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The screenshot needs a description to be connected to the article, otherwise it's decorative (->fairuse-policy) --elias.hc 08:47, 21 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Removed the image from the article. --elias.hc 19:18, 23 May 2006 (UTC)[reply]

The page should have some of the examples of Engrish used throughout the course of the game.

Why? Pretty much every game with English released in Japan has 'Engrish'... its a pretty infantile thing to point out. 207.172.52.41 23:19, 10 June 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Here, Engrish is very notable! --Artman40 (talk) 20:39, 19 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]
But it certainly needs a reception section. --Artman40 (talk) 12:00, 26 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]

GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Radiant Silvergun/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: TheJoebro64 (talk · contribs) 20:14, 4 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]

I'll finish this by the end of the week. JOEBRO64 20:14, 4 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Review

@TarkusAB: Overall, this article is fantastic. I just have a few points:

  • I'd link to porting when it is first mentioned in the lead. Same thing goes for development.
  • The story of Radiant Silvergun is told non-linearly through animated videos and scripted dialogue between stages—I think you might need a reference for this, as it's sort of an original claim.
  • The title "Radiant Silvergun" is in reference to an early concept for the gameThe title "Radiant Silvergun" is in reference to an early concept for the game
  • None of the publications (CVG, GameSpot, etc.) in the reception section have links to their respective pages.
  • The hyphen in "rerelease" is unneeded. Standard style is to omit the hyphen in "re-" words unless it causes an ambiguous meaning (example: "recover" vs. "re-cover").

That's all I found. I think your articles get better every time, Tarkus. Nice work. JOEBRO64 23:55, 9 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]

@TheJoebro64: Thanks for reviewing. I am pretty busy this week irl, but will get to Shade and this when I have some time. May not be until weekend. TarkusABtalk 13:43, 10 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]
No rush. Take your time. JOEBRO64 19:07, 11 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]
@TheJoebro64: Done TarkusABtalk 13:47, 15 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]
Great! Let's get this promoted. JOEBRO64 14:47, 15 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]