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February 2020

 Partly done Cleanup, removed many of the duplicate hyperlinks in this overlinked article. -- WildStar talk 18:52, 12 April 2020 (UTC)
 Partly done Editing for tone/clarity, removing information about armor in Ancient Warfare#Weapons MoominGenesisEVA (talk) 23:43, 16 January 2021 (UTC)

March 2020

 Partly done by MarialeegRVT and MiasmaEternal. Rosalina2427 (talk) 18:04, 1 July 2020 (UTC)

April 2020

  •  Comment: @Tetrahedron17: Despite being a lengthy article, much (but not all) of it is well-cited. The request above will require extensive copy editing, along with a cleanup editor willing to take what could be a fair amount of time to first learn a great deal about the novel before before embarking upon reducing the article. It is possible that the accommodation of this extensive request may not come into fruition here. Ultimately, this request, relative to the article, would be better suited for WP:GOCER, in my opinion. North America1000 18:11, 29 June 2020 (UTC)
 Done cleaned up, even added more refs. Less Unless (talk) 14:11, 21 April 2021 (UTC)

May 2020

  • Hunter (video game) - A 1991 video game using procedurally generated 3D graphics. The gameplay & reception sections read as being written by a fan, and gameplay appears as original research due to this and the lack of inline citations in it. I've already done some work on this article in improving its citations to have archive.org links and such. Waxworker (talk) 18:47, 31 May 2020 (UTC)
 Partly done I cleaned up the language, removed some of the advertising, and cut out needless quotes. Probably still needs another pass.Arigatō tokoro (talk) 10:17, 7 March 2021 (UTC)
 Partly done converted urls, marked 1 as dead Less Unless (talk) 12:58, 24 May 2020 (UTC)
 Comment: Struck part of the nomination above. The article presently has no bare urls, and this project no longer accepts requests for the addition of citations. North America1000 23:42, 11 January 2021 (UTC)
 Partly done - Fixed bare URLs -- WILDSTAR talk 06:35, 21 May 2020 (UTC)

June 2020

 Done Less Unless (talk) 19:17, 4 June 2021 (UTC)
 Partly done Cleaned up part of the web series section, which has the most issues. Rosalina2427 (talk to me) 18:53, 17 June 2020 (UTC)
 Partly done Corrected grammar, made formatting more consistent (and added tables), removed irrelevant details. Ashpie007 (talk) 19:36, 12 January 2021 (UTC)
 Not done As the article cites no sources, and I don't seem to be able to find anything better, I've nominated it for deletion. PJvanMill (talk) 22:20, 19 June 2020 (UTC)
Deletion discussion is going to be a keep. Should have looked better. PJvanMill (talk) 14:15, 21 June 2020 (UTC)
  • Chiller (video game) - A controversial 1986 light gun arcade game wherein the player takes the role of a torturer; the game's notible for its gore. Possible original research, and the article needs more citations; i've already removed some citations from unprofessional sources such as blogs. Waxworker (talk) 02:21, 7 June 2020 (UTC)
     Done - changes for additional citations, original research, and tone were made through these edits by Catttte. Corresponding maintenance tags were also removed. Just for reference, requests for additional sources or citations are usually out of the scope of this WikiProject. Aranya (talk) 02:11, 23 June 2021 (UTC)
  • Bolo (1987 video game) - A 1987 multiplayer tank strategy game, and an early game with networking capabilities. Uncited fancruft, and the articles only sources are two primary sources from the creator of the Macintosh port of the game. Waxworker (talk) 01:23, 3 June 2020 (UTC)
     Partly done I've found a secondary source, which is in "Further reading" for now. I've removed most of the fancruft. It still needs a lot more citations, but many claims in the article could be backed up adequately by a primary source. PJvanMill (talk) 19:12, 5 June 2020 (UTC)
     Done as the remaining concerns (that is, sourcing) are not really cleanup work. PJvanMill)talk( 22:13, 19 May 2021 (UTC)
  • List of warez groups - A list of warez groups, which publish pirated/cracked content. This article has a serious issue: the site 'defacto2' is used extensively throughout the article, but the site is now usurped and links to straight-up malware that MalwareBytes identifies as a trojan. Many of the links are permanent dead links as well. Waxworker (talk) 01:26, 1 June 2020 (UTC)
 Not done per recent changes the project doesn't deal with referencing. Less Unless (talk) 20:46, 4 May 2021 (UTC)
Less Unless I've unstruck this one - per the discussion, this project is not for adding sources and references, but problems with existing sources are within scope. Kind regards from PJvanMill)talk( 21:07, 16 May 2021 (UTC)

