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Religion
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This user Castncoot is a world-class vandal and this user considers that reliable information about religion should not be included in the article.
Information about the religion has no problem being added in good articles in wikipedia such as Texas. Why is the article about the State of New York banned for religion?.
Then the article about religion in the United States should also be eliminated. According to the ignorant users information about religion should be banned in all the articles of all the States of United States.
The 2014 Pew Religious Landscape Survey showed the religious makeup of the state was as follows:
Affiliation | % of New York population | |
---|---|---|
Christian | 60 | |
Catholic | 31 | |
Protestant | 26 | |
Evangelical Protestant | 10 | |
Mainline Protestant | 11 | |
Black church | 5 | |
Mormon | 0.5 | |
Jehovah's Witnesses | 1 | |
Orthodox Christian | 1 | |
Other Christian | 0.5 | |
Unaffiliated | 27 | |
Nothing in particular | 17 | |
Agnostic | 5 | |
Atheist | 5 | |
Non-Christian faiths | 12 | |
Jewish | 7 | |
Muslim | 2 | |
Buddhist | 1 | |
Hindu | 1 | |
Other Non-Christian faiths | 0.5 | |
Don't know/refused answer | 1 | |
Total | 100 |
References
- ^ Pew Research Center, "Religious Landscape Study: New York"
— Preceding unsigned comment added by ControlCorV (talk • contribs)
- Support inclusion. While I emphatically do not support the OPs description of Castncoot as a "world-class vandal" in this matter (in fact, they certainly aren't, it's just a content dispute), I do think that this information is a vast improvement over the current offerings for the state's religions, which list only the arbitrary 'top four' religions with simple counts of practitioners. Castncoot reverted the first instance with an edit summary stating
subdividing into "Christian vs Non-Christian" is oversimplification, must then subdivide Judaism, Islam, and Hinduism as well
- which, well, the table does exactly that. If you feel strongly about getting rid of the higher-level divisions (Christian, Non-Christian, Unaffiliated, Don't know) then go ahead and do that, it's an easy edit. This information has greater depth and is from a more recent source than the previous offering, which is very sparse in comparison. The later accusations of WP:POV in edit summaries are particularly unfounded, this is quite neutral in presentation. In any case, as of this comment, you're both at the limit of WP:3RR (sorry, Castncoot just went to the fourth revert while I was typing this - seriously, why) so perhaps just accept that the WP:WRONGVERSION is up until we can talk about this for a bit. Antepenultimate (talk) 02:48, 24 October 2016 (UTC) I swear I can usually count - reversion count corrected, with apologies, Antepenultimate (talk) 22:57, 24 October 2016 (UTC)
- Also, yeesh, the OPs added hyperbole and WP:OTHERSTUFFEXISTS arguments are making this very difficult, but just focusing on the information and sources, this still seems appropriate for inclusion to me. Antepenultimate (talk) 03:03, 24 October 2016 (UTC)
- Actually, Antepenultimate, I did not go to the fourth revert. That was User:Oknazevad who did the good deed there. I also want to respectfully point out that you are incorrect about Judaism, Islam, Hinduism, and Buddhism being subdivided into their own various denominations. As you see above, they clearly are not. This can't be done simply for one religion and not the others. That is WP:UNDUE. Castncoot (talk) 17:36, 24 October 2016 (UTC)
- Hi Castncoot, and my sincere apologies, I definitely mis-counted there. I've struck through the erroneous phrase, late though it may be. Regarding WP:UNDUE, I disagree somewhat but it's a fine line, I suppose the breakdown of Christian denominations makes sense here, given the significant numbers contained within each denomination. Whereas in a country with a preponderance of non-Christian religions, it would make sense to lump Christians and break down other major faiths that have significant participation. That's just an opinion, of course, and I would certainly support inclusion of Orthodox, Conservative, and Reformed Judaism, etc. if the data is available, though it seems to be a limitation of how the survey was conducted. Antepenultimate (talk) 22:57, 24 October 2016 (UTC)
- Hi Ante, no offense taken and no worries. It's precisely that limitation of the survey that makes it a deal-breaker for me, simply because it doesn't do due justice to the other religions in New York (the title of this article), and in the process actually misguides the reader that the other religions in New York can simply be lumped together like that. Jewry in New York constitutes a significant 7% representation, whereas in the U.S. as a whole it's much less, and your argument could potentially carry a more acceptable representation for the U.S. as a whole, which is how Pew likely decided upon what data to investigate in the first place. However, this limitation really does become an objectionable issue in the New York article. Obviously Pew itself is a reliable source, that was never the issue for me. We also currently already have the religion bar graph for New York that gives the reader a good idea of the proportional breakdown of the major religions. Best, Castncoot (talk) 23:24, 24 October 2016 (UTC)
- Hi Castncoot, and my sincere apologies, I definitely mis-counted there. I've struck through the erroneous phrase, late though it may be. Regarding WP:UNDUE, I disagree somewhat but it's a fine line, I suppose the breakdown of Christian denominations makes sense here, given the significant numbers contained within each denomination. Whereas in a country with a preponderance of non-Christian religions, it would make sense to lump Christians and break down other major faiths that have significant participation. That's just an opinion, of course, and I would certainly support inclusion of Orthodox, Conservative, and Reformed Judaism, etc. if the data is available, though it seems to be a limitation of how the survey was conducted. Antepenultimate (talk) 22:57, 24 October 2016 (UTC)
- Actually, Antepenultimate, I did not go to the fourth revert. That was User:Oknazevad who did the good deed there. I also want to respectfully point out that you are incorrect about Judaism, Islam, Hinduism, and Buddhism being subdivided into their own various denominations. As you see above, they clearly are not. This can't be done simply for one religion and not the others. That is WP:UNDUE. Castncoot (talk) 17:36, 24 October 2016 (UTC)
- Also, yeesh, the OPs added hyperbole and WP:OTHERSTUFFEXISTS arguments are making this very difficult, but just focusing on the information and sources, this still seems appropriate for inclusion to me. Antepenultimate (talk) 03:03, 24 October 2016 (UTC)
- Support inclusion. This graph seems to have about the right level of detail and be properly sourced. Castncoot was taking part in the accepted bold-revert-discuss process, so accusations of vandalism are unfair and unhelpful. Certes (talk) 11:21, 24 October 2016 (UTC)
- Support inclusion. Religious breakdowns are appropriate for this article if sourced correctly and they are about the state and not the city, county, or metropolitan area. Emir of Wikipedia (talk) 11:22, 24 October 2016 (UTC)
- Support inclusion. To the best of my knowledge, the Pew Research Center is a reliable source. The data in this chart seems more useful than the one currently in the article. "Christian" is too broad a category for religion data in the U.S. —Nelson Ricardo (talk) 15:51, 24 October 2016 (UTC)
- Support. Some reservations about the breakdowns, but Pew is usually considered a reliable source. I only reverted to force discussion and end the edit war. oknazevad (talk) 16:01, 24 October 2016 (UTC) PS, I do think the hysterics and bad faith accusation of vandalism deserves a trouting, but that's just me. oknazevad (talk) 16:02, 24 October 2016 (UTC)
- Support in concept but Oppose in application: I have no problem with the Pew source or the table in concept. I do indeed have a problem with the subdivision of only one religion into various denominations when the other religions also have similarly intricate denominational subdivisions, and I do also oppose having categories called "Non-Christian faiths" or "Other Non-Christian faiths", for the same WP:UNDUE reason. For example, Judaism is subdivided into Orthodox, Conservative, and Reformed classes, and within these classes are even more complex sects. Are these intricacies reflected in this table? No, they are not, but one looking at this table would be misguided as such. Obviously Pew is a RS, but that is not at all the issue which I've brought up here. The other thing is that we already have a religion bar chart there. So why do we need another, duplicative chart? Castncoot (talk) 17:32, 24 October 2016 (UTC)
- Support for the time being. I think the breakdown from Christian to Catholic, Protestant, and Other is an obvious one to make. It has nothing to do with favoritism toward any one religion and everything to do with the fact that these are the largest religious groups in the state. I would similarly expect an article on a majority Muslim country to break down Muslims into Sunnis and Shi'ites at the very least but not break down Christians. I don't see a need to break down Protestants further or to list individual Christian sects with 1% or less of the population, so in an ideal world, we'd condense that a bit. This table is better than no table, though. I have to oppose, on the other hand, referring to Castncoot as a "world-class vandal". If I weren't WP:INVOLVED on this page, I would have considered blocking for that blatant personal attack. We don't need further escalation here. ~ Rob13Talk 17:16, 25 October 2016 (UTC)
- Maybe obvious to you, but not to many others, who would instead see it as blatantly WP:UNDUE. This is not an article about the United States, (nor any other country), but New York. Let's look at this carefully. Christianity has a 60% (as opposed to 98%, for example) representation, while Unaffiliated has a significant 27%(!) representation (quite a large number). Judaism has a highly significant 7% representation as well. I feel strongly that if this table is placed, then it needs to be heavily edited. There is no place for the term "Non-Christian faiths" or "Other Non-Christian faiths". Maybe it should read "Non-Christian/Unaffiliated/Jewish faiths" or "Other Non-Christian/Unaffiliated/Jewish faiths". Do you see my point? Where does it end? Why not just maintain the bar graph that is already there, but in text format, describe the breakdown of Christianity and any other religion into its respective denominations as the information is or becomes available, and reference it with the appropriate citation? That seems more reasonable and far less WP:UNDUE, because text placement generally carries less burden to provide comprehensive information and is more accommodating to an "add along as you get more citable information available" approach. By the way, although I appreciate everybody vouching for me as not being a "world-class vandal", I'm still laughing about that comment rather than being much bothered by it, lol! Castncoot (talk) 18:51, 25 October 2016 (UTC)
- @Castncoot: You are questioning here the way Pew conducted their survey; perhaps you would have split religious affiliations differently but that would be your WP:OR. We must either follow the source we have or find a better one. And this source is more recent and detailed than the previous information, hence my support for inclusion as presented. — JFG talk 23:19, 25 October 2016 (UTC)
- Support inclusion as presented – This table is a clear and representative summary of religious affiliations (or lack thereof) in the New York (state) population. Admonish the OP for incivility towards Castncoot: he may be opinionated at best and hyperbolic at worst, far far away from vandal territory. (We love you, Castie…) — JFG talk 23:08, 25 October 2016 (UTC)
- Thank you for your humorous, good-faith description of me, JFG :). Again, to re-emphasize, I don't have any problem with Pew as a reliable source, and I don't have a problem with Pew's table as designed macroscopically for the U.S. as a whole, which was Pew's likely premise when choosing its categorization. The problem is that this particular table's applicability (as is) breaks down into WP:UNDUE territory for the purposes of inclusion in Wikipedia when it is applied toward certain subnational entities such as New York, which has very different demographics from the U.S. as a whole, just as Greater London (pardon me if that's not the best analogy) has very different demographics from the UK as a whole. Remember that Pew didn't design this table with Wikipedia in mind. So it's really not a "clear and representative summary of religious affiliations (or lack thereof) in the New York (state) population", because if it were, it would have at minimum included a subdivisional demographic breakdown for New York's prominent Jewish population into Orthodox, Conservative, and Reformed designations. Without even that, the table gives the unwitting reader an inaccurate view of religious affiliations in New York. If Christianity claimed 98% of adherents in a given state, as it would in a number of other states in the U.S., then I could go along with the logic of including the terms "Non-Christian faiths" and "Other Non-Christian faiths" on that state's Wikipedia page. But the case is nearly diametrically opposite for New York, the subject of this article. I would rather wait for a more accurate representation to materialize (or edit the table accordingly) than sacrifice representative accuracy for the sake of "more detail" – which is not necessarily "better", and can actually bring about just the opposite. Castncoot (talk) 02:12, 26 October 2016 (UTC)
- We've heard your point loud and clear, Castncoot; repetitive persistence is another of your prominent qualities… Now, this table is long enough. Rather than subdividing the Jewish denominations (for which we have no data), perhaps we should lump the lower-than-2% Christian subgroups together with "Other Christian" which would then reach 3%, and call it a day. — JFG talk 03:23, 26 October 2016 (UTC)
- OK, now we're getting somewhere! Who ever thought you and I could agree on something, JFG? :) I'm OK with your suggestion, provided we also eliminate the term "Non-Christian faiths" (which is totally unnecessary) and replace the term "Other Non-Christian faiths" with the term "Other faiths". Castncoot (talk) 03:35, 26 October 2016 (UTC)
- Faith works miracles! (no matter which religion) Note it's the second time we agree; no doubt we're on a mission from God. I also agree that the "non-christian" labels are useless clutter. Given the overwhelming consensus to include, I think our fellow editors above won't object if you go ahead and copy your draft into the article now. How refreshing to discuss something else than the-state-that-mustn't-be-renamed… — JFG talk 03:57, 26 October 2016 (UTC)
- It would look like this:
- OK, now we're getting somewhere! Who ever thought you and I could agree on something, JFG? :) I'm OK with your suggestion, provided we also eliminate the term "Non-Christian faiths" (which is totally unnecessary) and replace the term "Other Non-Christian faiths" with the term "Other faiths". Castncoot (talk) 03:35, 26 October 2016 (UTC)
- We've heard your point loud and clear, Castncoot; repetitive persistence is another of your prominent qualities… Now, this table is long enough. Rather than subdividing the Jewish denominations (for which we have no data), perhaps we should lump the lower-than-2% Christian subgroups together with "Other Christian" which would then reach 3%, and call it a day. — JFG talk 03:23, 26 October 2016 (UTC)
- Thank you for your humorous, good-faith description of me, JFG :). Again, to re-emphasize, I don't have any problem with Pew as a reliable source, and I don't have a problem with Pew's table as designed macroscopically for the U.S. as a whole, which was Pew's likely premise when choosing its categorization. The problem is that this particular table's applicability (as is) breaks down into WP:UNDUE territory for the purposes of inclusion in Wikipedia when it is applied toward certain subnational entities such as New York, which has very different demographics from the U.S. as a whole, just as Greater London (pardon me if that's not the best analogy) has very different demographics from the UK as a whole. Remember that Pew didn't design this table with Wikipedia in mind. So it's really not a "clear and representative summary of religious affiliations (or lack thereof) in the New York (state) population", because if it were, it would have at minimum included a subdivisional demographic breakdown for New York's prominent Jewish population into Orthodox, Conservative, and Reformed designations. Without even that, the table gives the unwitting reader an inaccurate view of religious affiliations in New York. If Christianity claimed 98% of adherents in a given state, as it would in a number of other states in the U.S., then I could go along with the logic of including the terms "Non-Christian faiths" and "Other Non-Christian faiths" on that state's Wikipedia page. But the case is nearly diametrically opposite for New York, the subject of this article. I would rather wait for a more accurate representation to materialize (or edit the table accordingly) than sacrifice representative accuracy for the sake of "more detail" – which is not necessarily "better", and can actually bring about just the opposite. Castncoot (talk) 02:12, 26 October 2016 (UTC)
Affiliation | % of New York population | |
---|---|---|
Christian | 60 | |
Catholic | 31 | |
Protestant | 26 | |
Evangelical Protestant | 10 | |
Mainline Protestant | 11 | |
Black church | 5 | |
Other Christian | 3 | |
Unaffiliated | 27 | |
Nothing in particular | 17 | |
Agnostic | 5 | |
Atheist | 5 | |
Jewish | 7 | |
Muslim | 2 | |
Buddhist | 1 | |
Hindu | 1 | |
Other faiths | 0.5 | |
Don't know/refused answer | 1 | |
Total | 100 |
References
- ^ Pew Research Center, "Religious Landscape Study: New York"
- Love your puns, JFG, and yes, I do remember the other occasion when we reached agreement – and yes, I will go ahead and insert the chart, once an admin lifts the block collectively on us non-admins. Castncoot (talk) 04:53, 26 October 2016 (UTC)
- @Castncoot: Looks like that block already expired. — JFG talk 04:58, 26 October 2016 (UTC)
- Yes, you're correct. I don't know why my page still has a yellow lock on it, but I am free to edit it, and will do so. Castncoot (talk) 05:02, 26 October 2016 (UTC)
- @Castncoot: Looks like that block already expired. — JFG talk 04:58, 26 October 2016 (UTC)
- Love your puns, JFG, and yes, I do remember the other occasion when we reached agreement – and yes, I will go ahead and insert the chart, once an admin lifts the block collectively on us non-admins. Castncoot (talk) 04:53, 26 October 2016 (UTC)
- Done Castncoot (talk) 05:17, 26 October 2016 (UTC)
Chart placement
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The religion graph, currently being discussed in talk, is misplaced in the language section. Please move the {{bar}} template (search for "bar box|title=Religion") down a few lines to below the "Religion" subheader. Certes (talk) 11:14, 24 October 2016 (UTC)
- Done — Martin (MSGJ · talk) 13:19, 24 October 2016 (UTC)
Requested move 19 July 2016
The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
- New York → ?
