User talk:DrSchlagger

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Your submission at Articles for creation: Cyber Defense Labs (January 18)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by RadioFan was:

This submission appears to read more like an advertisement than an entry in an encyclopedia. Encyclopedia articles need to be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources, not just to materials produced by the creator of the subject being discussed. This is important so that the article can meet Wikipedia's verifiability policy and the notability of the subject can be established. If you still feel that this subject is worthy of inclusion in Wikipedia, please rewrite your submission to comply with these policies.

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RadioFan (talk) 04:21, 18 January 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Hello! DrSchlagger, I noticed your article was declined at Articles for Creation, and that can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! RadioFan (talk) 04:21, 18 January 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Maverick Investigations (January 19)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by SwisterTwister was:

This submission's references do not adequately show the subject's notability. Wikipedia requires significant coverage about the subject in reliable sources that are independent of the subject—see the guidelines on the notability of organizations and companies and the golden rule. Please improve the submission's referencing (see Wikipedia:Referencing for beginners), so that the information is verifiable, and there is clear evidence of why the subject is notable and worthy of inclusion in an encyclopedia. If additional reliable sources cannot be found for the subject, then it may not be suitable for Wikipedia at this time.

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SwisterTwister talk 07:29, 19 January 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Cyber Defense Labs (January 19)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Devopam was:

This submission's references do not adequately show the subject's notability. Wikipedia requires significant coverage about the subject in reliable sources that are independent of the subject—see the guidelines on the notability of organizations and companies and the golden rule. Please improve the submission's referencing (see Wikipedia:Referencing for beginners), so that the information is verifiable, and there is clear evidence of why the subject is notable and worthy of inclusion in an encyclopedia. If additional reliable sources cannot be found for the subject, then it may not be suitable for Wikipedia at this time.

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Devopam (talk) 11:45, 19 January 2016 (UTC)[reply]

AfC notification: Draft:Cyber Defense Labs has a new comment

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Cyber Defense Labs. Thanks! RadioFan (talk) 01:52, 20 January 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Orphaned non-free image File:Cyber Defense Labs Logo.png

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Your submission at Articles for creation: Cyber Defense Labs (January 25)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Josve05a was:

* wordings such as "those operations are unlikely to become public." are original research or on opinion/thoughts.

There are no reference supporting the statement "Small cyber security companies like CDL, One World Labs (OWL) or Trojan Horse Security fill this role." only links to official webpages.
"comparatively small community of professionals" is again original research with weasel words.
Do not list "Other firms in the field", they may be linked in bullet form under a "See also"-sction, but no need to list all different kind of competitors in a subjects mission-section.
"takes advantage" are loaded words, words such as "uses" might be better.
"many more are full scholarship students at major universities" has no source and isn't really relevant to the article if not rally specified.

Please alsoread articles about Wikipedia:Neutral point of view as well as Wikipedia:Notability (organizations and companies)#Depth of coverage.

A sulotion would to shorten the article abit and remove thig which isn't directly reletate dto the subject, and later perhaps expand the article.

More information links, which may or may not be relevant for this draft submission:

Articles generally require significant coverage

in reliable sources

that are independent of the topic.

• The fact that a business or organisation exists is not grounds for having an article.

• Whether your competitors have an article or not is completely irrelevant.

• Being a competent professional in your field is not the standard for having an article.

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(t) Josve05a (c) 00:45, 25 January 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Weinstein, Steven PhD (January 31)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Onel5969 was:

This submission's references do not adequately show the subject's notability. Wikipedia requires significant coverage about the subject in reliable sources that are independent of the subject—see the guidelines on the notability of people and the golden rule. Please improve the submission's referencing (see Wikipedia:Referencing for beginners), so that the information is verifiable, and there is clear evidence of why the subject is notable and worthy of inclusion in an encyclopedia. If additional reliable sources cannot be found for the subject, then it may not be suitable for Wikipedia at this time.

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Onel5969 ^{TT me} 18:04, 31 January 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Alison Lacivita, PhD (January 31)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Onel5969 was:

This submission's references do not adequately show the subject's notability. Wikipedia requires significant coverage about the subject in reliable sources that are independent of the subject—see the guidelines on the notability of people and the golden rule. Please improve the submission's referencing (see Wikipedia:Referencing for beginners), so that the information is verifiable, and there is clear evidence of why the subject is notable and worthy of inclusion in an encyclopedia. If additional reliable sources cannot be found for the subject, then it may not be suitable for Wikipedia at this time.

