Jump to content

User talk:FoCuSandLeArN/Archive 10

Page contents not supported in other languages.
From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia
Archive 5←Archive 8Archive 9Archive 10Archive 11Archive 12→Archive 15

The Signpost: 26 June 2013

June 2013 wikification awards!

The Greater Working Wikifier's Barnstar
For scoring 3rd place on the leaderboard in the June 2013 Wikification drive, FoCuSandLeArN, you are hereby awarded the Greater Working Wikifier's barnstar. Congratulations!
The Silver Wikification Barnstar
For wikifying a total of 65 articles, you are also awarded the Silver Wikification barnstar. Keep up the good work! :) Can you decipher this acronymical code? CYDTC (Hint: It's really easy!) (talk) 06:45, 1 July 2013 (UTC)

Edward Vilga: what it is marked as ORPHAN?

Hi,

I have posted an article for review and some one made comments that the article is an Orphan although I have inserted huge wikipedia linked pages in the article. Please suggest me.

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Edward_Vilga


Arifhasan23 14:23, 1 July 2013 (UTC)Arifhasan23 — Preceding unsigned comment added by Arifhasan23 (talk • contribs)

Hello there! Don't worry too much about that. It only means that no other articles link towards the new one. If you find any relevant article that has to do with Mr Vilga, feel free to place a wikilink to the article. FoCuSandLeArN (talk) 15:31, 1 July 2013 (UTC)

Hi. Thank you for your recent edits. Wikipedia appreciates your help. We noticed though that you've added some links pointing to disambiguation pages. Such links are almost always unintended, since a disambiguation page is merely a list of "Did you mean..." article titles. Read the FAQ • Join us at the DPL WikiProject.

Eupeodes rojasi (check to confirm | fix with Dab solver)
added links pointing to Pedicel, Lunule, Vitta and Trochanter
Bactrocera invadens (check to confirm | fix with Dab solver)
added a link pointing to Pecten

It's OK to remove this message. Also, to stop receiving these messages, follow these opt-out instructions. Thanks, DPL bot (talk) 10:45, 3 July 2013 (UTC)

The Signpost: 03 July 2013

Wikipedia_talk:Articles_for_creation/Luis_Amaral updated

Hi FoCuSandLeArN, thanks for your suggestions for the article. I've added sources and updated the licensing information for the images. Best, Zengxiaohanzxh 13:45, 10 July 2013 (UTC)

Thank You

Dear FoCusandLeArN thank you for taking the time to review my submission on Penang Island Jazz Festival. Ive attempted to add 3rd party references from local newspapers. Here is hoping the next reviewer will inform me if my submission is accepted or not. Thanks again for taking the time to read my submission and to point me in the right direction. 13:45, 10 July 2013 (UTC)

Hi. Thank you for your recent edits. Wikipedia appreciates your help. We noticed though that you've added some links pointing to disambiguation pages. Such links are almost always unintended, since a disambiguation page is merely a list of "Did you mean..." article titles. Read the FAQ • Join us at the DPL WikiProject.

Ribes sanchezii (check to confirm | fix with Dab solver)
added links pointing to Petiole, Petioles, Calyx, Pedicel, Peduncle and Corolla
Ribes colandina (check to confirm | fix with Dab solver)
added links pointing to Petiole, Calyx, Peduncle and Corolla
Ribes contumazensis (check to confirm | fix with Dab solver)
added links pointing to Petiole, Calyx and Peduncle
Urtica lalibertadensis (check to confirm | fix with Dab solver)
added links pointing to Petioles and Perigon
Urtica urentivelutina (check to confirm | fix with Dab solver)
added links pointing to Petiole and Perigon
Campylobacter laridis (check to confirm | fix with Dab solver)
added a link pointing to Anaerobic
Rhodopila globiformis (check to confirm | fix with Dab solver)
added a link pointing to Anaerobic

It's OK to remove this message. Also, to stop receiving these messages, follow these opt-out instructions. Thanks, DPL bot (talk) 10:57, 10 July 2013 (UTC)

The Signpost: 10 July 2013

Hi. Thank you for your recent edits. Wikipedia appreciates your help. We noticed though that you've added some links pointing to disambiguation pages. Such links are almost always unintended, since a disambiguation page is merely a list of "Did you mean..." article titles. Read the FAQ • Join us at the DPL WikiProject.