- New York (disambiguation) → ?
- New York City → ?
– See Talk:New York/July 2016 move request Andrewa (talk) 00:50, 19 July 2016 (UTC)
Note: The closure of this discussion will be conducted by a panel consisting of Future Perfect at Sunrise, Niceguyedc, and Newyorkbrad. Cheers! bd2412 T 11:28, 26 July 2016 (UTC)
This discussion was listed at Wikipedia:Move review on 29 October 2016. The result of the move review was "endorsement of the RM's outcome (whether it's a close or non-close).". |
Revived this section from the archives until the move review is concluded. Please do not restart a thread here at this time. Walls of bikeshedding passionate discussion can be read here, here and there to get entertained on rainy days. — JFG talk 14:22, 4 November 2016 (UTC)
- Depending on the exact result of the MR that may even be enforceable (perhaps not likely but possible). But it's good advice IMO, and in any case you're all welcome to express opinions, provide relevant links etc, even try to build consensus, both at User talk:Andrewa/New York post RM 2016 and User talk:Andrewa/New York New York New York New York. Please discuss before making any major changes to the related user pages, however. Andrewa (talk) 22:14, 5 November 2016 (UTC)
Move review has closed as endorsed, which means No consensus, so this section may be re-archived at any time. This is a good opportunity to thank all participants for a lively and stimulating discussion. Let's all return next year and continue to work toward a consensus! It's a pleasure discussing this subject with all of you! Paine u/c 16:16, 8 November 2016 (UTC)
WP:NOTGALLERY
Are we yet ready to clean up this File:Ridiculous.jpg ness? The move disputes are over for now, finally. ɱ (talk) · vbm · coi) 03:39, 20 November 2016 (UTC)
See also WP:IG and MOS:IMAGES. I should hope this could finally become a GA, but literally all of the above image's worth needs to be completely redone or removed, and that's just a start. ɱ (talk) · vbm · coi) 03:43, 20 November 2016 (UTC)
- Agree. There are just way too many images. I boldly removed one right now as it didn't fit in with the other panorama shots. Can we list a few images which are not needed? --Lemongirl942 (talk) 02:13, 24 November 2016 (UTC)
- I restored this longstanding image, which aptly represents the coastal beaches of Long Island, a region comprising 40% of the state's population, or nearly 8 million people. New York is renowned as a constellation of different regions. Before simply deleting a longstanding image like that, please find a suitable replacement first. Also, unfortunately, the move disputes are not done for now. Wishful thinking which I wish were true. Best, Castncoot (talk) 03:18, 24 November 2016 (UTC)
- Show me where the dispute is still ongoing? Also longstanding means nothing, because barely any images have been touched in this article, probably partially over page ownership concerns, which appear evident. I also frankly don't care that Long Island has a bunch of people; the gallery is ridiculously big, and just a bunch of beach and water says nothing, and shows nothing worthwhile. We've got to cut this stuff down. People can look at the Long Island article for LI photos; Albany, NY article for Albany photos; Niagara Falls article for Niagara photos. NY is so big we can't take photos of everything 'cool' and stick it here. Sub-articles exist for many very good reasons. Quit the ownership and let's start overhauling this page to make it GA- or FA-worthy. ɱ (talk) · vbm · coi) 03:34, 24 November 2016 (UTC)
- Oh goodness, if I had to find all of the different pages the movement lobbying for a move has been splattered onto, I'd be here forever. Another unfortunate attempt is closely around the corner, if you haven't seen. Ownership? Far from it. In any case, can you please show me how many other U.S. state articles have GA or FA status? Very few, at most. This already is a high quality article, and the images don't look anything inappropriate. Why have any photos, with your logic? You can't simply ignore a region with 8 million people and with hundreds of miles of oceanic coastline. A picture is appropriate when it tells the reader an accurate story. New York is an extremely diverse collage of mountains, ocean, lakes, rivers, and city, in a relatively compact area compared to some Western states, and this story needs to be told in unison. Otherwise, the tale is incomplete and remiss. Castncoot (talk) 04:10, 24 November 2016 (UTC)
- Show me where the dispute is still ongoing? Also longstanding means nothing, because barely any images have been touched in this article, probably partially over page ownership concerns, which appear evident. I also frankly don't care that Long Island has a bunch of people; the gallery is ridiculously big, and just a bunch of beach and water says nothing, and shows nothing worthwhile. We've got to cut this stuff down. People can look at the Long Island article for LI photos; Albany, NY article for Albany photos; Niagara Falls article for Niagara photos. NY is so big we can't take photos of everything 'cool' and stick it here. Sub-articles exist for many very good reasons. Quit the ownership and let's start overhauling this page to make it GA- or FA-worthy. ɱ (talk) · vbm · coi) 03:34, 24 November 2016 (UTC)
- I restored this longstanding image, which aptly represents the coastal beaches of Long Island, a region comprising 40% of the state's population, or nearly 8 million people. New York is renowned as a constellation of different regions. Before simply deleting a longstanding image like that, please find a suitable replacement first. Also, unfortunately, the move disputes are not done for now. Wishful thinking which I wish were true. Best, Castncoot (talk) 03:18, 24 November 2016 (UTC)
- I lived in California and New York each for many years, and even as the biggest "Western state" (if you're not counting Alaska), it's just as if not more geographically diverse. You haven't factually disproven my statement that the move discussions have subsided, nor do you provide a compelling argument against the three policies/guidelines I've linked that strongly discourage such a huge array of images like the article currently has. If there are few or no state GAs or FAs, all the more reason for us to create one, and I'm sure you'd be happy for New York to be first. ɱ (talk) · vbm · coi) 04:19, 24 November 2016 (UTC)
- On another note, it seems we'll never convince each other; I propose an RfC, or if you'd like something more informal we could invite others to participate here, perhaps even the local Wikimedia chapter? ɱ (talk) · vbm · coi) 04:21, 24 November 2016 (UTC)
- None of your links contradict anything in this article or anything I've said. I'll have to search for one particular comment by one editor who said (paraphrasing), "see you back here next year". Well, it's already late November. On the other hand, I'm not exactly sure where your dire sense of urgency stems. Feel free to invite whoever you want, Wikipedia should be freely open to everyone to comment, although topic experience is appreciated. In all honesty, I think the discussion already is open without any active intervention. WP:NOTBROKEN. Castncoot (talk) 04:31, 24 November 2016 (UTC)
- The reason I removed it was because the image didn't fit in among the other panorama images. And yes there are way too many images here. Heck, the page takes a lot of time to load. Castncoot, I would like to understand your argument. Are you saying that the number of images in the article is alright as of this version? That there are absolutely no problems with having these many images? And I don't understand what you are trying to imply when you say "
In any case, can you please show me how many other U.S. state articles have GA or FA status? Very few, at most. This already is a high quality article, and the images don't look anything inappropriate.
". I personally find the argument that just because other state articles are not an FA and GA, so this one shouldn't be either, a WP:SEWAGE analogy. I would be glad to hear your thoughts. --Lemongirl942 (talk) 05:24, 24 November 2016 (UTC)
- Yes, the move discussion is more on pause than finished - whichever way you cook it there was "no consensus", never a "consensus not to move", which means we can and will revisit the topic sooner or later. However, this discussion here is not affected by that. This article needs to be polished whether it's located at New York or New York (state), and I agree with User:Ɱ that the view depicted on the right is not encyclopedic. We are not here to provide a full beautiful gallery of everything in the state, there are other venues such as commons or Flickr for that. Encyclopedia articles should include a few images, one or two per section in thumb format to illustrate the section in question, but not be lined on both sides with thumbs and with six panoramas as well. Take a look at Rwanda... (an FA I had a hand in writing!)... of course there are numerous beautiful spots in Rwanda that could be shown in large images in the article, but that's not the correct thing to do. Thanks — Amakuru (talk) 09:28, 24 November 2016 (UTC)
- The unique problem that others are not accounting for here (or perhaps realizing) is that New York is uniquely diverse in a relatively small space as compared to other U.S. states. (By the way, Rwanda is not even located on an ocean, so the discussion goes nowhere with that topic.) So either include all or include none of the images. But by selecting certain images, there is a WP:UNDUE process at work here. Do other coastal U.S. state articles simply ignore their oceanic coastlines? Of course not. One thing is for sure - the reader of this article will have a more accurate (i.e., better) picture of what New York constitutes than perhaps of other states from their articles - and that, Lemongirl942, is what I meant by my statement. Let's never forget, more than anything else, that we are here to educate the reader, not to satisfy anyone's rote requirements. Castncoot (talk) 13:31, 24 November 2016 (UTC)
- Would a collapse of the panormas satisfy everyone? Alanscottwalker (talk) 14:07, 24 November 2016 (UTC)
- Yes. Alanscottwalker tends to come up with some brilliant ideas at the last minute. The intent and spirit of WP:NOTGALLERY is to discourage a mindless display of pictures. What we have here, on the other hand, is a thoughtful, intelligent caption characterizing pertinent features of each image. Castncoot (talk) 16:57, 24 November 2016 (UTC)
- Can you please implement this, Alanscottwalker? I'm sure nobody would object to this for now. I'm apparently not using the correct code to implement it. Castncoot (talk) 17:36, 24 November 2016 (UTC)
- I would be kind-of okay with a panorama collapse (it might not be an FA-worthy fix but we'll cross that bridge if we come to it), however the amount of images on the left and right need to be cut down, and I'm pretty sure the weather boxes can be combined to just be one box. There are large swaths of empty white space below this section that should be re-adjusted too, if possible. ɱ (talk) · vbm · coi) 19:16, 24 November 2016 (UTC)
- I played around with a few collapsing templates, but haven't had any luck; the wide images don't seem to work well in these collapse templates. Chief among my problems is that some of these templates don't even work on the mainspace because the MOS actually condemns auto-collapsing content on the mainspace, due to poor accessibility. It's another dilemma, though perhaps ignorable, if this content is seen as non-essential for readers and/or the MOS as a guideline we can overlook for the sake of compromise here? ɱ (talk) · vbm · coi) 19:58, 24 November 2016 (UTC)
- I guess I might be somewhat OK with combining the weather boxes into one. We could also keep the default to show rather than collapse, that would avoid any MOS conflict. Castncoot (talk) 20:06, 24 November 2016 (UTC)
- No way on earth are we having the default look like the screenshot on the right. Auto-collapsing or major cuts/reworking, it's the only way. I'll take a stab at the weather boxes soonish. ɱ (talk) · vbm · coi) 20:11, 24 November 2016 (UTC)
- No need to get testy, as I myself said shortly above, auto-collapsing is a brilliant idea. But as an alternative for whatever reason, I don't mind having an optional collapse with the default setting being to show. Castncoot (talk) 20:40, 24 November 2016 (UTC)
- Well done, Ɱ! I would probably stop there, however. Best, Castncoot (talk) 23:22, 25 November 2016 (UTC)
- Thanks, much appreciated. I think I'm done for a long while here, unless something else pops up. ɱ (talk) · vbm · coi) 23:34, 25 November 2016 (UTC)
- Just before posting the above I made a final two edits, to remove someone's pretty sunset pic that they randomly placed in the sports section; and to move the stadium photo in its place. Why'd you revert that? ɱ (talk) · vbm · coi) 00:14, 26 November 2016 (UTC)
- Because you inadvertently left a Downstate bias with your edits. Don't mistake me, I think you've done a fantastic job overall. Best, Castncoot (talk) 00:20, 26 November 2016 (UTC)
- Just before posting the above I made a final two edits, to remove someone's pretty sunset pic that they randomly placed in the sports section; and to move the stadium photo in its place. Why'd you revert that? ɱ (talk) · vbm · coi) 00:14, 26 November 2016 (UTC)
- Thanks, much appreciated. I think I'm done for a long while here, unless something else pops up. ɱ (talk) · vbm · coi) 23:34, 25 November 2016 (UTC)
- Well done, Ɱ! I would probably stop there, however. Best, Castncoot (talk) 23:22, 25 November 2016 (UTC)
- No need to get testy, as I myself said shortly above, auto-collapsing is a brilliant idea. But as an alternative for whatever reason, I don't mind having an optional collapse with the default setting being to show. Castncoot (talk) 20:40, 24 November 2016 (UTC)