July 2020

 Partly done I mostly rewrote the article due to major bias issues and a lot of unsourced material. I'll probably continue working on it for a bit longer. Would appreciate feedback! Thanks, Ovinus (talk) 20:25, 23 July 2020 (UTC)
 Partly done references with bare URLs, minor spelling error, additional contributions by PJvanMill, Northamerica1000, and others. — WILDSTARtalk 04:09, 24 July 2020 (UTC)
 Partly done I think references require subscriptions so unable to access them to change them in line with Wiki citing Anuthys (talk) 18:04, 18 May 2021 (UTC)
 Done by multiple users. Less Unless (talk) 22:06, 16 July 2021 (UTC)

August 2020

Strawberryfire and AussieWikiDan: this project generally does not add more sources to articles. I've struck that part of both of your requests. Kind regards from PJvanMill)talk( 21:49, 28 August 2020 (UTC)
 Partly done fixed footnotes, minor grammar changes Seyasoya (talk) 6:25, 18 August 2020 (UTC)
 Partly done - Minor layout/format fixes, fixed error in quote, fixed references with citation errors. — WILDSTARtalk 16:52, 23 November 2020 (UTC)
information Note: Struck part of the nomination above, because this project does not accept requests for additional sources. North America1000 02:08, 13 August 2020 (UTC)

