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Wikidata weekly summary #543

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Week 1/StellaJiang333

Hi everyone, I am Stella Jiang. I'm glad to meet you here! I hope I can make some contributions here. StellaJiang333 (talk) 08:06, 22 October 2022 (UTC)

@StellaJiang333 Please rename the title of this section per the assignment for Week 1, and ping me here and I will review. FULBERT (talk) 19:11, 23 October 2022 (UTC)
@FULBERT I have fixed the name. Please check again. StellaJiang333 (talk) 15:26, 25 October 2022 (UTC)
@StellaJiang333 Nice work. Current with Week 1 now. FULBERT (talk) 22:40, 25 October 2022 (UTC)

Week 1/Xingbo Gao

Hi, this is Xingbo Gao. Actually, I don't use Wikipedia very often because almost all the professors don't allow me to use it. However, I am willing to learn relevant knowledge.

Please remember to sign each of your posts using four tilde characters ~~~~ at the end. Do this as a reply and then ping me here, and then I will take a look at it and reply. --- FULBERT (talk) 22:42, 25 October 2022 (UTC)
@FULBERTI fixed the error by publishing a new post. Sorry to have caused you trouble, professor. XingboGao (talk) 09:35, 24 November 2022 (UTC)
@XingboGao Please assign yourself this article and link to the diff here and I will review it. FULBERT (talk) 02:05, 25 November 2022 (UTC)
@FULBERT Hi professor, I think there is no article needed to be edited in week 1. XingboGao (talk) 00:12, 30 November 2022 (UTC)

Week 2/Xingbo Gao

The article I edited is Lottery. A sentence in the article needed citation, so I added it. Regarding the lottery rule, there is no evidence to prove it in the article.

The article link: Lottery

XingboGao (talk) 03:53, 23 October 2022 (UTC)

@XingboGao Please rename the title of this section per the assignment for Week 1, and ping me here and I will review. FULBERT (talk) 22:43, 25 October 2022 (UTC)
Week 2/XingboGao
@FULBERT I'm sorry to have caused you trouble, professor. XingboGao (talk) 09:34, 24 November 2022 (UTC)
@XingboGao Please provide the diff per WP:DIFF to your change and then ping me here. I will then take a look at it and reply. FULBERT (talk) 02:06, 25 November 2022 (UTC)
@FULBERT Here is the diff XingboGao (talk) 00:09, 30 November 2022 (UTC)
@FULBERT I don’t know why my modified content was deleted, so I can only revise this article. Sorry for that. XingboGao (talk) 00:11, 30 November 2022 (UTC)

Week 1/ Xingbo Gao

Hi, this is Xingbo Gao. Actually, I don't use Wikipedia very often because almost all the professors don't allow me to use it. However, I am willing to learn relevant knowledge. XingboGao (talk) 03:55, 23 October 2022 (UTC)

@XingboGao Welcome to Wikipedia! I hope you find this assignment a helpful learning experience. Current with Week 1. FULBERT (talk) 22:43, 25 October 2022 (UTC)

Week 2/Jay Jiang

This week I edited the article Slow Food. The diff for my change is here. It is important to find a reliable resource as the first step, and then find the right space to edit the citation. JayHTCVPN (talk) 04:39, 24 October 2022 (UTC)

@JayHTCVPN Nice edits. Current with Week 2. FULBERT (talk) 22:49, 25 October 2022 (UTC)

Week 1 / Cabanehippopotamus

This is Marshall. I am excited to learn more about how to edit Wikipedia. Previously, I was too intimidated to edit, but hopefully with the foundations of this class I will feel more confident about it. 