- No way on earth are we having the default look like the screenshot on the right. Auto-collapsing or major cuts/reworking, it's the only way. I'll take a stab at the weather boxes soonish. ɱ (talk) · vbm · coi) 20:11, 24 November 2016 (UTC)
- I guess I might be somewhat OK with combining the weather boxes into one. We could also keep the default to show rather than collapse, that would avoid any MOS conflict. Castncoot (talk) 20:06, 24 November 2016 (UTC)
- Can you please implement this, Alanscottwalker? I'm sure nobody would object to this for now. I'm apparently not using the correct code to implement it. Castncoot (talk) 17:36, 24 November 2016 (UTC)
- Yes. Alanscottwalker tends to come up with some brilliant ideas at the last minute. The intent and spirit of WP:NOTGALLERY is to discourage a mindless display of pictures. What we have here, on the other hand, is a thoughtful, intelligent caption characterizing pertinent features of each image. Castncoot (talk) 16:57, 24 November 2016 (UTC)
(←) You should know I'm not trying to add bias, and I'm from a part of NY that's oft considered both upstate and downstate. I think you'll agree with me a sunset pic doesn't belong in the sports section. I disagree with your Brooklyn Bridge reversion as it's likely the most iconic bridge in the state, but I could replace it with the Mid-Hudson or Tappan Zee bridges, which receive much higher traffic volumes and are bigger and more iconic than the old photo; more representative of the significant transportation infrastructure of New York. ɱ (talk) · vbm · coi) 00:28, 26 November 2016 (UTC)
- ALSO, 5 of the 6 photos in the Religion section have been of NYC, for years. Looks like someone lazily copy-pasted it over from the NYC article. Care to remove/swap out these? ɱ (talk) · vbm · coi) 00:32, 26 November 2016 (UTC)
- Also the Brooklyn Bridge is barely represented on the NYC article. Its only photo is the tiny one in the corner of the infobox montage, and it doesn't even get a paragraph of information; like 2 short sentences. ɱ (talk) · vbm · coi) 00:35, 26 November 2016 (UTC)
- Look, I already said you've done a great job. How many times do you need me to repeat that? Nobody's perfect though, including me of course. You've said you're from Westchester, which is technically Downstate; but if you read carefully, I said that your edits left an inadevertent Downstate bias. Downstate has two-thirds of the population and at least two-thirds (and perhaps five-sixths) of the notability of the State's human dimension, that is correct, and the distribution of human-influenced pics should reflect this – but less so with geographically-oriented images, including physical features and perhaps roads. As far as the Brooklyn Bridge is concerned, should the State article mention it any more prominently than the City article? I think not. Best, Castncoot (talk) 01:06, 26 November 2016 (UTC)
- Also, canoeing is just as legitimate a sport as the more televised sports, such as football, baseball, or tennis, which lend a more decidedly Downstate bias. Good to display at least one image of such an outdoor recreational sport, especially from Upstate. And if there happens to be a sunset accompanying it, nothing wrong with that. Castncoot (talk) 01:10, 26 November 2016 (UTC)
- Look, I already said you've done a great job. How many times do you need me to repeat that? Nobody's perfect though, including me of course. You've said you're from Westchester, which is technically Downstate; but if you read carefully, I said that your edits left an inadevertent Downstate bias. Downstate has two-thirds of the population and at least two-thirds (and perhaps five-sixths) of the notability of the State's human dimension, that is correct, and the distribution of human-influenced pics should reflect this – but less so with geographically-oriented images, including physical features and perhaps roads. As far as the Brooklyn Bridge is concerned, should the State article mention it any more prominently than the City article? I think not. Best, Castncoot (talk) 01:06, 26 November 2016 (UTC)
- Complements are nice and I'm appreciative; I just didn't understand your reasoning. What do you think of my other two bridge suggestions? I should note almost everyone in NYC considers Westchester upstate, but there's no clear definition really. I'm confused how you can argue the Brooklyn Bridge can't have some coverage here but less than in the NYC article, but also it can't have more coverage than in the NYC article. Can we use one of the other, bigger, more significant bridges? It seems odd to say that the big powerful state of NY's most representative bridge is a tiny one upstate so short I can't even find how long it is... (looks like 200ft on Google Maps, compare to the Verrazano at a whopping 13,700 feet or TZB at 16,013). As for the 'sunset in the sports section', though I like canoeing it's not a great photo for it nor a big sport in New York, even upstate. And baseball is big in much of New York, you know the hall of fame is in Cooperstown. I bet rock/mountain climbing are among the most popular in the Catskills and Adirondacks. Anyway, I'd like to make this article as nice as we can, sorry if it's dragging on. ɱ (talk) · vbm · coi) 01:24, 26 November 2016 (UTC)
- I think there's plenty of baseball already mentioned in the article, but other sports more identified with in the far reaches of Upstate should also be demonstrated. I doubt that someone in Plattsburgh is going to identify with the Yankees or with Cooperstown, but they may indeed identify significantly with canoeing. I don't mind a compromise at this point - I'd like to keep the canoeing picture, but I don't mind switching the Thaddeus Kosciusko Bridge to say, the Tappan Zee Bridge (and then its replacement, once completed)? Castncoot (talk) 01:55, 26 November 2016 (UTC)
- Well at least you didn't say somewhere in Hamilton County. I'm good with the above. ɱ (talk) · vbm · coi) 02:15, 26 November 2016 (UTC)
- Ha! Your changes look good, let's give it a rest now. Best, Castncoot (talk) 05:22, 26 November 2016 (UTC)
- Thank you everyone! I like this version. Speaking as someone who doesn't know a lot about New York, the older version was distracting to read (particularly with the "statescape" section). The current version loads faster and is easier to read. Btw, is there a way to re-position the images near the economy section? For example, the images about the gay pride parade are on the right of the economy section. I tried to fix, but I wasn't able to. --Lemongirl942 (talk) 06:09, 26 November 2016 (UTC)
- Everything got pushed down there because of that huge religion table. I didn't really want that there without more text too; the religion section barely has a paragraph, and is loaded with images and that table. Ideally we'd add more text, otherwise the only option I see is to cut down the images and shrink the table a bit, or do nothing. It's the only encroaching section left now, far better than what we had before. ɱ (talk) · vbm · coi) 06:27, 26 November 2016 (UTC)
- Fixed. Castncoot (talk) 17:53, 26 November 2016 (UTC)
- Everything got pushed down there because of that huge religion table. I didn't really want that there without more text too; the religion section barely has a paragraph, and is loaded with images and that table. Ideally we'd add more text, otherwise the only option I see is to cut down the images and shrink the table a bit, or do nothing. It's the only encroaching section left now, far better than what we had before. ɱ (talk) · vbm · coi) 06:27, 26 November 2016 (UTC)
- Thank you everyone! I like this version. Speaking as someone who doesn't know a lot about New York, the older version was distracting to read (particularly with the "statescape" section). The current version loads faster and is easier to read. Btw, is there a way to re-position the images near the economy section? For example, the images about the gay pride parade are on the right of the economy section. I tried to fix, but I wasn't able to. --Lemongirl942 (talk) 06:09, 26 November 2016 (UTC)
- Ha! Your changes look good, let's give it a rest now. Best, Castncoot (talk) 05:22, 26 November 2016 (UTC)
- Well at least you didn't say somewhere in Hamilton County. I'm good with the above. ɱ (talk) · vbm · coi) 02:15, 26 November 2016 (UTC)
- I think there's plenty of baseball already mentioned in the article, but other sports more identified with in the far reaches of Upstate should also be demonstrated. I doubt that someone in Plattsburgh is going to identify with the Yankees or with Cooperstown, but they may indeed identify significantly with canoeing. I don't mind a compromise at this point - I'd like to keep the canoeing picture, but I don't mind switching the Thaddeus Kosciusko Bridge to say, the Tappan Zee Bridge (and then its replacement, once completed)? Castncoot (talk) 01:55, 26 November 2016 (UTC)
- Complements are nice and I'm appreciative; I just didn't understand your reasoning. What do you think of my other two bridge suggestions? I should note almost everyone in NYC considers Westchester upstate, but there's no clear definition really. I'm confused how you can argue the Brooklyn Bridge can't have some coverage here but less than in the NYC article, but also it can't have more coverage than in the NYC article. Can we use one of the other, bigger, more significant bridges? It seems odd to say that the big powerful state of NY's most representative bridge is a tiny one upstate so short I can't even find how long it is... (looks like 200ft on Google Maps, compare to the Verrazano at a whopping 13,700 feet or TZB at 16,013). As for the 'sunset in the sports section', though I like canoeing it's not a great photo for it nor a big sport in New York, even upstate. And baseball is big in much of New York, you know the hall of fame is in Cooperstown. I bet rock/mountain climbing are among the most popular in the Catskills and Adirondacks. Anyway, I'd like to make this article as nice as we can, sorry if it's dragging on. ɱ (talk) · vbm · coi) 01:24, 26 November 2016 (UTC)
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BD4212 New York is a state. New York is redirected from New York. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 2a02:c7d:14ec:9300:7546:28a8:d598:1ad9 (talk • contribs)
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I am new to Wikipedia and do not know how to edit pages. Although the New York page is great, I found a little mistake in the Spoken Languages section where the language spoken by Indians is mentioned as Indian and not Hindi. Hindi is the Indian contemporary version of Sanskrit, a language that was spoken in some parts of South East Asia as well.
Since there is no such language as Indian, I would be delighted to correct it.— Preceding unsigned comment added by LassiKaur (talk • contribs) 5 June 2017 (UTC)
- Hello, and welcome to Wikipedia. I took a look at the source from the United States Census and it turns out that the 1.9% number is not applicable to Hindi, but to all Indian languages: Gujarati, Hindi, Urdu, and "other Indic languages". I have instead revised the infobox to say "Indian languages". Thanks for helping to improve this article. —KuyaBriBriTalk 15:01, 5 June 2017 (UTC)
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- Note: unlike the false alarm in the section above, this is a real move request. I encourage everyone involved with this page to go over to Talk:New York (disambiguation), read the request, and give their opinions. Thanks — Amakuru (talk) 11:49, 7 July 2017 (UTC)
Proposed action to resolve incorrect incoming links
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- Consensus to proceed with steps 2 and 3 of the proposal, including replacing (correct) links to New York with piped links to New York (state). This is a reasonable and limited exception to WP:NOTBROKEN given the frequency of incorrect links and the difficulty of identifying them without this approach. The benefit to the encyclopedia and its readers of correcting erroneous links clearly outweighs any minor detriments of inserting the redirect. Note that this consensus does not alter the obligations of editors, including bot operators, to verify that the article about the State is indeed the intended target of the link before editing. --R'n'B (call me Russ) 01:38, 13 October 2016 (UTC)
There are some pages that will always present problems of this nature. For example, Supreme court, Mouse, and Apple are all the correct primary topics for those terms, but frequently draw errant links intending other popular topics. For an article with 75,000 incoming links, it is a major operation to find the clearly wrong ones, and several editors might end up retreading the same ground in the course of doing this. I therefore propose the following rather radical solution:
- Keep the page name as is for now (until there is a clear consensus to move it); but:
- Change all existing links from other articles intended to point to the page so that they pipe through New York (state) (e.g. "Chuck Schumer is a Senator from [[New York (state)|New York]]"); most of these can be done by a bot.
- Once the clearly intentional links have been sorted out that way, fix all the remaining links that intend New York City (or any other meaning).
Once all the links intending another target have been fixed, restore all the intentional links to point directly to New York.After this operation is complete, set up a weekly bot report of all new links created pointing to New York; a bot can fix obvious cases ("New York City"), and an editor can go over the rest. Remember, it took us 15 years to accumulate the existing 75,000 links, which comes to only about 100 links per week. A bot report can provide a line or two of context before and after the link itself so that the editor need not look at the actual article to determine which ones intend the city.