Palpada lindneri (check to confirm | fix with Dab solver)
added links pointing to Tarsus, Lunule, Pile, Dorsum, Scutellum and Trochanter
Solanum huaylasense (check to confirm | fix with Dab solver)
added links pointing to Petiole, Calyx, Pedicel, Peduncle, Internode and Tegument
Macrometopia maculipennis (check to confirm | fix with Dab solver)
added links pointing to Lunule, Pile, Pleuron, Dorsum and Scutellum
Palpada chilensis (check to confirm | fix with Dab solver)
added links pointing to Lunule, Pile, Squama, Dorsum and Dichoptic
Palpada suprarufa (check to confirm | fix with Dab solver)
added links pointing to Tarsus, Tegula, Dorsum, Scutellum and Trochanter
Palpada megafemur (check to confirm | fix with Dab solver)
added links pointing to Tarsus, Pleuron, Scutellum and Trochanter
Procaris hawaiana (check to confirm | fix with Dab solver)
added links pointing to Molar, Cervical, Chela and Dorsum
Palaemonella burnsi (check to confirm | fix with Dab solver)
added links pointing to Molar, Chela and Lamella
Solanum arcanum (check to confirm | fix with Dab solver)
added links pointing to Calyx, Pedicel and Tegument
Chaceon atopus (check to confirm | fix with Dab solver)
added links pointing to Saint Helena Island and Chela
Periclimenes pholeter (check to confirm | fix with Dab solver)
added links pointing to Molar and Chela
Anguillicoloides papernai (check to confirm | fix with Dab solver)
added a link pointing to Papilla
Calliasmata pholidota (check to confirm | fix with Dab solver)
added a link pointing to Interstitial
Chaceon crosnieri (check to confirm | fix with Dab solver)
added a link pointing to Chela
Coolia tropicalis (check to confirm | fix with Dab solver)
added a link pointing to Pore
Cuapetes lacertae (check to confirm | fix with Dab solver)
added a link pointing to Chela
Phytophthora psychrophila (check to confirm | fix with Dab solver)
added a link pointing to Pedicel
Urtica lalibertadensis (check to confirm | fix with Dab solver)
added a link pointing to Stem

It's OK to remove this message. Also, to stop receiving these messages, follow these opt-out instructions. Thanks, DPL bot (talk) 10:59, 17 July 2013 (UTC)

The Signpost: 17 July 2013

Further on submission declined on June 3rd - Loesche

Hi FoCuSandLeArN! Thanks a lot for your suggestion of using WP:CORP for getting started. I will amend the information provided according to your remarks. I'm working on the reliable sources by third-parties issue and hopefully will have all this soon. I appreciate all your help! Kind regards, Vzuloaga (talk) 14:23, 5 June 2013 (UTC)

I have unreviewed a page you curated

Hi, I'm Vanjagenije. I wanted to let you know that I saw the page you reviewed, Staphylococcus schleiferi, and have un-reviewed it again. If you have any questions, please ask them on my talk page. Thank you. Vanjagenije (talk) 02:08, 23 July 2013 (UTC)

Sorry, this was a pure mistake. I'm using the New Page patrolling plug-in, and I accidentally clicked to un-review the article. The previous message was automatically sent by the plug-in. Vanjagenije (talk) 02:17, 23 July 2013 (UTC)
No worries, have a good one! FoCuSandLeArN (talk) 02:19, 23 July 2013 (UTC)

Hi. Thank you for your recent edits. Wikipedia appreciates your help. We noticed though that you've added some links pointing to disambiguation pages. Such links are almost always unintended, since a disambiguation page is merely a list of "Did you mean..." article titles. Read the FAQ • Join us at the DPL WikiProject.