Cabanehippopotamus (talk) Cabanehippopotamus (talk) 14:49, 22 October 2022 (UTC)
@Cabanehippopotamus You have not yet registered for the extra credit by following the link within our course system. Please follow that to connect you to this extra credit, and then reply to me here. Make sure you indent your reply using a ":" and review the "How to edit: Wikicode vs Visual Editor" training for more guidance on this. FULBERT (talk) 18:53, 23 October 2022 (UTC)
@FULBERT Ok, I believe I have rectified the issue. I will confirm with you in class. Thank you!
Cabanehippopotamus (talk) 23:39, 27 October 2022 (UTC)
@Cabanehippopotamus Welcome to Wikipedia! I hope you find this assignment a helpful learning experience. Current with Week 1. FULBERT (talk) 00:23, 29 October 2022 (UTC)

Week 3 / Riven3388

The ariticle I add the citation is about the One-child policy. I add the part of detail about the enforcement of the social maintenance fee. Here is the Diff. [1] Throughout the citation again, I think I am getting better in adding a citation to the article. I hope the work could provide more information and better understanding to the reader. Riven3388 (talk) 03:17, 26 October 2022 (UTC)

@Riven3388 Nice edits. Current with Week 3. FULBERT (talk) 00:25, 29 October 2022 (UTC)

Week 2/SheilaSh11

This week I edited Hey Tea, I added a citation on the stores news, realizing that some of the soureces are lacking citation. Here is the diff link: [1]. SheilaSh11 (talk) 14:02, 26 October 2022 (UTC)

@SheilaSh11 Please provide the correct diff per WP:DIFF to your change and then ping me here. I will then take a look at it and reply. FULBERT (talk) 00:26, 29 October 2022 (UTC)
Here is the diff [1] SheilaSh11 (talk) 02:00, 15 November 2022 (UTC)

Week 2 / MichaelNhy

I have inserted a new paragraph with a citation about recent Government incentives for plug-in electric vehicles in China. I concluded the recent policy published by Shanghai government to understand China's effort to promote electrical vehicles. Here is the Diff. After I have finished adding and updating the section in China, I learned how to contribute my knowledge and searching ability to help others get better understanding about China's electrical car policy, and I also learned how to publish my finding and edit it in a real wikipedia page while adding reference to enhance its credibility. MichaelNhy (talk) 19:17, 26 October 2022 (UTC)

@MichaelNhy Nice edits. Current with Week 2. FULBERT (talk) 00:26, 29 October 2022 (UTC)

Week 2 / Xj416

The article that I have made some edits is Electric vehicle industry in China. Here is the diff [2]. What I have noticed is the the original article mainly focused on the players and the performance of those players in the China EV industry. However, the future of the industry is merely discussed. Therefore, I added some contents on the policies that promotes the adoption of EV. Xj416 (talk) 06:31, 27 October 2022 (UTC)

@Xj416 Nice edits. Current with Week 2. FULBERT (talk) 00:28, 29 October 2022 (UTC)

I added more sentences. diff [3]

Week 3 / Xj416

I realized that the article that I have worked on has missing citations. I added the 1 citation to the article Electric vehicle industry in China. Here is the diff [4]. Hope the addition could help the readers to have a better understanding of the content. Xj416 (talk) 06:42, 27 October 2022 (UTC)

I choose a different article and redo the week 3 citation. article: Social issues in China. diff is [5]. I added one item, the housing mortgage repayment issue, to the article. Many are protesting to repay their housing mortgage in China since the lockdown policy limits their income, making repayment unaffordable. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Xj416 (talk • contribs) 14:25, 27 October 2022 (UTC)

@Xj416 Ideally you should have written something more than a bullet in the list, but ok for now. Current with Week 3. FULBERT (talk) 00:30, 29 October 2022 (UTC)

Week 2/Rheaxx666

The article I add the citation is about Dog. I added a citation about only 11 fixed genes exhibiting variation between wolves and dogs. Here is the diff. [6]. Hopefully, with my additions, this article will be easier for anyone interested in these 11 genomes to find. Rheaxx666 (talk) 12:35, 27 October 2022 (UTC)

@Rheaxx666 Nice edits. Current with Week 2. FULBERT (talk) 00:31, 29 October 2022 (UTC)

Week 2 / Kathyljy

The article I edited is Human-Computer Interaction. I added 1 citation at where was marked 'Citation Needed' [7]. Through this assignment I learnt how to edit wikipedia. Kathyljy (talk) 15:01, 27 October 2022 (UTC)

