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Week 3/Bh2471

This week I'm editing an article about Homelessness in the San Francisco Bay Area. Here is the diff [1]I looked at the housing crisis in the San Francisco Bay Area and added information about what residents have left over after housing costs. Bh2471 (talk) 20:05, 6 November 2022 (UTC)

User:Bh2471, your added content was removed by another editor (User:Avatar317), who noted "Reverted UNSOURCED, good faith WP:GF edits. Wikipedia does not allow Original Research. Please see: WP:OR. All statements must be sourced from Reliable Sources WP:RS". DMacks (talk) 18:14, 9 November 2022 (UTC)
@Bh2471 Please see this removal of your edit and either edit this article again or assign a different article and do that. I will give you another week to get this done so you can work this in. If you need to email me for clarification, please do so. Ping me here when done. FULBERT (talk) 18:41, 12 November 2022 (UTC)
Dear professor, I have re-edited this article. Here is the diff [2]In this article, I added the COVID-19 Alternative Shelter Program from the city government website to San Francisco's housing policy during the COVID-19 pandemic. Please check it. Thanks! Bh2471 (talk) 02:15, 13 November 2022 (UTC)
@Bh2471 Nice edits. Current with Week 3. FULBERT (talk) 19:46, 13 November 2022 (UTC)

Week 4/Yanlzhu

This week I edited the article C2 (yacht). The diff for my change is here. I added more information about the C2 (yacht). The yacht can accommodate up to 22 passengers! Yanlzhu (talk) 02:56, 11 November 2022 (UTC)

@Yanlzhu Please assign yourself this article in the Wiki Edu Dashboard and then ping me here. I will then take a look at it and reply. FULBERT (talk) 19:05, 12 November 2022 (UTC)
@FULBERT Thanks for reminding me! I assigned article C2(yacht) to myself now. Please check. Thank you! Yanlzhu (talk) 07:01, 13 November 2022 (UTC)
@Yanlzhu Nice edits. Current with Week 4. FULBERT (talk) 19:50, 13 November 2022 (UTC)

Week/WZ2372

I edited the Mogao Caves this week. I added more information about digital conservation in Mogao Caves in recent years. Here is the diff. I am more familiar with how to add detailed information to Wikipedia.WZ2372 (talk) 06:16, 12 November 2022 (UTC)

@WZ2372 Nice edits. Current with Week 4. FULBERT (talk) 20:00, 13 November 2022 (UTC)

Week 4/janyu150

For Week 4, I added to the Distance education article. Here is the link to the diff This week I added a sentence in the middle of a paragraph to indicate an effect of the preceding sentence. I realized even though I found information that was great to add to this particular part of the paragraph, I had to be very mindful of how to incorporate it in this part so that the flow of the paragraph is still intact and my sentence is clear enough to demonstrate that I was relating to the preceding sentence while introducing a new idea caused by the preceding sentence.

To put this into context, there was a sentence in the Wikipedia article that stated distance education allowed for institutions to offer more classes without further depleting their limited resources such as limited classrooms. So I added a sentence that because of this, college student enrollment and graduation also benefit from distance education because with more offered classes, students are able to enroll in their required classes on time and graduate on time. Janyu150 (talk) Janyu150 (talk) 17:50, 12 November 2022 (UTC)

@Janyu150 Nicely explained and edited. Current with Week 4. FULBERT (talk) 20:03, 13 November 2022 (UTC)

Week4/Rheaxx666

I edited Electric bicycle this week where I added a sentence and citation about e-bike emission rates compared to motorcycles, cars, and buses. Here is the diff. I learned that the content I edit must come from a reliable source. Rheaxx666 (talk) 18:08, 12 November 2022 (UTC)

@Rheaxx666 Nice edits. Current with Week 4. FULBERT (talk) 20:05, 13 November 2022 (UTC)

Week4/ Luciuszlt

I edit Hot pot this week, add some common information on Chinese hotpot. Here is the diff. It is pretty fun because I never reed food-related journal articles before. Luciuszlt (talk) 00:49, 13 November 2022 (UTC)

@Luciuszlt Nice edits. Current with Week 4. FULBERT (talk) 20:10, 13 November 2022 (UTC)

Week 4 / Sssara7

I edited the article on Plastic recycling. The diff for my edit is here. I added more regional data about the Production and recycling rates. I learned more about plastic recycling information and how it works. And looking forward to learn more information from wikipedia. Sssara7 (talk) 03:50, 13 November 2022 (UTC)

@Sssara7 Nice edits. Current with Week 4. FULBERT (talk) 20:12, 13 November 2022 (UTC)

