; promoted. --PresN 22:41, 23 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
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The list was promoted by PresN via FACBot (talk) 00:26, 24 April 2021 (UTC) [11].[reply]
- Nominator(s): GagaNutellatalk 01:34, 10 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Unfortunately, I was not active here during ASIB era, but recently I have done some edits to improve and finally promote this list. It is very comprehensive, listing down all notable awards with reliable sources. I talked to Debyf, one of the top editors and he agreed to this nomination. A special thanks to him, IndianBio and Arlandria Ff for their effort to keep it updated during that time. GagaNutellatalk 01:34, 10 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Resolved comments from User:SNUGGUMS
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This is pretty close to being FL-material. SNUGGUMS (talk / edits) 02:44, 10 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
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My pleasure. I now support, and the media review passes as well. SNUGGUMS (talk / edits) 22:18, 10 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
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- Well, personally I don't think it is correct, but I'm not going to make a big deal out of it. Support -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 21:07, 11 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Support from MaranoFan
Looks good to me. Just one minor comment: I don't think everyone would know what RTHK stands for so list the publisher as "Radio Television Hong Kong (RTHK)".--NØ 06:17, 11 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- @MaranoFan: well noticed! Thanks for your support. GagaNutellatalk 14:52, 11 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
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From a quick Ctrl+F search, it looks like there are only 93 wins, but the infobox lists 106. Double-check the infobox to make sure it matches the table.This was my mistake – I forgot about runner-up, 2nd/3rd/... place, and so on – so the comment is irrelevant.- Remove the Gold Derby Awards; they do not meet the notability guidelines (see Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/Gold Derby Awards (2nd nomination)).
- Source 8 is misrepresented (at least when I read it); Alfonso Cuarón received six nominations for Roma, so implying that Cooper's five nominations were a record is misleading. It was simply the combination of awards that was unique. Reword this so that the wrong implication isn't there.
- The Category column has sorting issues for "Behind the Scenes" Promo, The Best Selling Soundtrack Album (should sort by "Best"), and The Don LaFontane Award for Best Voice Over (should sort by "Don").
- For the Clio Awards and Promax Awards, it would make more sense to use templates like {{won|place=gold}} in the Result column instead of writing "Gold Winner" in the Category column.
- Guild of Music Supervisors Awards and PGA Awards don't need to specify "for A Star is Born".
— RunningTiger123 (talk) 05:27, 13 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- @RunningTiger123: Thanks for your comments, very necessary. I have addressed all of them. GagaNutellatalk 15:11, 13 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Support – Great work! RunningTiger123 (talk) 01:57, 14 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
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- @PresN: Hey, I've added the caption. Thank you! GagaNutellatalk 17:49, 2 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Source review passed; promoted. --PresN 22:41, 23 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
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- Nominator(s): — Maile (talk) 20:53, 12 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
This was a rescue of an un-sourced filmography created in 2005, with very little context or sourcing since then. Given that Humphrey Bogart was an iconic figure during his lifetime, and a film legend ever since, I decided to clean this up and source it. Let's see how it measures up by FLC standards. — Maile (talk) 20:53, 12 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Drive-by comments
- Don't have time for a full review right now, but two things that immediately jump out are as follows:
- There is no reason for the abbreviation "misc" to be used in a section heading - write the word in full
- Towards the end of the article, prose is suddenly abruptly replaced with bullet points. Turn these into proper prose.
- I will look at the article properly later -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 20:05, 13 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
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More later. ~ HAL333 15:39, 15 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
More comments soon. ~ HAL333 02:52, 17 February 2021 (UTC)[reply] |
- Support ~ HAL333 18:53, 28 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
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Comments from Dank
- Standard disclaimer: I don't know what I'm doing, and I mostly AGF on sourcing.
- "Note that the opening and closing dates of the below productions are not listed.": It would be better to either remove that or say something about what data isn't available from the sources (apart from what you already say).
- Done — Maile (talk) 00:44, 5 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- FLC criteria:
- 1. The prose is fine. I've done a little copyediting; feel free to revert or discuss. I checked sorting on some columns and sampled the redirects in the tables.
- 2. The lead meets WP:LEAD and defines the inclusion criteria.
- 3a. The list has comprehensive items and annotations.
- 3b. The article is well-sourced to reliable sources, and the UPSD tool isn't indicating any problems (but this isn't a source review). All relevant retrieval dates are present.
- 3c. The list meets requirements as a stand-alone list, it isn't a content fork, it doesn't largely duplicate another article (that I can find), and it wouldn't fit easily inside another article.
- 4. It is navigable.
- 5. It meets style requirements. The images are outstanding, but I don't know much about the finer points of copyright.
- 6. It is stable.
- Support, since this is close enough to the finish line. Well done. (I hope you'll drop by my plant list noms every now and then, but they tend to be long, so don't sweat it.) - Dank (push to talk) 00:31, 5 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Thoughts
- The last time that IBDB came up on WP:RSN it wasn't positive [13]. That being said, I can look past this since it is ran by The Broadway League.
- The AFI catalogue passes my bar due to how they list their sources
- In a spot check of a listed movie, I don't see Bogart's name [14]
--Guerillero Parlez Moi 04:16, 14 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Guerillero regarding the Always Together AFI source, you have to look at the bottom right-hand side of the Credits tab. There is a little + sign you need to click, which unfolds more of the list. He's next to last at the bottom of the list as "character in movie". Must have been one of those cameo things, but he's there. Re IBDB, it's an official database of the National Trade Association for the Broadway Theatre Industry. Where human beings are involved, errors can happen, but human beings are ultimately who inputs all data on sourcing. — Maile (talk) 09:55, 14 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Support works for me -- Guerillero Parlez Moi 01:04, 15 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
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- Nominator(s): Birdienest81 (talk) 09:39, 26 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
I am nominating the 2012 London Summer Olympics medal table for featured list promotion because I've feel that this list meets the criteria for inclusion. These Olympic games are personally my second favorite edition behind the 1984 Summer Olympics in Los Angeles. This is my first non-film related list I am attempting to submit for featured list status and I based the format on other Olympic medal tables that became FL. Please feel free to make comments or make adjustments yourself. Birdienest81 (talk) 09:39, 26 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
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Support – Strong work all around. Hopefully we'll be able to make a new list for the Tokyo Olympics soon... RunningTiger123 (talk) 16:04, 2 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
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- Support -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 08:24, 4 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
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Medalists in the archery men's team event.
doesn't need a full stop.- Add a comma after
On 21 November 2016
and the two following.