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Onel5969 ^{TT me} 18:04, 31 January 2016 (UTC)[reply]

AfC notification: Draft:Weinstein, Steven PhD has a new comment

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Weinstein, Steven PhD. Thanks! SwisterTwister talk 06:53, 1 February 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Cyber Defense Labs help request

When leaving comments on talk pages, could you please create a "New section" using the button on the top left instead of adding them to current sections regarding other issues as otherwise editors may be unable to see them; such as in my case. What exactly do you need help with in regard to this article? Uamaol (talk) 14:27, 9 February 2016 (UTC)[reply]

AfC notification: Draft:Hiroshima Synchrotron Radiation Center has a new comment

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Hiroshima Synchrotron Radiation Center. Thanks! —Anne Delong (talk) 13:39, 16 February 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Homeland Defense & Security Information Analysis Center (HDIAC) (February 17)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by KSFT was:

This submission's references do not adequately show the subject's notability. Wikipedia requires significant coverage about the subject in reliable sources that are independent of the subject—see the guidelines on the notability of organizations and companies and the golden rule. Please improve the submission's referencing (see Wikipedia:Referencing for beginners), so that the information is verifiable, and there is clear evidence of why the subject is notable and worthy of inclusion in an encyclopedia. If additional reliable sources cannot be found for the subject, then it may not be suitable for Wikipedia at this time.

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KSFT ^C 02:48, 17 February 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: GE Oil & Gas (February 17)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by LaMona was:

This submission's references do not adequately show the subject's notability. Wikipedia requires significant coverage about the subject in reliable sources that are independent of the subject—see the guidelines on the notability of organizations and companies and the golden rule. Please improve the submission's referencing (see Wikipedia:Referencing for beginners), so that the information is verifiable, and there is clear evidence of why the subject is notable and worthy of inclusion in an encyclopedia. If additional reliable sources cannot be found for the subject, then it may not be suitable for Wikipedia at this time.

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LaMona (talk) 23:02, 17 February 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Speedy deletion nomination of Draft:Cyber Defense Labs

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A tag has been placed on Draft:Cyber Defense Labs, requesting that it be speedily deleted from Wikipedia. This has been done under section G11 of the criteria for speedy deletion, because the page seems to be unambiguous advertising which only promotes a company, product, group, service or person and would need to be fundamentally rewritten in order to become encyclopedic. Please read the guidelines on spam and Wikipedia:FAQ/Organizations for more information.

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Your submission at Articles for creation: Hiroshima Synchrotron Radiation Center has been accepted

Hiroshima Synchrotron Radiation Center, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created.
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DGG ( talk ) 03:38, 18 February 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: General Dynamics Mission Systems (February 19)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by DGG was:

Thank you for your submission, but the subject of this article already exists in Wikipedia. You can find it and improve it at General Dynamics Mission Systems instead.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

DGG ( talk ) 21:30, 19 February 2016 (UTC)[reply]

AfC notification: Draft:GE Oil & Gas has a new comment

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:GE Oil & Gas. Thanks! DGG ( talk ) 21:34, 19 February 2016 (UTC)[reply]

AfC notification: Draft:Alison Lacivita, PhD has a new comment

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Alison Lacivita, PhD. Thanks! DGG ( talk ) 01:02, 20 February 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Speedy deletion nomination of North Texas Crime Commission

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It seems to be unambiguous advertising which only promotes a company, product, group, service or person and would need to be fundamentally rewritten in order to become encyclopedic. (See section G11 of the criteria for speedy deletion.) Please read the guidelines on spam and Wikipedia:FAQ/Business for more information.

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Your submission at Articles for creation: Homeland Defense & Security Information Analysis Center (HDIAC) (February 20)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Anarchyte was:

This submission's references do not adequately show the subject's notability. Wikipedia requires significant coverage about the subject in reliable sources that are independent of the subject—see the guidelines on the notability of organizations and companies and the golden rule. Please improve the submission's referencing (see Wikipedia:Referencing for beginners), so that the information is verifiable, and there is clear evidence of why the subject is notable and worthy of inclusion in an encyclopedia. If additional reliable sources cannot be found for the subject, then it may not be suitable for Wikipedia at this time.