Dehalobacter restrictus (check to confirm | fix with Dab solver)
added a link pointing to Reduction
Helicobacter hepaticus (check to confirm | fix with Dab solver)
added a link pointing to Colon
Loma morhua (check to confirm | fix with Dab solver)
added a link pointing to Loma
Paenibacillus koreensis (check to confirm | fix with Dab solver)
added a link pointing to Antifungal
Trichosarcina polymorpha (check to confirm | fix with Dab solver)
added a link pointing to Life cycle

It's OK to remove this message. Also, to stop receiving these messages, follow these opt-out instructions. Thanks, DPL bot (talk) 11:08, 24 July 2013 (UTC)

The Signpost: 24 July 2013

Rebecca Lindsey, Singer/Songwriter/Philanthropist

To Whom it May Concern:

I have tried several times to up load this article about Rebecca Lindsey. I have included legitimate references (including Wikipedia article about Charlie Craig which even mentions Rebecca) proving everything in the article is accurate, notable and true as well several times. If you would, please let me know as soon as possible what is lacking whereas I have been trying to up load this since JUNE. I also finally got approval after showing Rebecca owns the pictures submitted and now the pictures cannot be up loaded even when I renamed them. All the pictures previously up loaded still need to be un-deleted as Luke from Wikipedia suggested 6/17/2013 (and has still not been done).

Please see below and email me at info@rebeccalindsey.net.

Thank you,

Samantha

Dear Rebecca Lindsey,

Thank you for your email. Our response follows your message.

07.06.2013 07:19 - Rebecca Lindsey schreef:

> Johan, > > With the exception of *submitted photos Rebecca 3.jpg*, which is a public > newspaper article, and *1275_63647791368_7553_n.jpg*, which is an Orlando > Matters public news article, the authors and photographers for all > submitted photographs were employed by Rebecca Lindsey, LLC through > work-for-hire, and as such Rebecca Lindsey, LLC owns all submitted work > (photos: Rebecca 1.jpg, 1275_63642536368_6299_n.jpg, > 1275_63644226368_3291_n.jpg). > > To note, Rebecca 2.jpg was an article my work-for-hire Publicist (a Rebecca > Lindsey, LLC employee) wrote about me performing at Charlie-palooza. > Because the article written was by an individual employed as work-for-hire > by Rebecca Lindsey, LLC, Rebecca Lindsey, LLC owns the work. > > Photo Rebecca 4.jpg: The photographer was employed by Rebecca Lindsey, LLC > through work-for-hire. The work is the product of the entity (Rebecca > Lindsey, LLC) who hired it to be done. Thus, the work-for-hire concept is > an exception to copyright law, in which the work is owned by the creator. > Therefore, the employer—not the employee—is considered the legal author. > > In regards to *Rebecca 3.jpg*, which is a public newspaper article, and * > 1275_63647791368_7553_n.jpg*, which was an Orlando Matters public news > article, the "fair use" exemption to (U.S.) copyright law was created to > allow things such as commentary, parody, news reporting, research and > education about copyrighted works without the permission of the author. > That's vital so that copyright law doesn't block your freedom to express > your own works. > > Fair use is a complex doctrine meant to allow certain valuable social > purposes. > > Under the fair use doctrine of the U.S. copyright statute, it is > permissible to use limited portions of a work including quotes, for > purposes such as commentary, criticism, news reporting, and scholarly > reports. There are no legal rules permitting the use of a specific number > of words, a certain number of musical notes, or percentage of a work. > Whether a particular use qualifies as fair use depends on all the > circumstances. See FL 102, Fair Use, and Circular 21, Reproductions of > Copyrighted Works by Educators and Librarians. > > Revised: 02-Apr-2013 > > > Reference: > > U.S. Copyright Office > > 101 Independence Avenue SE > > Washington, DC 20559-6000 > > (202) 707-3000 > > > > > With that in mind, if you would, please finally approve and post the > submitted photographs and article written. > > Regards, > > Rebecca Lindsey > > -------------------------------- > > I looked at the files and it seems you are not the copyright-holder ( = > > photographer / author of article ) of any of the files. Only the > copyright-holder > > can release a photo or article into a free license. > > > > Yours sincerely, > > Johan Bos

06/17/2013 21:38 - Rebecca Lindsey wrote:

> Johan, > > I tried up loading the images but I keep getting this message: A file > identical to this file (File:Rebecca Lindsey "Headlights on the Highway" > album cover.jpg<http://commons.wikimedia.org/w/index.php? title=File:Rebecca_Lindsey_%22Headlights_on_the_Highway%22_album_cover.jpg&action= edit&redlink=1>) > has previously been deleted. You should check that file's deletion history > before proceeding to re-upload it. > > May I submit the pictures to you through e-mail for you to up load since it > will not allow me? >

You should be able to upload the other photos under different names; I'll request undeletion for that specific photo.