Week 3/ Yangyang F

This week I edited an article about Nightmare. Here is the diff. I added that nightmares are a stable feature for most children. I am glad that I can add some information to the wiki page. ~~~~

YangyangF (talk) 20:57, 6 November 2022 (UTC)

Removed as a copyright violation. User:YangyangF, it's important that you write totally in your own words using ideas from the source, rather than actually copying content from the source. Also, don't forget to log in when you make your edits. DMacks (talk) 18:07, 9 November 2022 (UTC)
@YangyangF Your edit was reverted due to plagiarism. Just like in class assignments, plagiarism is a serious issue that must be avoided at all costs through restating things in your own words. You can get blocked from editing through plagiarism, so avoid it. Any additional examples of this will result in your stopping this assignment for the remainder of the term. Please see the Wikipedia policy on this at WP:PLAG. Please either find another source and re-edit it OR assign yourself an additional article and edit that one for this week's assignment. I will give you another week to get this done so you can work this in. Ping me here and I will review. FULBERT (talk) 18:42, 12 November 2022 (UTC)
@FULBERT:I edit a new article about H&M. Here is the diff. I edited how Covid-19 impact on H&M. And I'm sorry for last week situation.YangyangF (talk) 05:30, 13 November 2022 (UTC)
@YangyangF Nice edits. Current with Week 3. FULBERT (talk) 20:15, 13 November 2022 (UTC)

Week 4/YangyangF

I edited the Taobao this week. Here is the diff. I updated the Internet celebrities on Taobao live streaming and the daily sales of Taobao live streaming now.YangyangF (talk) 04:53, 13 November 2022 (UTC)

@YangyangF Nice edits. Current with Week 4. FULBERT (talk) 20:15, 13 November 2022 (UTC)

Week 4/Ruizhouruizhou

I edit Cryptocurrency this week, add more information about Chinese Talk Show. Here is the https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Cryptocurrency&diff=prev&oldid=1121607353. I learned that the crypto market is very chaotic right now, and the crypto market is still in a dark forest period.Ruizhouruizhou (talk) 05:20, 13 November 2022 (UTC)

@Ruizhouruizhou Nice edit overall, though per another editor's note, avoid using words or terms that suggest opinion or judgment. Current with Week 4. FULBERT (talk) 20:54, 13 November 2022 (UTC)

Week 4/StellaJiang333

I edit Textile recycling. Here is diff . I added some exceptions that recycling and reuse might not be effective. StellaJiang333 (talk) 10:32, 13 November 2022 (UTC)

@StellaJiang333 Nice edits. Current with Week 4. FULBERT (talk) 21:00, 13 November 2022 (UTC)

This week's article for improvement (week 46, 2022)

Fire in Rome by Hubert Robert (1785)
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Great Fire of Rome

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Week 2/Bh2471

In week 2, I edited about the incentives for hydrogen vehicle in the United States. Here is the diff. I included the quotation about Hydrogen Laws and Incentives in New York. Bh2471 (talk) 21:15, 13 November 2022 (UTC)

@Bh2471Nice edits. Current with Week 2. FULBERT (talk) 00:19, 14 November 2022 (UTC)

Week4/Bh2471

I edited the history of Japanese whisky. Here is the diff. [3] I added about the birth of the first whisky in Japan. Bh2471 (talk) 03:54, 12 November 2022 (UTC)

Bh2471 You have not completed the previous weeks' assignments as requested. Please do those before I review this one. Ping me here when complete and I will review. FULBERT (talk) 19:15, 12 November 2022 (UTC)
I have re-edited last week's homework. Thank you for your guidance! Bh2471 (talk) 02:16, 13 November 2022 (UTC)
@Bh2471 Please finish the Week 2 request I made (now in the archives) and ping me here and I will review this one. FULBERT (talk) 19:48, 13 November 2022 (UTC)
Dear Professor, I think I have finished my homework in the second week, editing an article on hydrogen energy vehicles. I am now re-posting the homework of the second week. Please check it. Thanks! Bh2471 (talk) 21:17, 13 November 2022 (UTC)
@Bh2471 Nice edits. Current with Week 4. FULBERT (talk) 00:20, 14 November 2022 (UTC)

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Week 3/Kaisery

I edited the article Macau, which is my home town. I got a lot more information about Macau, and add some data with statista. Here is the diff.Macau Kaisery (talk) 02:49, 6 November 2022 (UTC)