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Anarchyte (work | talk) 05:44, 20 February 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: GE Oil & Gas (February 20)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Wiae was:

I've removed some substantial copying from the company's website.

The draft still retains a somewhat promotional flavour, including (but not limited to) phrases like "industrial power generation and compression solutions" (see WP:SOLUTION), "pipeline integrity solutions", "leverages technological innovation from other GE businesses", "has gone on to further expand its global presence by building a strong foundation in the oil and gas industry with over a dozen acquisitions" (just say that GE Oil & Gas has acquired over a dozen oil and gas companies), "true workhorses of the industry", "help you compete in the clean fuel space", and "people believed that electricity was the way to go" (too conversational).

There is also some information that is repeated several times, like the particular markets that GE Oil & Gas works in. That can be trimmed.

As for the sources, this one is sort of lacking in content about GE Oil & Gas, and this one is an interview with someone affiliated with the subject. The company may be notable but these two sources aren't fantastic when measured against the corporate inclusion criteria. Are there any more sources out there? The WSJ and other Rigzone sources look fine to me.

Finally, almost none of the information here is sourced to a particular reference using an inline citation. While inline citations are not required after every sentence (see the rules on when they're required), it does make it difficult to verify the facts in a paragraph without any references. Thanks,

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/wiae /tlk 14:02, 20 February 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Just to clarify, you didn't add any copyrighted material to the draft; it was there since the draft's inception. Thanks, /wiae /tlk 14:03, 20 February 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Homeland Defense & Security Information Analysis Center (HDIAC) (February 20)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by RadioFan was:

The proposed article does not have sufficient content to require an article of its own, but it could be merged into the existing article at Defense Technical Information Center. Since anyone can edit Wikipedia, you are welcome to add that information yourself. Thank you.

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RadioFan (talk) 15:13, 20 February 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: North Texas Crime Commission (February 20)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Onel5969 was:

This submission appears to read more like an advertisement than an entry in an encyclopedia. Encyclopedia articles need to be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources, not just to materials produced by the creator of the subject being discussed. This is important so that the article can meet Wikipedia's verifiability policy and the notability of the subject can be established. If you still feel that this subject is worthy of inclusion in Wikipedia, please rewrite your submission to comply with these policies.

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Onel5969 ^{TT me} 18:49, 20 February 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: General Dynamics Mission Systems (February 21)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by RadioFan was:

as another reviewer has noted, this article already exists.

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RadioFan (talk) 01:59, 21 February 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Alepo Technologies Inc. (February 21)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by RadioFan was:

This submission appears to read more like an advertisement than an entry in an encyclopedia. Encyclopedia articles need to be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources, not just to materials produced by the creator of the subject being discussed. This is important so that the article can meet Wikipedia's verifiability policy and the notability of the subject can be established. If you still feel that this subject is worthy of inclusion in Wikipedia, please rewrite your submission to comply with these policies.

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RadioFan (talk) 02:02, 21 February 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: PHP Standard Recommendation has been accepted

PHP Standard Recommendation, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created.
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LoudLizard (talk) 18:24, 24 February 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: North Texas Crime Commission (February 25)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Kikichugirl was:

This submission appears to read more like an advertisement than an entry in an encyclopedia. Encyclopedia articles need to be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources, not just to materials produced by the creator of the subject being discussed. This is important so that the article can meet Wikipedia's verifiability policy and the notability of the subject can be established. If you still feel that this subject is worthy of inclusion in Wikipedia, please rewrite your submission to comply with these policies.

The comment they left was:

This shouldn't read like an "About Me" page.

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— kikichugirl ^oh hello! 05:05, 25 February 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Cyber Defense Labs (February 25)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Primefac was:

This submission's references do not adequately show the subject's notability. Wikipedia requires significant coverage about the subject in reliable sources that are independent of the subject—see the guidelines on the notability of organizations and companies and the golden rule. Please improve the submission's referencing (see Wikipedia:Referencing for beginners), so that the information is verifiable, and there is clear evidence of why the subject is notable and worthy of inclusion in an encyclopedia. If additional reliable sources cannot be found for the subject, then it may not be suitable for Wikipedia at this time.

