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January 2022
- Artificial Intelligence for Environment & Sustainability - This article may require cleanup to meet Wikipedia's quality standards. The specific problem is source formatting. Besides, some sources are too closely associated with the subject, potentially preventing the article from being verifiable and neutral. aoescala (talk) 14:03, 24 January 2022 (UTC)
- Partly done I fixed one spelling error. Not much, still needs a lot of work. Champ9642358 (talk) 01:34, 8 February 2022 (UTC)
- Emily Kame Kngwarreye - Considered Australia's most important artist but Wikipedia's article is mostly un-cited and full of formatting errors. Article needs to be significantly pruned so the majority of the info on the page is verified, then rebuilt by a subject matter expert. Akkeri (talk) 08:20, 23 January 2022 (UTC)
- Comment: Maybe Less Unless could make sense of this garbled page? — Preceding unsigned comment added by Akkeri (talk • contribs) 04:53, 2022 February 2 (UTC)
- Partly done - added many sources, removed tags, corrected ref errors. Looks better now. Less Unless (talk) 20:31, 16 February 2022 (UTC)
- Partly done This is indeed a challenging task. I copyedited some of the introductory material for clarity. The issue in my view is not so much finding sources as it is how to succinctly and sensitively convey the Aboriginal spiritual ideas that are at the heart of her work. I will continue to review the page and add sources where needed, but I am wary of putting a White Western perspective on something that lies outside of that world. An editor with a cultural connection to some of these ideas would be a valuable resource for this entry. CuriosumScriptor (talk) 15:11, 28 May 2022 (UTC)
- Comment: Maybe Less Unless could make sense of this garbled page? — Preceding unsigned comment added by Akkeri (talk • contribs) 04:53, 2022 February 2 (UTC)
- 2020s in fashion -
bare URL in references andsome copy editing needed. Tinton5 (talk) 20:51, 16 January 2022 (UTC)
- Partly done Bare urls have been fixed. North America1000 08:13, 17 January 2022 (UTC)
- Sennheiser - COI editor had a field day with this article, still sounds excessively promotional after outright deletion of much of the cruft. Padgriffin Griffin's Nest 01:32, 11 January 2022 (UTC)
- Ben Spencer (politician) - Article looks to me to be quite clearly written by Spencer (uk politician) or a member of his team; two sections (political career and constituency priorities) are entirely unsourced and consist entirely of complimentary political talk. Entire article uses his first name. Even if it's not written by him the article definetely doesn't sound neutral so could do with a bit of cleanup in my opinion --SquidSquad77 (talk) 19:52, 3 January 2022 (UTC)
- looking better now that one offending section has been removed but could still do with some work --SquidSquad77 (talk) 01:09, 14 January 2022 (UTC)
- Partly done Added some sources and removed some unsourced claims. Still needs more work. BruceThomson (talk) 06:13, 23 February 2023 (UTC)
- Team Apache - 1998 flight simulator video game. Has excessive gameplay detail and tone issues; portions of of the gameplay description sound like a review, e.g. discussing the pros and cons of the game. Waxworker (talk) 06:24, 9 January 2022 (UTC)
February 2022
- Content (media) - The article seems full of non-relevant content, and is littered with faulty grammar the means to the end (talk) 10:34, 22 February 2022 (UTC)
- Nurkot - odd sections that i don't know how to deal with 晚安 (トークページ) 12:15, 13 February 2022 (UTC)
- Partly done I did some minor cleanup, removing a couple uncited sections without much value Helloimahumanbeing (talk) 16:55, 16 February 2022 (UTC)
- Negative and positive rights – This article needs help as it has multiple issues. The question is-- where to start? Can we get a cleanup? Edunoramus (talk) 18:57, 8 February 2022 (UTC)
- Comment: That article is an inappropriate synthesis of two different topics, and putting them together in one article is not just original research but a basic compare-and-contrast exercise that you would get from a college paper assignment. The hatnote at the top of the article is inaccurate because these two terms really are synonymous with negative liberties and positive liberties. I recommend complete deletion, and can start a nomination myself unless anyone here objects. ---DOOMSDAYER520 (TALK|CONTRIBS) 00:51, 10 April 2022 (UTC)
- Logos – This page is messy in terms of formatting. There are broader editorial issues that are outlined on the talk page. But, to start, it would be great to have someone look at this page from the cleanup perspective. Edunoramus (talk) 19:01, 8 February 2022 (UTC)
- Drug-Free_Workplace_Act_of_1988 - Reasoning for the cleanup request is that the article has poor grammar and style, much of the information in the article isn't clearly in its sources, some links are dead, and the article doesn't adequately describe the law and its impacts.97.121.187.67 (talk) 05:55, 26 February 2022 (UTC)
- Note: request moved from Wikipedia talk:Cleanup. Bridget (talk) 21:45, 7 March 2022 (UTC)
- Mehdi Mehdipour - Very messy with sporadic grammar and poorly formatted headers WeInTheUSA (talk) 20:01, 23 February 2022 (UTC)
- Partly done I did some minor cleanup. Cyrobyte (talk) 22:17, 24 February 2022 (UTC)
- Partly done I did some more minor cleanup, but there are still some issues with the article. Pianolettuce (talk) 1:04, 28 June 2022 (UTC)
March 2022
- Differentiable manifold Reasoning for the cleanup request:
- Error message "Script warning: One or more} {{cite journal}} templates have errors; messages may be hidden"; I don't know the correct CSS to view the messages (see Help talk:CS1 errors/Archive 3#Controlling error message display.)