Addressed entries

 Fixed here. Sections Social scientists and Comedians and satirists had unclosed {{div col}}s. 🐈 cAtte_ · talk · contributions · 06:44, 1 March 2021 (UTC)
 Partly done filled some bare URLs. Added a cleanup tag ("Lead too long"). --Bbarmadillo (talk) 20:44, 19 February 2021 (UTC)
  • Struck the above entry. The article presently has no bare urls, and the "Lead too long" tag denoted above was never added to the article. Rather, the linkrot tag was added (diff), which has been addressed. North America1000 17:33, 23 February 2021 (UTC)
@Northamerica1000: Oh, well, the tag existed (check this version), but I do agree with your judgement on the article. :) --Bbarmadillo (talk) 21:29, 24 February 2021 (UTC)
 Done Not by me but three other editors, who have fixed formatting and blue-linked to the extent possible. ---DOOMSDAYER520 (TALK|CONTRIBS) 01:20, 21 February 2021 (UTC)
 Done Less Unless (talk) 20:02, 17 February 2021 (UTC)
  • Susana Boomhouwer - Dutch trance music vocalist. Promotional, over-detailed, contains unreliable sources, lots of unreferenced trivia, too many links at "External links" section. I was the one to nominate this one for the deletion, so will stay away from it. --Bbarmadillo (talk) 19:21, 15 February 2021 (UTC)
 Done - Though her stage name is simply "Susana" and that may need to be the title of the article (with disambiguation). ---DOOMSDAYER520 (TALK|CONTRIBS) 01:52, 21 February 2021 (UTC)
I decided to do that move myself; the article is now at Susana (singer). ---DOOMSDAYER520 (TALK|CONTRIBS) 23:00, 21 February 2021 (UTC)
 Not done This article was turned into a redirect, seemingly in the spirit of WP:TNT. PJvanMill)talk( 21:29, 16 February 2021 (UTC)
information Note: the problem is not the number of templates, and removing random templates does not help. I've determined that the problem is with one template specifically, the map. The map template contains around 70 KB data, but somehow the template and/or Lua magic makes it exceed the include size limit of 2048 KB. I'm trying to figure out how this is happening. PJvanMill)talk( 19:32, 8 February 2021 (UTC)
(Pinging Tinton5 & Northamerica1000, who've been contributing to the article) If I've understood things correctly, it is mostly due to the size being double-counted for every nested level of transclusion (not completely sure it's only levels of transclusion), and also the relevant size is (I think?) the size of what's generated by the Lua module from the data, which seems to be considerably bigger than the 70 KB starting data. PJvanMill)talk( 20:50, 8 February 2021 (UTC)
 Fixed. @Tinton5 and PJvanMill: Fixed transclusion errors by substituting a summary map in the article, with a link to interactive the map. Of note is that other similar articles are having the same problem, as denoted at Talk:George Floyd protests in New Jersey. North America1000 12:00, 18 February 2021 (UTC)
 Done ---DOOMSDAYER520 (TALK|CONTRIBS) 02:28, 21 February 2021 (UTC)
 Done by MarnetteD. Less Unless (talk) 09:00, 19 March 2021 (UTC)
 Done Less Unless (talk) 08:57, 19 March 2021 (UTC)
 Done Less Unless (talk) 20:17, 18 March 2021 (UTC)
 Done. Less Unless (talk) 16:19, 19 March 2021 (UTC)
 Done Less Unless (talk) 20:23, 18 March 2021 (UTC)
 Done I have left several redirects to the articles with substantial amount of information about the golf clubs or courses. Less Unless (talk) 20:17, 12 March 2021 (UTC)
 Done by editors who have worked on the page before. MarnetteD|Talk 02:15, 10 March 2021 (UTC)
 Done Less Unless (talk) 19:09, 12 March 2021 (UTC)
 Done Less Unless (talk) 18:56, 12 March 2021 (UTC)
 Done by ThinkHat. Less Unless (talk) 09:16, 13 April 2021 (UTC)
 Done Less Unless (talk) 14:49, 13 April 2021 (UTC)
 Done ThinkHat (talk) 14:42, 13 April 2021 (UTC)
 Done Less Unless (talk) 12:14, 9 April 2021 (UTC)
 Done ThinkHat (talk) 14:50, 6 April 2021 (UTC)
 Done Less Unless (talk) 10:17, 5 April 2021 (UTC)
 Done Less Unless (talk) 10:17, 5 April 2021 (UTC)
 Done Less Unless (talk) 10:17, 5 April 2021 (UTC)
 Partly done there are 2 webarchive snapshots I can't convert as I don't read Chinese. Less Unless (talk) 15:01, 3 April 2021 (UTC)
 Done by Bbarmadillo. --Bbarmadillo (talk) 06:16, 3 April 2021 (UTC)
 Done converted bare urls, improved other things.Less Unless (talk) 14:32, 3 April 2021 (UTC)
 Done by Wikiminds34. Less Unless (talk) 09:37, 30 March 2021 (UTC)
 Done - moved excessive but reliable refs to further reading, addressed other issues.Less Unless (talk) 13:09, 30 March 2021 (UTC)