Please provide links to the other photos in a reply.

Yours sincerely, Luke Faraone Samantha Beddingham (talk) 18:47, 27 July 2013 (UTC)

Hello there. First of all, the aforementioned copyright matter needs to be resolved through the appropriate channels, which I'm not familiar with and I recommend you continue your communication with Johan, etc.
As for the article, sources need to be: independent, reliable, and extensive. I cannot help you unless you read those policies, as they will be of great use and are paramount to Wikipedia. Notability is objective. A rule of thumb: include EXTENSIVE references (not just passing mentions, i.e. the article needs to be entirely about the artist) in newspapers, books, magazines or other edited works about the person. If the article has won national or international awards (e.g. not a state fair talent competition) then please include the appropriate citations. Which sources are not considered reliable? Primary sources, such as press releases; the artist's own publications; amazon, facebook, twitter; any source related to the artist or her industry (e.g. her publisher, manager, etc.). It might well be the case that the artist is non-notable according to Wikipedia's standards and policies, in which case I recommend you wait some time until (and if) she is. Your edits are appreciated; be aware that this isn't chastising, but a way of setting the bar for Wikipedia as a whole.
It might be useful to read this policy too. Regards, FoCuSandLeArN (talk) 19:31, 29 July 2013 (UTC)

Hi. Thank you for your recent edits. Wikipedia appreciates your help. We noticed though that you've added some links pointing to disambiguation pages. Such links are almost always unintended, since a disambiguation page is merely a list of "Did you mean..." article titles. Read the FAQ • Join us at the DPL WikiProject.

Acidianus infernus (check to confirm | fix with Dab solver)
added a link pointing to Sulfur bacteria
Bacillus arseniciselenatis (check to confirm | fix with Dab solver)
added a link pointing to Respiration
Bacillus selenitireducens (check to confirm | fix with Dab solver)
added a link pointing to Respiration
Desulfobulbus propionicus (check to confirm | fix with Dab solver)
added a link pointing to Reduction
Desulfomonile tiedjei (check to confirm | fix with Dab solver)
added a link pointing to Reduction
Methylocella silvestris (check to confirm | fix with Dab solver)
added a link pointing to Vesicle
Pyrobaculum aerophilum (check to confirm | fix with Dab solver)
added a link pointing to Respiration
Roseobacter dentrificans (check to confirm | fix with Dab solver)
added a link pointing to Phototrophic
Roseobacter litoralis (check to confirm | fix with Dab solver)
added a link pointing to Phototrophic

It's OK to remove this message. Also, to stop receiving these messages, follow these opt-out instructions. Thanks, DPL bot (talk) 11:31, 31 July 2013 (UTC)

Lake Leigo

Hello! You removed the lead too short tag there. Did you read the edit summary before considering the tag inappropriate? 88.196.241.249 (talk) 08:01, 31 July 2013 (UTC)

Be that as it may, it's an inappropriate tag. A simple talk page post is a better option in my opinion. Wikipedia's a confusing place due to mistagging. Regards, FoCuSandLeArN (talk) 18:47, 31 July 2013 (UTC)

Moneywise

Hello. I was wondering, why not declining this Money Saving Expert article as well then? It also sounds like an advertisement. — Preceding unsigned comment added by MoneyArticleEditor (talk • contribs) 09:44, 1 August 2013 (UTC)

That article has been extensively edited since 2006 and is in quite good form at the moment, including appropriate references. Also, the article doesn't seem to have come from AfC. FoCuSandLeArN (talk) 15:02, 1 August 2013 (UTC)

The Signpost: 31 July 2013

Hola amigo

Necesito un gran favor tuyo. Tiene que ver con un clean up. Responde ASAP Thanks in advance. Miss Bono [zootalk] 15:02, 2 August 2013 (UTC)

Hola Miss Bono, todo bien? Dime... FoCuSandLeArN (talk) 23:00, 2 August 2013 (UTC)

draft entry for Her Benny (novel)