- The text does not have a consistent style; sometimes it uses {{math}} and sometimes it uses
<math>...</math>
- There was an inconsistency between the use of \phi and \varphi, which I corrected, but I'm not sure whether I selected the best alternative. See Talk:Differentiable manifold#Inconsistent rendering of Phi]
- --Shmuel (Seymour J.) Metz Username:Chatul (talk) 11:22, 31 March 2022 (UTC)
- Partly done I fixed the citation error. Per MOS:FORMULA inconsistent math styling seems fine, it is only a problem if both are used in the same expression. Mathnerd314159 (talk) 21:17, 15 June 2022 (UTC)
- Joseph in Islam - This article is in some ways very good and detailed, but has a serious tone problem and reads primarily like an essay. I'm not entirely sure where to begin editing it, especially since it seems like it has been the subject of several POV editing battles by somewhat inexperienced editors. I humbly ask for help. (Also if you think I should bring concerns about this article somewhere else, I'd gladly take suggestions.) - - mathmitch7 (talk/contribs) 14:50, 18 March 2022 (UTC)
April 2022
- Setsu & Shinobu Ito - Japanese product designer duo. Egregiously reads as an advertisement, has formatting and tone issues. Lots of product photos are uploaded as 'own work', which may be a copyright issue. Waxworker (talk) 02:46, 28 April 2022 (UTC)
- Navy Marine Corps Intranet – Needs major cleanup and updating; page has seemingly been co-opted by editors who have loaded the page with material that violates WP:PROMO. KidAd • SPEAK 23:02, 12 April 2022 (UTC)
- Joseon Army and Joseon Navy - Some of the information I gathered for these pages were from the Korean websites that I translated using Google Translate. I need to know if I properly translated them right. I also need help with the way I put citations on these pages. Koreanidentity10000 (Koreanidentity10000) 21:59, 4 April 2022 (EST)
- @Koreanidentity10000 do you mean the source collumn? Champ9642358 (talk) 21:57, 5 April 2022 (UTC)
- @Koreanidentity10000: This project focuses much more upon generalized cleanup matters that do not require a significant amount of research and language translation comparisons. This aspect of your request is for rather detailed work such as this, and would be much more suited to post at the Guild of Copy editors requests page at WP:GOCER, or perhaps at Wikipedia talk:WikiProject Korea. This project does focus upon citation formatting, so the latter part of your post may potentially receive some response from members of this project. North America1000 14:10, 6 April 2022 (UTC)
May 2022
- Reminisce (rapper) - Nigerian rapper. Promotional tone issues and sections that read as advertisements for his albums, such as one of his albums being called "arguably as one of the most successful hip hop albums in Nigerian history", without quoting a source. Waxworker (talk) 16:10, 13 May 2022 (UTC)
- Effat Moridi (Mother Moeini) - article on Iranian activist that has some clear MOS issues: lead doesn't summarize article, odd section headers, and a title that should likely be changed. Bridget (talk) 16:03, 7 May 2022 (UTC)
June 2022
NPE Extension Expressway - very confusing table with too many colors and links.Pianolettuce(talk) 12:21, 26 June 2022 (UTC)- Comment: The table, as I've seen, is quite painful to look at. However, I'm confused at what "PTI" means. I've tried looking at the disambiguation page for answers, but nothing shows up. A clarification edit would be nice. TarantulaTM (speak with me) (my legacy) 22:51, 18 June 2023 (UTC)
- Daniel Pipes - page peppered with primary citations sourced from the self-published "danielpipes.org" Iskandar323 (talk) 06:57, 9 June 2022 (UTC)
- Donna Robinson Divine - has a collection of maintenance notes from 2012, potentially not all warranted. Iskandar323 (talk) 06:49, 9 June 2022 (UTC)
- Zahabiya - this article was presumably translated from the Persian language version. Hard to know where to begin. Iskandar323 (talk) 15:29, 8 June 2022 (UTC)
July 2022
- Untitled Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles film - Needs careful revaluation of sources, as some of the information on them doesn't reflect what is written in the article. Production companies for example have Nickelodeon Movies and Paramount Animation listed, when that hasn't been mentioned by any sources. --Averyfunkydude23 (talk) 10:52, 2 July 2022 (UTC)
