Template:Did you know nominations/Resident Human

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: rejected by Narutolovehinata5 (talk) 11:01, 16 May 2021 (UTC)
Article issues have not been addressed in time.

Resident Human

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• ... that the "Movement" by the Finnish progressive metal group Wheel was inspired by the Black Lives Matter movement in the United States?Source:
  • ALT1:... that ...? Source: "You are strongly encouraged to quote the source text supporting each hook" (and [link] the source, or cite it briefly without using citation templates)

Created/expanded by Filmomusico (talk). Self-nominated at 01:17, 3 April 2021 (UTC).

• General eligibility:

• New enough:
• Long enough: - Does not meet 1500 character minimum.

Policy compliance:

• Adequate sourcing: - Several unreliable sources need to be replaced.
• Neutral:
• Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:

Hook eligibility:

• Cited:
• Interesting: - Needs a bit more substance, perhaps by adding the band's genre and national origin.
• Other problems: - Not formatted correctly, as it needs to include a link to the article.

QPQ: Done.

Overall: The article and hook need more work. QPQ not needed for new editor. SounderBruce 22:43, 3 April 2021 (UTC)

@SounderBruce:Updated the hook. Looks interesting? Removed some dubious sources. What else should be addressed?--Filmomusico (talk) 23:49, 3 April 2021 (UTC)

The hook (and its sentence in the article itself) are not grammatically correct and could be shortened a bit. SounderBruce 04:55, 7 April 2021 (UTC)

@SounderBruce: Sorry for the late reply, what exactly is not grammatically correct? I changed a wording a bit. PS: Can you be so kind and ping me next time so that I would know that you are in? Thanks.--Filmomusico (talk) 00:47, 15 April 2021 (UTC)

Shortened the hook. How does it look now?--Filmomusico (talk) 00:55, 15 April 2021 (UTC)

@Filmomusico: "in a reference to" from the article is not grammatically correct and too vague. The article is still below the minimum character threshold. SounderBruce 01:21, 15 April 2021 (UTC)

@SounderBruce: And how would I know how many characters it have? I know it should meet the minimum of 1500. I have fixed the grammatically incorrect sentence, but now the paragraph uses the words "inspired by" twice. While it is now "grammatically correct", the phrase redundancy might be an issue for the reader.--Filmomusico (talk) 03:42, 15 April 2021 (UTC)

@Filmomusico: Re-reading the source, it doesn't look like "Ascend" was inspired by BLM, rather it came from "the desperate content harvest of copy/paste culture". Also, to check your characters you can use the two character counters in the toolbox above. SounderBruce 03:59, 15 April 2021 (UTC)

@SounderBruce: So only "Movement" was "inspired"?--Filmomusico (talk) 21:00, 15 April 2021 (UTC)

This has been sitting for almost a month with no new progress, so it should be closed as ineligible due to article length and sourcing issues. SounderBruce 21:40, 9 May 2021 (UTC)

Left the nom a message asking them to return to the discussion. Narutolovehinata5 ^tccsdnew 23:33, 13 May 2021 (UTC)

it's time to close this up. Communication with the creator is not forthcoming, and there's the serious matter of article length. My count, leaving out the quotations, comes up less than 600 character--that's a third of what we need. Drmies (talk) 00:12, 16 May 2021 (UTC)

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