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-"Mai has been used extensively by SNK to promote their games, other products ranging from clothing items to condoms, and the company as a whole." This sentence makes very little sense and is very confusing.
Took a random selection of sources to verify content for.
11: The site linked in this doesn't seem to reference Mai at all, though I may just be missing where this information can be found.
Archived version has the info about her original design.
27: Verifies that Mai appears in Gal Fighters
40: Verifies that Mai appears in Neo Geo Infinite Shooting
46: The citation lacks a link, but the information appears accurate.
51: Neither source refers to Mai being in '97 OL, though she appears in images. If possible, please find a source listing her appearing in the text body, but this shouldn't be too much of an issue overall.
Are you sure? She's even in the screenshots on both references. Do a string search for "不知火舞", it's her name in Chinese.
63: Verifies Mai's appearance in Samurai Showdown Slash.
99: Verifies Mai's appearance in the film and her association with Iori Yagami.
103: Verifies Mai's role in the film.
126: Verifies the appearances of Mai's outfit in King of Soldier II.
133: Verifies the appearances of Mai's outfit in Phantasy Star Online 2.
159: Source says what is cited in the article. This citation is a bit trivial though, so I do worry it's inclusion here may be unnecessary.
164: Source says what it is cited for.
186: Does not verify info it is cited for, and instead links to an entirely unrelated article about gambling. This should be fixed.
Not sure if it's a bug, article is a synopsis of the movie mentioned.
Earwig detects at max a 17% similarity, which hails from the BTVA cite, and is primarily just the fact both reference the same names and game titles. This shouldn't be an issue.
Not to put a dent in this review—and admittedly, I haven't taken a good look at the whole article, although it does seem quite well written—I don't see a single mention of Mai's development within the lede. With fictional characters, it's important to include things from both the "Production" and "Reception" sections; not just the latter.--PanagiotisZois (talk) 14:02, 16 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@PanagiotisZois: I will say a lot of times that info isn't always included, but due to the length of this article I definitely get it. I've expanded the lead to include her development info without going too overboard.--Kung Fu Man (talk) 14:55, 16 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