- Nir Bitton - I feel like the article needs several corrections here and there, and maybe there's a good amount of information that can still be included in the "International career" section. --Oltrepier (talk) 16:14, 1 July 2022 (UTC)
- List of years in television - All of the information found here can easily be accessed at the separate pages for certain years and nationalities (e.g. 2006 in American television). It seems better to just remove all the information from the sections and replace them with links to the Year pages. In fact, a majority of the main page consists of series debuts. Turboplate (talk) 03:16, 1 July 2022 (UTC)
- Comment: But instead of adding 2006 in American television, 2006 in French television, 2006 in Brazilian television, 2006 in British television and 10 more like these for each section, a summary for a year would rather help. Excellenc1 (talk) 06:19, 13 July 2022 (UTC)
September 2022
- Greece–Turkey relations -- Recent GA quick fail indicates several issues: sources have CS1 and CS1 maintenance errors, numerous missed punctuation marks, while the prose is exceedingly informal and essay-like. Does not comply with the guidelines of lead sections and words to watch. Elias (talk) 22:47, 30 September 2022 (UTC)
- Conscription in Mexico - This article was created in 2006, and at no point has the article contained references or sources. This article has existed for 16 years without having a single sourced claim. It also has confusing prose, using jargon "framing" that may be an attempt to directly translate Spanish words/phrases to English. This article needs to be sourced or nominated for deletion. Xwedodah (talk) 05:38, 11 September 2022 (UTC)
Machiliwale Shah – copy-editing required.--Hildeoc (talk) 04:21, 5 September 2022 (UTC)
- Partly done -- Mostly done, but there is still some specialized language that I don't know if it is correct. Pianolettuce(talk) 14:09, 6 September 2022 (UTC)
- Struck the entry at this time. Research to figure out specialized language to perform copy edits is outside of the scope of this project. WP:GOCER could be a functional place to post this at this point. North America1000 14:16, 31 August 2023 (UTC)
October 2022
Sheryl Leach - Article has been heavily edited by IPs in the last few days. New material appears to beJRHorse (talk) 17:13, 10 October 2022 (UTC)WP:SOAPWP:RESUME and definitely not neutral.
- Comment: Article is in the process of being cleaned following a talk page help request. JRHorse (talk) 14:01, 12 October 2022 (UTC)
- Comment: The philanthropy section needs some cleanup now. The section still looks resume-like, poorly sourced and repetitive. JRHorse (talk) 22:50, 13 October 2022 (UTC)
- Done I just took a pass at it, I think it's pretty solidly cleaned up (aside from the need for more/better citations) Chiselinccc (talk) 07:50, 17 August 2023 (UTC)
- Comment: The philanthropy section needs some cleanup now. The section still looks resume-like, poorly sourced and repetitive. JRHorse (talk) 22:50, 13 October 2022 (UTC)
November 2022
Iraq War - This page does not have any bolding and has a short description that is too long.— Preceding unsigned comment added by SpyridisioAnnis (talk • contribs) 12:15, 7 November 2022 (UTC)
- Comment: Short description is acceptable per WP:SDLENGTH. However the {{About}} hatnote template was shortened considerably. — WILDSTARTALK 11:33, 8 November 2022 (UTC)
- The title "Iraq War" presently has bold typeface. No cleanup issues appear to be present at this time. North America1000 14:18, 31 August 2023 (UTC)
December 2022
- Bhabendra Nath Saikia – Promotional tone and general need for summarization. Rosalina2427 (talk) 07:25, 21 December 2022 (UTC)
- Sergei Osipov (artist)#Bibliography.--Hildeoc (talk) 22:50, 16 December 2022 (UTC)
- 2011 National Camogie League - Many of the citations are links that no longer work or are improperly formatted. Pianolettuce (talk) 16:19, 2 December, 2022 (UTC)
- Partly done I've fixed some of the improperly formatted references with refill. TheManInTheBlackHat (talk) 22:08, 3 December 2022 (UTC)