 Done Less Unless (talk) 23:50, 25 March 2021 (UTC)
 Done Less Unless (talk) 23:50, 25 March 2021 (UTC)
 Done - Cleaned up what I could. This project does not expand articles.ThinkHat (talk) 14:52, 3 April 2021 (UTC)
 Done Fixed. -- Bbarmadillo (talk) 18:32, 24 March 2021 (UTC)
 Done By Less Unless and ThinkHat (talk) 15:04, 3 April 2021 (UTC)
 Done collective effort of many editors. Less Unless (talk) 12:26, 9 April 2021 (UTC)
 Done ThinkHat (talk) 15:15, 3 April 2021 (UTC)
  • Afternoon of a Faun (Robbins) - 1958 ballet. Revival and other companies sections are unreferenced and has formatting issues, should be either removed or reformatted. There had been revivals every few years and the ballet is performed by many companies so my stance is to remove the two sections. Corachow (talk) 16:08, 4 June 2020 (UTC)
 Partly done - Formatting done by myself and Corachow. Ghostofakina (talk) 19:40, 4 June 2020 (UTC)
 Done Formatting and other issues were addressed by the above mentioned users, the revival section was removed, as for the moment the article looks fine. Less Unless (talk) 21:13, 16 April 2021 (UTC)
 Partly done - I put the revival section in a table to fix the formatting and found one reference naming members of the original cast but this section needs more references Miriumjenkins (talk) 16:52, 4 June 2020 (UTC)
 Done the mentioned section was removed by Corachow, the article looks fine now. Less Unless (talk) 21:10, 16 April 2021 (UTC)
  • Christine Shevchenko - Ukrainian-American ballet dancer. The page has many unreliable sources, mainly from blogs and forums, had been cleaned up twice before but was added again, with the unreliable source tag removed by the editor who place those sources back. Also some tone issues in the career section. Corachow (talk) 03:40, 2 June 2020 (UTC)
 Partly done Cleaned up sources again. Details may need condensing. ThinkHat (talk) 16:28, 3 June 2020 (UTC)
  • Thanks, I actually think the career section can be expanded a little bit, considering her accomplishments, but the early life section has to be trimmed. My earlier attempts had been removed. Corachow (talk) 00:46, 4 June 2020 (UTC)
 Partly done I cleaned up some grammar and made some details more concise, removing a few I deemed irrelevant. Not sure if more fixing is desired. If no more is, consider this page done. Triethylborane (talk) 17:21, 12 June 2020 (UTC)
 Done. I've done some minor improvements, the article looks fine to me at the moment after the collective effort. Less Unless (talk) 16:59, 16 April 2021 (UTC)
information Note: - Article was under deletion review but has since been restored. Ghostofakina (talk) 22:21, 16 June 2020 (UTC)
 Done the article looks fine now after the collective effort. Less Unless (talk) 21:19, 16 April 2021 (UTC)
 Partly done Select publications is still too long. Tetrahedron17 (talk) 18:14, 20 April 2020 (UTC)
 Done Shortened the section leaving only publications with the highest citation rate per Google Scholar. Less Unless (talk) 16:50, 16 April 2021 (UTC)
 Fixed Removed a bunch of unsourced and irrelevant content.Arigatō tokoro (talk) 09:08, 4 February 2021 (UTC)
 Done Less Unless (talk) 19:21, 9 May 2021 (UTC)
 Done Less Unless (talk) 14:13, 3 May 2021 (UTC)
 Done by me and several other users. Note that the project's scope of work doesn't include referencing.Less Unless (talk) 14:55, 3 May 2021 (UTC)
Thank you! The part that hadn't been looked at was the last half of the article, so I'm greatful to have had a full read-through by other users. Thanks again! 😊 Tyrone Madera (talk) 16:31, 3 May 2021 (UTC)
 Fixed I think. Removed redlinks and converted bare URLs in references. If you're wondering, the one I removed was deleted and led to a 404. AdoTang (talk) 13:43, 28 April 2021 (UTC)
 Done Less Unless (talk) 09:25, 23 April 2021 (UTC)
☒N Deleted. As a result of this discussion, the project does not include referencing. Less Unless (talk) 13:08, 21 April 2021 (UTC)
 Partly done converted the urls Less Unless (talk) 14:42, 1 August 2020 (UTC)
 Comment: Struck part of the above, because this project no longer accepts requests for the addition of citations. North America1000 23:48, 11 January 2021 (UTC)
 Done the issues have been addressed.Less Unless (talk) 18:39, 10 May 2021 (UTC)
information Note: I've identified some other issues: parts of it read as if they were written by a fan. I'm done with the lead section. PJvanMill (talk) 21:55, 1 July 2020 (UTC)
 Done by multiple users. Less Unless (talk) 18:59, 10 May 2021 (UTC)
Added more refs as there was only 1 Less Unless (talk) 11:04, 18 June 2020 (UTC)