Hi there, I'm the writer of this draft page. I supplied it because at the moment it is actually a missing page, with 'red links' to it on other pages, e.g. the ones for Hocking, the film of Her Benny, and the city of Liverpool. If it is eventually decided that the subject is 'non-notable', as you suggest, those should be cleaned up. Meanwhile I've already supplied references to the novel from the Oxford Companion to English Literature and the Oxford DNB, but can't think of any others suggesting its 'notability' - a huge best-seller at the time, much reprinted since, also adapted for film and stage, but not the kind of work that attracts much literary criticism! Best wishes Sun-in-splendour (talk) 10:43, 4 August 2013 (UTC)

Thank you for your contributions! In order to establish the notability of the subject, extensive coverage in independent and reliable sources is needed. If the novel is a well-known one, it won't be hard to come by some news articles, reviews, etc. about it. If you need any further assistance, let me know. Regards, FoCuSandLeArN (talk) 19:50, 5 August 2013 (UTC)

Articles for creation/2 Sides Of The Story (Album)

Im the writer for the album article. Im new to the wiki format, but Im trying to understand why isnt this artists album sources not considered notable. If you do a search on Splitzide theres numerous links describing the album description, theres also 2 references on wikipedia of this artist collaborated with 2 grammy nominated artists. (Anthony Hamilton & Young Jeezy. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Jharris2k (talk • contribs) 10:57, 6 August 2013 (UTC)

Hello there! WP:NALBUMS is a very useful resource. Keep in mind that having collaborated with certain people is not a notability criterion per se. You need to provide extensive coverage in independent and reliable sources, e.g. reviews in newspapers, magazines, books, etc. The articles need to be entirely or substantially about the album, and not be associated with the artist in any way. You might also be interested in reading this. Regards, FoCuSandLeArN (talk) 12:42, 6 August 2013 (UTC)

ayuda del otro día!

I need a cleanup for this article. Can you help me? Thanks! Miss Bono [zootalk] 15:07, 5 August 2013 (UTC)

That is a very big task! Is there anything in particular you need to address? Or just a general clean up? I'll have a look at it tomorrow. Buen día! FoCuSandLeArN (talk) 19:48, 5 August 2013 (UTC)
I wanted to take it to GA status, but first I need to see what it's wrong with it ;). Thank you very much! :) Miss Bono [zootalk] 19:52, 5 August 2013 (UTC)
let me know when you give a look at it, please. Thanks! :) Miss Bono [zootalk] 12:56, 6 August 2013 (UTC)
Yes, will do it this afternoon ;) FoCuSandLeArN (talk) 12:58, 6 August 2013 (UTC)
Thanks again!. I don't know if I bother you with so many thanks! Miss Bono [zootalk] 13:14, 6 August 2013 (UTC)
  • Done. A few comments: 1) I wouldn't use Oprah's show as a reference, and some references should be changed to more reliable ones in general. 2) "has met with influential politicians" doesn't mean anything unless he's done stuff with them; perhaps rephrasing that sentence is appropriate. 3) I don't see why "Other songs focus on the theme of childhood vs. maturity, such as "Into the Heart", "Twilight" and "Stories for Boys"" is relevant for his biographical section. 4) The NBC Nightly News "honour" doesn't seem relevant to me. Hope this helps. Good luck! FoCuSandLeArN (talk) 01:33, 7 August 2013 (UTC)
Thank you, thank you so much!! You rock!... If you don't mind I will post your comments at Bono's talk. Again, thank you. Miss Bono [zootalk] 12:07, 7 August 2013 (UTC)

Hi. Thank you for your recent edits. Wikipedia appreciates your help. We noticed though that you've added some links pointing to disambiguation pages. Such links are almost always unintended, since a disambiguation page is merely a list of "Did you mean..." article titles. Read the FAQ • Join us at the DPL WikiProject.

Actinobacillus succinogenes (check to confirm | fix with Dab solver)
added a link pointing to Pleomorphic
Aureococcus anophagefferens (check to confirm | fix with Dab solver)
added a link pointing to Nucleus

It's OK to remove this message. Also, to stop receiving these messages, follow these opt-out instructions. Thanks, DPL bot (talk) 10:57, 7 August 2013 (UTC)

Sources for entry on Bruce Ellis Benson (Professor)

Hello FoCuSandLeArN! Thank you for your efforts in reviewing my wikipedia contribution on bruce ellis benson. Right now I am baffled as to why you consider the sources I have provided for his page as neither reliable nor independent, considering that all but his personal page are independent and all are reliable. I have more thorough support than his colleagues (see James K A Smith, for example). Thanks again! — Preceding unsigned comment added by JAGXIVII (talk • contribs) 01:38, 8 August 2013 (UTC)

Notability's established usually by coverage in media, books or any other edited sources. You must establish what significant contribution he's made for the field with independent and reliable referencing. Make sure you review those policies because they are unique to Wikipedia and might not be what you expect. Hope this helps, FoCuSandLeArN (talk) 03:08, 8 August 2013 (UTC)

August wikification drive.