Solid work. Assuming you touch on the above, I support this nomination. ~ HAL333 21:54, 14 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- @HAL333: Done: I think I did what you've suggested in the comments. Although I'm not sure what you mean by "and the two following"?
- --Birdienest81 (talk) 06:21, 15 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Commas are also needed after
On 25 November 2016
andOn 29 November 2016
. ~ HAL333 14:26, 15 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]- Done: I added commas to the dates you listed.
- Commas are also needed after
Image review
- Not sure what to say about File:2012 Summer Olympics medal map.png, which seemingly is an edit of another user's upload.
- The file source for File:2012 Olympic Games Medal, Britain 2011.jpg is giving me a 404 error. Fix/replace that link, or use something else. Same goes for the URL used in File:Netherlands womens hockey celebrate - 2012 Olympics.jpg
- When there's no evidence to the contrary, I'll assume good faith that File:Missy Franklin - 2015 World Aquatics Championships (cropped).JPG, File:Victoria Pendleton2 (cropped).jpg, File:British Team Cycling at the 2012 Summer Olympics – Women's team pursuit.JPG are the uploaders' own works as claimed
- I have no concerns with File:2012 Summer Olympics Men's Team Table Tennis Final 6.jpg, File:Archery men's team - London 2012 - medalists.jpg, File:Usain Bolt 2012 Olympics 1.jpg, or File:US women's soccer team pileon vs Japan, Olympic gold medal match, August 9, 2012.jpg
- @SNUGGUMS: Fixed--I changed two of the images where the link gives a 404 error into ones that have working links. As for the medals map, I'm asking the WP:FLC administrators if they know offhand about the usage rights or if they know someone else who is well versed with such issue.
- Fair enough. File:2012 Summer Olympics Men's Team Table Tennis Final 6.jpg and File:Chris Hoy at the Homecoming Parade (cropped).jpg are also perfectly fine to use. SNUGGUMS (talk / edits) 12:50, 6 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- I'm confused what the suspected issue is with 2012 Summer Olympics medal map.png? I'm not seeing anything that would change it from a free-use image. The base world map is a CC-BY-SA map used for tens of thousands of files across wikipedia, and it's been colored in by a few editors, retaining the CC-BY-SA license for all revisions. There's nothing wrong with editing "another user's upload" for CC-BY-SA images, that's why we retain all of the old revisions with the editor's name (BY) and under the same license (SA). --PresN 13:04, 6 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Source review – Pass
[edit]Doing now. Aza24 (talk) 19:48, 20 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Formatting
- Do we need "Retrieved 24 February 2021" in the external links? Seems weird to only have it for one of them
- Fixed: Removed date in External Links section since it only referring to the website as a whole.
- ref 7 missing author
- Fixed: Added Ben Snider-McGrath as author.
- ref 38 is using a different template than the other refs I believe (for some reason the date isn't after the author)
- Fixed: Moved date from "issue" paramter to "date" parameter in template.
- there's a lot of inconsistency with news sites, Reuters is italicized once, but not the other time—this is just one example, it should be standardized throughout
- "Fixed: Moved news organizations that are not italicized (i.e.: Associated Press, Reuters, and Yahoo Sports) from work parameter to agency parameter in order to de-italicize the title.
- can you translate the date on ref 58?
- Fixed: Translated "čer" into June.
- ref 67 seems to be missing a publisher or some equivalent parameter, ref 71 and 73 as well
- Fixed: Added Court of Arbitration for Sport as publisher of material.
- Reliability
- no issues here
- Verifiability
- checked a couple—looks good. Aza24 (talk) 20:16, 20 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- @Aza24: I've fixed the issues based on your feedback. Thank you
- --Birdienest81 (talk) 23:02, 22 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Looks great, pass for source review. Aza24 (talk) 23:40, 22 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Promoted. --PresN 22:41, 23 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
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The list was promoted by PresN via FACBot (talk) 00:26, 13 April 2021 (UTC) [16].[reply]
- Nominator(s): ChrisTheDude (talk) 08:13, 24 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
With 64 of these lists at FL and another having multiple supports and a completed source review, here's #66 for your consideration. I suspect that people may be getting bored of these lists by now, but don't worry, we're lurching close to the end of the country number one song lists project (at which point I can start nominating the country number one album lists mwah-ha-ha :-D). A notable first in this year was the first number one to feature the sound of the pedal steel guitar, an instrument which for many people has come to embody the sound of country music.... -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 08:13, 24 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Table accessibility review (MOS:DTAB): The table is missing a caption.
- Please add `|+ table caption` to the top of the table, or if it would duplicate a nearby section header you can visually hide the caption as `|+ {{sronly|table caption}}`. We haven't been the best about enforcing this, which is why I'm bringing it up now on list #66 :(
- Done -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 18:50, 2 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Support ~~ CAPTAIN MEDUSAtalk 10:58, 3 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Support — Lirim | Talk 08:07, 5 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Comments from Dank
- Standard disclaimer: I don't know what I'm doing, and I mostly AGF on sourcing.
- FLC criteria:
- 1. The prose is fine. I found a full stop to add; that was it. The coding at the top of the table seems fine. I checked sorting on all columns and sampled the links in the table.
- 2. The lead meets WP:LEAD and defines the inclusion criteria.
- 3a. The list has comprehensive items and annotations.
- 3b. The article is well-sourced to reliable sources, and the UPSD tool isn't indicating any problems (but this isn't a source review). All relevant retrieval dates are present.
- 3c. The list meets requirements as a stand-alone list, it isn't a content fork, it doesn't largely duplicate another article (that I can find), and it wouldn't fit easily inside another article.
- 4. It is navigable.
- 5. It meets style requirements. At a glance, the images seem fine.
- 6. It is stable.