 Partly done Corrected grammar and sentence structures; removed one redundant section as well as some unnecessary or unusable external links. werewolf (talk) 03:40, 6 July 2020 (UTC)
 Done by the user above. Looks ok. Less Unless (talk) 19:11, 10 May 2021 (UTC)
  • African diaspora I've never seen such a jumbled mess of wikitext in my life! Is there no source code editors here any more? You can't even find the lead because of a run on infobox. Is there a cleanup bot that can be run on this? Has many more issues like self-definition the the word disaspora (not in Chromium dictionary but neither was "disproven") and I stopped there and went to the talk page then made a clarifying edit. Jimbo's talk page was promoting the wikiproject with same name so i went there to find out what the word meant. Technophant (talk) 21:26, 2 June 2020 (UTC)
 Done by numerous users throughout the year. I've done some url convertion. Less Unless (talk) 10:56, 27 April 2021 (UTC)
 Done Less Unless (talk) 20:43, 4 May 2021 (UTC)
 Partly done - added 3 refs, removed unreferenced tag.Less Unless (talk) 09:10, 16 May 2020 (UTC)
 Comment: Struck part of the above. This project no longer accepts requests for the addition of citations. North America1000 23:44, 11 January 2021 (UTC)
 Done Less Unless (talk) 16:47, 3 May 2021 (UTC)
 Partly done refs done by MarnetteD. Less Unless (talk) 10:19, 5 April 2021 (UTC)
☒N Deleted - Article was deleted in June 2021 due to lack of notability. ---DOOMSDAYER520 (TALK|CONTRIBS) 16:19, 26 June 2021 (UTC)
 Partly done - References cleaned-up. -- WILDSTARtalk 20:38, 12 June 2020 (UTC)
 Done From what I can tell, the NPOV and COI issues got sorted out and the article is presently in good condition. PJvanMill)talk( 22:23, 19 May 2021 (UTC)
 Partly done by Bbarmadillo. --Bbarmadillo (talk) 18:14, 6 November 2020 (UTC)
 Done the issue has been addressed. Less Unless (talk) 18:23, 19 May 2021 (UTC)
 Done looks fine now. Less Unless (talk) 20:02, 11 June 2021 (UTC)
 Done Looks fine now, corrected throughout the year by multiple editors. Less Unless (talk) 19:54, 11 June 2021 (UTC)
 Done by many users. Less Unless (talk) 19:39, 4 June 2021 (UTC)
  • Chalino Sánchez – Reads like a story or biographical piece more than it does a wiki article. I fixed a few things myself, but there's still quite a bit of stuff there.Also, the references are bare links. See the cleanup tag for more issues. Lovely.AdoTang (talk) 00:28, 25 May 2021 (UTC)
 Done less like a biographical story and cleaned up referencing. Anuthys (talk) 21:59, 26 May 2021 (UTC)
 Done. I also added inline citations, the article didn't have any. HoneycrispApples (talk) 16:17, 19 May 2021 (UTC)
 Done Less Unless (talk) 17:15, 19 May 2021 (UTC)
 Not done - the article has been deleted Aranya (talk) 03:31, 14 July 2021 (UTC)
 Fixed — WILDSTARtalk 00:58, 30 June 2021 (UTC)
 Fixed by MarnetteD. North America1000 03:02, 25 June 2021 (UTC)
 Fixed by User:MarnetteD. North America1000 03:03, 25 June 2021 (UTC)
 Done by MarnetteD and me. Less Unless (talk) 10:40, 25 June 2021 (UTC)
 Done by MarnetteD. Less Unless (talk) 18:06, 4 June 2021 (UTC)
 Done Aranya (talk) 22:48, 6 June 2021 (UTC)
Nb. Struck the above entry, which was addressed by Aranya. North America1000 09:07, 7 June 2021 (UTC)
 Done Less Unless (talk) 14:54, 11 June 2021 (UTC)
  • draft clean up request ,Please I need a clean up on this my draft Draft:Babalola Olatunji, so as not to look like a paid contribution instead like a neutral contribution, I picked all the information online and couldn't know what made t look like a paid contribution till now. kindly help in cleaning it up. Tommygogd (talk) 08:25, 21 June 2021 (UTC)
 Not done This project does not accept requests to perform work regarding editing to address conflicts of interest. — WILDSTARtalk 22:03, 22 June 2021 (UTC)
 Done Less Unless (talk) 16:19, 19 June 2021 (UTC)
 Partly done - tone may not be neutral - Anuthys (talk) 20:59, 17 May 2021 (UTC)
 Done - Removed statements that were exaggerated or unsupported by the sources; other general cleanup. ---DOOMSDAYER520 (TALK|CONTRIBS) 15:40, 26 June 2021 (UTC)
 Done Less Unless (talk) 15:13, 15 May 2021 (UTC)
 Done Less Unless (talk) 15:31, 15 May 2021 (UTC)
 Done - Fixed the list formatting plus some other minor cleanup. ---DOOMSDAYER520 (TALK|CONTRIBS) 15:51, 23 June 2021 (UTC)
 Partly done shortened a list of his projects. --Bbarmadillo (talk) 18:19, 31 March 2021 (UTC)
 Not done all the information was recovered by the original author, JPRiley. --Bbarmadillo (talk) 06:39, 17 April 2021 (UTC)