@Kathyljy Nice use of finding a Citation Needed tag and fixing it! Current with Week 2. FULBERT (talk) 00:32, 29 October 2022 (UTC)

Week 2/VenusL

The article I edited is Effects of climate change. I added a citation about the impact of loss of livestock on food security. [8] I learned how to edit Wikipedia and add gap information in it based on a journal article. VenusL (talk) 17:46, 27 October 2022 (UTC)

@VenusL Nice edits. Current with Week 2. FULBERT (talk) 00:33, 29 October 2022 (UTC)

Week 1 / Yanlzhu

Hi! This is Yanlzhu wikipedia webpage! I am looking forward to learning how to use and edit Wikipedia in this fall semester! Thank you!Yanlzhu (talk) 00:53, 28 October 2022 (UTC)

@Yanlzhu Welcome to Wikipedia! I hope you find this assignment a helpful learning experience. Current with Week 1. FULBERT (talk) 00:34, 29 October 2022 (UTC)

Week 2/Yanlzhu

This week I edited the article History of Tesla, Inc. The diff for my change is here. I learned I can edit and cited base on a journal article.Yanlzhu (talk) 00:57, 28 October 2022 (UTC)

@Yanlzhu Nice edits. Current with Week 2. FULBERT (talk) 00:35, 29 October 2022 (UTC)

Week2/Lbw119

Hi this is Bowen Liu. The article I edited is Three-wheeler. I added some information that I think is helpful and added a citation based on that [9] . I leared how to edit Wikipedia! Lbw119 (talk) 11:11, 28 October 2022 (UTC)

@Lbw119 Nice edits. Current with Week 2. FULBERT (talk) 00:36, 29 October 2022 (UTC)

Week 2/ Jaynean

I edited the article Livestreaming. Here is the diff. This was my first time editing Wikipedia, and I think the experience was exciting and memorable!~~~~ Jaynean (talk) 00:18, 29 October 2022 (UTC)

@Jaynean Nice edits. Current with Week 2. FULBERT (talk) 00:38, 29 October 2022 (UTC)

Week 2/Sp6796

I edited the article IBM Watson. I added a sentence under Comparison with human players about the abilities it has to make human-like decisions. Here is the diff. This was a great exercise and the first time I was able to edit a wiki article!~~~~ Sp6796 (talk) 20:02, 28 October 2022 (UTC)

@Sp6796 Please assign yourself this article in the Wiki Edu Dashboard and then ping me here. I will then take a look at it and reply. FULBERT (talk) 00:37, 29 October 2022 (UTC)
Updated. Article is now assigned. Sp6796 (talk) 22:53, 29 October 2022 (UTC)
@Sp6796 Nice edits. Current with Week 2. FULBERT (talk) 21:51, 30 October 2022 (UTC)

Week 3/Xingbo Gao

This week I edited an article named Government revenue. Here is the diff. I read this article carefully, which mainly introduces the revenue of the government. One paragraph show the government's tax revenue. However, I found that lottery tax revenue was not among them. So I added it in the paragraph. I make the government's taxes more comprehensive in this article. XingboGao (talk) 09:34, 29 October 2022 (UTC)

@XingboGao Please edit the title of the week with your username, which in your case is one word and should match how you sign your posts, and then ping me here and I will review. FULBERT (talk) 21:53, 30 October 2022 (UTC)
Week 3/XingboGao
@FULBERT I already know where I went wrong. I shouldn't have put a space in the middle. Thank you, professor. XingboGao (talk) 09:33, 24 November 2022 (UTC)
@XingboGao Please assign yourself this article in the Wiki Edu Dashboard and then ping me here. I will then take a look at it and reply. FULBERT (talk) 02:07, 25 November 2022 (UTC)
@FULBERT I have assigned all articles in the Wiki Edu Dashboard. Thanks for reminding me. XingboGao (talk) 00:22, 30 November 2022 (UTC)

Week 2/BartonRei

I edited shigurui, https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Shigurui&diff=1119017887&oldid=1105100418. It is good to know that we can edit the wikipedia as we willing. 07:41, 30 October 2022 (UTC). — Preceding unsigned comment added by BartonRei (talk • contribs)