Before anyone gets up in arms over the amount of work involved in the above proposal, I volunteer to do it all myself, and to get it done by the end of September. I need a clear consensus to go forward with a project like this so that I don't get a lot of WP:NOTBROKEN complaints while initially piping the links. bd2412 T 18:11, 30 August 2016 (UTC)
- I second the cleanup operation, although I don't understand the purpose of piping links through (state) and recovering the original direct link afterwards. Is it to keep track of which links have been processed? If so, I would remove step 4 in the process - just leave the links through the redirect forever. WP:NOTBROKEN actually supports having a redirect and not making it direct, and links like [[New York (state)|New York]] will always remain unambiguous to readers who hover to read the target URL and/or read the navigation popup; in fact this kind of piping through the parenthetical disambiguation is commonly done in disambiguation discussions when a topic is placed as a primary topic. Diego (talk) 18:52, 30 August 2016 (UTC)
- I agree with Diego just change the existing links to [[New York (state)]] or [[New York (state)|New York]] for the time being. Also the examples you've given could use these ideas too, but lets see how this goes first. Emir of Wikipedia (talk) 18:58, 30 August 2016 (UTC)
- I've actually done this a bit with Supreme court - people often link to the redirect Supreme Court when they mean a specific court (usually the U.S. Supreme Court); when they mean the generic sense, I pipe it through the lowercase direct link to make it clear that the link has been checked. I have no objection to leaving the link piped, though I worry that editors will tend to try to "fix" it. bd2412 T 19:13, 30 August 2016 (UTC)
- I agree with Diego just change the existing links to [[New York (state)]] or [[New York (state)|New York]] for the time being. Also the examples you've given could use these ideas too, but lets see how this goes first. Emir of Wikipedia (talk) 18:58, 30 August 2016 (UTC)
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- I'm always in favour of cleaning up, especially when someone volunteers! We might want to think about what to do with content like
The Bronx is in [[New York]]
where either the city or state meaning is valid. I'd go for the more specificThe Bronx is in [[New York City]]
, with the word City displayed to make it obvious where the link goes, but I can see reasons for treating the text in other ways. Of course, any decision would be a guideline to be varied when appropriate rather than a mandatory rule. Certes (talk) 19:37, 30 August 2016 (UTC)- @Certes: I agree with you that being specific and stating the city would be best. Emir of Wikipedia (talk) 19:57, 30 August 2016 (UTC)
- If there is no objection, then, I'll get to work on this in the next few days. bd2412 T 02:36, 31 August 2016 (UTC)
- Could you just do steps 1-3 for the time being? The broad concept article/set index may be used for the page New York Emir of Wikipedia (talk) 11:02, 31 August 2016 (UTC)
- Yes, I agree with that. If we just change the links to pipe through, and leave them that way for the time being, then there will be no need for a report at all, because we will clearly see new links being made to the base page name. bd2412 T 12:20, 31 August 2016 (UTC)
- I don't have an objection to BD2412's proposed action and applaud this valiant effort in this regard. Castncoot (talk) 20:06, 31 August 2016 (UTC)
- @Castncoot: I am positively delighted that we find ourselves in agreement on something. I never thought this day would come! — JFG talk 10:48, 1 September 2016 (UTC)
- Glad to hear, JFG. You knew this day had to arrive! Best, Castncoot (talk) 12:58, 1 September 2016 (UTC)
- @Castncoot: I am positively delighted that we find ourselves in agreement on something. I never thought this day would come! — JFG talk 10:48, 1 September 2016 (UTC)
- I object. It's needlessly trivial and counterproductive to pipe a redirect to display as it's target. Pppery (talk) 23:30, 31 August 2016 (UTC)
- Normally that is the case, but normally an article will not have several thousand incorrectly targeted links mixed in with tens of thousands of correctly targeted links. If you can provide a better way to find and fix the incorrect links, you are more than welcome to do it. bd2412 T 03:33, 1 September 2016 (UTC)
- I don't have an objection to BD2412's proposed action and applaud this valiant effort in this regard. Castncoot (talk) 20:06, 31 August 2016 (UTC)
- Yes, I agree with that. If we just change the links to pipe through, and leave them that way for the time being, then there will be no need for a report at all, because we will clearly see new links being made to the base page name. bd2412 T 12:20, 31 August 2016 (UTC)
- Could you just do steps 1-3 for the time being? The broad concept article/set index may be used for the page New York Emir of Wikipedia (talk) 11:02, 31 August 2016 (UTC)
- If there is no objection, then, I'll get to work on this in the next few days. bd2412 T 02:36, 31 August 2016 (UTC)
- @Certes: I agree with you that being specific and stating the city would be best. Emir of Wikipedia (talk) 19:57, 30 August 2016 (UTC)
- Agree otherwise we will have to go through all 10,000 links every once in awhile to see if they are properly disambiguated between "New York State" and "New York City". Clever idea. We might even leave a message there. [[New York State|New York]]<!--Please leave the link as is to insure it remains properly disambiguated-->. We should always use "New York City" for the city. I find about 1 in 10 new links improperly disambiguated in biographies, sometimes it takes a little research to find out which is correct by looking at primary sources like the draft registration or the death index. We should also make an effort at "New York City" to change it to "Manhattan, New York City" you do not want to leave doubt that someone was born on the "Bronx, New York City" --Richard Arthur Norton (1958- ) (talk) 00:10, 1 September 2016 (UTC)
- Strong support – @BD2412: As we noted in the original discussion, incoming links must be fixed irrespective of the page title. Your suggestion, if limited to steps 1–3, in effect brings us the possibility to detect ambiguous links to New York automatically. It won't bring the ambiguity to editors' attention as they save their work (only making "New York" a dab page would achieve this) but newly-created links can be patrolled and managed with minimal effort. After the initial robot pass, we shall need a rather large but one-shot manual effort to assess ambiguities. Further patterns may emerge during that work and be added to bot-detected issues. May I suggest that we move the practical discussion on implementation progress to the page I had planned for this purpose? An extra benefit of this work is that we will have even clearer usage statistics for both meanings of "New York" within the Wikipedia corpus. — JFG talk 10:44, 1 September 2016 (UTC)
I've run across your bot a couple of times now, and while what it is doing is clearly an improvement, the result is still not what I'd call satisfactory. The problem is when someone has written for example "Rochester, New York" and you corrected it to "Rochester, New York." The correct fix per WP:SEAOFBLUE is "Rochester, New York." I realize it's not your job or within the scope of this project to fix these. Kendall-K1 (talk) 02:53, 1 September 2016 (UTC)
- That is an issue for another day - although it is one that a bot could handle fairly easily. bd2412 T 03:14, 1 September 2016 (UTC)
I am also unclear if you are going to go back next and cleanup your cleanup. You are leaving as of now links to a redirect in articles ?? If I click on New York at Arthur K. Shapiro, it is a redirect. That is not a good thing. Shall I revert, or are you going to fix that once you finish your first run through? Thanks for the work, SandyGeorgia (Talk) 13:45, 1 September 2016 (UTC)
- My plan for the moment is to do the initial cleanup and then see whether the rate of accumulation of new incorrect links is too high to conveniently address even after the links are restored to the base page name. At that point, I will offer my opinion, and it will be up to the consensus of the community as to how to proceed. bd2412 T 14:59, 1 September 2016 (UTC)
- I'm still not clear :) Will the current article New York be changed to New York (state) eventually? If not, the old link at Arthur K. Shapiro was correct. If yes, I am assuming the now-incorrect redirect will go away once you finish ? To avoid having others show up here with the same confusion/question, you might want to add something to your edit summary indicating this is a first pass, the rest will be completed ? Others seeing an incorrect change to an article may just revert ... SandyGeorgia (Talk) 15:38, 1 September 2016 (UTC)
- No, the intention of this maneuver is to specifically target incorrect links and has no bearing whatsoever on the name of the article. If I'm misinterpreting that point, then I would oppose this maneuver. Castncoot (talk) 15:51, 1 September 2016 (UTC)
- (edit conflict) There is no plan to move the article to New York (state) at present as far as I know, although we will probably revisit this in a year or two, and at that point common sense might prevail and it could be moved. In the meantime the links could be reverted, but I woudln't have thought it is essential or pressing. Links to redirects are not forbidden or discouraged as far as I'm aware, and don't do any real harm for readers. — Amakuru (talk) 15:56, 1 September 2016 (UTC)
- The piped link through a redirect is not incorrect, per WP:NOTBROKEN. And as I mentioned somewhere above, direct links to a primary topic are commonly changed so that they go through the redirect, to protect them from future title changes and/or to improve finding the primary topic through search. So, the old link was correct, but the new one is better :-) Diego (talk) 16:26, 1 September 2016 (UTC)
- This is a process, not a result. We don't know the result until the process has run. bd2412 T 16:36, 1 September 2016 (UTC)
- Absolutely ridiculous! There is no sane reason to make a wholesale change of wikilinks so that they end up as redirects. I despise redirects. Despite whoever wrote WP:NOTBROKEN, redirects are sloppy and ugly. NOTBROKEN should also mention that if a non-redirect is working, it shouldn't be messed with. Don't break something to fix something else. —Nelson Ricardo (talk) 03:13, 3 September 2016 (UTC)
- @Nricardo: Are you volunteering to fix the thousands of link intended for New York City but currently pointed to New York? We'd be glad to have the help. Cheers! bd2412 T 03:06, 4 September 2016 (UTC)
- There can be and are many legitimate contexts where linking through a redirect is desirable and positive — for one example of many, there are occasionally contexts where a disambiguation page is actually the desired link topic (my canonical go-to example, is Sault Ste. Marie, since there are some occasions when a distinction between the one in Ontario vs. the one in Michigan is either unclear or entirely irrelevant to the context of the link) — but since bots will flag direct links to dab pages as things that need to be fixed, linking to it through a redirect has the benefit of preventing that particular link from showing up on the cleanup list. A needed cleanup project like this, where we need to make an effort to sort out links that are going to the intended topic from links which need to be repaired, is another example of where it's useful — this project will have the benefit of vastly reducing the number of links that actually have to be manually inspected, as well as marking the ones that have been inspected so that the next person who comes along wanting to help out doesn't keep tilling the same ground that's already been tilled. You don't have to like redirects, but WP:NOTBROKEN is correct: linking through a redirect still gets you to the right place, if done correctly (i.e. piped rather than leaving the disambiguator visible in the body text) it's invisible to the end reader, there can be and are reasons why it's useful, and there's little to no technical or user benefit in going out of your way to convert a link-through-redirect into a link-through-direct-title just because of some imaginary "avoid redirects" rule. You're free to have your own opinions, sure, but they don't trump Wikipedia policy which says that linking through a redirect is not a problem. Bearcat (talk) 15:54, 8 September 2016 (UTC)
- Came across this bizarre effort at Henry DeWolf Smyth and wanted to add my voice to those contesting it. Piping a link to a redirect to that same link is of course ridiculous, as the original link was WP:NOTBROKEN. I would, of course, support an effort to identify and fix New Yorks that ought to be New York Citys. Getting there from the present effort would require only—gasp—reading the surrounding context before tinkering with something. I can't believe that the requisite modicum of literacy is too great an ask. I must also dispute the (mis)conception of consensus advanced here and elsewhere by leader of this effort. Consensus measured by a handful of editors' opinions here does not suffice to counter "a lot of WP:NOTBROKEN complaints" dispersed throughout the encyclopedia. And indeed, editors keep showing up here to lodge their disagreement, and when that happens you no longer have even the meager, insufficient consensus you keep citing (circularly) as the reason this is a good idea. Lagrange613 01:06, 21 September 2016 (UTC)
- @Lagrange613:
TenEleven editors in this discussion have expressed support this effort: myself (User:BD2412), User:Richard Arthur Norton (1958- ), User:Diego Moya, User:Emir of Wikipedia, User:Andrewa, User:Certes, User:Castncoot, User:JFG, User:Kendall-K1, User:Bearcat, and User:Andrew Gray. Prior to your comment, there has been precisely one objection to the links, by User:Nricardo. It is therefore grammatically incorrect for you to say that you want to add your voice to "those" contesting it, because a single objector does not constitute a "those". A consensus of ten to two is conclusive. This would be so even if it were a substantive editing dispute; in this case, for a maintenance task that the reader does not even see, it is overwhelming. For the record, by the way, there have been virtually no WP:NOTBROKEN complaints, because editors generally understand the importance of carrying out this project. The reason that it is necessary to fix all the links is so that each editor working on this project does not waste time revisiting the same false positives. No amount of literacy will prevent an editor from visiting a previously unaddressed page to assess whether it needs fixing. bd2412 T 01:28, 21 September 2016 (UTC)
- @Lagrange613:
- Nope, Pppery and Pierre cb object, and SandyGeorgia is far from supportive. I get that you're not interested in the perspective of people who disagree with you, but at least acknowledge their existence. Even were it 10–2 instead of 10–4 or 10–5, again, that wouldn't give you some sort of portable consensus that would allow you to overrule WP:BRD when encountering others who don't want this foolishness elsewhere in the encyclopedia. As to process, it would easy enough to set up a subpage to track how far you've gone through the existing correct New Yorks and then a bot to track the new links. That way you'd be sure of complete coverage. But that would require more care and thought than you seem interested in devoting to this little program and would cut against your apparent goal of maximizing your footprint within the encyclopedia, however clumsily. Lagrange613 04:04, 21 September 2016 (UTC)
- @Lagrange613:
your apparent goal of maximizing your footprint within the encyclopedia, however clumsily