Sports analyst - Someone added a lot of great information earlier, but didn't cite their sources properly. The sources need links and need to use ref tags.TheManInTheBlackHat (talk) 13:47, 2 December 2022 (UTC)
- @TheManInTheBlackHat: Done — MATRIX! (a good person!)[citation unneeded] 11:17, 15 December 2023 (UTC)
- Template error-tracking Category:Pages using Template:Longitem with unnamed style parameter has been cleared out. Interested editors are invited to add it to their watchlist to help keep the error tracking category empty. —andrybak (talk) 03:26, 2 December 2022 (UTC)
Addressed entries
Texas Pete – Six bare urls in references.North America1000 04:58, 9 January 2023 (UTC)
- Done --Pianolettuce (talk) 15:56, 10 January 2023 (UTC)
Mary Brown (American songwriter) - bare URLs in references.Tinton5 (talk) 05:43, 6 January 2023 (UTC)
- Done --Less Unless (talk) 15:14, 8 January 2023 (UTC)
Dmitri Bystrolyotov - In the Later Life, is the Russian text formatted correctly? It looks a little weird to me.Pianolettuce (talk) 22:25, 5 January 2023 (UTC)
- Done --Less Unless (talk) 15:14, 8 January 2023 (UTC)
Nasal chondrocytes - Every citation was put in as a superscripted link to an old version of the page. Benx45h (talk) 15:43, 4 March 2022 (UTC)Dale Van Sickel - bare URL in references.Tinton5 (talk) 07:34, 24 December 2022 (UTC)
- Partly done -- There is still one reference that I couldn't fix. Pianolettuce (talk) 23:34, 07 January 2023 (UTC)
Matthew Heineman – Lead a bit too long.— WILDSTARTALK 20:13, 22 December 2022 (UTC)- Done by Wikieditor019 (talk) 18:21, 28 January 2023 (UTC)
List of songs recorded by Beyoncé - bare URLs in references section.Tinton5 (talk) 01:46, 18 December 2022 (UTC)
Dietrich Grunewald - Missing a hook and may use citations improperly.TheManInTheBlackHat (talk) 23:44, 5 December 2022 (UTC)
- Deleted TheManInTheBlackHat (Talk) 23:03, 7 December 2022 (UTC)
- Note: Article has been moved to draftspace and available here should someone wish to resubmit it or improve it. — WILDSTARTALK 23:47, 7 December 2022 (UTC)
- Note: The article appears to have been cleaned-up by Mccapra, who moved it back to main namespace. See the Revision history and diffs such as this and this for more information. North America1000 23:52, 8 January 2023 (UTC)
- Yes I did. Let me know if more needs doing. Mccapra (talk) 23:57, 8 January 2023 (UTC)
- Note: The article appears to have been cleaned-up by Mccapra, who moved it back to main namespace. See the Revision history and diffs such as this and this for more information. North America1000 23:52, 8 January 2023 (UTC)
- Note: Article has been moved to draftspace and available here should someone wish to resubmit it or improve it. — WILDSTARTALK 23:47, 7 December 2022 (UTC)
- Template error-tracking Category:Pages using technically valid titles in correct title hatnotes has been cleared out. Interested editors are invited to add it to their watchlist to help keep the error tracking category empty. —andrybak (talk) 23:41, 5 October 2022 (UTC)
Draft:Mara E. Rudman Reasoning for the cleanup request is that the article requires each substantive fact here requires a reliable independent source, although I have mentioned all reliable sources but still it's been rejected can someone help me out on this.— Preceding unsigned comment added by Elisafrag (talk • contribs) 18:17, 2022 March 30 (UTC)
- Deleted on 2 February 2023 per WP:G13. North America1000 17:51, 23 February 2023 (UTC)
2022 Glasgow City Council election - Mainly consists of empty tables, one of the main sources is a dead linkHelloimahumanbeing (talk) 18:35, 16 February 2022 (UTC)- Already done After the election, this has been cleared up. ContributeToTheWiki (talk) 20:00, 17 January 2023 (UTC)
- Comment:Article has been moved to Draft:2022 Glasgow City Council election. MarnetteD|Talk 20:32, 30 March 2022 (UTC)
Proisir - bare URLs in references.Tinton5 (talk) 07:39, 28 January 2023 (UTC)
- Done by Wikieditor019 using Reflinks. — WILDSTARTALK 14:06, 28 January 2023 (UTC)
- Not done, since page still has some bare URLs. Tinton5 (talk) 19:41, 29 January 2023 (UTC)
- Comment: Tinton5, this was done until the page creator added more of them. Perhaps it may be too early to post a cleanup request for this new article. — WILDSTARTALK 20:01, 29 January 2023 (UTC)