- Support. Well done. - Dank (push to talk) 19:49, 12 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
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The list was promoted by PresN via FACBot (talk) 00:25, 13 April 2021 (UTC) [17].[reply]
- Nominator(s): ChrisTheDude (talk) 08:31, 1 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
With 64 of these lists now at WP:FL, here's the latest in the series for your consideration. An interesting fact about this particular year is that literally every single artist to reach number one has been considered important enough to the history of the genre to be inducted into the Country Music Hall of Fame. Your feedback will be most gratefully received -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 08:31, 1 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Source review — Pass
[edit]- Formatting
- Consistent all around
- Reliability
- No issues here. As a side note, AllMusic is being discussed at the RSN (here)—though it looks like most editors agree it is reliable—If you're interested, I'm sure your input would be most welcome, as you seem to have much experience with the site. Aza24 (talk) 01:18, 2 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Verifiability
- Have glanced at a couple, no issues.
Pass for source review Aza24 (talk) 01:18, 2 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Support Gave it a thorough read - found nothing. ~ HAL333 23:00, 10 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Support – my only comment is that "Artist(s)" could be simplified to "Artist" in the column headers, as all of the charting acts were solo artists, but if all of your other charts use "Artist", I would keep it the same for consistency. RunningTiger123 (talk) 04:12, 24 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Thanks for your support. All the other lists use "artist(s)", so I'd prefer to keep it for the sake of consistency, hope that's OK! -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 08:08, 24 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Absolutely, consistency is much more important than that one trivial detail. RunningTiger123 (talk) 22:08, 25 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Thanks for your support. All the other lists use "artist(s)", so I'd prefer to keep it for the sake of consistency, hope that's OK! -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 08:08, 24 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Table accessibility review (MOS:DTAB):The table is missing a caption (also mentioned in your other extant nomination).
- Please add `|+ table caption` to the top of the table, or if it would duplicate a nearby section header you can visually hide the caption as `|+ {{sronly|table caption}}`
- Done -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 18:50, 2 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Comments from Dank
- Standard disclaimer: I don't know what I'm doing, and I mostly AGF on sourcing.
- 1. The prose is fine. I've done a little copyediting; feel free to revert or discuss. The coding at the top of the table seems fine. I checked sorting on some columns and sampled the links in the table.
- 2. The lead meets WP:LEAD and defines the inclusion criteria.
- 3a. The list has comprehensive items and annotations.
- 3b. The article is well-sourced to reliable sources, and the UPSD tool isn't indicating any problems (but this isn't a source review). All relevant retrieval dates are present.
- 3c. The list meets requirements as a stand-alone list, it isn't a content fork, it doesn't largely duplicate another article (that I can find), and it wouldn't fit easily inside another article.
- 4. It is navigable.
- 5. It meets style requirements. The images are great.
- 6. It is stable.
- Support. Well done. - Dank (push to talk) 15:01, 5 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Source review passed; promoting. --PresN 23:23, 12 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
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The list was promoted by PresN via FACBot (talk) 00:27, 9 April 2021 (UTC) [18].[reply]
- Nominator(s): Kosack (talk) 21:52, 22 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Number five in the series. Once again, thanks to HawkAussie for their work on the table conversion. The format follows the same style as the previous four lists which have all gone up for FL status. I look forward to any comments. Kosack (talk) 21:52, 22 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Comments
- "Their first match of the period was a 3–2 victory over Northern Ireland secured a...." - think there's at least one word missing here
- "The second leg at Ninian Park proved controversial while crowd trouble led Wales...." - was the game controversial because of the crowd trouble? The word "while" kinda implies that it was controversial for a different reason but then you don't say what that was......
- "For the 1976 tournament, quarter-finals were played" - should this be "the quarter-finals"?
- "....with the finals hosting only the semi-finals and beyond" - reads very oddly - the finals hosted the semi-finals?
- "The 1966–67 and 1967-68 British Home Championship was used" => "The 1966–67 and 1967-68 British Home Championships were used"
- "would qualify for the UEFA Euro 1968" - the Euro 19XX name style was not in use at the time, this should just say 1968 UEFA European Football Championships. Also, this note is missing its full stop.
- Having a webpage covering Scotland's international results as a general ref seems a bit weird
- Think that's it from me..... -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 17:03, 23 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- @ChrisTheDude: Thanks as ever for the review. I've addressed all of the points above. Let me know what you think, cheers. Kosack (talk) 07:40, 24 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Support -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 09:56, 24 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Comments
- Is there a reference for Note b?
- What happened to the usual note saying: "Table information sourced from the references listed in the statistics section below"?
That's all. Nice work. ~ HAL333 17:45, 26 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- @HAL333: Thanks for taking a look. I've amended both points above. Kosack (talk) 07:07, 27 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Support ~ HAL333 14:11, 27 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Comments
- '"Between 1960 and 1979 the side played 132 matches" table starts with match number 234 and ends 351. That's 118 matches inclusive, right? What's not quite right here?
- I also count 31 wins, not 30, but I might have made a mistake because...
- Thanks for spotting those, you're correct on both counts, the numbers were off on. I've found the errors and fixed them. Kosack (talk) 16:58, 27 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- ... I've noticed that you can't sort by wins. I think the Score column should be "hidden sorted" to sort by best win down to worst win, then highest scoring draws down to 0-0's, then least bad loss to worst loss...
- When I started these lists, I used the same format as the existing FLs. At this point, being five lists into a series with only two to go, I'm loathe to be restructuring at this point. Is this likely to be a deal-breaker? Kosack (talk) 16:58, 27 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- The only issue I have is that the lead talks about numbers of wins (hence the comment above), it does seem strange that you can sort by the result that you give in the key, literally no way of sorting the table by "success" which does (in retrospect on the other reviews) seem like an oversight.... The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 17:43, 27 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- When I started these lists, I used the same format as the existing FLs. At this point, being five lists into a series with only two to go, I'm loathe to be restructuring at this point. Is this likely to be a deal-breaker? Kosack (talk) 16:58, 27 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- I think attendance should be right aligned.