– AGF much? BD2412 and others are conducting a much-needed effort to fix tens of thousands of ambiguous links to the term "New York", a strong proportion of which are meant for New York City instead of New York State. We came to this admittedly unusual solution after the community failed to reach consensus on making New York a disambiguation page. So we must disambiguate by piping. This is no personal crusade at all. As long as New York remains entrenched as the state article, the ambiguous links will persist and need constant monitoring for consistency. Piping them may not be elegant but it's effective and harmless. — JFG talk 10:59, 21 September 2016 (UTC)- Given Lagrange613's quick devolution into personal attacks, I will disengage from further discussing this matter with him except to point out that we have fixed over ten thousand incorrect links (those that were pointing to New York when they clearly intended to point to New York City, New York (magazine), Province of New York, and a handful of other targets). I will not apologize for employing the methodology that was necessary to find and fix over ten thousand errors. bd2412 T 12:30, 21 September 2016 (UTC)
- Well said. And thanks to you and the team for carrying out this useful work. — Amakuru (talk) 12:50, 21 September 2016 (UTC)
- You're not the first to round a comment up to a personal attack and use that as a pretext to refuse to engage in an argument you'd lose on the merits. For what it's worth, I think this effort is probably a net improvement to the encyclopedia, but it could have been even better had you not adopted this tactic, which is hardly "necessary" as others and I have explained to you. Your recent descent into edit warring unfortunately validates my conclusion that you're not coming at this in good faith. Kindly self-revert and stop edit warring. Lagrange613 01:09, 22 September 2016 (UTC)
- As I have previously stated, there is a clear consensus for this task. Consensus does not mean unanimity, it means that those who understand the goals and policies at issue have expressed support for the proposed change. I will continue to act in accordance with the established consensus. I gather that you do not understand why it is necessary to do this to insure that all incorrect links are fixed properly, so I would suggest you try doing it your way and you will learn for yourself. Bear in mind, of course, that when we started this task, there were over 75,000 links to fix. bd2412 T 01:22, 22 September 2016 (UTC)
- And a difficult task at that. Definitely a highly significant improvement overall, and selectively targeted to address a very specific issue. Well done! Castncoot (talk) 01:32, 22 September 2016 (UTC)
- This was also your reply to Pierre cb, that the only possible reason we could disagree with you is that we don't understand why you're doing it. In my experience, such accusations of denseness are often projections. Anyway, whatever you believe the consensus here to be, the consensus at Wikipedia is that edit warring is wrong. Believing that you have consensus on your side is not an excuse for edit warring, even when you are correct (which you are not). Lagrange613 01:40, 22 September 2016 (UTC)
- No edit warring is going on here. I made an edit pursuant to, and with reference to, the consensus here. You reverted that edit without understanding. I properly reinstated the consensus-based edit with an explanation of the consensus. Apparently, at some point, you reverted this again, and the article got caught by a semi-automated bot process designed to fix hundreds of links like this without regard to the article they occur in. Reading anything more than that into this is incorrect. bd2412 T 02:33, 22 September 2016 (UTC)
- As I have previously stated, there is a clear consensus for this task. Consensus does not mean unanimity, it means that those who understand the goals and policies at issue have expressed support for the proposed change. I will continue to act in accordance with the established consensus. I gather that you do not understand why it is necessary to do this to insure that all incorrect links are fixed properly, so I would suggest you try doing it your way and you will learn for yourself. Bear in mind, of course, that when we started this task, there were over 75,000 links to fix. bd2412 T 01:22, 22 September 2016 (UTC)
- Given Lagrange613's quick devolution into personal attacks, I will disengage from further discussing this matter with him except to point out that we have fixed over ten thousand incorrect links (those that were pointing to New York when they clearly intended to point to New York City, New York (magazine), Province of New York, and a handful of other targets). I will not apologize for employing the methodology that was necessary to find and fix over ten thousand errors. bd2412 T 12:30, 21 September 2016 (UTC)
- @Lagrange613:
- Nope, Pppery and Pierre cb object, and SandyGeorgia is far from supportive. I get that you're not interested in the perspective of people who disagree with you, but at least acknowledge their existence. Even were it 10–2 instead of 10–4 or 10–5, again, that wouldn't give you some sort of portable consensus that would allow you to overrule WP:BRD when encountering others who don't want this foolishness elsewhere in the encyclopedia. As to process, it would easy enough to set up a subpage to track how far you've gone through the existing correct New Yorks and then a bot to track the new links. That way you'd be sure of complete coverage. But that would require more care and thought than you seem interested in devoting to this little program and would cut against your apparent goal of maximizing your footprint within the encyclopedia, however clumsily. Lagrange613 04:04, 21 September 2016 (UTC)
Initial results
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At this point I have fixed about 20,000 links. The vast majority of these have been carried out by a bot. Basically, my process is to make a few hundred fixes manually, each time recording the pattern of text that dictate to fix it needed to be made. Once I find a large number of repeating patterns I plug those into the bot and let it automatically replicate those fixes across the 25,000 pages it can grab at a time. Of course the most common patterns are "city name, state name"; tables that have a "state" parameter; and groupings of states or cities together which reveal from the context whether "New York" is being referred to as a state or a city. My focus has been on fixing the state links, and most of the links that I have found and addressed thus far are intended to point to the state. I would say that about one link in eight is intended for the city of New York. Of those about a third occur in citations which include the city of publication in identifying a book. This may be an example of the tremendous amount of overlinking going on. On a related note, this short article links to "New York" three times in a single paragraph. Out of these thousands of links. There were also a smattering-perhaps four or five-instances of links intended to go to "New York magazine". I have found some other useful patterns. For example when locations of offices of a firm are referenced they are usually in the context of a group of cities, whereas incorporation is references in the context of the state. Virtually all references and articles about roads and highways are to the state, as are references in articles about weather phenomenon, distribution of wild animals and plants, and geological phenomenon. Also, political references such as identification of national political candidates or of politicians involved in the drafting of key legislation are, obviously, intended for the state. References to the city are most often found in things like airline destinations, places to which actors, musicians, and playwrights moved to develop their career, references in connection with specific institutions such as the Museum of Modern Art or Columbia University. I have seen a surprising number of instances of people piping [[New York]], [[New York]], linking the term in both cases as if they expect the city and state to be the same article. There are even instances of pipe links where the pipe points to "New York" while the visible text reads "New York City". I will have more to report as this project progresses. bd2412 T 04:25, 3 September 2016 (UTC)
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Links here
Now nearly all links directly to this article are in the talk namespace and nearly all links from the article namespace are from a re-direct. Will this page be moved soon?? Georgia guy (talk) 18:01, 14 September 2016 (UTC)
- Please see the (volumous) above discussion. There doesn't appear to be any move likely soon, but the link changes are being done as part of an effort to make sure the links are pointing at the right article (i.e. making sure that links to the city are pointing at the city, not the state). In the long run I'm not personally sure that lining to a redirect while piping to the actual article title is a good idea, but it is helping to ensure that links are pointing to the intended target. oknazevad (talk) 18:09, 14 September 2016 (UTC)
- I think it was just meant to be a short term solution. In the long term it is envisioned that the draft at Draft:New York will be moved here. Emir of Wikipedia (talk) 19:30, 14 September 2016 (UTC)
- There is no consensus for such a move. oknazevad (talk) 19:39, 14 September 2016 (UTC)
- @Oknazevad: Consensus is being built, and to be honest it looks like to me it will be the only option to end this argument forever. Emir of Wikipedia (talk) 17:25, 15 September 2016 (UTC)
- Two people doesn't equal consensus. oknazevad (talk) 17:27, 15 September 2016 (UTC)
- What do you propose then? Emir of Wikipedia (talk) 17:43, 15 September 2016 (UTC)
- The same thing I've said repeatedly. See my other comments on the talk page. oknazevad (talk) 18:16, 15 September 2016 (UTC)
- *sarcastic* Oh. Thanks. That's so useful on this tiny and easy to read page. Emir of Wikipedia (talk) 21:57, 15 September 2016 (UTC)
- The same thing I've said repeatedly. See my other comments on the talk page. oknazevad (talk) 18:16, 15 September 2016 (UTC)
- What do you propose then? Emir of Wikipedia (talk) 17:43, 15 September 2016 (UTC)
- Two people doesn't equal consensus. oknazevad (talk) 17:27, 15 September 2016 (UTC)
- @Oknazevad: Consensus is being built, and to be honest it looks like to me it will be the only option to end this argument forever. Emir of Wikipedia (talk) 17:25, 15 September 2016 (UTC)
- It's an exercise in swamp-draining. Once the swamp is drained (i.e., incorrect links are fixed), then we'll decide what to do. There is no great rush (and, I think, some reason to pause for at least a number of months, or longer, after the last process). bd2412 T 19:47, 14 September 2016 (UTC)
- Agree 100%, but I'm wondering whether we should try to get a formal close of the latest RM before that. Not quite sure how. Andrewa (talk) 22:52, 14 September 2016 (UTC)
- What difference does it make? If we change all the links and the page is not moved, then we will have fixed the incorrect links and will clearly be able to see new additions. If the page is eventually moved, then the links will already be pointing to the likely move target. bd2412 T 17:51, 15 September 2016 (UTC)
- In my view there is no chance of building a better consensus at this time. As you know, I already assess a strong consensus once irrelevant arguments and !votes are discarded, but I am an involved party so that counts as nothing other than to explain my motives. This will come up again, but please only after a reasonable moratorium on RMs. So the sooner this RM is closed and the moratorium begun, the sooner I can get back to other things, and the sooner we can eventually resolve the matter. No consensus is not a good outcome, but if it must must be accepted at this point, then the sooner the better. Andrewa (talk) 07:09, 19 September 2016 (UTC)
- What difference does it make? If we change all the links and the page is not moved, then we will have fixed the incorrect links and will clearly be able to see new additions. If the page is eventually moved, then the links will already be pointing to the likely move target. bd2412 T 17:51, 15 September 2016 (UTC)
- Agree 100%, but I'm wondering whether we should try to get a formal close of the latest RM before that. Not quite sure how. Andrewa (talk) 22:52, 14 September 2016 (UTC)
- There is no consensus for such a move. oknazevad (talk) 19:39, 14 September 2016 (UTC)
- I think it was just meant to be a short term solution. In the long term it is envisioned that the draft at Draft:New York will be moved here. Emir of Wikipedia (talk) 19:30, 14 September 2016 (UTC)
What a herculean effort. I see that we're down to about 15 thousand pages left. FWIW, here's the pageview analysis. It shows that the city has at least three times the views as the state. But we already knew that PT wasn't decided by the page views criteria. wbm1058 (talk) 21:29, 26 September 2016 (UTC)
- A more significant barometer, I think, is that the number of backlinks to "New York" is now down to about 107,800 (though this number will change each time the link is accessed), from the initial 119,000+ at the beginning of this project - meaning that more than 12,000 links have been corrected from "New York" to "New York City" (or, on a handful of occasions, "New York (magazine)", "New York University", "New York Harbor", "Province of New York", "New York metropolitan area", or various specified New York sports teams). bd2412 T 22:13, 26 September 2016 (UTC)
- I would like to add, by the way, that the process of fixing these links has uncovered a large number of ambiguous links where it is not at all clear whether the reference is to the city or the state. These links also tend to lack sourcing from which this determination can be made, which is another problem to be tagged. bd2412 T 03:28, 29 September 2016 (UTC)
- I had a similar experience on a smaller scale. I looked at many articles but ended up improving very few of them, because most of the links were unclear. I eventually realised that I was probably looking at pages other editors had also tried and failed to fix, as we don't have a way of marking them as already reviewed. Certes (talk) 16:38, 29 September 2016 (UTC)
Cleanup project progress
I am not sure if there is a way to determine the number of links pointing directly to New York, and not through any redirects. At the moment, This link shows 116629 backlinks to New York (about 4,000 fewer than when this project started), and This link shows 43289 backlinks to New York (state), which is about 21,000 more than when this project started. I believe the 4,000 reduction in links to New York reflects the number of links changed to point to New York City (or, on a few occasions, removed from the article altogether as overlinking). bd2412 T 00:52, 6 September 2016 (UTC)
- We can count them by tweaking the "What links here" search and scrolling by batches of 5,000 articles until we reach the last page of results, then narrowing it down to 1,000 then 100. Right now I count about 26'500 direct links to New York from article space only. — JFG talk 07:48, 11 September 2016 (UTC)
As of now, AWB pulls 24,588 direct links to New York. bd2412 T 19:31, 11 September 2016 (UTC)
- Is your bot done with the pattern replacements? If yes, how can we help for the next steps? Manual checking of 25,000 links is feasible in a few days with a team of 10 AWB-assisted editors. Shall we divide the job by initial letters? — JFG talk 19:46, 11 September 2016 (UTC)