- Done again using {{ReFill 2}} — WILDSTARTALK 20:19, 29 January 2023 (UTC)
- Comment: Tinton5, this was done until the page creator added more of them. Perhaps it may be too early to post a cleanup request for this new article. — WILDSTARTALK 20:01, 29 January 2023 (UTC)
- Not done, since page still has some bare URLs. Tinton5 (talk) 19:41, 29 January 2023 (UTC)
2012 Paulsboro train derailment - bare URLs in references.Tinton5 (talk) 01:57, 28 February 2023 (UTC)
- Done --Less Unless (talk) 20:02, 28 February 2023 (UTC)
Cut-eye - a couple of bare URLs in references.Tinton5 (talk) 07:40, 27 February 2023 (UTC)
- Done --Less Unless (talk) 21:13, 27 February 2023 (UTC)
List of shopping malls in New Jersey - bare URLs in references, per notice at top.Tinton5 (talk) 07:37, 27 February 2023 (UTC)
- Done --Less Unless (talk) 21:13, 27 February 2023 (UTC)
Turbofan - a few bare URLs in references.Tinton5 (talk) 07:06, 25 February 2023 (UTC)
- Done --Less Unless (talk) 21:13, 27 February 2023 (UTC)
2023 Ohio train derailment - bare URLs in references.Tinton5 (talk) 06:58, 25 February 2023 (UTC)
- Done --Less Unless (talk) 21:13, 27 February 2023 (UTC)
Children's Specialized Hospital - some bare URLs in references.Tinton5 (talk) 08:01, 21 February 2023 (UTC)
- Done --Less Unless (talk) 08:43, 21 February 2023 (UTC)
He's a Jolly Good Fellow - Bare URL found in reference.Tinton5 (talk) 17:58, 15 February 2023 (UTC)
- Done --Less Unless (talk) 08:43, 21 February 2023 (UTC)
Fillmore Condit - bare URLs, grammar and formatting improvements needed.Tinton5 (talk) 06:56, 15 February 2023 (UTC)
- Done by Pianolettuce (talk) 16:05, 15 February 2023
Aunt Sally – Something about the image is smushing the first heading to the left, on both desktop and mobile. Not sure how to fix.— LumonRedacts 14:29, 14 February 2023 (UTC)
- Done – LumonRedacts, I tried to find a balance between both enwiki's desktop and mobile sites by trying different things and ultimately by letting the lead wrap around the image. — WILDSTARTALK 20:41, 15 February 2023 (UTC)
- @WildStar Super! Thanks for trying multiple things so I can study the diffs. Respect, Cleanup Crew! — LumonRedacts 03:56, 16 February 2023 (UTC)
City Loop -Grammar and punctuation in some sections (the ones with a clean up tag)NotOrrio (talk) 5:54, 5 Febuary 2023
- Done by NotOrrio managed to fix the problems I nominated this article to clean up for
Raiatea Helm - 11 bare urls in article.Grorp (talk) 08:04, 25 January 2023 (UTC)
The edits of Special:Contributions/SW9898 seem a bit unbalanced. I am not familiar with the subject (early sound recording), so it's harder to judge. I have tried to talk to SW9898 and failed, so I don't know if this is an undeclared COI or a strong interest or what. Review of these edits, especially by anyone with knowledge of the recording industry, would be welcome.HLHJ (talk) 23:41, 11 October 2022 (UTC)
- It looks like they have added in the URL "moeb.ca" along with most of their additions. Bridget (talk) 00:23, 12 October 2022 (UTC)
- Done User:SW9898 seems to have been deleted, so finding the edits would, as far as I know, be impossible. ContributeToTheWiki (talk) 20:20, 16 January 2023 (UTC)
- It looks like they have added in the URL "moeb.ca" along with most of their additions. Bridget (talk) 00:23, 12 October 2022 (UTC)
XACML - where do i even start? empty sections, mess of external links in body, and stuff that looks like it was copied out of a manual.晚安 (トークページ) 10:56, 16 March 2022 (UTC)
- Done by TimothyBlue. — WILDSTARTALK 14:02, 24 February 2023 (UTC)
Richard E. Hoagland – needs major infobox cleanup and headings.Novemberjazz 17:41, 17 September 2022 (UTC)
- Partly done - I cleaned up the headings and (partly) cleaned up the order of infobox parameters. Aaron Liu (talk) 19:52, 23 September 2022 (UTC)
David Prophet Ramsay – Bare urls in External links.North America1000 13:09, 18 March 2023 (UTC)
- Done --Less Unless (talk) 20:29, 21 March 2023 (UTC)
Swiftwater, Pennsylvania - bare URLs in references.Tinton5 (talk) 01:22, 12 March 2023 (UTC)
- Done --Less Unless (talk) 20:29, 13 March 2023 (UTC)