@Kaisery Please provide the diff per WP:DIFF to your change and then ping me here. I will then take a look at it and reply. FULBERT (talk) 18:34, 12 November 2022 (UTC)
Here is the diff. @FULBERT Kaisery (talk) 03:24, 14 November 2022 (UTC)
@Kaisery Nice edits. Current with Week 3. FULBERT (talk) 17:44, 19 November 2022 (UTC)

Week 4/Kaisery

I edited the article Twitter#Acquisition by Elon Musk. I added that now that some of the advertisers have been exiting the platform. This is a novel news. twitter is already a social channel that everyone knows, and the slightest change can affect people's daily lives. Kaisery (talk) 04:38, 13 November 2022 (UTC)

@Kaisery Please provide the diff per WP:DIFF to your change and then ping me here. I will then take a look at it and reply. FULBERT (talk) 20:11, 13 November 2022 (UTC)
@Kaisery Please finish Week 3 before I review this one. FULBERT (talk) 00:08, 14 November 2022 (UTC)
Here is the diff. Thank you professor. @FULBERT Kaisery (talk) 03:26, 14 November 2022 (UTC)
@Kaisery Nice edits. Current with Week 4. FULBERT (talk) 17:45, 19 November 2022 (UTC)

Week 3/SheilaSh11

I edited League of Legends World Championship this week, League is my favorite game, and the Final Game of the year was held this morning. I added more information about a player of the champion. Here is the diff . SheilaSh11 (talk) 10:52, 6 November 2022 (UTC)

User:SheilaSh11, your added content was removed by another editor (User:SpyroeBM), who noted "Too specific for this section of the article, would be preferable to add for his personal Wikipedia page." DMacks (talk) 18:11, 9 November 2022 (UTC)
@SheilaSh11 Please see this removal of your edit and either edit this article again or assign a different article and do that. I will give you another week to get this done so you can work this in. If you need to email me for clarification, please do so. Ping me here when done. FULBERT (talk) 18:40, 12 November 2022 (UTC)
I assign a different article.Deft (gamer) I add the information in his personal Wikipedia page. Here is the diff. SheilaSh11 (talk) 17:44, 16 November 2022 (UTC)
@SheilaSh11 This is ok for now, though for your next edit please use a higher quality third-party WP:INDEPENDENT published sources with a reputation for fact-checking and accuracy WP:RELIABLE. OK. for Week 3. FULBERT (talk) 17:49, 19 November 2022 (UTC)

Week4/SheilaSh11

I edited Pokémon (TV series) this week. I added the ending of TV series in Journey and cited. Here is the diff . I realized that I have got used to editing Wikipedia now. SheilaSh11 (talk) 12:06, 12 November 2022 (UTC)

@SheilaSh11 Please provide the correct diff per WP:DIFF to your change and then ping me here. I will then take a look at it and reply. FULBERT (talk) 19:16, 12 November 2022 (UTC)
Here is the diff SheilaSh11 (talk) 17:46, 16 November 2022 (UTC)
@SheilaSh11 As in Week 3, please try to find a higher quality source. This one is good enough for now. Current with Week 4. FULBERT (talk) 17:51, 19 November 2022 (UTC)

Week5/SheilaSh11

For the first article, I selected Dwight Howard, and added an citation about the salary rules of T1 League, here is the diff.

For the second article, I chose Jay Chou, I added a citation about the history of J-team, here is the diff.

After several weeks of Wiki study, I am exciting about what I have done, every effort makes wiki more complete. SheilaSh11 (talk) 11:55, 19 November 2022 (UTC)

@SheilaSh11 As the past two weeks, these are good enough for now, though please try to find other sources as well besides websites that are directly connected with the information itself. Current with Week 5. FULBERT (talk) 17:53, 19 November 2022 (UTC)

Week 4 / Kathyljy

I edited Software this week where I added one citation about software engineering [4]. By following the citation needed labels, I also learns what kinds of sentences should have citations in wikipedia. Kathyljy (talk) 14:07, 10 November 2022 (UTC)

@Kathyljy Your citation is fine, however Citations alone generally do not add value. Beyond adding a citation alone, make sure to provide a sentence or two within the article itself to express your contribution in context (which the citation will support). This will demonstrate how your addition adds to the overall knowledge in the article. Please add a sentence or two to the article you edited and then ping me here when done. FULBERT (talk) 18:59, 12 November 2022 (UTC)
@FULBERT I added a sentence introducing the difference between programmers and software engineers according to the paper I cited. Kathyljy (talk) 13:55, 17 November 2022 (UTC)
@FULBERT here is the diff [5] Kathyljy (talk) 13:56, 17 November 2022 (UTC)
@Kathyljy Your last edit was removed as being inaccurate, though I will mark this current as your citation itself remained. Please focus on accuracy from the citations in the future. Current with Week 4. FULBERT (talk) 17:57, 19 November 2022 (UTC)