Hi, FoCuSandLeArN! Did you know that I got the wikification drive for August started up a few days ago? I noticed no one else has joined up yet, so I'm spreading word about it. Cheers! :) Can you decipher this acronymical code? CYDTAC (Hint: It's really easy!) (talk) 06:02, 8 August 2013 (UTC)

Oh, didn't get the usual nudge! Cheers for the tip! FoCuSandLeArN (talk) 18:15, 8 August 2013 (UTC)

The Signpost: 07 August 2013

Vredestein brand page

Hello,

Thank you very much for your message and for reading my article on the Vredestein brand. I agree with you that the Apollo Vredestein B.V. page is quite close to being the same. But actually it is a company page while de Vredestein page I wanted to make is a page about the brand. It's like Apollo Tyres and Apollo Vredestein B.V.

How can I do this?

Thank you very much for your help,

Best regards,

Eugenieh (talk) 13:19, 13 August 2013 (UTC) Eugénie — Preceding unsigned comment added by Eugenieh (talk • contribs) 12:48, 13 August 2013 (UTC)

Well, I think at this point a discussion needs to take place as to whether it merits a separate article. Perhaps post a topic on the Vredstein talk page and Wikipedia:WikiProject Automobiles so that they can chip in. Good luck! FoCuSandLeArN (talk) 14:34, 13 August 2013 (UTC)

Hi. Thank you for your recent edits. Wikipedia appreciates your help. We noticed though that you've added some links pointing to disambiguation pages. Such links are almost always unintended, since a disambiguation page is merely a list of "Did you mean..." article titles. Read the FAQ • Join us at the DPL WikiProject.

Associated Chamber Music Players (check to confirm | fix with Dab solver)
added links pointing to Grant and Endowment
Asahikawa University (check to confirm | fix with Dab solver)
added a link pointing to Dismissal
Methanobrevibacter curvatus (check to confirm | fix with Dab solver)
added a link pointing to Biota
Methanobrevibacter cuticularis (check to confirm | fix with Dab solver)
added a link pointing to Biota
Methanobrevibacter filiformis (check to confirm | fix with Dab solver)
added a link pointing to Biota

It's OK to remove this message. Also, to stop receiving these messages, follow these opt-out instructions. Thanks, DPL bot (talk) 11:21, 14 August 2013 (UTC)

A Barnstar for You!

The AFC Backlog Buster Barnstar

Congratulations, FoCuSandLeArN! You're receiving The Invisible and Teamwork Barnstars because you reviewed 72 articles during the recent AFC Backlog elimination drive! Thank you for you contributions to Wikipedia at-large and helping to keep the backlog down. We hope you continue reviewing submissions and stay in touch at the talk page. Thank you and keep up the good work! Mdann52 (talk) 17:03, 15 August 2013 (UTC)

The Signpost: 14 August 2013

Please review this page

Spekmac Technologies

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia_talk:Articles_for_creation/Spekmac — Preceding unsigned comment added by Semymaksd (talk • contribs) 11:47, 18 August 2013 (UTC)

You've deleted the AfC templates and resubmitted content which is copied from somewhere else; both things are not appropriate. I've requested the deletion of the relevant page, and request that you follow AfC instructions and policies in future, otherwise you will be blocked from editing. Regards, FoCuSandLeArN (talk) 18:41, 18 August 2013 (UTC)

Article

Hello,


I'm user amellondon my article has been reviewed and not submitted at this time, please may I ask why and can I resubmit what do I need to change before I resubmit?

Please can you instruct me on this as id like to get the article submitted.