2022–23 WSE Champions League - bare URLs scattered throughout, need to be converted to sources.TheManInTheBlackHat (Talk) 14:24, 11 March 2023 (UTC)
- Done – Converted external links to sources. — WILDSTARTALK 16:03, 12 March 2023 (UTC)
List of Generation Z slang - bare URL in references section.Tinton5 (talk) 06:25, 8 April 2023 (UTC)
- Done --Less Unless (talk) 16:55, 8 April 2023 (UTC)
List of New Jersey tornadoes - some bare URLs in references.Tinton5 (talk) 07:17, 7 April 2023 (UTC)
- Done --Less Unless (talk) 16:55, 8 April 2023 (UTC)
Morgan Berry - tables for credits are completely screwed and need to be fixed.Lacon432 (talk) 05:03, 18 April 2023 (UTC)
- Done - Pianolettuce (talk) 15:21, 20 April 2023 (UTC)
Jimmy’s Waterhole fire - bare URLs in references.Tinton5 (talk) 00:07, 18 April 2023 (UTC)
- Done - Pianolettuce (talk) 15:13, 20 April 2023 (UTC)
Marlton Circle - bare URL in references.Tinton5 (talk) 00:03, 18 April 2023 (UTC)
- Done --Less Unless (talk) 16:06, 20 April 2023 (UTC)
Prudential Lions - bare URLs/reference clean up.Tinton5 (talk) 22:04, 17 April 2023 (UTC)
- Done --Less Unless (talk) 16:06, 20 April 2023 (UTC)
Here's half the articles tagged for cleanup from April 2010, which are currently the oldest:
-- Beland (talk) 01:43, 13 July 2022 (UTC)
Murder_of_Jermaine_Goupall – End of "Background" section has some weird footnote and heading problem at the bottom? (I'm very uncomfortable with anything involving citations.)LumonRedacts (talk) 14:14, 7 August 2022 (UTC)
- Done But there is still cleanup required for the "encyclopaedic tone". Excellenc1 (talk) 14:14, 8 August 2022 (UTC)
- Thank you. I'll poke at it a little, but I didn't want to break something and make it worse. :) LumonRedacts (talk) 00:13, 12 August 2022 (UTC)
Here are the other half of the articles tagged for cleanup from April 2010, the oldest monthly subcategory:
- Mobile harassment
- Nasha Aziz
- Timeline of the Naxalite–Maoist insurgency
- United States campaigns in World War I
Addressed entries from Beland's post
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-- Beland (talk) 19:04, 6 August 2022 (UTC)
- SUSE_Linux_Enterprise#Version_history Should probably be using one of these fancy version history templates, which I sadly have no idea how to use – Marcusmueller ettus (talk) 10:14, 19 January 2023 (UTC)
- Done Changed list to a formatted table StigmaOfTruth (talk) 19:37, 19 April 2023 (UTC)
Dale Duguid - formatting/style issues and bare URL in references. Tinton5 (talk) 21:17, 17 June 2022 (UTC)
- Partly done: Fixed the bare url. North America1000 21:44, 17 June 2022 (UTC)
- Done - Fixed the formatting/style issues. The article still has tags for notability and BLP sources, but that is a different discussion. ---DOOMSDAYER520 (TALK|CONTRIBS) 17:37, 30 May 2023 (UTC)
- Aurum (liqueur) - mess of images that needs to be formatted for style. TheManInTheBlackHat (Talk) 02:50, 12 December 2022 (UTC)
- Done but the page needs more work, it's just a stub ♦ WikiUser70176 ♦(My talk page) 01:41, 3 May 2023 (UTC)
Justin Shackil - bare URL in references section.Tinton5 (talk) 21:32, 3 June 2023 (UTC)
- Comment: Could you please specify the problem in the article? TMTarantula (speak with me) (my legacy) 17:05, 4 June 2023 (UTC)
Sh-Boom - bare URL found in references.. Tinton5 (talk) 04:33, 16 May 2023 (UTC)
- Done - URL was placed within a citation inappopriately. ---DOOMSDAYER520 (TALK|CONTRIBS) 19:59, 20 May 2023 (UTC)
Center for Disease Dynamics, Economics & Policy - An anonymous user recently requested that this article be moved to the organization's new name: One Health Trust. I think that is a necessary move, but it would also require re-writing most of the article to indicate that its previous achievements were under its previous name, in an "artist formerly known as..." sort of way.---DOOMSDAYER520 (TALK|CONTRIBS) 14:09, 19 May 2023 (UTC)- We can move it to a new title page, and then put up a template stating that parts of the article may use the name "CDDEP" and/or other sub derivatives until a proper cleanup is done. We can also ask fellow editors to contribute to the cleanup, if possible. Sugeeth Jayaraj (talk) 17:28, 22 May 2023 (UTC)
- It is also worth noting that the cleanup can happen in Phases, and not necessarily in one go.