Week 4/BL33701

I edited the Supply chain management this week.Here is the diff [6]. I added the disadvantages of traditional supply chain and added reference to it. This week I learned more specialized knowledge about supply chain.BL33701 (talk) 20:29, 11 November 2022 (UTC)

@BL33701 Please assign yourself a different article to edit, per the week's instructions. Ping me here when done and I will review. FULBERT (talk) 19:07, 12 November 2022 (UTC)
I edited the Dogecoin this week.Here is the diff [7]. I added the latest about the impact of Musk's acquisition of Twitter on Dogecoin, and learned more about Dogecoin.BL33701 (talk) 16:30, 14 November 2022 (UTC)
@BL33701 Nice edits. Current with Week 4. FULBERT (talk) 18:00, 19 November 2022 (UTC)

Week4/Lbw119

I have added some information for the page Online learning in higher education. Here is the diff. I just realized that I could search for information I need in wiki and then I can click the citations to track the original sources. Lbw119 (talk) 13:19, 12 November 2022 (UTC)

@Lbw119 Your edit was reverted as it did not fit and was unclear. Please either make a clearer contribution to this article (and see the other editor's summary) or assign yourself a new article to edit for this week. Ping me here when done. FULBERT (talk) 20:02, 13 November 2022 (UTC)
I edited another page Changsha. Here's the diff. I've found an very old and useful document about that and cited. Its interesting to see my histories of my hometown in english. Lbw119 (talk) 14:43, 17 November 2022 (UTC)
@Lbw119 Nice edits. Current with Week 4. FULBERT (talk) 18:06, 19 November 2022 (UTC)

Week5/Lbw119

I edited two articles this week. They are both related to Chinese new electronic vehicle. the first one is New energy vehicles in China. Here is the diff. Another article is about a Chinese electronic vehicle called XPeng, and here is the diff. Both article are focusing on charging station in China. However, The first article is about the whole charging station industry in china, and the second article is about a specific compnay's charging station. Lbw119 (talk) 14:28, 19 November 2022 (UTC)

@Lbw119 Nice edits. Current with Week 5. FULBERT (talk) 18:07, 19 November 2022 (UTC)

Week4/Rt2510

I edited Nationalization this week. I added a summary of nationalization's benefits. Here is diff. I learn that I need to cite in the correct space. Rt2510 (talk) 20:22, 12 November 2022 (UTC)

@Rt2510 Your edit was reverted as its claim was too strong and it did not fit where you put it as a result. Please either make a clearer contribution to this article (and see the other editor's summary) or assign yourself a new article to edit for this week. Ping me here when done. FULBERT (talk) 20:07, 13 November 2022 (UTC)
I edited a new article, Online food ordering. Here is diff. I add a sentence and citation about advanced ghost kitchen. Rt2510 (talk) 03:03, 17 November 2022 (UTC)
@FULBERT Rt2510 (talk) 19:52, 17 November 2022 (UTC)
@Rt2510 Nice edits. Current with Week 4. FULBERT (talk) 18:09, 19 November 2022 (UTC)

Week 4 / Cabanehippopotamus

I edited the Speech synthesis article; here's the diff. I found that a lot of the claims in the article matched my professional understanding of the topic, but didn't back up the claims with peer-reviewed sources. However, the article did reference a lot of other Wikipedia articles. The only concern is that the articles I shared were behind a pay-wall.

Cabanehippopotamus (talk) 22:53, 12 November 2022 (UTC)

@Cabanehippopotamus Please assign yourself this article in the Wiki Edu Dashboard and then ping me here. I will then take a look at it and reply. FULBERT (talk) 20:08, 13 November 2022 (UTC)
@FULBERT I have assigned myself the article. Apologies for the omission. Cabanehippopotamus (talk) 14:33, 15 November 2022 (UTC)
@Cabanehippopotamus Nice edits. Current with Week 4. FULBERT (talk) 18:10, 19 November 2022 (UTC)

Week 5/JayHTCVPN

This week, I edited Biden administration COVID-19 action plan and CDG Express. I added a citation and a sentence about the effectiveness of the plan (diff for Biden administration COVID-19 action plan) and added a citation and a sentence about the opening time for public (diff for CDG Express). These articles are random. I found them on the articles waiting for updates. JayHTCVPN (talk) 12:20, 14 November 2022 (UTC)