 Partly done removed some most obvious cases of WP:REFBOMB. --Bbarmadillo (talk) 17:28, 20 January 2021 (UTC)
 Done - reworded article text and redid references. Aranya (talk) 11:33, 18 June 2021 (UTC)
 Partly done - Added infobox and restructured athletics, but ran out of reliable citations for the remaining sections TimSmit (talk) 00:25, 21 December 2020 (UTC)
 Done cleanup and structure related issues have been addressed. Less Unless (talk) 11:10, 25 June 2021 (UTC)
 Partly done SnazzyInfinity (talk • contribs) 20:26, 22 November 2020 (UTC)
 Done by SnazzyInfinity and Arsonxists Less Unless (talk) 10:57, 25 June 2021 (UTC)
 Partly done by RandomWookiee and Bbarmadillo. --Bbarmadillo (talk) 18:29, 30 December 2020 (UTC)
 Done Less Unless (talk) 08:53, 18 June 2021 (UTC)
 Partly done Fixed bare references. Rievebug (talk) 19:12, 3 December 2020 (UTC)
 Done - copy edits and filmography section done by many editors. Aranya (talk) 03:46, 12 June 2021 (UTC)
 Not done Northamerica1000, note that the "list of sources" mentioned was in fact a heap of inline citations dumped right before the References section (see here). I've unstruck, as there is still something left of this heap, and there is still a lot of uncited material in the article. PJvanMill)talk( 16:44, 7 December 2020 (UTC)
  •  Done Inline citations have since been added. Of note is that per relatively recent changes to the project's purview, this project no longer accepts requests to perform work for additional sources or citations to be added to articles. North America1000 05:50, 2 July 2021 (UTC)
@Abbasquadir: FYI. --Emir of Wikipedia (talk) 16:59, 8 August 2020 (UTC)
information Note: Struck the above. The article is rather well developed, has no maintenance tags on it at this time, no bare urls, etc. It's unclear what "general cleanup" would pertain to the article at this time. North America1000 05:54, 2 July 2021 (UTC)
 Fixed — WILDSTARtalk 01:44, 8 August 2021 (UTC)
 Fixed — WILDSTARtalk 13:15, 6 August 2021 (UTC)
 Fixed — WILDSTARtalk 22:02, 4 August 2021 (UTC)
 Done Fixed grammar and spelling. Article could still use more information but is in a better state. Taeluta (talk) 04:52, 2 August 2021 (UTC)
 Done — Moved the Filmography section to List of Irene Aloisi performances — WILDSTARtalk 21:19, 31 July 2021 (UTC)
 Done — by Taeluta and WILDSTARtalk 21:51, 24 July 2021 (UTC)
 Fixed — WILDSTARtalk 15:34, 16 July 2021 (UTC)
 Done - The article was created by a fan account that has since been banned, but the sources on Ali Budd and her career are solid. I removed ad-like prose and boiled it down to facts from the reliable sources. Despite its origin as a fan page, the article now looks like a WP community effort. ---DOOMSDAYER520 (TALK|CONTRIBS) 16:12, 22 July 2021 (UTC)
information Note: Article has been deleted (G11: Unambiguous advertising or promotion) — WILDSTARtalk 16:40, 25 July 2021 (UTC)
 Fixed - Beesechurg (talk | edits) 15:57, 10 July 2021 (UTC)
 Fixed - Beesechurg (talk | edits) 15:43, 10 July 2021 (UTC)
 Comment: - The solution may be to remove all date-dependent information if nobody is interested enough to continually update it. ---DOOMSDAYER520 (TALK|CONTRIBS) 14:30, 8 July 2021 (UTC)
 Done - Updated some info with the same sources that were used previously; removed some other time-dependent trivia that was non-notable and unlikely to be updated regularly. ---DOOMSDAYER520 (TALK|CONTRIBS) 15:53, 22 July 2021 (UTC)
 Fixed - Beesechurg 17:10, 6 July 2021 (UTC)
 Fixed — WILDSTARtalk 20:22, 6 July 2021 (UTC)
 Done by me and Beesechurg. Less Unless (talk) 22:39, 16 July 2021 (UTC)
 Fixed — WILDSTARtalk 04:51, 2 July 2021 (UTC)
 Fixed HoneycrispApples (talk) 00:52, 2 July 2021 (UTC)
 Done Less Unless (talk) 21:15, 17 July 2021 (UTC)
 Comment: - Unless anyone feels strongly about it, I would suggest merging Mr. Hart's article to The Delfonics because he has few achievements outside of the group. ---DOOMSDAYER520 (TALK|CONTRIBS) 14:51, 3 July 2021 (UTC)
 Comment: I don't think that it should be merged with The Delfonics article. Looks like the person is notable by himself. --Bbarmadillo (talk) 17:35, 3 July 2021 (UTC)
I respectfully disagree. Note that most of the text in Hart's article is about the Delfonics. Statements that Hart was sampled by rappers apply to Delfonics songs. In later years Hart has some songwriting and production credits on items that are largely non-notable in their own right, and he has a few later releases under the name "Wil Hart & The Delfonics" (e.g. [1]). As a result, I don't think he did anything notable outside of the group name, and it can all be described at their article. ---DOOMSDAYER520 (TALK|CONTRIBS) 14:47, 5 July 2021 (UTC)