- Nowadays we can use the Find feature in most browsers to find and replace text where necessary. Sugeeth Jayaraj (talk) 17:30, 22 May 2023 (UTC)
- Done - After some discussion among page movers, the decision was made to switch to the organization's new name and the article was updated accordingly. It's still rather messy with various edit tags, but those can be handled via normal editing. ---DOOMSDAYER520 (TALK|CONTRIBS) 23:27, 7 June 2023 (UTC)
Mary Kenner - Inline citations are not hyperlinked Merpin (talk) 16:47, 28 April 2023 (UTC)
- Comment: Merpin, those are "general references" per WP:CITETYPE, which of course can also be supplemented with inline citations. — WILDSTARTALK 20:05, 2 May 2023 (UTC)
- Done - The community has worked on the article since the request, and the request itself indicated an issue that did not necessarily require cleanup. ---DOOMSDAYER520 (TALK|CONTRIBS) 17:32, 30 May 2023 (UTC)
Tom Gibis, Brian Beacock, William Frederick Knight, Lia Sargent, Matt Hill, Jaxon Lee, Spike Spencer, Skip Stellrecht, Cam Clarke, Pat Fraley, R. Martin Klein, Jamie Simone, Colleen O'Shaughnessey, Robbie Rist, Henry Dittman, Brian Donovan, Mimi Woods, Derek Stephen Prince, Chris Edgerly, Amanda Winn-Lee, Paula Tiso, Chiemi Chiba, Jonathan Fahn, Doug Erholtz, Paul Mercier, Quinton Flynn, John DeMita, Olivia Hack, Barbara Goodson, Grant George, Keith Silverstein, Tom Fahn, Michael Sinterniklaas, Eddie Frierson, Peter Lurie, Kim Mai Guest, Steve Kramer, Debi Mae West, Michael Sorich, Richard Cansino, Michael Lindsay, JB Blanc, John Swasey, John Gremillion, Jessica Boone, Andy McAvin, Jason Douglas, Don Rush- tables for credits requested for updating pages. Lacon432 (talk) 05:03, 18 April 2023 (UTC)
- The request for the mass addition of tables to all of these articles is much better suited for WP:GOCER than here. This is not really a cleanup matter; it's an expansion request. North America1000 10:27, 5 July 2023 (UTC)
- Roohani Sisters -
the page makes excess use of bolding beyond the main/alt titles and the lead is too long relative to the body.Iskandar323 (talk) 10:46, 2 November 2022 (UTC)
- Partly done Removed unnecessary bolding, but the article is too promotional in tone and excessive in information. Rosalina2427 (talk)
- Partly done The lead has been shortened. The article is still tagged for having a promotional tone. North America1000 09:31, 31 January 2023 (UTC)
- Done. Removed promotional content. TarantulaTM (speak with me) (my legacy) 20:06, 22 June 2023 (UTC)
Chris Kirkpatrick - Article is written from a fan's/promotional POV and reads like a biography rather than an encyclopedic article.Spectrallights (talk) 08:01, 8 July 2022 (UTC)- Partly done Improved pretty much but maybe it can be worked on more. Excellenc1 (talk) 16:36, 19 July 2022 (UTC)
- Comment: Aren't articles about a person supposed to be biography-like? I'm sure you mean the tone has to be changed in some way. TarantulaTM (speak with me) (my legacy) 20:13, 22 June 2023 (UTC)
- Done. TarantulaTM (speak with me) (my legacy) 20:51, 22 June 2023 (UTC)
Joyce Eliason - date lineups are backwardsLacon432 (talk) 03:31, 26 May 2023 (UTC)I Know Why the Caged Bird Sings - cast listing should be formatted better. Many of these credits can be removed and the ellipsis aren't very necessary as opposed to an "as".Lacon432 (talk) 01:47, 26 May 2023 (UTC)- Partly done.
I do not have the time to decide which of the credits can be removed. Hopefully I can get this done by tomorrow.TrademarkedTarantula (talk) 06:10, 29 May 2023 (UTC)
- Partly done.
Operation Lost Trust - citations are bad on some references.History person 2 (talk) 13:40, 23 June 2023 (UTC)
- Done --Less Unless (talk) 17:58, 23 June 2023 (UTC)
Teleport (Staten Island) - Bare URLs in references.Tinton5 (talk) 06:31, 23 June 2023 (UTC)
- Done --Less Unless (talk) 07:52, 23 June 2023 (UTC)
Playground Pier - bare URL found in references.Tinton5 (talk) 04:25, 18 June 2023 (UTC)Ghorbati – General cleanup required, also further linking.--Hildeoc (talk) 12:28, 17 June 2023 (UTC)Checkatrade.com - Page may require clean up due to paid contribution. I rewrote this page as a verified paid contributor, so cannot clean up myself. I believe it's written impartially and referenced fully. Can this be resolved?Thomas Went (talk)William Herle (spy) article appears to have properly sourced information but is ungrammatical and has extensive sentence structure issues and misspellings.Adambondy (talk) 07:11, 25 May 2023 (UTC)Piero Ferrucci – seems promotional, and obviously needs cleanup.--Hildeoc (talk) 00:17, 13 July 2023 (UTC)
- On hold: I nominated it at Afd as lacking indication of notability. Edward-Woodrow :) [talk] 22:36, 17 July 2023 (UTC)
- Article was Deleted per WP:GNG. TarantulaTM (speak with me) (my legacy) 22:01, 28 July 2023 (UTC)