- May I ask why? I'm viewing on mobile so spacing issues are always slightly different, but the attendance column appears to match the positioning of the other columns for me? Kosack (talk) 16:58, 27 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- It's just that the numbers, when less than 10,000, look odd to me, numbers like that should really line up units to units. Even centre-alignment would be better than left-aligned. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 17:43, 27 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- May I ask why? I'm viewing on mobile so spacing issues are always slightly different, but the attendance column appears to match the positioning of the other columns for me? Kosack (talk) 16:58, 27 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
That's it but forgive me if I've made some kind of fundamental misunderstanding with the numbers... The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 12:39, 27 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Thanks for the review TRM, I've added comments above. Let me know what you think. Kosack (talk) 16:58, 27 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- @The Rambling Man: I've added the sort function in for the scorelines now but I'm having a little trouble with the centre-alignment of the attendance column. I can't seem to figure if I'm adding it wrong or if the mobile view is causing it to look different. Would you be able to add it to the first listing so I can do the rest in the correct manner? Kosack (talk) 08:35, 2 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- I've done one using the {{center}} template. I think you could probably get away with just doing that for entries less than 10,000! The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 08:37, 2 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- @The Rambling Man: Thanks for the assist. I've added that in for the lower entries, let me know what you think. Kosack (talk) 12:50, 3 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- I've done one using the {{center}} template. I think you could probably get away with just doing that for entries less than 10,000! The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 08:37, 2 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- @The Rambling Man: I've added the sort function in for the scorelines now but I'm having a little trouble with the centre-alignment of the attendance column. I can't seem to figure if I'm adding it wrong or if the mobile view is causing it to look different. Would you be able to add it to the first listing so I can do the rest in the correct manner? Kosack (talk) 08:35, 2 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Thanks for the review TRM, I've added comments above. Let me know what you think. Kosack (talk) 16:58, 27 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Source review — Pass
[edit]- Formatting
- The only thing I notice is "The Rec.Sport.Soccer Statistics Foundation" vs "Rec.Sport.Soccer Statistics Foundation"
- Reliability
- No doubts here
- Verifiability
- Spotchecks not done, though I've spot checked this nominator before
- Pass for source review, with the expectation that the minor comment above will be addressed. Aza24 (talk) 03:46, 12 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Thanks Aza24, I've amended the formatting of the RSSSF refs. Kosack (talk) 15:14, 14 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Support from NapHit
[edit]Only issue I could find is that Italy comes before Iran in the head-to-head table. Other than that, this is an exemplary list and deserves featured status. Nice work. NapHit (talk) 11:24, 2 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Promoting. --PresN 21:55, 8 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
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The list was promoted by PresN via FACBot (talk) 00:27, 9 April 2021 (UTC) [19].[reply]
- Nominator(s):
Bruno Rene Vargas (talk) — Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 01:28, 12 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
I am nominating this for featured list because in my opinion it is well referenced and written. With the help of Some Dude From North Carolina we have joined forces in the creation and writing of the article. Bruno Rene Vargas (talk) 01:28, 12 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Resolved comments from ChrisTheDude (talk) 16:13, 24 February 2021 (UTC)[reply] |
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- Comments from HAL
- Remove the first and third use of "also"
- Would place scope on the film titles.
- In ref 38, just call the work Vulture.
- You should make some sections of the table sortable.
- I despise row span, but that's just my personal preference.
Overall, looks pretty good. ~ HAL333 15:45, 15 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Happy to support. ~ HAL333 01:56, 26 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Support -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 21:16, 17 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Table accessibility review (MOS:DTAB): The tables are missing column and rowscopes, and captions.
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- Each column header should be marked with `scope="col"`, e.g. instead of `! Year` it should be `! scope="col" | Year
- For each row, the 'primary' cell should be marked with `scope="row"`, e.g. instead of `| 1992` it should be `!scope="row"| 1992`. If the way this changes the formatting of that column bothers you, you can add the `plainrowheaders` class to the top of the table at `{| class="wikitable"`
- --PresN 14:43, 2 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- @PresN: All Done. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 21:43, 2 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Still missing rowscopes. --PresN 21:58, 2 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- @PresN: All Done. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 21:43, 2 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Comments from Dank
- Standard disclaimer: I don't know what I'm doing, and I mostly AGF on sourcing.
- I could be wrong, but I think there's an expectation at WP:FLC, among many reviewers at least, that the usual kinds of table columns will be sortable. Look at ... well, the tables in any of the other nominations to see how the coding works. The only tricky part is making sorting work correctly when it doesn't make sense to sort according to the first word ... either use {{sort}} and {{sortname}}, or see my nom (List of plant genera named for people (A–C)) for how to use "data-sort". (Chris and PresN do know what they're doing, and I see they didn't ask for it ... if you'd rather not do it, that's fine, but in general, it will be harder to get reviewers at FLC if you don't, I think.) - Dank (push to talk) 23:37, 4 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- @Dank: Done: Made the tables sortable and added the "sort" template through this edit. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 00:35, 5 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- FLC criteria:
- 1. The prose is fine. I've done a little copyediting; feel free to revert or discuss. I checked sorting on some columns and sampled the links in the tables.
- 2. The lead meets WP:LEAD and defines the inclusion criteria.
- 3a. The list has comprehensive items and annotations.
- 3b. The UPSD tool frowns on Medium.com. Some websites, such as Bloody Disgusting, I'm not qualified to assess. Otherwise, UPSD isn't indicating problems (but this isn't a source review). All relevant retrieval dates are present.
- 3c. The list meets requirements as a stand-alone list, it isn't a content fork, it doesn't largely duplicate another article (that I can find), and it wouldn't fit easily inside another article.
- 4. It is navigable.
- 5. It meets style requirements. The images are great.
- 6. It is stable.
- Qualified Support ... qualified since I'm really not the best guy to assess some of the sources. Well done. (I hope you'll drop by my plant list noms every now and then, but they tend to be long, so don't sweat it.) - Dank (push to talk) 01:24, 5 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Source review passed, promoting. --PresN 21:55, 8 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
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The list was promoted by PresN via FACBot (talk) 00:26, 9 April 2021 (UTC) [20].[reply]
- Nominator(s): MWright96 (talk) 17:45, 10 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
This list is about the 71 seasons of the FIA Formula One World Championship that have been held thus far. I have redone this list and hope that it meets the necessary criteria to become a featured list. Looking forward to all comments in this review. MWright96 (talk) 17:45, 10 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Comments
- "a series of races, known as Grands Prix, held usually on purpose-built circuits, and in a few cases on closed city streets,[4] the most prestigious of which is the Monaco Grand Prix in Monte Carlo" - wording is ambiguous as to whether Monte Carlo is the most prestigious of the street GPs or of all GPS, might be worth clarifying
- Note a - might be worth adding a few words to explain why
- Think that's it from me - great work! -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 08:51, 11 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- @ChrisTheDude: Have made the appropriate changes MWright96 (talk) 09:32, 11 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Apologies, but "Grands Prix, held usually on purpose-built circuits, and in a few cases on closed city streets, the most prestigious event of the year which is the Monaco Grand Prix" doesn't really make sense gramatically. Assuming that you mean that Monte Carlo is the most prestigious of the street GPs specifically, I would suggest "Grands Prix, held usually on purpose-built circuits, and in a few cases on closed city streets; the most prestigious of the street circuits is the Monaco Grand Prix" -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 09:44, 11 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- @ChrisTheDude: Made the change MWright96 (talk) 09:48, 11 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- @ChrisTheDude: Have made the appropriate changes MWright96 (talk) 09:32, 11 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Support -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 10:01, 11 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Comments from HumanBodyPiloter5
[edit]- No image illustrating the article, although it's unclear what image one would use. Possibly a picture of a 1950 Formula One car alongside a 2020 Formula One car?