BartonRei Please remember to sign each of your posts using four tilde characters ~~~~ at the end. Do this as a reply and then ping me here, and then I will take a look at it and reply. --- FULBERT (talk) 21:54, 30 October 2022 (UTC)

This week's article for improvement (week 44, 2022)

Crown Prince Moulay Hassan, the Crown Prince of Morocco, in 2018
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Week 3/Qiwei Duan

I edited the article Industrial ecology, here is the difference https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Industrial_ecology&diff=1118849686&oldid=1118847999. I learned a lot about mitigating industrial pollution. Most importantly, I understand the significance of protecting the environment when we develop industry. QiweiDuan (talk) 08:08, 29 October 2022 (UTC)

@QiweiDuan Please edit the title of the week with your username, which in your case is one word and should match how you sign your posts, and then ping me here and I will review. FULBERT (talk) 21:52, 30 October 2022 (UTC)
Hi, professor. I did create the account under my real name, and I used my real name when I modified the article. I'm not sure I know what you mean. 100.1.168.90 (talk) 09:00, 1 November 2022 (UTC)
@QiweiDuan Please review the instructions for what name to use in this section title and fix it accordingly. What you have here now is not how your User Name appears. Ping me when finished. FULBERT (talk) 00:41, 3 November 2022 (UTC)
@FULBERT Hello professor, I have finished all the content of Week 3. But I found I couldn't change the user name. I lose points just because there's an extra space between my first and last name? This is so sad. Will I have a chance to revise it? QiweiDuan (talk) 02:33, 9 December 2022 (UTC)
@QiweiDuan OK for now. Current with Week 3. FULBERT (talk) 17:24, 9 December 2022 (UTC)

Week 2/Bh2471

This week I'm editing an article about hydrogen vehicles. Here is the diff [10]. In the process, I read a lot about federal and state incentives for hydrogen vehicles. A selection of the most representative New York State incentives was edited into the article. I think I also learned some knowledge and skills in the process. Bh2471 (talk) 17:11, 29 October 2022 (UTC)

@Bh2471 Please edit the title of the week with your username, which in your case is one word and should match how you sign your posts, and then ping me here and I will review. FULBERT (talk) 21:53, 30 October 2022 (UTC)
I'm so sorry I didn't put the username in the title, it's now in the title. Bh2471 (talk) 23:49, 30 October 2022 (UTC)
@Bh2471 Please assign yourself this article in the Wiki Edu Dashboard and then ping me here. I will then take a look at it and reply. FULBERT (talk) 00:42, 3 November 2022 (UTC)

Week 2 / Sssara7

I edited the article on plastic bag ban. The diff for my edit is here [11]. I added more issue about the impact of plastic on the ocean. I learned how to edited and cite articles in Wikipedia. And looking forward to learn more about Wikipedia. Sssara7 (talk) 02:51, 30 October 2022 (UTC)

@Sssara7 Nice edits. Current with Week 2. FULBERT (talk) 00:43, 3 November 2022 (UTC)

Week2/ WZ2372

I edited Tarot. Here is the diff diff. I learned how to edit and add citation on Wikipedia and also learned about something interesting in Tarot cards.WZ2372 (talk) 08:45, 30 October 2022 (UTC)

@WZ2372 Nice edit, which was already improved upon by another editor. Current with Week 2. FULBERT (talk) 00:45, 3 November 2022 (UTC)

Week 2/Qiwei Duan

My target article is Intelligent transportation system, by learning the skills of revision, I revised this article. QiweiDuan (talk) 03:58, 23 October 2022 (UTC)

