Talk:Stash: No Loot Left Behind

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I noticed that this page was evidently either copied and pasted from a development site or edited directly by the developers; while the latter is fine (the former raises copyright concerns =)), it definitely reads like an ad -- something Wikipedia is not. I did my level best to convert it to the perspective of one discussing the product as an observer, rather than as though the reader is an interested party who is currently or will be playing the game.

Some things, as an observer familiar with games but unfamiliar with the specific jargon of the product, were however unclear: the meaning of "CC" is not defined (concussed?). Also, the phrase on delay in the Combat section is self-contradictory, specifying that it is both permanent (indefinite) as well as temporary (once per round) without explaining the difference.

--Jtgibson (talk) 23:03, 9 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]