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03:14, 27 September 2024 review of submission by Dark, the Editor

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How can I delete my draft Dark, the Editor (talk) 03:14, 27 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I have put a tag on the draft requesting deletion. Next time you want to request that a page you have created be deleted, you can edit it and add the tag {{db-author}} at the top. --bonadea contributions talk 07:31, 27 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

05:01, 27 September 2024 review of submission by VikrantG0095

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I'm a beginner. i don't have a idea writing a article . VikrantG0095 (talk) 05:01, 27 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

It's best not to attempt the difficult task of writing a new article until you have an idea of what the process is and what is being looked for. Please use the new user tutorial and spend much time editing existing articles in areas that interest you first, to learn how things work here.
Note that writing about yourself is highly discouraged, please read the autobiography policy. Wikipedia is not a place to post your resume or to tell the world about yourself. Wikipedia articles summarize what independent reliable sources with significant coverage have chosen on their own to say about a topic, showing how it meets the special Wikipedia definition of notability; like a notable person. 331dot (talk) 08:18, 27 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

11:46, 27 September 2024 review of submission by JD John M. Turner

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How many more sources are needed in the article? JD John M. Turner (talk) 11:46, 27 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@JD John M. Turner To establish notability, we usually look for at least three sources which are each independent of the subject, from reliable places, and provide significant coverage.
To be honest I think you've probably got enough sources to show notability, so I am pinging in @Tavantius to see if they have any thoughts. Qcne (talk) 11:51, 27 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Some parts of the article are unsourced. If @JD John M. Turner can source those, I'll accept it. Tavantius (talk) 12:25, 27 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Hello @Tavantius, I'm uncertain about which sections of the article require additional sources. I assume that the content not backed by sources ought to be removed. ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ JD John M. Turner (talk) 05:37, 30 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

13:32, 27 September 2024 review of submission by Aidillia

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I don't understand why @98Tigerius declined the submission and stated "please resubmit after the series airs" can anybody explain? i don't think there's a problem with submission per WP:TVSERIES. Aidillia (talk) 13:32, 27 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Aidillia: the problem with unreleased films and TV programmes is that the sources are invariably just pre-launch publicity. We don't want to see what the producers' marketing teams have said, we want to see what independent and reliable third parties have said, without any inducement by the producers.
Resubmitting a declined draft without any improvement is not helpful. If you disagree with the reviewer's assessment, you're welcome to publish this yourself, since you have the necessary permissions. Just be aware that New Page Patrol applies the same criteria (more or less) to newly published articles as we do, so publishing this against the AfC reviewer's advice may result in the article being sent back to drafts anyway, or worse, deleted. -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 07:39, 28 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Ok, now i understand. Aidillia (talk) 09:47, 28 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

14:51, 27 September 2024 review of submission by Madison Durand

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Hello,

I removed external links from the body and converted them to references. I would like to know what else I need to do to ensure that this draft is not rejected or deleted.

Thank you. Madison Durand (talk) 14:51, 27 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

We don't really do pre-review reviews here, the best way to get feedback is to submit it. Even if rejected I don't see why it would be deleted. It won't be rejected if you've made changes and there seems to be at least a prospect that the subject merits a Wikipedia article and it is properly sourced.
You took a very professional looking picture of the professor and he posed for you. What is your connection to him? 331dot (talk) 14:54, 27 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

15:09, 27 September 2024 review of submission by Mrblieu2011

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Please remove draft article for Elizabeth Barlow Artist. Mrblieu2011 (talk) 15:09, 27 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

17:59, 27 September 2024 review of submission by 216.106.47.88

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When I click on the blue words in the English version clothing sections, a note comes up saying “this page does not exist (saraguells). The page does exist in Spanish https://es.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sarag%C3%BCell. Does this mean you won’t be redirected there until it is translated, or what? (Umlauts over the U) I don’t need an answer, but just thought this might need fixing. 216.106.47.88 (talk) 17:59, 27 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

This page is to ask questions about the draft submission process; I'm not clear on what your question has to do with this. 331dot (talk) 18:21, 27 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

18:54, 27 September 2024 review of submission by Cassandra L from NELP

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Hi! I need some assistance and recommendations on amending this piece so it sounds less like an advertisement. I see some tone shifts I could make in the first paragraph, but I'd also appreciate some recommendations in general as I continue to work on this. Thank you! Cassandra L from NELP (talk) 18:54, 27 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

You've summarized the work of your organization, but not what independent reliable sources say is important about the work of your organization and how that makes the organization notable as Wikipedia defines it. You've largely summarized primary sources like House/Senate websites and said things like it "advocated" or "led" for certain policies. I get that you think what your organization does is important- and it may be so- but we need independent sources that state your organization had a particular influence on a policy or other government decision. 331dot (talk) 19:02, 27 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I appreciate your specific feedback and find it a huge help. I will do some additional research to see if there are sources that are not just citing my organization for its research, but specifically crediting it for work on specific policies. Thanks @331dot. Cassandra L from NELP (talk) 19:54, 27 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

20:22, 27 September 2024 review of submission by 41.114.177.55

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How can I delete the draft 41.114.177.55 (talk) 20:22, 27 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Are you the principal author? It will also be automatically deleted after six months of inactivity. 331dot (talk) 20:30, 27 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
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