Intelligent transportation system, Here is the new edition.Through this process, I not only learned more Wikipedia skills, but also learned a lot about intelligent transportation systems, which is also related to my ongoing digitization research. QiweiDuan (talk) 04:23, 23 October 2022 (UTC)
@QiweiDuan Please provide the diff per WP:DIFF to your change and then ping me here. I will then take a look at it and reply. FULBERT (talk) 00:23, 29 October 2022 (UTC)
oh, I'm sorry about that, I posted two same page...here is the diff https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Intelligent_transportation_system&diff=1117705232&oldid=1115281455 100.1.168.90 (talk) 08:57, 1 November 2022 (UTC)
@QiweiDuan Please assign yourself this article in the Wiki Edu Dashboard and then ping me here. I will then take a look at it and reply. FULBERT (talk) 00:51, 3 November 2022 (UTC)
@FULBERT I'm sorry I just saw this information now, because I don't know how to view the notification. I have improved as required. If possible, I hope I can still get marks. Thank you. QiweiDuan (talk) 02:27, 9 December 2022 (UTC)
@QiweiDuan Nice edits. Current with Week 2. FULBERT (talk) 17:23, 9 December 2022 (UTC)

Week 2/BL33701

The article I edited is Supply chain management .I added a citation about the Blockchain management solves the problem of less control and more supply chain partners. The diff is here.Learned how to add cited in the article.BL33701 (talk) 18:03, 28 October 2022 (UTC)

@BL33701 Please assign yourself this article in the Wiki Edu Dashboard and then ping me here. I will then take a look at it and reply. FULBERT (talk) 00:37, 29 October 2022 (UTC)
@FULBERT I have already assigned this article in the Wiki Edu Dashboard. If you have any other questions please let me know. Thank you!BL33701 (talk) 03:19, 29 October 2022 (UTC)
@BL33701 Nice edits. Current with Week 2. FULBERT (talk) 00:52, 3 November 2022 (UTC)

Week 2/Janyu150

I edited the nontraditional student article and I ended up editing it 3 times in one sitting. Here is the diff that shows my final edit compared to the last edit by a different user. I learned that the use of the sandbox is critical so that I do not publish 3 times and have 3 different edit summaries instead of one edit summary that shows all edits. I initially added a citation and new idea in the lead but realized the overall sentence that I edited should belong to the special characteristics section instead since the sentence described a special characteristic of this student. Janyu150 (talk) 11:27, 29 October 2022 (UTC)

@Janyu150 Nice edits. Current with Week 2. FULBERT (talk) 00:53, 3 November 2022 (UTC)

week 2/rt2510

This week I edited an article named Video game. Here is the diff https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Video_game&type=revision&diff=1118689116&oldid=1117443970 . I find out this part need some citations then I add it. Rt2510 (talk) 16:54, 29 October 2022 (UTC)

@Rt2510 Please edit the title of the week with your username, which in your case is one word and should match how you sign your posts, and then ping me here and I will review. FULBERT (talk) 21:53, 30 October 2022 (UTC)
Hi Professor, I have already edited. Thx. Rt2510 (talk) 22:15, 30 October 2022 (UTC)
@Rt2510 Your edit was reverted by another editor as your contribution seemed confusing and taken directly out of the source you cited. You need to restate in your own words so it makes sense. Next time I will request you to either edit this article again with more care toward the contribution or edit another article. OK for now. Current with Week 2. FULBERT (talk) 00:58, 3 November 2022 (UTC)

Week 2 / Cabanehippopotamus

I edited Web Content Accessibility Guidelines by adding a source to the claim that WCAG guidelines positively affect SEO (diff). My first inclination was to change the wording of the line to say "improve search engine relevance ranking," which is what the article specifically asserts; however, that seemed to be more a semantic change than a true contribution. After the class discussion, I am more careful to not create an unnecessary reason to have my contribution removed.

--Cabanehippopotamus (talk) 21:14, 29 October 2022 (UTC) Cabanehippopotamus (talk) 21:13, 29 October 2022 (UTC)

@Cabanehippopotamus Nice edits. Current with Week 2. FULBERT (talk) 00:59, 3 November 2022 (UTC)

Week 2/Kaisery

I edited Business Opportunity. Here is the difference: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Business_opportunity?veaction=edit I added the information about online shopping, which would be a new method to spread during Covid-19. Kaisery (talk) 02:54, 30 October 2022 (UTC)

@Kaisery Please assign yourself this article in the Wiki Edu Dashboard and then ping me here. I will then take a look at it and reply. FULBERT (talk) 01:00, 3 November 2022 (UTC)
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