The comment they left was:

If it weren't for the various brief mentions in the references, I would almost assume that CDL didn't even exist. In order to fulfill the Golden Rule there needs to be significant coverage about the company, not just one-off quotes from its employees or business listings. Please add additional independent reliable sources that discuss the subject in detail.

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Primefac (talk) 17:22, 25 February 2016 (UTC)[reply]

AfC notification: Draft:Maverick Investigations has a new comment

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Maverick Investigations. Thanks! SwisterTwister talk 05:33, 1 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]

A Request for Comments

Hi, I'm sorry to have to bother you, but you kindly wrote some positive comments on my article Lattice delay network which was being submitted a few months ago. The article had been up for a while, but now Wikipedia editor(s) have decided it would be better merged with Lattice phase equaliser and so have redirected viewers to this site where my article is currently hidden from view. For a variety of reasons I do not wish to combine the articles in the way proposed and would like my article reinstated to what it was before. Whatever your views, could you add to the discussion at Wikipedia:Teahouse/Questions under the heading "Newly linked article has gone missing". If you can find the time I would be grateful Thanks D1ofBerks (talk) 14:04, 29 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]

July 2016

Your addition to Hillary Rodham senior thesis has been removed, as it appears to have added copyrighted material to Wikipedia without evidence of permission from the copyright holder. If you are the copyright holder, please read Wikipedia:Donating copyrighted materials for more information on uploading your material to Wikipedia. For legal reasons, Wikipedia cannot accept copyrighted material, including text or images from print publications or from other websites, without an appropriate and verifiable license. All such contributions will be deleted. You may use external websites or publications as a source of information, but not as a source of content, such as sentences or images—you must write using your own words. Wikipedia takes copyright violations very seriously and persistent violators will be blocked from editing. CAPTAIN RAJU ^(✉) 20:34, 18 July 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Maverick Investigations (July 19)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by GeneralizationsAreBad was:

This submission's references do not adequately show the subject's notability. Wikipedia requires significant coverage about the subject in reliable sources that are independent of the subject—see the guidelines on the notability of organizations and companies and the golden rule. Please improve the submission's referencing (see Wikipedia:Referencing for beginners), so that the information is verifiable, and there is clear evidence of why the subject is notable and worthy of inclusion in an encyclopedia. If additional reliable sources cannot be found for the subject, then it may not be suitable for Wikipedia at this time.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Too many of the sources are trivial mentions, social media, company websites, or ones otherwise affiliated with the subject. Please see WP:RS and WP:GNG.

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GAB^gab 01:00, 19 July 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: North Texas Crime Commission (July 27)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by SwisterTwister was:

This submission's references do not adequately show the subject's notability. Wikipedia requires significant coverage about the subject in reliable sources that are independent of the subject—see the guidelines on the notability of organizations and companies and the golden rule. Please improve the submission's referencing (see Wikipedia:Referencing for beginners), so that the information is verifiable, and there is clear evidence of why the subject is notable and worthy of inclusion in an encyclopedia. If additional reliable sources cannot be found for the subject, then it may not be suitable for Wikipedia at this time.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Hello; for this to show convincing independent notability, this would need to focus only with actual news; No press releases, interviews, social media links or trivial passing mentions.

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SwisterTwister talk 21:55, 27 July 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Homeland Defense & Security Information Analysis Center (HDIAC) (August 17)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by VarunFEB2003 was:

Doesn't meet MoS directions.

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Varun FEB2003 ^{I am Online} 13:24, 17 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Your draft article, Draft:General Dynamics Mission Systems

Hello, DrSchlagger. It has been over six months since you last edited your Articles for Creation draft article submission, "General Dynamics Mission Systems".

In accordance with our policy that Articles for Creation is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been nominated for deletion. If you plan on working on it further, or editing it to address the issues raised if it was declined, simply edit the submission and remove the {{db-afc}} or {{db-g13}} code.

