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Good articleTropical Storm Patricia (2009) has been listed as one of the Natural sciences good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
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February 6, 2010Good article nomineeListed

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Reviewer: –Juliancolton | Talk 21:11, 28 January 2010 (UTC)[reply]

  • Two days later, Tropical Depression Eight developed from the wave. - Which ocean?
  • Gradual development took place over the following several days as widespread, scattered convection consolidated around a developing area of low pressure. - "As" is ambiguous; does it mean "while" or "because"?
  • Several hours after being declared a tropical depression, the system further strengthened into a tropical storm, at which time it was named Patricia. - Lots of redundancies; try Several hours later, the system further strengthened into a tropical storm and was named Patricia.
  • By the late morning of October 12, the overall cloud cover of the storm had increased but the center became less defined, - Increased in terms of coverage?
  • The possibile intensification did not take place, however. - Grammar.
  • Early on October 14, Patricia degenerated into a remnant-low pressure area - Why the hyphen?
  • Later that day, convective developed ceased to occur as the storm neared the south tip of Baja California Sur. - Eh?
  • Officials in the threatened region began preparing 159 shelters and closed schools on October 12 - This makes it sound as if they prepared the closed schools.
  • Since the impact section relies primarily or solely on Spanish sources, I think it would be a good idea to contact somebody who speaks at least es-3 to verify the information. I'm not convinced Google translate is all that reliable. (Edit: Alas, the source sited for the snowfall info doesn't back it up at all.)

On-hold for now. –Juliancolton | Talk 21:11, 28 January 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Made changes per above comments. Thanks for the review JC. Cyclonebiskit (talk) 20:43, 30 January 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Looks mostly better now. I'm looking for somebody to verify all the Spanish → English translations, and once that's done it's passed. –Juliancolton | Talk 02:26, 3 February 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Meh. I'll assume good faith and pass it, but I would still like this to be looked into. –Juliancolton | Talk 21:18, 6 February 2010 (UTC)[reply]
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