- Needs a go over with regards to MOS:NUMBER.
- Made changes in this regard MWright96 (talk) 21:28, 11 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Opening statement is potentially contentious. Qualifying that you mean world championship seasons specifically in the first sentence may be worthwhile.
- Not familiar with ChicaneF1 as a source. I see that it is used on some FA-class Formula One related articles however. Will assume in good faith that it's a reliable source unless someone wants to challenge that.
- A secondary/independent source on the FIA stuff may be prefereable but isn't really necessary as it's not a contentious statement to someone who knows about the subject.
- Have replaced the FIA source with a secondary reference in AtlasF1 and have made clarifications with it MWright96 (talk) 11:53, 28 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- ESPN source backs up the potentially contentious nature of the opening statement, as it suggests that the first Formula One season may have been in 1946 (although some sources will say 1947 or 1948) with 1950 being the first world championship season. The ESPN source is somewhat ambiguous on the matter, to the degree that it might look self-contradictary to someone without background knowledge.
- Clarified MWright96 (talk) 13:48, 12 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- The ESPN source does back up the statement that preceeds it although the wording is rather close to the source. Also I just know it's correct anyway.
- Reworded to make it less close to the source MWright96 (talk) 10:00, 28 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- You may want to add a "not a typo" template to uses of "Grands Prix" since occasionally drive-by editors/bots try to correct it to "Grand Prixs" or "Grand Prix".
- Can't access book source (ISBN 0-75258-766-8) but the statement is uncontentious so I'll take it on good faith.
- I would change "
the most prestigious of the street circuits is the Monaco Grand Prix held in Monte Carlo
" to say "the most prestigous of the street races is the Monaco Grand Prix
" as the circuit is the Circuit de Monaco and I'm not sure if it's necessary to specify Monte Carlo here. Source is behind a paywall but the statement isn't contentious so I'll take it on good faith. - We know that the minimum number was eight in 2020. It presumably wasn't in 1950 when there were less than eight races. Some sort of "as of" qualifier may make this clearer. Source checks out.
- 2020 only visited Europe and Asia so a statement regarding force majeure may be worthwhile here. Similarly 1950 only had races in Europe and North America.
- Explanatory footnote regarding the Indianapolis 500 may be sensible when talking about the number of Grands Prix in a season. If I wanted to be pedantic then I'd argue in favour of using the term "Grandes Épreuves" in the footnote but it's probably not necessary.
- Included MWright96 (talk) 21:28, 11 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- A secondary source which shows that the rules have always been as they are in the current regulations may be preferable to using the 2020 sporting regulations as a primary source, but again the statements being sourced are not contentious ones.
- Replaced FIA source with a secondary academic journal source MWright96 (talk) 09:28, 28 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Telegraph source has limited access. Statement is in no way contentious though.
- Added mention the source is behind a paywall MWright96 (talk) 10:00, 28 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- "
Different car make/engine combinations
" is a slightly awkward wording. Personally I would word this as "different combinations of car and engine makes
" or "different combinations of chassis and engine makes
".- Reworded MWright96 (talk) 21:28, 11 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Explanatory footnote regarding the 1981 changes may be worthwhile (particularly regarding the Constructors' Championship), provided a source can be found.
- Another book source I can't access (ISBN 0-946132-63-1), but I will take it on good faith as to my knowledge based off of other sources I've read in the past the statement is true.
- Forix/8W lists European Champions alongside World Champions. Not massively relevant to this article but I do think a mention of the status of the World Drivers' Championship as the effective successor to the pre-Second World War European Driver's Championship may be warranted, provided suitable sourcing is available.
- I agree that "
a total of 1,035 Formula One World Championship races have been held
" is the clearest wording for the average reader. Again a footnote somewhere explaining the somewhat convoluted history of the World Championship may be warranted, but it shouldn't be given undue weight lest it prove distracting and confusing. - Checking the stats against sources they all seem correct.
- I think it would be better to say that "
Over 71 seasons there have been 33 participants from 14 different nationalities who have won the World Drivers' Championship. Over 63 seasons there have been 15 teams representing 5 individual nations that have claimed the World Constructors' Championship.
" than the current phrasing, which puts the "71 seasons" statistic nearer to the Constructors. - The list itself is a little on the bare side. I understand that there's a fine balancing act to manage between not including enough information and bombarding the reader with confusing miscellanea, but maybe some information about when the first and last race of each season was held and how many countries held races in each season would be appropriate, providing it can be sourced.
- Added first and last races of each season to the table MWright96 (talk) 09:56, 12 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Have now added how many countries staged Grands Prix each season MWright96 (talk) 11:53, 28 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Added first and last races of each season to the table MWright96 (talk) 09:56, 12 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Unsure if it's correct to say that McLaren had 15 points deducted at the 2007 Hungarian Grand Prix as to my knowledge they were never awarded those points to begin with. The source given appears to align with my belief.
- Reworded MWright96 (talk) 21:28, 11 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- There's nothing major keeping this from featured status. It needs a little bit more work but if that gets done then I'd happily support this gaining the status.