Look forward to hearing from you


thanks Amellondon--Amellondon (talk) 19:38, 18 August 2013 (UTC)

Hello there. You need to provide references in order to establish the subject's notability. FoCuSandLeArN (talk) 19:40, 18 August 2013 (UTC)

Hello,

I have added some reliable sources/references...how is my article now looking any better? is there any other parts you recommend I take out?

I thoroughly want to get this article correct as a new user to wiki it would be great to be successful at creating a successful article that meets the wiki terms.

Can I ask howlong does it usually take new wiki users to create an article? — Preceding unsigned comment added by 80.3.171.194 (talk) 21:37, 19 August 2013 (UTC)

Hi. Thank you for your recent edits. Wikipedia appreciates your help. We noticed though that you've added some links pointing to disambiguation pages. Such links are almost always unintended, since a disambiguation page is merely a list of "Did you mean..." article titles. Read the FAQ • Join us at the DPL WikiProject.

Unipolar brush cell (check to confirm | fix with Dab solver)
added links pointing to Granular layer and Flocculus
Methanosphaera stadtmaniae (check to confirm | fix with Dab solver)
added a link pointing to Biota

It's OK to remove this message. Also, to stop receiving these messages, follow these opt-out instructions. Thanks, DPL bot (talk) 11:39, 21 August 2013 (UTC)

Gregory Jackson rejection

I am trying to submit an article for the composer Dr. Gregory Jackson. I used source material from articles and published books. What can be done to have him included, eliminate some of the information? Or did I not cite the sources correctly? I believe he is notable because he has 11 books published, recently submitted a piece for the Pulitzer Prize and articles published in international magazines, as well as a professor. Thanks! Inner3 (talk) 03:26, 23 August 2013 (UTC)

Precious

kind cleanup
Thank you for quality articles on Gastropods, for tireless creation of articles with proper templates, such as Sphingopyxis italica, for excellent copy-editing, wikification, backlog elimination, looking at articles for creation, and for kindness, - you are an awesome Wikipedian!

--Gerda Arendt (talk) 06:42, 25 August 2013 (UTC)

The Signpost: 21 August 2013

Jesse Schwartzman

Hi there - This is my first time submitting and editing a news article.

After your initial review, which rejected the submission, I went back and added external references and links.

just not sure if this re-submission was properly submitted??

No worries if it hasn't been processed yet. I just want to make sure my changes were made in the system.

Please let me know.

Thanks.

-Brad 410.560.3970 officeBradleyshapiro (talk) 14:27, 27 August 2013 (UTC)

You deleted the templates, so I had to reinstate them. You need to click on the resubmit button in order to do that. However, please be aware of my previous comment. You may want to read those guidelines. Also, to see how to place in-line citations, see WP:REFB. Regards, FoCuSandLeArN (talk) 14:57, 27 August 2013 (UTC)

Hi. Thank you for your recent edits. Wikipedia appreciates your help. We noticed though that you've added some links pointing to disambiguation pages. Such links are almost always unintended, since a disambiguation page is merely a list of "Did you mean..." article titles. Read the FAQ • Join us at the DPL WikiProject.

Desulfitobacterium chlororespirans (check to confirm | fix with Dab solver)
added a link pointing to Lactate
Desulfovibrio idahonensis (check to confirm | fix with Dab solver)
added a link pointing to DMSO

It's OK to remove this message. Also, to stop receiving these messages, follow these opt-out instructions. Thanks, DPL bot (talk) 11:55, 28 August 2013 (UTC)

Nicky Slim

Dear Wiki,


My article is currently in the queue for submission however a message for me to add citations/ references etc has arisen prior to this please can you assist me to find matching citations for my article? I have attempted finding some myself however would be grateful for your assistance with this as id like to overcome the issue and resubmit my article.


Can you have a look over my article again and see what you think I have edited it to make it more factual rather then biography isit within the correct way now?


My wiki name is amellondon,


Look forward to hearing from you.--Amellondon (talk) 16:35, 28 August 2013 (UTC)

Do you have any independent and reliable sources, such as media coverage? FoCuSandLeArN (talk) 19:42, 28 August 2013 (UTC)

Hello,


Hope your well. Please can you let me no if my article is back in the queue? I would like to get an experienced editor to have a look at it and if possible put it up for me is this an option?

Also every reference I try putting up will not go up it keeps saying not acceptable. Would a reference from a news paper or bbc meet the criteria and be accepted?

