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Reviewer: Tezero (talk · contribs) 18:20, 1 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]


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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()
3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()
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First comments:

  • What's the rationale for including one, but not all, of the soundtrack covers? Same with the singles.
    • I am following the template of the Final Fantasy and Mana music articles, which include one to two images for albums, but not for every single album if there are multiple releases or the article is about a series. That would be considered overuse. Singles fall under the same rules. --ProtoDrake (talk) 18:34, 1 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]
  • File:NakashimaHitori.jpg is too large for fair-use guidelines; shrink to ≤100,000 total pixels.
  • I hate to ask, but do you really have to hide the tracklists for singles?
  • Could you add a genre for anything?
    • Similar to the explenation above first point: as I'm following their example, and the FF articles don't really go into genres (especially when/as they're not specified in the references), I haven't (or can't) included a specific genre. --ProtoDrake (talk) 18:34, 1 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Tezero (talk) 18:20, 1 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Back; sorry.

  • "the story's theme of "fusion"" - ??? "Fusion" is a very vague word.
  • "though he found it quite bombastic" - is this a negative? Do you mean "overblown", "over-ambitious", or something of the like?
  • "giving the soundtrack "a 10/10"" - is the way he phrased this important? You can probably just say "ten out of ten".
  • Consider referring to Drag-On Dragoon Chips Music as a compilation; I'm not sure (though I'm also not sure otherwise) I'd call it a soundtrack

I think it looks good otherwise, so this'll be it. Tezero (talk) 23:59, 2 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

All done. --ProtoDrake (talk) 10:31, 3 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]
Oh, jeez, forgot all about this. ProtoDrake, you should've tagged me! Anyway, you can either pass the GA yourself or I'll do it when I get to my real computer. Tezero (talk) 16:52, 6 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]
Tezero, I'll wait. --ProtoDrake (talk) 17:14, 6 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]
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