- @HumanBodyPiloter5: Have made various changes to the list MWright96 (talk) 13:48, 12 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- HumanBodyPiloter5 (talk) 15:28, 11 February 2021 (UTC)HumanBodyPiloter5 (talk) 16:00, 11 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- @HumanBodyPiloter5: I think I have addressed your concerns appropriately. Let me know if there is anything else that needs addressing. MWright96 (talk) 11:53, 28 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Comments from Gerald Waldo Luis
[edit]Piece of cake: comments resolved, striked to support.
- First sentence is hard to navigate. The "the highest class" fragment follows "Formula 1", so it's safe to assume that F1 is "the highest class of open wheeled auto racing defined by the Fédération Internationale de l'Automobile (FIA)." Then there's "motorsport's world governing body". Mind explaining the structure of this sentence?
- "This can be declared invalid if the FIA grants F1 an waiver for its "long‐established use of the word “World”." Should be ended with an end-quote. Per MOS, replace the curvies with apostrophes (').
- "Different combinations of chassis and engine makes are considered to be different constructors for the purposes of the Championship. Constructors' Championship points are calculated by adding points scored in each race by any driver for that constructor." Duplicate use of ref 11.
- "as determined by a points system based on Grand Prix results." Duplicate points system link there. GeraldWL 07:38, 18 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- "for F1 Manufacturers in 1958 and its current name"-- I'd have a comma there, to be "for F1 Manufacturers in 1958, and its current name".
- The header "Races" has ref 13. But below the table there is a sources footer. Should it be rather placed there instead?
- Recommend adding portals, and if a relevant Wikimedia Commons category exist, that's worth a link too, using Template:Commons-category inline.
That's all I have on this article. Well-composed, overall. As a short Image review, all have suitable license, appropriate captions, and have alt texts. GeraldWL 07:38, 18 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- @Gerald Waldo Luis: Have made changes according to the queries mentioned above. What else needs addressing? MWright96 (talk) 10:06, 18 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Comments Support from WA8MTWAYC
[edit]- "World Championship" is written with and without capital letters throughout the lead - is it with (World Championship) or without (world championship)?
- The former MWright96 (talk) 05:50, 29 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Almost all online sources are archived (which is good). Are you going to update some of the archived sources after each completed season, such as the first one?
- It's a fine list. WA8MTWAYC (talk) 21:00, 28 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- @WA8MTWAYC: Have made the appropriate changes to the list MWright96 (talk) 05:50, 29 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Support WA8MTWAYC (talk) 07:36, 29 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- @WA8MTWAYC: Have made the appropriate changes to the list MWright96 (talk) 05:50, 29 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
@HumanBodyPiloter5 and Gerald Waldo Luis: Have your comments been addressed to your satisfaction?
- I believe so. HumanBodyPiloter5 (talk) 17:08, 31 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Also: please note the table in this list does not meet WP:ACCESS requirements. Specifically: the cells of the primary (first) column should be tagged with scope="row", e.g. instead of `|align="center"| 1950` it should be `!scope="row" align="center"| 1950`; if you don't like the way that changes the formatting of the first column change `{|class="wikitable sortable"` to `{|class="wikitable sortable plainrowheaders"` at the top. --PresN 16:41, 31 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Comments Support from NapHit
[edit]- 'and it can be declared a World Championship if the series visits at least 3 continents in that season according to the International Sporting Code.' change to 'The season can be declared a World Championship if the series visits at least 3 continents in that season according to the International Sporting Code.'
- 'Over 63 seasons, 15 teams representing 5 individual nations that have claimed the World Constructors' Championship with Ferrari ...' I think that is redundant here and there should be a comma after Championship.
- Instead of having the sources at the bottom of the table, I'd include them next to the header at the top of the table.
- This one is more of a personal preference, but I'd group the book references into a bibliography rather than put them together with the rest of the links. Looks cleaner to me and it's easier to see what book sources are used.
- I also concur with @PresN's suggestion above.
Great list! Just a few fixes and this one should be close to receiving the chequered flag! NapHit (talk) 11:22, 1 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- @NapHit: Have made changes to the list according to the queries raised above MWright96 (talk) 13:44, 1 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Made a few changes, to fix the bold issue, but other than that, the list in great shape and meets the criteria! Fine work! NapHit (talk) 11:07, 2 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Source review passed, promoting. --PresN 21:55, 8 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
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- Nominator(s): RunningTiger123 (talk) 03:54, 30 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
In Mad Men's pilot, Don Draper notes that "advertising is based on one thing — happiness." Unfortunately, I can't come up with such a concise and elegant quip to explain the show to others, but what I can do – and what I've done – is bring this list up to FL standard to properly list its accolades so that others can better understand its achievements. The work I did was modeled on my West Wing FL nomination, taking this from an average page to what I believe is my best FL nominee to date. As always, any and all comments are appreciated. RunningTiger123 (talk) 03:54, 30 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Comment - literally the only thing I could pick up on was.....if the awards are in alphabetical order, shouldn't the Primetime Creative Arts Emmys come before the Primetime Emmys.....? -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 15:55, 30 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- I wanted the Creative Arts Emmys to be separate since they're awarded at a separate ceremony, but I also thought the major Emmy awards should be listed first (kind of like the awards for Game of Thrones, though that one is admittedly different given its length and that the Emmys are in a separate table). In other words, if I had combined the major and Creative Arts Emmys, I would have still put the series, acting, writing, and directing awards first, and I wanted to keep that order after splitting the two. If you think it would be better to swap them, I'd be happy to do it. RunningTiger123 (talk) 16:20, 30 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- No, that makes sense, happy to support -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 16:20, 30 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- I wanted the Creative Arts Emmys to be separate since they're awarded at a separate ceremony, but I also thought the major Emmy awards should be listed first (kind of like the awards for Game of Thrones, though that one is admittedly different given its length and that the Emmys are in a separate table). In other words, if I had combined the major and Creative Arts Emmys, I would have still put the series, acting, writing, and directing awards first, and I wanted to keep that order after splitting the two. If you think it would be better to swap them, I'd be happy to do it. RunningTiger123 (talk) 16:20, 30 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Support Found nothing. ~ HAL333 21:39, 3 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Table accessibility review (MOS:DTAB): The table is missing a caption.
- Please add `|+ table caption` to the top of the table, or if it would duplicate a nearby section header you can visually hide the caption as `|+ {{sronly|table caption}}`
- --PresN 14:50, 2 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Should be done – let me know if it needs to be changed, I'm not an expert with this. RunningTiger123 (talk) 16:43, 2 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Comments from Dank
- Standard disclaimer: I don't know what I'm doing, and I mostly AGF on sourcing.