- I was thinking something like that. I'm running the bot one more time to see if any of the pattern fixes have been missed. I note that there are occasional references to the "New York metropolitan area" and "New York Harbor", which should probably point to New York metropolitan area and New York Harbor, but which I have heretofore piped to New York City. At some point, I'll go back and fix those too. As the easy fixes dwindle, there are harder questions. There are many instances of short articles that say someone was "born in New York" or "died in New York" without giving further context or guidance to determine which New York is meant. bd2412 T 19:56, 11 September 2016 (UTC)
- I just did a quick AWB pass to get a feel for the current state of affairs. Most links are easy to decide. I fixed 34 to the city and 17 to the state. I'm sure we can find more patterns before going manual. — JFG talk 20:35, 11 September 2016 (UTC)
- I agree. It will also be useful to use the list comparer function to isolate out links to New York occurring in proximity to links to entities like Columbia University, United Nations, or even Niagara Falls. bd2412 T 21:09, 11 September 2016 (UTC)
- I just did a quick AWB pass to get a feel for the current state of affairs. Most links are easy to decide. I fixed 34 to the city and 17 to the state. I'm sure we can find more patterns before going manual. — JFG talk 20:35, 11 September 2016 (UTC)
- I was thinking something like that. I'm running the bot one more time to see if any of the pattern fixes have been missed. I note that there are occasional references to the "New York metropolitan area" and "New York Harbor", which should probably point to New York metropolitan area and New York Harbor, but which I have heretofore piped to New York City. At some point, I'll go back and fix those too. As the easy fixes dwindle, there are harder questions. There are many instances of short articles that say someone was "born in New York" or "died in New York" without giving further context or guidance to determine which New York is meant. bd2412 T 19:56, 11 September 2016 (UTC)
My rough estimate at this point is that about 9,500 of the link fixes made in this project to date have been to correct links from New York to New York City. It occurs to me, by the way, that there are a number of links to the state, perhaps in the low hundreds, that really should point to Province of New York, when the subject explicitly precedes statehood. bd2412 T 03:57, 15 September 2016 (UTC)
As of today, September 17th, I count "only" 22,002 links left. Motivation — JFG talk 12:07, 17 September 2016 (UTC)
- Now under 20,000. bd2412 T 16:17, 18 September 2016 (UTC)
- Oh wow, you've found one in one of the articles I wrote.[1] I must have thought "New York" meant the city when I wrote that. How wrong can one be... — Amakuru (talk) 21:59, 20 September 2016 (UTC)
Today's batch of manual disambiguations: 399 to New York City (73%), 143 to New York (state) (26%), 5 to Province of New York (1%), 3 to New York metropolitan area, 2 to New York (magazine). And 41 undecided with {{dn}} tag. — JFG talk 17:48, 27 September 2016 (UTC)
- I'm not sure we should be tagging links {{dn}} just yet. A better option might be {{clarify}}. If New York is identified as a place of significance in a biography, we might also ask for sourcing. bd2412 T 19:29, 27 September 2016 (UTC)
- Right, but {{dn}} is a handy one-click option offered by the tool I've been using (DisamAssist); this enables a quick marking to revisit such links later. I've added {{clarify}} now where I couldn't determine the correct target and nobody else did it in the meantime. — JFG talk 21:48, 27 September 2016 (UTC)
Down to 14,471 remaining ambiguous links to New York tonight. — JFG talk 21:50, 27 September 2016 (UTC)
- Now under 12,900. I kind of need a break, at this point. bd2412 T 15:22, 30 September 2016 (UTC)
- We are now down to about 11,700 links, and fixes are going about 3 to 2 for New York City. bd2412 T 17:33, 7 October 2016 (UTC)
- Now under 10,000 incoming links. bd2412 T 20:14, 12 October 2016 (UTC)
- Now under 9,000 incoming links. bd2412 T 21:58, 23 October 2016 (UTC)
- Now under 8,000 incoming links. bd2412 T 03:44, 29 October 2016 (UTC)
- Now under 7,000 incoming links. bd2412 T 03:30, 4 November 2016 (UTC)
- Note - with under 7,000 links to fix, so far the total number of links to New York (directly or through redirects) is down to 100930. This is a drop of over 18,000 from the original count, meaning that at least 18,000 of those links were pointing to the wrong target at the beginning of this project. Because this project has also addressed new links being created, the actual number is probably at least a few hundred more than that. bd2412 T 19:29, 6 November 2016 (UTC)
- Now under 6,000 incoming links. bd2412 T 00:04, 8 November 2016 (UTC)
- Now under 5,000 incoming links. Before long we are going to be down to the difficult/ambiguous cases. bd2412 T 05:16, 11 November 2016 (UTC)
- Now under 4,000 incoming links. bd2412 T 05:00, 15 November 2016 (UTC)
- Now under 3,000 incoming links, with over 21,000 links intending targets other than the state fixed. Of course, we can still use all the help we can get here. bd2412 T 04:05, 19 November 2016 (UTC)
- How can you say something like [2] was not intended to link to and target New York, when it seems certain it was so intended, and it was correct? Alanscottwalker (talk) 15:53, 19 November 2016 (UTC)
- I didn't say that it was. This is one of the 80,000 or so correct links (although needing clarification) that need to be piped in order to clearly identify and fix the 21,000+ incorrect links. bd2412 T 15:22, 21 November 2016 (UTC)
- How can you say something like [2] was not intended to link to and target New York, when it seems certain it was so intended, and it was correct? Alanscottwalker (talk) 15:53, 19 November 2016 (UTC)
- Now under 2,000 incoming links, with well over 22,000 links intending targets other than the state fixed. bd2412 T 21:54, 23 November 2016 (UTC)
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What does any of this pointless bickering have to do with this article? oknazevad (talk) 16:24, 25 November 2016 (UTC)
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- Now under 500 incoming links, with over 22,500 links intending targets other than the state fixed. At this point, a majority of the remaining links are ambiguous, and have been tagged {{clarify}}. bd2412 T 16:40, 25 November 2016 (UTC)
- Now under 250 incoming links, with the remainder being a fairly stable set of truly ambiguous links tagged with {{clarify}}. Many of these can be fixed by more intense research, but some defy resolution, in which case I would propose to pipe them to the state. Also, about a half dozen new links are created each day, with most of these resolving to the city. bd2412 T 16:01, 2 December 2016 (UTC)
- Congratulations, bd2412! Is there any way to automate the patrolling of new ambiguous links? — JFG talk 22:14, 3 December 2016 (UTC)
- It's not that hard to patrol. I just load up "What links here" to New York on AWB, set it to ignore pages containing {{clarify}} tags, and run through the few new ones. I am more interested in right now in an effort to fix the ambiguous, tagged links. bd2412 T 22:42, 3 December 2016 (UTC)
- Congratulations, bd2412! Is there any way to automate the patrolling of new ambiguous links? — JFG talk 22:14, 3 December 2016 (UTC)
- Now down to exactly 195 incoming links. I have been patrolling newly created links, and I would say that about 20 are added per day, splitting about 60/40 for the state/city, with a very occasional link intended for the magazine or for New York Harbor. bd2412 T 23:49, 25 December 2016 (UTC)
- Thanks again bd2412 for your magnificent effort which has greatly improved navigation in this area of Wikipedia. Well done! Certes (talk) 00:26, 26 December 2016 (UTC)
I have initiated a discussion at Template talk:NJTransit-Raritan-infobox#Conforming with consensus in discussion at Talk:New York#Proposed action to resolve incorrect incoming links., where an editor of the template prefers to maintain a direct link to "New York", despite being informed of the consensus in this project. Cheers! bd2412 T 18:27, 14 January 2017 (UTC)
- This is now resolved. bd2412 T 21:20, 14 January 2017 (UTC)
- Note: There are now 175 persistent links remaining, all tagged with a request for clarification. bd2412 T 02:08, 3 February 2017 (UTC)
- Note: There are now 148 persistent links remaining. bd2412 T 13:17, 7 July 2017 (UTC)
Maintenance tasks
Now that the huge backlog of ambiguous links is cleared, let's discuss how to keep things clean with minimal editor burden. I see the following needs:
- Notifying competent editors of the need to resolve the remaining ambiguous cases: perhaps simply post a standard notice on the talk pages of affected articles? Pinging their main contributors? (doesn't look too heavy as such articles are generally rather far on the long tail of popularity)
- Crafting a process to patrol newly-created ambiguous links to New York and notifying a small team of volunteers to handle them. A bot-updated page to watch would be ideal (looks similar to RMCD bot's work; pinging author wbm1058 for ideas).
- Enshrining a permanent explanation of why links to the state must be piped, without forcing puzzled editors to read the New York Titling Wars: Complete Works, Annotated, Revised and Augmented Edition…
Any ideas welcome. — JFG talk 22:31, 3 December 2016 (UTC)
- My idea is at m:2016 Community Wishlist Survey/Categories/Editing#Administrator- and Page mover-editable display titles, that make more than cosmetic changes to the title, but has gotten no discussion or votes. I probably should have posted a notice of it here sooner. Any reaction to that? It would put the title "New York" under routine project-disambiguation patrol, show the disambiguated "New York (state)" alongside "New York City" in the search box, while keeping the same title that readers see at the top of the article, making the state appear to be the primary topic – a "virtual primary topic", if you will. wbm1058 (talk) 22:47, 3 December 2016 (UTC)
- Brilliant idea there wbm1058, you should definitely advertise it, because even people like me who read every New York minutiae three times over summer had failed to notice it. This is actually close to a suggestion that some editors made regarding the titling practice of Encyclopedia Britannica, where multiple articles can have the same title, with a disambiguator listed below. With your proposal, we would have solid underlying disambiguated page names with ambiguous article titles displayed in their natural style. I could see this feature used on plenty of ambiguous titles, such as Mercury or Soyuz. — JFG talk 01:09, 4 December 2016 (UTC)
- The m:Community Wishlist Survey is currently in the Voting phase, which runs Nov 28-Dec 12. Cast your votes now! Only support votes are counted. Maybe this can run up the rail from the rear on the backside of the voting window! Gotta finish in the top 10 to show. wbm1058 (talk) 01:52, 4 December 2016 (UTC)
- Brilliant idea there wbm1058, you should definitely advertise it, because even people like me who read every New York minutiae three times over summer had failed to notice it. This is actually close to a suggestion that some editors made regarding the titling practice of Encyclopedia Britannica, where multiple articles can have the same title, with a disambiguator listed below. With your proposal, we would have solid underlying disambiguated page names with ambiguous article titles displayed in their natural style. I could see this feature used on plenty of ambiguous titles, such as Mercury or Soyuz. — JFG talk 01:09, 4 December 2016 (UTC)
- Oh course if BD2412 wants to just maintain their patrol, we don't really need to do anything more. wbm1058 (talk) 22:57, 3 December 2016 (UTC)
- For the remaining ambiguous cases, it would be nice if we could hire a bot to find the edit that added the link to a given article, and then ping the editor who made that edit with the clarification question. bd2412 T 23:55, 3 December 2016 (UTC)
- I've fixed some of them; it's generally a matter of confirming the cited source. Has to be done manually, not with AWB. If it's a living person, check to see if they have a bio on their website. Remsen Corners, Ohio was an interesting one to research. If there is no citation at all, replace {{clarify}} with {{citation needed}}; I haven't done that with any of them yet. wbm1058 (talk) 00:50, 4 December 2016 (UTC)
- One problem: see this page history ...will we need to raise protection levels on some pages to stop edit wars with people who insist on bypassing our redirect? wbm1058 (talk) 01:16, 5 December 2016 (UTC)
- Yeah, actually, how about moving New York to New York (state) so that editors would be warned of the ambiguous link automatically? Oh wait… — JFG talk 03:09, 5 December 2016 (UTC)
- BD2412, I'm actually quite concerned that the number of pageviews for New York has dropped substantially to not many more than for Massachusetts and New Jersey, states with a third to less than half of New York's population (and perhaps commensurately by chance, WP:NOTABILITY). Is it possible that an overzealous attempt at link "correction" toward the City has taken place? Castncoot (talk) 01:39, 16 December 2016 (UTC)
- Overzealous? Absolutely not. At least 80% of links fixed have been piped through New York (state). Aside from a spike around election time, the number of page views for New York has remained consistent over the past 90 day period, from the very start of this project when most incoming links had not yet been addressed. bd2412 T 04:03, 16 December 2016 (UTC)
- Some of the older pageviews may be from readers who hoped to learn about the city rather than the state. When they hover over the link, such readers now see that this is not the article they are looking for, and may be less likely to click. Certes (talk) 11:17, 16 December 2016 (UTC)
- Actually, there has been a noticeable drop overall, but for all three aforementioned states. It may be just a seasonal phenomenon. Something to keep checking back on now and then, however. Castncoot (talk) 22:58, 16 December 2016 (UTC)
- @Castncoot: How about now? bd2412 T 01:02, 14 March 2017 (UTC)
- About the same relative rankings as when stated above on December 16, 2016, bd2412. Maybe the relative levels of interest are accurately reflected at this point. Castncoot (talk) 02:13, 14 March 2017 (UTC)
- @Castncoot: How about now? bd2412 T 01:02, 14 March 2017 (UTC)
- Actually, there has been a noticeable drop overall, but for all three aforementioned states. It may be just a seasonal phenomenon. Something to keep checking back on now and then, however. Castncoot (talk) 22:58, 16 December 2016 (UTC)
- BD2412, I'm actually quite concerned that the number of pageviews for New York has dropped substantially to not many more than for Massachusetts and New Jersey, states with a third to less than half of New York's population (and perhaps commensurately by chance, WP:NOTABILITY). Is it possible that an overzealous attempt at link "correction" toward the City has taken place? Castncoot (talk) 01:39, 16 December 2016 (UTC)
- Yeah, actually, how about moving New York to New York (state) so that editors would be warned of the ambiguous link automatically? Oh wait… — JFG talk 03:09, 5 December 2016 (UTC)
- For the remaining ambiguous cases, it would be nice if we could hire a bot to find the edit that added the link to a given article, and then ping the editor who made that edit with the clarification question. bd2412 T 23:55, 3 December 2016 (UTC)
RFC: Should the lead feature information about New York City over information about New York State
- The following discussion is an archived record of a request for comment. Please do not modify it. No further edits should be made to this discussion. A summary of the conclusions reached follows.
