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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Desertarun (talk) 16:23, 3 June 2021 (UTC)

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1935 New York anti-lynching exhibitions, Lynching of George Hughes, Death (statue), This Is Her First Lynching, Aaron Goodelman, The Law Is Too Slow, Lynching of Henry Lowry

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The Law Is Too Slow, 1925 lithograph by George Bellows
The Law Is Too Slow, 1925 lithograph by George Bellows

Created by Drmies (talk) and Uncle G (talk). Nominated by Drmies (talk) at 17:00, 5 May 2021 (UTC).

  • Here's my review...
  • 1935 New York anti-lynching exhibitions - brand new article, long enough, citations in every paragraph, appears to be written neutrally. Problem - the spring of 1935 violates MOS:SEASON, please correct. I do see the sentence at the end of the "Organization and background" section, that should be put towards the start of the section.
  • Lynching of George Hughes - brand new article, long enough, citations in every paragraph, appears to be written neutrally
  • Death (statue) - brand new article, long enough, citations in every paragraph, appears to be written neutrally, appears to be written neutrally
  • Aaron Goodelman - brand new article, long enough, citations in every paragraph, appears to be written neutrally, Earwig is happy with the online sources not being plagiarized
  • This Is Her First Lynching - brand new article, long enough, citations in every paragraph, appears to be written neutrally
  • The Law Is Too Slow - brand new article, long enough, citations in every paragraph, appears to be written neutrally
  • Lynching of Henry Lowry - brand new article, long enough, citations in every paragraph, appears to be written neutrally
  • Sources - most of these articles are sourced to the Apel and Heid books, which I was able to read some of on Google Books. I'll AGF for any detail that I may not have seen in those snippets.
  • Image - present in The Law Is Too Slow and Lynching of Henry Lowry, is relevant to the hook and listed as being donated to Wikicommons, so PD, and shows up well enough at this size
  • The hook - Removing the bolded characters from the hook for the purposes of counting, this hook is still over 200 characters. WP:DYKSG C3 says that we can make exceptions for multiarticle hooks, if it is reasonably compact and readable. The hook could be made more clear. Does the hook benefit from mentioning the lynching of John Carter? How was the NAACP "using" the lynching of Henry Lowry?
  • QPQ - three out of seven done
  • So, well on your way to passing. Need to fix the MOS:SEASON issue, four more QPQ, and hook revision. – Muboshgu (talk) 19:44, 15 May 2021 (UTC)

Muboshgu, I appreciate you. I know I got some more QPQs to do, but man, I'm watching this documentary on Betty Davis and it is quite something. Anyway, SEASON was new to me, and I can't say I like it, but I fixed it--put in the dates, added a journal article to verify. Here's a tweaked lead--the first lead was actually a lot longer, and John Carter was in there but I submitted him separately I think. Drmies (talk) 00:04, 16 May 2021 (UTC)

  • Drmies, I appreciate you too. MOS:SEASON is good because the seasons don't line up with the northern and southern hemisphere. I like ALT1 a lot. – Muboshgu (talk) 21:55, 16 May 2021 (UTC)
  • User:Muboshgu, you're right--there is another hemisphere, I forgot. That's Canada right? Kelapstick, is that why you're making a killing on turnips out of season? Reviews are done. Drmies (talk) 22:59, 16 May 2021 (UTC)
  • Great. I see one more minor issue though, a small discrepency in dates. In the 1935 anti-lynching article, section "Organization and background", it says in the first paragraph that the NAACP exhibition was Feb 15 to Mar 2, and the second paragraph says the Artists' Union exhibition was Mar 3 to Mar 16. Then the last sentence of the section says they were Feb 15 to Mar 1 and Mar 2 to Mar 16, respectively. – Muboshgu (talk) 23:43, 16 May 2021 (UTC)
  • I'd like to promote this but there is a character limit for hooks of around 200. Alt0 is 460 characters and Alt1 is 365 characters. Desertarun (talk) 14:41, 3 June 2021 (UTC)
    • Desertarun, check out WP:DYKSG C3: A hook introducing more than one article is an exception to the hook length rule: subtract from the overall count the bolded characters for each additional new article beyond the first. If the result is 200 or less, the hook length is probably acceptable. Otherwise the hook may still be acceptable (on a case-by-case basis) if it is reasonably compact and readable. – Muboshgu (talk) 15:58, 3 June 2021 (UTC)
    • And I'm making explicit that I'm only approving ALT1, which is more concise. – Muboshgu (talk) 16:03, 3 June 2021 (UTC)
      • I didn't know that, thanks for pointing out. By my count the characters are 190, so Alt1 is good to go. Desertarun (talk) 16:10, 3 June 2021 (UTC)
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