- The table caption is fine (though some would remove the words from the title of this list).
- FLC criteria:
- 1. The prose is fine. I checked sorting on several columns in the table and sampled the redirects in the table; everything looks fine.
- 2. The lead meets WP:LEAD and defines the inclusion criteria.
- 3a. The list has comprehensive items and annotations.
- 3b. The article is well-sourced to reliable sources, and the UPSD tool isn't indicating any problems (but this isn't a source review). All relevant retrieval dates are present.
- 3c. The list meets requirements as a stand-alone list, it isn't a content fork, it doesn't largely duplicate another article (that I can find), and it wouldn't fit easily inside another article.
- 4. It is navigable.
- 5. It meets style requirements. The one image isn't a copyright problem, per the "originality" criterion.
- 6. It is stable.
- Support. Well done. (I hope you'll drop by my plant list noms every now and then, but if not, not a problem. They tend to be long.) - Dank (push to talk) 22:28, 4 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Source review passed, promoting. --PresN 21:55, 8 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
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- Nominator(s): 6ii9 (talk) 00:28, 20 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
I am nominating this for featured list because it contains a full list of official matches played by the Gibraltar national football team since their acceptance into UEFA that I believe meets the FL criteria. The matches are grouped by the years they were played making it easy to navigate. As they started in 2013 there will be no need to split the article for a few years yet. Each entry is comprehensively detailed and referenced (one ref tag and a link to an external match report).
It is my first time nominating an article for featured status but I am prepared to do what I can. I did get the article peer reviewed first where Aza24 was kindly able to help. I look forward to the responses. — 6ii9 (talk) 00:28, 20 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Comments
Resolved comments from ChrisTheDude (talk) 11:41, 20 January 2021 (UTC)[reply] |
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*"It's governing body" => "Its governing body" (it's means "it is")
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- Any reason why the list format is totally different to existing similar FLs, such as the recently-promoted Wales national football team results (1946–1959)? -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 08:32, 20 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- An advantage to using the football box template is it allows more information to be included (similar to the Faroe Islands results list that is currently an FL). If it is needed to be in table form I can convert. --6ii9 (talk) 10:43, 20 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- That list was promoted ten years ago, so doesn't necessarily indicate current consensus. I'll leave this out here to see what other people think....... -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 11:41, 20 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- WikiProject Football has its own manual of style, and looking at this section, it seems that the accepted way to list match results is with those templates. Also, I quickly scanned through similar lists in Category:National association football team results by team, and everything I saw as I scanned through them (minus the Welsh lists) uses that formatting, so I'm pretty much certain it's the standard. It does mean there is no sorting functionality, but I'm personally okay with it because it allows much more information to be included about individual matches that would either disappear or be awkwardly included in a list like the Welsh lists. RunningTiger123 (talk) 17:54, 20 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- While the collapsible format seems to have become the most prevalent, this is likely due to the majority being mass produced by a minority of editors. The most recent discussion at WP:FOOTBALL largely suggested that the table format is actually more favourable as it is far more inline with WP:ACCESS. Kosack (talk) 20:10, 22 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- WikiProject Football has its own manual of style, and looking at this section, it seems that the accepted way to list match results is with those templates. Also, I quickly scanned through similar lists in Category:National association football team results by team, and everything I saw as I scanned through them (minus the Welsh lists) uses that formatting, so I'm pretty much certain it's the standard. It does mean there is no sorting functionality, but I'm personally okay with it because it allows much more information to be included about individual matches that would either disappear or be awkwardly included in a list like the Welsh lists. RunningTiger123 (talk) 17:54, 20 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- That list was promoted ten years ago, so doesn't necessarily indicate current consensus. I'll leave this out here to see what other people think....... -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 11:41, 20 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- An advantage to using the football box template is it allows more information to be included (similar to the Faroe Islands results list that is currently an FL). If it is needed to be in table form I can convert. --6ii9 (talk) 10:43, 20 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Support - while my personal preference would be for the article not to contain dozens of collapsible templates, if it is deemed an acceptable format I am not going to oppose based on that..... -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 08:22, 22 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Support - Eliko007 (talk) 09:41, 22 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Opposeper Kosack's comment, I'm going to have to oppose on the tables. The collapsible tables may allow you to contain more information, but they do not meet WP:ACCESS. Users who need screen readers to use Wikipedia will not be able to read the page as well as users who are normal sighted. Kosack links to the discussion at WP:FOOTY which suggests that the tables used in the Wales ar preferable because they meet MOS:DTT and WP:ACCESS. Unfortunately, as long as those tables are in use, I can't support the promotion of this list. NapHit (talk) 13:01, 24 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Table looks in much better shape now, struck my oppose based on that. I think the key needs to be in a table too. Look at the Wales lists for an example. I am concerned about the references though. Firstly you need to use en dashes instead of the standard dashes for scorelines. Ref 13 is an example. Secondly, it's questionable whether some of the references are reliable or not. What makes yourgilbraltartv and footballgibraltar.wordpress.com reliable? NapHit (talk) 11:31, 9 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Alot of work has gone into the list since this comment. The sources have been replaced and I've gone through and fixed the dash issue. Happy to support now. NapHit (talk) 11:17, 2 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- @NapHit: Sorry I missed your original comments. Also thank you for sorting the dash issue. --6ii9 (talk) 14:10, 2 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Alot of work has gone into the list since this comment. The sources have been replaced and I've gone through and fixed the dash issue. Happy to support now. NapHit (talk) 11:17, 2 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Table looks in much better shape now, struck my oppose based on that. I think the key needs to be in a table too. Look at the Wales lists for an example. I am concerned about the references though. Firstly you need to use en dashes instead of the standard dashes for scorelines. Ref 13 is an example. Secondly, it's questionable whether some of the references are reliable or not. What makes yourgilbraltartv and footballgibraltar.wordpress.com reliable? NapHit (talk) 11:31, 9 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Oppose- Looking through the article, I do think that the table format is suitable in this featured list scenario as WP:ACCESS is a massive issue from this getting past the featured list challenge. I also do think that adding the cards is a bit of an overkill as you don't see many other articles (if any) in the national results section have the cards as well as the goals.