Given that there is limited space in the lead to fully summarize an article, and also given that the lead, in the state it was in until I tried to make it better, featured almost 50% of the text solely about New York City and ignored most of the state, I pared down some of the more esoteric New York City information and added, to replace it, more information about New York State as a whole which was missing from the article. It was called "vandalism" and reverted. Which is, itself, an interesting definition of "vandalism" but I'd rather not get into that here. Please consider, for the purpose of this RFC the narrow question of a) does the lead represented by This version, which focuses mostly on New York City, or the lead represented by this version which has roughly the same amount of text but changes the focus to New York State present a better version of the article. I'm not even particularly attached to the exact wording here, just on the general question of should we or should we not alter the lead to focus on New York State more than New York City specifically. Thanks for your contributions to this discussion. --Jayron32 21:32, 14 December 2016 (UTC)
Lead is fine as has been longstandingly
I note commenting from some who simply don't have the requisite New York topic experience. As User:Alanscottwalker infers below correctly, NYC contains 40% of the New York's population, and the New York City metropolitan area's population within the state composes two-thirds of the State population. And as far as gross regional economic output goes, the City composes the majority of the State's gross state product, and the City's metropolitan area within the State composes the vast majority of the State's economic output, over 75%. Again folks, New York City is actually in New York State (let's not forget that), and WP:UNDUE would actually be NOT to discuss NYC and its metro area with their significant due weights in the lead. As User:bd2412 infers below, Illinois discusses Chicago even more heavily than this article discusses NYC, mentioning Chicago 6 (!!!!!!) times as of this writing [6] and Chicago's O'Hare International Airport in an additional instance; but this is entirely correct. This longstanding lead format should stay as is. Otherwise, the ledes of all U.S. state articles with dominant cities would have to be changed, and this would not be an improvement at all. Castncoot (talk) 02:23, 15 December 2016 (UTC)
- Regarding the Illinois article, "this other article is shitty too, so we're forced to keep this article shitty" is not a strong argument. Also, "This article has been shitty a long time so we must keep it shitty forever" is also not a strong argument. You might want to try a different tack. --Jayron32 04:07, 15 December 2016 (UTC)
- The lede has been changed very significantly now, since this RfC started. We should all take a breather here. I would support leaving it as is at this point because the different topics needing to be balanced have reached a delicate state of nirvana: NYC/Downstate/Upstate, general/urban/geographic/historical/tourist/academic. If any one card is perturbed, the whole house of cards...well, you know. Castncoot (talk) 00:06, 18 December 2016 (UTC)
- When they muse dramatick, they remind me of me. Paine Ellsworth u/c 12:17, 25 December 2016 (UTC)
- Funny, Paine! I think the lede has now been edited heavily mid-RfC toward shifting the emphasis even more toward the State. Remember that two-thirds of the State's population lives in or around NYC, so it's a bit difficult to "overemphasize" the City. We should be stable at ths point. Castncoot (talk) 16:41, 25 December 2016 (UTC)
- People—there's only one para that discusses NYC here, out of five paragraphs! The last paragraph discusses prominent tourist attractions and universities in the State, most of which happen to be within the City! Castncoot (talk) 00:19, 9 January 2017 (UTC)
- When they muse dramatick, they remind me of me. Paine Ellsworth u/c 12:17, 25 December 2016 (UTC)
- The lede has been changed very significantly now, since this RfC started. We should all take a breather here. I would support leaving it as is at this point because the different topics needing to be balanced have reached a delicate state of nirvana: NYC/Downstate/Upstate, general/urban/geographic/historical/tourist/academic. If any one card is perturbed, the whole house of cards...well, you know. Castncoot (talk) 00:06, 18 December 2016 (UTC)
Lead needed to focus more on New York State rather than New York City
- --Jayron32 21:32, 14 December 2016 (UTC)
- The way the current lead is written is indeed focused too much on NYC. Quite a few of those sentences can be removed from the NYS lead. 🔯 Sir Joseph 🍸(talk) 21:39, 14 December 2016 (UTC)
- Notwithstanding my long standing and well known opinion that the title New York should be occupied by either the NYC page or a dab page... the fact remains that *this* article, wherever it may be housed (currently at New York) is about the state. Therefore the lede should focus on the state as a whole, obviously with some mention of NYC's status as a global city, but not dominated by that. — Amakuru (talk) 22:01, 14 December 2016 (UTC)
- NYC material could be trimmed a bit, although we should bear in mind that articles on states that have megacities tend to mention these cities quite prominently in the lede (see California, Illinois, Georgia (U.S. state)). bd2412 T 22:06, 14 December 2016 (UTC)
- The "NYC" version is jarring because the NYC-focused paragraph seems like a sudden change of subject, into something pasted from an NYC article. So I prefer the NYS-focused version. It would be fine to start from that and smoothly work in another NYC-related sentence or so, but the previous full NYC paragraph was too much and too distinct. 50.0.136.56 (talk) 00:43, 15 December 2016 (UTC)
- Adding a graf to overview geography and removing throwaways saying NYC is "one of the most populous" and is "fast-paced" is definitely appropriate for a state's page. (NYC should probably be noted as the location of almost every major landmark listed in the final graf, though.) The other thing I would recommend is having the Pre-Columbian graf moved before the geography graf, since then the first three grafs talk about people and the last two talk about places. SamuelRiv (talk) 02:42, 15 December 2016 (UTC)
- Obviously the lead section of the New York state article should focus on New York state, with appropriate mentions of New York City. If we allow NYC to dominate this lead because it's big, we are doing a disservice to readers who want to learn about more of New York than the city. — JFG talk 07:55, 15 December 2016 (UTC)
- The second version still has plenty of relevant info on NYC. I'd wikilink the first use of New York City in the lead though. SemanticMantis (talk) 20:52, 15 December 2016 (UTC)
- Focus on the state, because the article is about NY State. CuriousMind01 (talk) 13:28, 16 December 2016 (UTC)
- The article is the rticle of the state, so all parts of it, except for possibly a brief section about the city, should be about the state - not about ANY city. עוד מישהו Od Mishehu 16:42, 17 December 2016 (UTC)
- The sub-section title above is worded poorly as it only really admits one answer, as discussed in more detail below, but I can support some pairing back of the current second paragraph, or move of some mention to other paragraphs, which is also a thing that this RfC is not set-up to address, since it started off with stating, it's not looking for the detail (and as they say, the devil is in the detail, as the varying opinions in this sub-section demonstrate). The lead as also changed somewhat from the start of this RfC, and it remains that there are some 80 discussions of New York City in the article body because in fact, and per WP:LEAD, New York City is very significant to the subject of the state. -- Alanscottwalker (talk) 17:14, 17 December 2016 (UTC)
- Yes, some reduction of the amount of ink dedicated to New York City in the lede appears to be in order. Since the city has its own article, the state article should focus more on state-level things, and just vector the reader off for more on the city. The linked alternative version seems about right. Dicklyon (talk) 04:52, 23 December 2016 (UTC)
- Support in theory, since this is not the New York City article. That said, people keep editing it mid-RfC, so it's difficult to say it should have "more" or "less" – than which version? In general, I think it shouldn't have a lot of NYC-specific info in the lead. — SMcCandlish ☺ ☏ ¢ ≽ʌⱷ҅ᴥⱷʌ≼ 04:40, 24 December 2016 (UTC)
- Reduce the details about the city and have relatively more info about New York (state). Paine Ellsworth u/c 12:21, 25 December 2016 (UTC)
- I agree the State article lede needs to provide an overview of the State article in general, per SMcCandlish and others above. This does not mean ignoring NYC, far from it; the extent to which NYC occupies what portion of the lede can be discussed, and is indeed a necessary and interesting discussion, after all its population is about 42% of the entire State's. Best, FoCuS contribs; talk to me! 18:54, 25 December 2016 (UTC)
- I support the change. Readers will come to this article for statewide information. The proposed version strikes a better balance. LaTeeDa (talk) 21:04, 27 December 2016 (UTC)
- I too agree the lede is way too focused on NYC rather than the state, The hatnote clearly say "This article is about the state of New York. For the city, see New York City." so I don't really see any reason to fill the state article up with everything-NYC. –Davey2010 Merry Xmas / Happy New Year 13:38, 5 January 2017 (UTC)
- Agree, per Davey2010 — OwenBlacker (Talk) 11:16, 7 January 2017 (UTC)
- I too agree with the change as Davey2010's post above. — Gareth Griffith-Jones | The Welsh | Buzzard | 12:04, 7 January 2017 (UTC)
Threaded discussion
- This RfC seems a bit unclear as New York City and New York Metropolitan Area both do need to be discussed in the lead, as they make up the home of so many New Yorkers. Alanscottwalker (talk) 22:35, 14 December 2016 (UTC)
- This RFC has not stated that they should be forever stricken, but has presented two possible versions of the lead, with roughly the same amount of text, that present different amounts of balance, for comparison. However, at no point in the RFC does it say that the lead should ignore New York City and the metro area as though they don't exist. --Jayron32 00:45, 15 December 2016 (UTC)
- There are something like 80 mentions alone of New York City in the body of the article - it's difficult to find a section that does not mention it. So, even if you pair back some, a WP:Lead has to reflect that. Alanscottwalker (talk) 01:28, 15 December 2016 (UTC)
- Agreed, and I think that's what has been done in the second version. SemanticMantis (talk) 20:54, 15 December 2016 (UTC)
- There are something like 80 mentions alone of New York City in the body of the article - it's difficult to find a section that does not mention it. So, even if you pair back some, a WP:Lead has to reflect that. Alanscottwalker (talk) 01:28, 15 December 2016 (UTC)
- This RFC has not stated that they should be forever stricken, but has presented two possible versions of the lead, with roughly the same amount of text, that present different amounts of balance, for comparison. However, at no point in the RFC does it say that the lead should ignore New York City and the metro area as though they don't exist. --Jayron32 00:45, 15 December 2016 (UTC)
- Regarding BD2412's comment about California, as far as I can see that article's lede only has two sentences on its cities, namely:
Los Angeles is California's most populous city, and the country's second largest after New York City
andThe San Francisco Bay Area has the nation's highest median household income by metropolitan area, and is the headquarters of three of the world's largest 20 firms by revenue, Chevron, Apple, and McKesson
. — Amakuru (talk) 22:40, 14 December 2016 (UTC)- The lede of Illinois has five separate sentences about Chicago scattered throughout several paragraphs (not including the sentence on the Port of Chicago, or on Fort Dearborn, which is now part of Chicago. bd2412 T 22:46, 14 December 2016 (UTC)
- Yeah Castncoot said that too. Trouble is, there's far less to Illinois outside of Chicago than there is to NY outside of NYC. ɱ (talk) · vbm · coi) 02:32, 15 December 2016 (UTC)
- That particular comparison between the two cities and/or states (NYC vs Chicago and/or NY vs Illinois) is subjective at best, and essentially unverifiable. And this article's lede actually does do a reasonably meticulous job in discussing different urban, geographic, and historical features of the State. I think people should find something else to do here. Castncoot (talk) 02:44, 15 December 2016 (UTC)
- I utterly disagree, both that they are dissimilar and that the similarity is unverifiable. Both New York and Illinois are large, heavily populated states with one maritime megacity known around the world, and many smaller cities of varying importance, including state capitals separate from that largest city. bd2412 T 04:06, 15 December 2016 (UTC)
- I think you misunderstood my point, bd2412– I was agreeing with you and challenging User:Ɱ's statement that the two cities and their relationships with their respective states were dissimilar! Best, Castncoot (talk) 04:37, 15 December 2016 (UTC)
- Sorry, that was not clear. Cheers! bd2412 T 23:16, 15 December 2016 (UTC)
- I think you misunderstood my point, bd2412– I was agreeing with you and challenging User:Ɱ's statement that the two cities and their relationships with their respective states were dissimilar! Best, Castncoot (talk) 04:37, 15 December 2016 (UTC)
- I utterly disagree, both that they are dissimilar and that the similarity is unverifiable. Both New York and Illinois are large, heavily populated states with one maritime megacity known around the world, and many smaller cities of varying importance, including state capitals separate from that largest city. bd2412 T 04:06, 15 December 2016 (UTC)
- That particular comparison between the two cities and/or states (NYC vs Chicago and/or NY vs Illinois) is subjective at best, and essentially unverifiable. And this article's lede actually does do a reasonably meticulous job in discussing different urban, geographic, and historical features of the State. I think people should find something else to do here. Castncoot (talk) 02:44, 15 December 2016 (UTC)
- Yeah Castncoot said that too. Trouble is, there's far less to Illinois outside of Chicago than there is to NY outside of NYC. ɱ (talk) · vbm · coi) 02:32, 15 December 2016 (UTC)
- This seems like an evitable side-effect of the failed attempts to get this page changed to a disambiguation page. If this page were New York (state), your suggested lede would undoubtedly be better. As it stands, the existing NYC-centric lede is probably more useful for the majority of people who search for "New York" hoping to find the Big Apple. Smurrayinchester 09:20, 15 December 2016 (UTC)
- This article is unambiguously about the state of New York. Whatever opinions we hold on the best title for this page, its topic is clear. Yes, some readers who reach this article will be seeking information on the city rather than the state, but copying information from New York City into this article isn't the right solution to that problem. Certes (talk) 10:09, 15 December 2016 (UTC)
- And the City is dominantly the most WP:NOTABLE feature of the State. I think the latest updates to the lede take care of any issues regarding potential underdiscussion of the rest of the State. The lede appears to be in a well-balanced state of nirvana now, those with New York topic experience I believe will find. We should all find something else to do now. Castncoot (talk) 12:51, 15 December 2016 (UTC)
- This article is unambiguously about the state of New York. Whatever opinions we hold on the best title for this page, its topic is clear. Yes, some readers who reach this article will be seeking information on the city rather than the state, but copying information from New York City into this article isn't the right solution to that problem. Certes (talk) 10:09, 15 December 2016 (UTC)
- It's pretty apparent some meeting in the middle will occur so, perhaps focus on what needs to remain. Part of the reason is the RfC "positions" are intentionally or unintentionally one-sidedly worded. Should the state article lead focus on the state? Only has one possible answer. It's also not this issue really. The issue is, how much should existentially indispensable aspects of that state in the body of the article, be covered in the lead? Alanscottwalker (talk) 13:48, 15 December 2016 (UTC)
- Should this particular RfC be closed at this time, Jayron32 – simply because the lead section has changed so dramatically de facto since it was opened? Castncoot (talk) 01:32, 16 December 2016 (UTC)
- It's pretty apparent some meeting in the middle will occur so, perhaps focus on what needs to remain. Part of the reason is the RfC "positions" are intentionally or unintentionally one-sidedly worded. Should the state article lead focus on the state? Only has one possible answer. It's also not this issue really. The issue is, how much should existentially indispensable aspects of that state in the body of the article, be covered in the lead? Alanscottwalker (talk) 13:48, 15 December 2016 (UTC)
Where's the trim?
Looks like the lede section still has too much detail on New York City despite the RfC having closed with consensus to reduce coverage several months ago. Who feels comfortable enough with the subject matter to trim it down? — JFG talk 15:23, 7 July 2017 (UTC)
Change title of article/page
There are numerous Wikilinks that redirect to this page and are noted as New York (state). There are other pages that distinguish cities and states that clarify the article's status as describing the state, e.g. Sao Paulo (state) and State of Mexico. Therefore, I propose that this page be renamed "New York (state)". William M. Bugbee (talk) 12:02, 10 February 2017 (UTC)
I have created Talk:New York/Proposed move, as a space in which to draft a proposal to move the disambiguation page to the undisambiguated title. I would welcome User:William M. Bugbee, User:Paine Ellsworth, User:Od Mishehu, User:JFG, and User:Amakuru to use that space to gather evidence and arguments in favor of such a move at Talk:New York/Proposed move#Arguments and evidence in favor of the proposed move, and would equally welcome opposers of such a move to gather evidence and arguments in opposition to such a move at Talk:New York/Proposed move#Arguments and evidence against the proposed move. It goes without saying, of course, that all participants should be civil, and focus on policy and evidence rather than personalities involved in the discussion. Any discussions regarding the structure of the proposed move, or user conduct, should be carried out here, not on the proposal page. I would anticipate that the discussion should be ready to launch in no more than ten days.bd2412 T 20:51, 2 April 2017 (UTC)
Would it be better to phrase the proposal as a move of New York (disambiguation) to New York, as a consequence of which the state article has to gain a qualifier? Although a move of the state article has some advantages in itself, the main reason is to make room for the dab. Certes (talk) 19:04, 3 April 2017 (UTC)
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FAQ and especially re moratorium
See:
- Talk:New York City#Moratorium for a discussion affecting this page
- Talk:New York City#The name of this page should be changed for why this has come up again so soon
- Talk:New York City#Current FAQs for another related but IMO far more important discussion
and apologies for bringing it up but my hope is that a few words now will save another descent into the abyss, or at least postpone it until 2018. Andrewa (talk) 23:08, 23 September 2017 (UTC)
- Well, this is not the right Talk page - any moratorium being discussed is about two other pages. -- Alanscottwalker (talk) 23:27, 23 September 2017 (UTC)
- True. This is just a heads-up. Please discuss at Talk:New York City as suggested above. Or we could move it to Talk:New York which might make a little more sense, the discussion is on the city talk page just because another editor started it there (again, see above) but it's directly relevant to that page.
- Mind you, it was also directly relevant to this page before your recent edits, which were made shortly after this section was created and addressed one of the issues (thank you!). Andrewa (talk) 11:02, 24 September 2017 (UTC)
- Well, this is not the right Talk page - any moratorium being discussed is about two other pages. -- Alanscottwalker (talk) 23:27, 23 September 2017 (UTC)
Indian isn't a language?