JayHTCVPN Nice edits. Current with Week 5. --- FULBERT (talk) 18:15, 19 November 2022 (UTC)

Week 5 / Riven3388

The ariticle I add the citations are about the Gender equality and Marriage in modern China. I add the part of detail about the reason leads to the gender inequality in China. Here are the Diff [1] and Diff.Throughout the citation again, I think I am getting better in adding a citation to the article. I hope the work could provide more information and better understanding to the reader. Riven3388 (talk) 15:40, 17 November 2022 (UTC)

@Riven3388 Nice edits. Current with Week 5. FULBERT (talk) 21:07, 19 November 2022 (UTC)

Week 5 / Kathyljy

This week, I edited digital health and Unified theory of acceptance and use of technology by adding one example for each, here is the differences [8] [9]. I found examples useful when explaining concepts. Kathyljy (talk) 17:50, 19 November 2022 (UTC)

@Kathyljy Please assign yourself these articles in the Wiki Edu Dashboard and then ping me here. I will then take a look at it and reply. --- ~~~~ FULBERT (talk) 17:58, 19 November 2022 (UTC)
@FULBERT I assigned the article in the Dashboard now, can you please double check, thanks. Kathyljy (talk) 18:27, 19 November 2022 (UTC)
@Kathyljy Nice edits. Current with Week 5. FULBERT (talk) 21:11, 19 November 2022 (UTC)

Week5 / Jaynean

For this week the two articles, I added citations about the Viya (influencer) and Li Jiaqi (beauty influencer). Both are the top live-streaming influencer in China, and I add citations about some of their live-streaming sales job evaluations. Here are the Diff and Diff. In this editing process, I paid attention to the examination of Plagiarism. Jaynean (talk) 06:23, 19 November 2022 (UTC)

@Jaynean Nice edits. Current with Week 5. FULBERT (talk) 21:13, 19 November 2022 (UTC)

Week5/ WZ2372

I edited 2 articles this week. The first one is Mount Rainier. Here is the diff. I added the details about glacier reduction in the rainier area. The second one is Oolong. Here is the diff. I edited the new technology used in the process of kneading the tea. It is exciting to complete Wikipedia's gaps.WZ2372 (talk) 08:47, 19 November 2022 (UTC)

@WZ2372 Nice edits. Current with Week 5. FULBERT (talk) 21:15, 19 November 2022 (UTC)

Week6/JayHTCVPN

In week 6, I edited an article about Bilibili. The diff is here. I also edited an article about McRib. The diff is here. I realized that even a long-established article can need further editing. I suggest that when you are trying to find the sentence that needs editing, you probably start asking yourself basic questions, such as: who, where, what, why, and how. JayHTCVPN (talk) 14:21, 19 November 2022 (UTC)

@JayHTCVPN Your edit of Bilibili does not fulfill the Wikipedia policy of using reliable, third-party WP:INDEPENDENT published sources with a reputation for fact-checking and accuracy WP:RELIABLE. Always use a reliable source, such as an academic journal article or another high-quality reference, as discussed in the assignment and class. Avoid blogs, corporate websites, reviews, press releases, sources where we cannot determine author expertise or bias, and opinion pieces as they generally do not count as reliable sources. Please either assign yourself a different article and add a credible source that is needed to it or find and cite a more reliable source to Bilibili to support yourclaim. Ping me here when done, and I will review. FULBERT (talk) 21:18, 19 November 2022 (UTC)
Thank you for your reply. I changed one article about Abrostola tripartita. The diff is here. JayHTCVPN (talk) 07:09, 30 November 2022 (UTC)

Week 5/ Jessssy

This week, I edited Contingency plan and Risk management, which are terms I found interesting from other class I took. But when I view the articles, both of them lack basic information of how to form such management or plan. I added the key factors of contingency plans and the steps of forming a contingency plan based on the textbook I used.

The diff of Contingency plan : https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Contingency_plan&type=revision&diff=1122339526&oldid=1107983737

The diff of Risk management: https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Risk_management&type=revision&diff=1122341719&oldid=1120149124

Jessssy (talk) 02:47, 17 November 2022 (UTC)

@Jessssy Nice edits. Current with Week 5. FULBERT (talk) 22:47, 19 November 2022 (UTC)

This week's article for improvement (week 47, 2022)

Culinary arts are the cuisine arts of food preparation, cooking, and presentation of food, usually in the form of meals. Pictured is a chef preparing food on a metal baking sheet topped with parchment paper.
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Culinary arts

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