Please let me no


Thanks Amellondon — Preceding unsigned comment added by Amellondon (talk • contribs) 15:05, 30 August 2013 (UTC)

In regards to your question if I have any media coverage refs yes there is some I have found on the person Nicky slimting walker I will find it and send to you however everything I seem to find i.e.: refs Wiki declines?


Can you explain specifically what I need so I look for the correct thing and get it up its taking a longtime

PS: how long do wiki articles usually take to get put on to the main page? — Preceding unsigned comment added by Amellondon (talk • contribs) 15:16, 30 August 2013 (UTC)

Yes, BBC is an acceptable source. Please provide extensive coverage from source such as that one so that we can assess the subject's notability. FoCuSandLeArN (talk) 19:19, 30 August 2013 (UTC)

The Signpost: 28 August 2013

August 2013 wikification barnstars!

The Greater Working Wikifier's Barnstar
For scoring 4th place on the leaderboard during the August 2013 wikification backlog drive, FoCuSandLeArN, you are hereby awarded the Greater Working Wikifier's barnstar. Congratulations! :)
The Iron Wikification Barnstar
For wikifying a total of 25 articles, you are also awarded the Iron Wikification barnstar. Keep up the good work! :)

Cheers! Editing with a pen leads to a lot of things unsaid. (talk) 14:40, 3 September 2013 (UTC)

Pauline Engel

Hello I notice that you have said that saying that a school has a "Charism" is a breach of neutrality. It causes me to wonder if you have misunderstood what is meant by the term "Charism" in this context. It is a Catholic term, used about a Catholic school. It means that the School is founded by the Sisters of Mercy and follows their way of approaching Catholic Christianity through a perspective of "Mercy". This is what is meant by charism - the Sisters of Mercy have a "Mercy charism" and Carmel College, founded by the Sisters of Mercy has a Mercy charism also.

Thanks Beth — Preceding unsigned comment added by BethKub (talk • contribs) 00:02, 4 September 2013 (UTC)

I doubt that's what I meant. But I need to have a look at the article you're referring to. FoCuSandLeArN (talk) 00:45, 4 September 2013 (UTC)

Hi. Thank you for your recent edits. Wikipedia appreciates your help. We noticed though that you've added some links pointing to disambiguation pages. Such links are almost always unintended, since a disambiguation page is merely a list of "Did you mean..." article titles. Read the FAQ • Join us at the DPL WikiProject.

Deinococcus ficus (check to confirm | fix with Dab solver)
added a link pointing to Pleomorphic
Paragendria papuanensis (check to confirm | fix with Dab solver)
added a link pointing to Papillae

It's OK to remove this message. Also, to stop receiving these messages, follow these opt-out instructions. Thanks, DPL bot (talk) 12:35, 4 September 2013 (UTC)

The Signpost: 04 September 2013

Media/Update

Hello,

I updated the references for the Netsua page, however I have two things to add. One is I am the artist's representative so there is only so many documented publications I can list before I have to say I provided it. Also I have a couple of images I would like to upload to the page ex(The main image and cover art.)could I have some help with adding these? Thanks again for your time. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Netsua98 (talk • contribs) 01:15, 11 September 2013 (UTC)

Hello there! Please make sure you provide independent and reliable references. Make sure you read over our conflict of interests policy too. As for the files, just head over to this link to upload them following the instructions. Regards, FoCuSandLeArN (talk) 20:01, 11 September 2013 (UTC)

Hi. Thank you for your recent edits. Wikipedia appreciates your help. We noticed though that you've added some links pointing to disambiguation pages. Such links are almost always unintended, since a disambiguation page is merely a list of "Did you mean..." article titles. Read the FAQ • Join us at the DPL WikiProject.

Acinetobacter radioresistens (check to confirm | fix with Dab solver)
added a link pointing to Pleomorphic
Desulfobacterium indolicum (check to confirm | fix with Dab solver)
added a link pointing to Diesel

It's OK to remove this message. Also, to stop receiving these messages, follow these opt-out instructions. Thanks, DPL bot (talk) 11:08, 11 September 2013 (UTC)

The Signpost: 11 September 2013

Retrieved from "https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User_talk:FoCuSandLeArN/Archive_10&oldid=1168301194"