Tânia Tomé seems like a promotional article and needs clean-up. I tried to do it myself but I am a newbie so don't want to mess it up.List of Yakshagana artists needs heavy restructuring, a better lead, more citations, and basically needs a cleanup in almost every aspect.Grumpylawnchair (talk) 04:13, 30 June 2023 (UTC)
- Article was Deleted via WP:PROD. North America1000 10:51, 21 July 2023 (UTC)
NPE Extension Expressway - Mess of colors and tables, cites no sources and needs a lot of cleanup.- Pianolettuce (talk) 16:50, 18 January 2023 (UTC)Hans Wilsdorf – many bare urls.North America1000 10:37, 5 August 2023 (UTC)
- Done by Egeymi (talk · contribs).--Less Unless (talk) 19:38, 8 August 2023 (UTC)
- Fixed by Egeymi (diff). North America1000 10:27, 5 August 2023 (UTC)
- Done by Egeymi (talk · contribs). --Less Unless (talk) 18:50, 8 August 2023 (UTC)
Lim Ji-yeon – many bare urls.North America1000 10:37, 5 August 2023 (UTC)
- Done --Less Unless (talk) 19:08, 8 August 2023 (UTC)
- Peugeot Pars. Lot of words aren't sentence case, some bad grammar. Doctorkaufman (talk) 09:40, 31 July 2023 (UTC)
National Institute of Oceanography and Applied Geophysics. I wrote the contribution so I guess I'm not entitled to clean it up (am I?). I worked a lot on the style and the sources so that the tone could be neutral and non promotional. However, I work for the institute I wrote about so I think that the reason why the cleanup bot appeared is that there is a "conflict of interest" issue. I hope somebody could have an external look and help me to make the page compliant to the wiki policies. thanks--Marinadalessa (talk) 10:22, 19 July 2023 (UTC)- Since you're closely connected to the article's subject (you work there), you have a conflict of interest with that place. You made a great choice posting this article here on WikiProject Cleanup, as you can get someone independent and not connected to the subject. Thanks, TarantulaTM (speak with me) (my legacy) 17:39, 31 July 2023 (UTC)
- Done. I've decided to be bold and delete the "Research" and "Missions" sections, as they were cited with a self published source (it came from the subject's website). I feel as though a person who works there most likely would promote those research fields. If you feel as though this edit isn't right, you may undo it. TarantulaTM (speak with me) (my legacy) 18:09, 31 July 2023 (UTC)
List of New Jersey tornadoes - bare URLs in references need clean up.Tinton5 (talk) 06:32, 13 August 2023 (UTC)
- Done --Less Unless (talk) 10:15, 13 August 2023 (UTC)
List of Hoshin Engi characters – the terminology must follow the Viz Media translation of the manga. I did my best to fix spellings (e.g. Taikobo, King Chu, Hiko Ko, paope, and Kongrong instead of Taikoubou, Chuuoh, Kou Hiko, paopei, and Konron) but I left some unchanged as I was not familiar enough with the translation.--YukaSylvie (talk) 08:24, 12 August 2023 (UTC)
- @YukaSylvie: I have struck this entry, because it is a relatively complex request that would require research, and is more suited for WP:GOCER rather than here. North America1000 14:11, 31 August 2023 (UTC)
United States Armed Forces – many bare urls.North America1000 10:37, 5 August 2023 (UTC)
- Done by several users.--Less Unless (talk) 10:10, 13 August 2023 (UTC)
John Mellencamp discography – many bare urls.North America1000 10:37, 5 August 2023 (UTC)
- Done --Less Unless (talk) 15:46, 13 August 2023 (UTC)
Emergency Alert System – many bare urls.North America1000 10:37, 5 August 2023 (UTC)
- Done by Persent101. --Less Unless (talk) 15:32, 20 August 2023 (UTC)
Working holiday visa – many bare urls.North America1000 10:37, 5 August 2023 (UTC)
- Done --Less Unless (talk) 16:01, 20 August 2023 (UTC)
Okimi – Translation from Japanese. Thorough cleanup required.--Hildeoc (talk) 17:24, 16 February 2023 (UTC)- Comment: Grammar is okay at this point. The article needs someone who can translate some referenced engravings and correctly place the citations from the original article. StigmaOfTruth (talk) 04:12, 2 April 2023 (UTC)
- Struck the post at this point. Performing complex research to address translations and engravings is more suited for WP:GOCER or Wikipedia talk:WikiProject Japan at this point. North America1000 14:38, 31 August 2023 (UTC)
- @NMW03: I have struck your entry here because 1) the article presently has no cleanup templates on it, and 2) you did not provide a reason for cleanup here. North America1000 14:08, 31 August 2023 (UTC)
Bollito misto – The listed sources are all bare urls.North America1000 08:34, 3 September 2023 (UTC)Lowe's Market - Two references (one of which I added today) need to be fixed from error messages.Pahiy (talk) 19:37, 29 September 2023 (UTC)
List of ongoing armed conflicts – Has some bare URLs and also reference errors.North America1000 09:33, 3 September 2023 (UTC)