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02:31, 26 September 2024 review of submission by Soccerondemand

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I received feedback indicating that the sources provided for verification of Eddie Loewen’s accomplishments were deemed unreliable. However, I believe all the sources I submitted are credible and accurately reflect his achievements.

Could you please advise on this matter? Thank you for your assistance.

Soccerondemand (talk) 02:31, 26 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Literally half the links go to press releases, which are not suitable sources. Another couple are simply interviews, which are also not independent. Of the few remaining links, it's mainly Loewen talking about something, not coverage about Loewen. Not a single fact in the main text is properly cited; the references are just dumped in a pile at the end. CoffeeCrumbs (talk) 04:50, 26 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Furthermore, at least two of the press releases ([1] and [2]) are in fact the same press release published in two places. That's one (primary, non-independent) source, not two. --bonadea contributions talk 07:23, 26 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Soccerondemand: we also require pretty much every statement you make (in an article on a living person, especially) to be supported with inline citation to a reliable sources. This draft has precisely one inline citation, and that's to a non-reliable source. Additionally, there are various external sources listed under 'References', but they aren't cited anywhere so it's not clear which source supports what information.
I'm doubtful whether notability is there, but let's first get the referencing right so that can be assessed properly. -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 07:44, 26 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@DoubleGrazing Thank you for your feedback. As I'm new to the platform, I am still familiarizing myself with proper citation practices, which can feel a bit overwhelming. However, I will do my best to improve. Is there a simple step-by-step available that I can follow? Soccerondemand (talk) 21:54, 27 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Wikipedia has little interest in what the subject of an article says or wants to say about themselves, or what their associates say about them. Wikipedia is almost entirely interested in what people who have no connection with the subject, and who have not been prompted or fed information on behalf of the subject, have chosen to publish about the subject in reliable sources. If enough material is cited from independent sources to establish notability, a limited amount of uncontroversial factual information may be added from non-independent sources. ColinFine (talk) 19:42, 26 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

09:05, 26 September 2024 review of submission by Rawvandom

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I not able to submit requests on this page Rawvandom (talk) 09:05, 26 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Rawvandom: That is because the draft has been rejected, which means that it is not possible to resubmit it. What is your connection to the users Sathishlee58 and SKumar58? --bonadea contributions talk 09:38, 26 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

10:03, 26 September 2024 review of submission by 2A0A:EF40:103B:2201:384D:9861:109A:42C7

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Please clarify 2A0A:EF40:103B:2201:384D:9861:109A:42C7 (talk) 10:03, 26 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

The draft has been rejected as a non-notable company whose draft's purpose it to promote itself on Wikipedia - this is prohibited. Qcne (talk) 10:06, 26 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

10:19, 26 September 2024 review of submission by Rahulkentwal0007

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provide us the information why our article are declined Rahulkentwal0007 (talk) 10:19, 26 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Rahulkentwal0007 No indication of notability. Qcne (talk) 10:20, 26 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
If the man can read the future in the stars, surely he should not need to ask why the draft was rejected? --bonadea contributions talk 12:26, 1 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

11:23, 26 September 2024 review of submission by Neelesh Pandiyath

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Sir, Request for your kind assistance to improve this article. Neelesh Pandiyath (talk) 11:23, 26 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Neelesh Pandiyath The draft has been rejected, and will not be considered further. Sorry. Qcne (talk) 11:42, 26 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Ok Sir. Will submit a fresh draft Neelesh Pandiyath (talk) 17:28, 29 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Neelesh Pandiyath It has been rejected, do not submit a fresh draft! Qcne (talk) 17:38, 29 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

14:28, 26 September 2024 review of submission by Lewiseguy

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I'm trying to ensure my content complies with the guidelines and isn't flagged, but I'm unsure how to proceed. Lewiseguy (talk) 14:28, 26 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hi @Lewiseguy, the majority of your sources are just links to homepages of organisations. You need to source every single statement to a reliable source, and to the precise location on the webpage that the source is being used to reference the information. Take source #8, which points to the UN home page. How does a reader verify "He is also certified in Cyber Diplomacy by the United Nations" when the link just points to the homepage for the UN? But more importantly, why does this certification even belong on an encyclopaedic biography? Qcne (talk) 14:35, 26 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Thank you, appreciated, any other comments?
did some adjustments and i'm reviewing the rest accordingly, I took some info form his linkedin, btw is it common to link linkedin pages? Lewiseguy (talk) 19:36, 26 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Lewiseguy We're trying to establish notability first, and LinkedIn is useless for that as it's the subject talking about themself. Qcne (talk) 19:40, 26 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

20:12, 26 September 2024 review of submission by Cfcplay

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Hello

I am looking for someone who can write the best way to get my page approved on wikipedia. I recently got rejected because Submission reads like an advertisement Cfcplay (talk) 20:12, 26 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Uh, wow. This is actually the most promotional draft I've ever seen. Normally I would offer advice but in this case, I'm sorry to say, I think all I can do is advise you to do something else with your time. Wikipedia is extremely unlikely to ever have an article on this free calculator website. -- asilvering (talk) 20:28, 26 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Cfcplay (ec) I fixed your link, you need the "Draft:" portion. The draft does little more than state the calculator exists; a Wikipedia article must summarize what independent reliable sources with significant coverage have chosen on their own to say about the subject, showing how it meets the special Wikipedia definition of notability. You shouldn't be just documenting its appearances in media. I think you will essentially need to blank the draft and start over, first gathering appropriate sources. Please see referencing for beginners as well. 331dot (talk) 20:29, 26 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
ok thanks for the info i will find someone to write Cfcplay (talk) 20:33, 26 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
No one said anything about that being an issue. 331dot (talk) 20:36, 26 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
ok thanks Cfcplay (talk) 20:41, 26 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

23:15, 26 September 2024 review of submission by Peacehappinesslove

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Hello, can someone assist me in letting me know why the article I created was declined? Peacehappinesslove (talk) 23:15, 26 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

The reason was left by the reviewer. Do you have a more specific question about it? A different account created the draft. Was that you? 331dot (talk) 23:17, 26 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@331dot Confirming I was able to find the feedback from the reviewer and fixed the problem. I am not the creator of the draft. Peacehappinesslove (talk) 23:33, 26 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
How did you know the draft existed? 331dot (talk) 23:38, 26 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@331dot when I tried to input the name in draft it said the someone created information on the subject Peacehappinesslove (talk) 23:42, 26 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]
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