 Done - At the Delfonics talk page, another editor opposed the merge as well, so I dropped the idea. That user and I have cleaned up Wilbert's article with better sources and more specific info on Wilbert's career outside of the Delfonics. ---DOOMSDAYER520 (TALK|CONTRIBS) 00:49, 24 July 2021 (UTC)
Comment I have reorganized the article, but the missing lead was the minor problem there. The article has very long lists (I won't mention the sources). Can someone take a look? I can correct those, but currently a bit confused with Notable faculty section. Should the red links be removed? Too many of those.Less Unless (talk) 13:51, 30 March 2021 (UTC)
 Comment: The lists are too long and don't provide notability for individuals being in the list. I would support trimming all the red links as that would leave the ones that have pages and are likely more notable. The list issue is old and hasn't been addressed since it was noted in 2012. I did some trimming of red links. ThinkHat (talk) 17:07, 1 April 2021 (UTC)
 Done as a result of collective effort. The article looks fine now. Less Unless (talk) 21:22, 17 July 2021 (UTC)
 Done - Removed empty sections that were unlikely to ever be filled, and removed "please improve" draft section that was unsupported trivia. Also moved the article to the organization's true name rather than the informal acronym. ---DOOMSDAYER520 (TALK|CONTRIBS) 15:28, 27 June 2021 (UTC)
 Done by myself and many others who copyedited. HoneycrispApples (talk) 01:30, 3 July 2021 (UTC)
  • Build the Earth - Deletion? If not it is full of promotional and citation issues. AmericanAir88(talk) 21:30, 12 March 2021 (UTC)v
     Comment: AmericanAir88: Hey, I was one of the first few people to substantially work on this article (and it was the first article I worked on), so it's a "nice" coincidence that this is the first thing I see when I open Cleanup!
    This is from back when I had no idea how Wikipedia worked, and I just wanted to write. It's in a pretty not NPOV (and I see how it could seem promotional, but that wasn't my intention at all), and it contains a lot of original research, because I'm part of the project.
    However, I don't think that it should be deleted. I know that lack of notability isn't the only reason for deletion of articles, but there are a lot of reliable sources that have talked about BTE (Independent, ScreenRant, EuroGamer, Vice, ...), and I think there's a lot we could improve based on these (though this would result in an article with a much smaller scope, of course).
    I'm going to try and improve it (even though I'm not that interested in writing about BTE anymore, but I won't leave it stranded), and everyone else is very welcome to do so, too. This would include removing all of my original research. Sorry for creating this abomination :) 🐈 cAtte_ · talk · contributions · 17:38, 13 March 2021 (UTC)
    Response The article is highly promotional and relies on primary sources. It needs to be fixed. The "Build team" section needs to be removed as it is a clear violation of Wikipedia principles and is not notable. Thank you for your help. AmericanAir88(talk) 23:45, 13 March 2021 (UTC)
     Done. Rewritten with attention to promotional tone and citation issues. Aranya (talk) 15:25, 22 June 2021 (UTC)
  • Jessica Hammond - too many links in external links section - needs shortening, now it looks like the author tried too hard.Less Unless (talk) 19:19, 25 February 2021 (UTC)
 Partly done removed some promotional content and trivia as well as multiple YouTube and Facebook links to her speeches. A lot more cleanup is needed. The is an unsuccessful local politician, the article should be 50% shorter. --Bbarmadillo (talk) 19:15, 26 February 2021 (UTC)
 Done by Aranya. Less Unless (talk) 21:52, 17 July 2021 (UTC)
 Done by multiple editors (1, 2, 3). Aranya (talk) 11:20, 18 June 2021 (UTC)
 Partly done - will finish formatting references and examining the commented out content once I gain access to the paywalled sources. Aranya (talk) 15:16, 18 July 2021 (UTC)
 Done - Checked the content of the commented out content, and either removed or restored content based on whether it could be verified with the used references. Also did some basic copyediting and reformatting of the text and refs. Aranya (talk) 22:19, 20 July 2021 (UTC)
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