- In terms of prose, I do feel its fine except the last three sentences in the prose as why is that needed here as that doesn't relate to the article either. HawkAussie (talk) 23:24, 24 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- I have rewrote the final paragraph to remove the sentences unrelated to the article. --6ii9 (talk) 15:26, 26 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Looking through, you have improved this a lot more better to switch my vote into a support HawkAussie (talk) 01:51, 4 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- I have rewrote the final paragraph to remove the sentences unrelated to the article. --6ii9 (talk) 15:26, 26 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Comment - I have now converted the collapsible boxes into a table. --6ii9 (talk) 15:26, 26 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Quick comments –
Not sure if anyone else is having this problem, but on my computer the score column cells are black-colored, which doesn't appear to be the intention and makes it hard for me to read the scores. I suggest changing the formatting to be like the Wales list linked above, as the colors appear without issue for me on that page.- @Giants2008: I do not have this issue. I have looked at the Wales list above and cannot see why that one renders correctly for you but this one does not. I can only assume it is the colours being used. 6ii9 (talk) 15:00, 7 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- I've made this table comparing the colours used in each of the lists. Are any of these cells rendering as black-coloured? --6ii9 (talk) 15:13, 7 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- For me, the Gibralter win and loss cells, and the Wales draw cell, are black. Giants2008 (Talk) 22:08, 16 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- I've used the colours that should now stop rendering as black. --6ii9 (talk) 13:13, 18 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- For me, the Gibralter win and loss cells, and the Wales draw cell, are black. Giants2008 (Talk) 22:08, 16 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- I've made this table comparing the colours used in each of the lists. Are any of these cells rendering as black-coloured? --6ii9 (talk) 15:13, 7 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- @Giants2008: I do not have this issue. I have looked at the Wales list above and cannot see why that one renders correctly for you but this one does not. I can only assume it is the colours being used. 6ii9 (talk) 15:00, 7 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Note b needs "to" before "the coronavirus pandemic."Giants2008 (Talk) 22:21, 6 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]- I have added the missing "to" in note b. --6ii9 (talk) 14:58, 7 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Comments
- "which was rejected" on what grounds?
- Added --6ii9 (talk) 14:44, 28 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- "for full membership" was partial membership a thing?
- Corrected --6ii9 (talk) 14:44, 28 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- "friendlies" link.
- Moved the link to the first mention of "friendlies" in the intro. --6ii9 (talk) 14:44, 28 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- "in Faro/Loulé," this is odd so I'd explain it a tiny bit.
- Added --6ii9 (talk) 14:44, 28 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- " in Faro/Loulé, Portugal which " comma after portugal.
- Added --6ii9 (talk) 14:44, 28 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- "which became their official debut." Gibraltar's official debut.
- Corrected --6ii9 (talk) 14:44, 28 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Probably worth noting in the lead how it ended.
- Added --6ii9 (talk) 14:44, 28 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- "Gibraltar entered its first major international competition:" how did it go?
- Added --6ii9 (talk) 14:44, 28 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- " joint largest victory" I'm not sure 1-0 and 2-1 are equitable here, and in any case, it's the minimal "winning margin" possible!
- On the Gibraltar national football team article's infobox, it lists the 1–0s and the 2–1 as their biggest wins. Indeed it is the minimal winning margin but Gibraltar have failed to win by more than one goal yet. --6ii9 (talk) 14:44, 28 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- I think the Att column should be right-aligned.
- Done --6ii9 (talk) 14:44, 28 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- "Gibraltar scorers" also "time of goal".
- Added --6ii9 (talk) 14:44, 28 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Check all the sources for "behind closed doors" actually mention it. E.g. ref 59 for match 47 doesn't mention attendance at all.
- The attendances are covered in the statistics within the reference section, the note on the main table header says "table information sourced from the references listed in the statistics section below". --6ii9 (talk) 14:44, 28 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Score column sorts peculiarly, I'd expect it to start with "best wins" then go through draws to "worst losses".
- At the moment it sorts by the number of goals scored by Gibraltar (then by the numbers of goals they conceded). Would it make more sense to sort by the result of the match (i.e. sort by wins, then draws, and then losses)? --6ii9 (talk) 14:44, 28 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Thinking about this, what if we added an extra column for the results, i.e. Win, Draw or Loss. Then this can be sorted to show all the wins together, all the draws and all the losses? --6ii9 (talk) 15:49, 26 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- At the moment it sorts by the number of goals scored by Gibraltar (then by the numbers of goals they conceded). Would it make more sense to sort by the result of the match (i.e. sort by wins, then draws, and then losses)? --6ii9 (talk) 14:44, 28 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Are the flags necessary?
- I believe flags are necessary (MOS:FLAG), they are always used when football teams are listed (including in featured lists) . --6ii9 (talk) 14:44, 28 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Compare ref 2 BBC Sport with ref 3 BBC Sport format.
- Corrected --6ii9 (talk) 14:44, 28 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Scorelines in ref titles should be en-dashes.
- Corrected --6ii9 (talk) 14:44, 28 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- FIFA.com or FIFA?
- Used FIFA --6ii9 (talk) 14:44, 28 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Link publishers always or not?
- Linked publishers where they have articles. Can remove all links if needed. --6ii9 (talk) 14:44, 28 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- TheGuardian.com or The Guardian?
- Used The Guardian --6ii9 (talk) 14:44, 28 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Avoid using Daily Mirror. Not particularly RS.
- Replaced --6ii9 (talk) 14:44, 28 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
That's a quick pass. Cheers. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 22:41, 26 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Quick skim on sources:
- what makes yourgilbraltartv and footballgibraltar.wordpress.com reliable sources? They appear to be minor blogs
- Replaced them both --6ii9 (talk) 21:13, 1 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Also not recognizing CaughtOffside
- Replaced --6ii9 (talk) 21:13, 1 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- El Pais isn't link, and one link to Eurosport is malformed
- Added link to the former and fixed the link to the latter --6ii9 (talk) 21:13, 1 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
- Spotchecks not done
--PresN 16:18, 31 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
I went ahead and changed the sorting of the score column to go win-draw-loss based on what the Wales national football team results (1960–1979) FLC is doing; revert if you dislike. In either case, source review passed, promoting. --PresN 21:55, 8 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
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