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Date	Process	Result
April 3, 2020	Good article nominee	Listed
May 12, 2021	Featured article candidate	Not promoted
December 24, 2021	Peer review	Reviewed
A fact from this article appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the "Did you know?" column on April 27, 2020. The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that a fisherman who was presumed dead during Typhoon Emma* in 1959 returned for his funeral meal ten days later?*
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GA Review

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Reviewer: HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk · contribs) 23:15, 2 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

Review

Lead

"Emma steadily weakened and became extratropical on November 13, the JMA ceased tracking the storm on November 15" seems awkwardly written. Maybe add "and the JMA ceased...." or "As Emma steadily weakened...."

Added the "and".

Can "tropical depression" be Wikilinked?

Done.

JMA

This could be because I am unfamiliar with Typhoons but this reference and this reference doesn't make sense to me. How can I read it to check for information?

Added two more notes.

Done with fixes, @HickoryOughtShirt?4:. Thanks for the review. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 01:36, 3 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Alrighty, congratulations. HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 01:40, 3 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]