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Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. —MRD2014 (talk) (contribs) 15:30, 21 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Homeland Defense & Security Information Analysis Center (HDIAC) (September 18)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Primefac was:

This submission's references do not adequately show the subject's notability. Wikipedia requires significant coverage about the subject in reliable sources that are independent of the subject—see the guidelines on the notability of organizations and companies and the golden rule. Please improve the submission's referencing (see Wikipedia:Referencing for beginners), so that the information is verifiable, and there is clear evidence of why the subject is notable and worthy of inclusion in an encyclopedia. If additional reliable sources cannot be found for the subject, then it may not be suitable for Wikipedia at this time.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Okay, three issues. First is purely a formatting/context issue. You need to have an introduction (also called the LEAD) where you say "HDIAC is..." Second is a prose issue. Your first paragraph is so full of acronyms and organisations that it's honestly hard to read. Split it up into smaller chunks, each with a defined train of thought. Finally, and most importantly, are the lack of suitable references. Notability, according to the Golden Rule is demonstrated by multiple independent reliable sources that talk specifically about the subject. PRIMARY sources such as HDIAC's own website or press releases do not do this. You must add more independent sources for this to even be considered for inclusion on Wikipedia.

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Primefac (talk) 22:37, 18 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Your draft article, Draft:North Texas Crime Commission

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Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. CatcherStorm ^talk 12:50, 2 February 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Nomination of Draft:Cyber Defense Labs for deletion

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Your draft article, Draft:Maverick Investigations

Hello, DrSchlagger. It has been over six months since you last edited your Articles for Creation draft article submission, "Maverick Investigations".

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Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. — O Fortuna^{semper crescis, aut decrescis} 08:13, 13 May 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Speedy deletion nomination of Object pose estimation

Hello DrSchlagger,

I wanted to let you know that I just tagged Object pose estimation for deletion, because it appears to duplicate an existing Wikipedia article, 3D pose estimation.

If you feel that the article shouldn't be deleted, you can contest this deletion, but please don't remove the speedy deletion tag from the top.

You can leave a note on my talk page if you have questions.

TheDragonFire (talk) 09:58, 18 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Prods

Hi, can you please slow down the Prod nominations as you have nominated about a hundred today and they all have to be checked by prod patrol and admin, thanks Atlantic306 (talk) 20:41, 18 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]

I echo Atlantic306's thoughts here. It's great to help cut down some of the cruft, but I've had to contest a few of the prods from this morning (Auguste Keufer, Bash-Aparan, Bansaha, Avenida Comandante Valòdia, Aina (novel), Noah Mann junior and Noah Mann). Also I recommend checking the revision history on some of these articles; with the two Noah Mann articles, a new editor overwrote an older, legitimate article, and we wouldn't want to delete those actual articles. It might also be courteous to leave a notification on the creator's talk page when you PROD an article. (Twinkle will do this automatically for you, which is very helpful.) Thanks, and let me know if you have any questions. /wiae /tlk 20:47, 18 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]

I'm fixing the legitimate orphans but there is so much that is un-sourced, self promotional or just irrelevant. Just because a place exists on a map, does not mean it needs a article. I'm just trying to apply the same vigor as other people. Doc Schlagger

@DrSchlagger: I appreciate that; thank you for doing your part! However, I would suggest that you try at least a web search (and preferably a search of Google News/Google Books too) before PRODding an article. For instance, an hour ago you PRODded Centurion syndrome. However, if you Google that term, you will find several academic journal articles written on the subject. To me that is a fairly clear indication that the topic is notable, and certainly that it is not an uncontroversial candidate for deletion. Thanks, /wiae /tlk 21:05, 18 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]

I was going to just add a line in the article about eye conditions, its is not significant enough for its own article, but whatever. I was just applying the same standards that get applied to anything i write. DrSchlagger (talk) 21:11, 18 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]

@DrSchlagger: I appreciate your enthusiasm but I would suggest you slow down. You just added a lead section to Bank Lofts that had nothing to do with the article. Wikipedia isn't a race; there's no prize for being first. I'm happy to help if you need any guidance. Just ask. /wiae /tlk 21:52, 18 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Hi, on a related note, I suggest that you have a look at Wikipedia:Notability (geographic features), which explains the standards applied on Wikipedia for geographic features. In short, because of Wikipedia's function as a gazeteer, articles on those topics are generally kept even when sourcing is very scant. Thanks, --Arxiloxos (talk) 02:01, 19 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]