Why is it included in the list of languages in the infobox? And why does the link only refer to Indians in NY City, not the whole state? 50.75.164.82 (talk) 10:22, 9 January 2018 (UTC)
- Good eye. Not only is that a false data point, but there were multiple inappropriate links hidden by the pipes. These entries are for the languages, and should not point to the ethnic groups. Especially when the target article is about the city, not the whole state (or even worse, the NYC metro area, which includes areas not even in the state). I have removed those links. oknazevad (talk) 14:07, 9 January 2018 (UTC)
Natural disambiguation
Does anyone think we could get some WP:NATURALDIS here, and move the article to New York state or State of New York? --Emir of Wikipedia (talk) 21:49, 25 March 2018 (UTC)
- The parenthetical was chosen after years of extensive discussion and debate. The final discussion was here. The parenthetical was overwhelmingly endorsed. Leave this sleeping dog to lie. oknazevad (talk) 10:45, 26 March 2018 (UTC)
"Differ" vs "differentiate"
The sentence To differ the state from the city with the same name, it is sometimes called New York State.
is incorrect grammar. The correct word is "differentiate". "Differ" means "be unlike or dissimilar" while "differentiate" means "recognize or ascertain what makes something different". epicgenius (talk) 11:45, 26 September 2018 (UTC)
- No, “distinguish” is a better word. “Differentiate” is too coupled to calculus and has aquiured an association with continuums. Or is that continuua? Continua? Like in “continually”? SmokeyJoe (talk) 12:00, 26 September 2018 (UTC)
- Yes, I agree that "distinguish" removes the argument about this altogether. And I thought the same thing about "differentiation". It's the area below a curve from b to c (), it equals . Which is the antiderivative of , incidentally. It's not really related to continua (that's the correct plural). epicgenius (talk) 12:16, 26 September 2018 (UTC)
Federal election charts
Please see Wikipedia talk:WikiProject United States#Federal election charts in State articles.--Moxy (talk) 21:47, 20 January 2019 (UTC)
New York City
The consensus is against using the name "New York" instead of "New York City".
- The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
@Castncoot, Alanscottwalker, Station1, Oknazevad, and Dhtwiki: In non-obvious circumstances (i.e. when there is no possibility of confusion with the state), should we use the name "New York" instead of "New York City”, as this name is mostly just a disambiguator, as outlined in this discussion. This discussion is intended to apply project-wide, not just here; it seems I have to make this clear. IWI (chat) 19:44, 19 January 2019 (UTC)
- I’ve struck out the project-wide part and withdraw it. IWI (chat) 15:13, 20 January 2019 (UTC)
- You want a rule project-wide? I don't think that can be decided here, also it strikes me as WP:CREEP, so I would oppose such heavy-handed rule-making. (Also, I reject the underlying assumption, NYC, "New York City" is a common name, and editors should be free to use a common name). Alanscottwalker (talk) 19:54, 19 January 2019 (UTC)
- Oppose per Alanscottwalker. "New York City" is not just a natural disambiguation, but a common name for the city. oknazevad (talk) 20:09, 19 January 2019 (UTC)
- Yes, but my point is "New York" is more common. IWI (chat) 20:13, 19 January 2019 (UTC)
- Yes. But one can say either "New York City" or "New York", even if it's clear that the city is the only topic being talked about. Neither is incorrect. We don't change all uses of a term just because one use case is more common. epicgenius (talk) 20:30, 19 January 2019 (UTC)
- Yes, but my point is "New York" is more common. IWI (chat) 20:13, 19 January 2019 (UTC)
- Oppose - it's unnecessary, regressive, and quite stupid IMO. At least with the current names, we have natural disambiguation. I don't see this as an improvement, especially as it may cause confusion. epicgenius (talk) 20:15, 19 January 2019 (UTC)
- You’re suggesting that people will think the largest city of New York State is New York State, epicgenius, because I seriously doubt that. IWI (chat) 20:26, 19 January 2019 (UTC)
- I never suggested that. I said that it's regressive because sometimes (not every time), people may use just "New York" to refer to the state. If you had a sentence, like
Company X is headquartered in New York
but it's really headquartered in the Hudson Valley, then of course you can add "City". And anyway, I forgot to mention that I agree with Alanscottwalker's objection that this is unnecessary rule creep, and this needs to be decided on a case-by-case basis. If the sentence isn't confusing, you don't need to make it confusing. epicgenius (talk) 20:36, 19 January 2019 (UTC)- Okay, apologies for my error. The two main instances I’m referring to here are the "Largest City" parameter of the infobox and the list of the largest cities of the state. Here, it is non-obvious, what is people’s opinion on these particular cases? IWI (chat) 20:52, 19 January 2019 (UTC)
- It's OK. I'm just saying that it doesn't need to be a rule across the entire project. It's just that when "New York City" is mentioned, the topic is obviously the city, and when "New York" is used, there is often context about whether the topic is the state, the city, the county, or something else. The two examples you cited are pretty good contextual examples, but other cases may not be as obvious. epicgenius (talk) 00:01, 20 January 2019 (UTC)
- Okay, apologies for my error. The two main instances I’m referring to here are the "Largest City" parameter of the infobox and the list of the largest cities of the state. Here, it is non-obvious, what is people’s opinion on these particular cases? IWI (chat) 20:52, 19 January 2019 (UTC)
- I never suggested that. I said that it's regressive because sometimes (not every time), people may use just "New York" to refer to the state. If you had a sentence, like
- You’re suggesting that people will think the largest city of New York State is New York State, epicgenius, because I seriously doubt that. IWI (chat) 20:26, 19 January 2019 (UTC)
- I agree with the sentiment, but would oppose any "rule". Instruction creep is a real problem, much more than whether "New York" or "New York City" is used. "New York" is the name of the city, and when it's not ambiguous, it's usually better writing, and more correct, but we should leave it to individual editors to decide what makes sense in each case. "New York is the largest city in the United States" is better than the same sentence with a redundant "City". However, "New York borders New Jersey" might be ambiguous, depending on context. I've sometimes changed "New York City" to "New York" while copyediting, but don't go out of my way to do that. The New York (state) article is almost a special case, because we need to be especially clear about which New York we're talking about; it could be more confusing here than elsewhere for someone unfamiliar with the topic. We should also bear in mind that some readers might wonder whether New York City and the city named New York are the same thing; many Americans think London and the City of London are the same. Station1 (talk) 23:27, 19 January 2019 (UTC)
- I make a point of changing "New York" to "New York City" wherever I find it, if the reference is clearly to the city, and addition of the word will not disrupt the flow of the sentence. bd2412 T 00:09, 20 January 2019 (UTC)
Does anyone oppose directly to my recent changes to this article? IWI (chat) 18:11, 20 January 2019 (UTC)
- Oppose the proposal and the edit for the reasons stated by others above, I don't believe this really needs to be elaborated any further. Castncoot (talk) 22:24, 20 January 2019 (UTC)
- We’ve already established the overall proposal is opposed; but the specific edits have seen less backlash; so do people oppose to those, and similar, edits. IWI (chat) 18:51, 21 January 2019 (UTC)
- I don't really object to those edits, because they're not incorrect, and are generally better writing, but I can see the other side too in this particular article, because some editors might want to make it crystal clear which NY is being referred to, even to the point of redundancy. I don't think it's a big deal either way. In other articles, I would most likely make similar edits. (I'm not sure why you changed the 5 counties from size to alphabetical order in the table about size, but that's an exceedingly minor point.) Station1 (talk) 21:01, 21 January 2019 (UTC)
- We’ve already established the overall proposal is opposed; but the specific edits have seen less backlash; so do people oppose to those, and similar, edits. IWI (chat) 18:51, 21 January 2019 (UTC)
- Oppose American usage is almost always "New York City", especially in situations where one is also discussing the state. power~enwiki (π, ν) 19:06, 24 January 2019 (UTC)
- I agree, and in support of this claim, I present, Exhibit A: this Pace Picante Sauce commercial. bd2412 T 19:22, 24 January 2019 (UTC)
- But Exhibits B-Q: New York Times, New York Post, NYPD, FDNY, CBS New York, NBC New York, New York Yankees, New York Mets, New York magazine, Time Out New York, New York Hall of Science, New York World's Fair(s), New York Municipal Airport, New York metropolitan area, DKNY, New York New Haven and Hartford Railroad. Both are widely used where context is clear. Station1 (talk) 22:36, 24 January 2019 (UTC)
- That's why my example was pulled from real-world popular culture. Oddly, there is still a separate New York County District Attorney, with jurisdiction limited to Manhattan. bd2412 T 23:29, 24 January 2019 (UTC)
- Not that odd. All DAs in NYS are elected by county. There's a Kings County District Attorney, etc. But it may be worth noting that New York County, unlike NYC and NYS, always has the word county nearby. "New York" by itself would never be assumed to be the county. Station1 (talk) 23:58, 24 January 2019 (UTC)
- That's why my example was pulled from real-world popular culture. Oddly, there is still a separate New York County District Attorney, with jurisdiction limited to Manhattan. bd2412 T 23:29, 24 January 2019 (UTC)
- But Exhibits B-Q: New York Times, New York Post, NYPD, FDNY, CBS New York, NBC New York, New York Yankees, New York Mets, New York magazine, Time Out New York, New York Hall of Science, New York World's Fair(s), New York Municipal Airport, New York metropolitan area, DKNY, New York New Haven and Hartford Railroad. Both are widely used where context is clear. Station1 (talk) 22:36, 24 January 2019 (UTC)
- I agree, and in support of this claim, I present, Exhibit A: this Pace Picante Sauce commercial. bd2412 T 19:22, 24 January 2019 (UTC)
That lead section needs to be fixed: "New York City is a global city" "The state's most populous city, New York City". These sentences are just annoying. Also the infobox "Largest city" parameter should be amended also. Do I have consensus for these changes? To address Alanscottwalker's concerns, this would change all examples present in that section of prose. IWI (chat) 02:17, 25 January 2019 (UTC)
- No. First, it is more than perfectly fine to write, things like, 'New York City is a very large city' as it is a most sensible and correct sentence, to anyone who even pretends to know anything about it. Second, and perhaps more importantly, the article naturally begins in the first paragraph talking about 'New York', the state, so we should not wip-lash the reader in the second paragraph to talk about 'New York', something else, to wip-lash the reader again in the third paragraph, which begins, 'The 27th largest U.S. state in land area, New York has a diverse geography . . .' and the forth paragraph, 'New York had been inhabited by tribes of Algonquian and Iroquoian-speaking Native Americans for several hundred years ...'. Keeping, 'New York' for the state, and 'New York City', for the city is just good clear writing. Similar things happen all the time in writing, like in writing about a woman (let's call her Lafroy), whose common last name is the same as her husband, so you write about her and refer to her by her last name ('Lafroy did this. Lafroy did that') and then later you have to introduce her husband: 'She married Peter Lafroy in 1952. Peter was a wholesaler, whom Lafroy met through work.', etc. You have one moniker for one thing and basically stick to that moniker, throughout, so the reader knows, always. There is no reason to use the same name, here, and every good reason to use different names. Alanscottwalker (talk) 02:59, 25 January 2019 (UTC)
- I heartily agree with Alan. "New York City" is not uncommon, it is not less correct, and it is not used only for disambiguation purposes in natural language. For arguments sake, would you make the same edits to Oklahoma with regards to Oklahoma City? Or Panama City and Panama? If not, then there is no need to make those edits with regards to New York City and the state of New York. oknazevad (talk) 03:11, 25 January 2019 (UTC)
- @Alanscottwalker:The difference there is that Oklahoma City is called that only, unlike New York; it’s not the same thing. Does Alanscottwalker agree to the "Largest city" and "list of Largest cities" edits to this article. IWI (chat) 11:51, 25 January 2019 (UTC)
- I heartily agree with Alan. "New York City" is not uncommon, it is not less correct, and it is not used only for disambiguation purposes in natural language. For arguments sake, would you make the same edits to Oklahoma with regards to Oklahoma City? Or Panama City and Panama? If not, then there is no need to make those edits with regards to New York City and the state of New York. oknazevad (talk) 03:11, 25 January 2019 (UTC)
- Oppose. "New York City" is not just a disambiguated "New York". If character reduction is necessary, better to reduce to "NYC" (geolocated from the other side of the planet!). --SmokeyJoe (talk) 04:00, 25 January 2019 (UTC)
- @SmokeyJoe: But searching "New York" gives images of the city and not the state, so what is your point? IWI (chat) 16:29, 22 February 2019 (UTC)
- ”as this name is mostly just a disambiguator” is plain false. “New York City” is a commonly recognised name for the city. Unlike “New York” it is not ambiguous with the state, so what is the benefit? —SmokeyJoe (talk) 21:28, 22 February 2019 (UTC)
- Oppose mandating any change to one or the other. "New York" and "New York City" should both be equally acceptable, depending on context, either could be acceptable. We should not favor one or the other across the entire project. If context would demand one or the other for a particular usage, go with it. If both are equally acceptable in a particular context, don't change it from what's already there. --Jayron32 04:51, 25 January 2019 (UTC)
- Support "New York" seems to be the formal name of both the state and city, Google Maps and most of the non-English WPs call it "New York", unlike Oklahoma/Oklahoma City for example. New York City passes WP:COMMONAME and WP:NATURAL but the "City" doesn't seem to be an integral part of the city's name (note the administrative division seems to be "City of New York". If we don't use "New York State" (though that never achieved consensus for the main article) then we probably can also just use "New York" for the city like WP:IRE-IRL uses just "Ireland" for both the island and state where the context is clear (or at least they aren't being discussed together). Crouch, Swale (talk) 20:11, 26 January 2019 (UTC)
- Oppose. For all the reasons articulated above, especially those cogently expressed by User:BD2412. --Coolcaesar (talk) 20:59, 26 January 2019 (UTC)
- Oppose making any changes one way or the other. When discussing the city, both "New York" and "New York City" are equally valid, and there's no compelling reason to change all instances of one to the other. Both names are commonly used enough that neither usage would surprise or confuse the reader. In cases where the State and City are both discussed, the "New York City" form may be preferred, but in other cases, we should feel free to use either form, and make no changes to established usage in an article. If an article is inconsistent in its usage, we should use WP:ENGVAR guidance on harmonizing the usage to the first usage of the term, but otherwise, there's nothing to be gained from making all of Wikipedia use one form or the other. --Jayron32 17:06, 22 February 2019 (UTC)
- The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
New York City (2)
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Since the previous discussion was closed virtually mid-sentence, I’ve continued it here. IWI (chat) 17:48, 23 February 2019 (UTC)
- Uh? The discussion ran for over a month, and the proposal received unanimous opposition except one person. I don't see what can be gained by continuing the debate. FWIW I did not participate, but I would have opposed as well. — JFG talk 17:51, 23 February 2019 (UTC)
- Yeah, hardly an inappropriate close. This is just WP:DEADHORSE territory. oknazevad (talk) 18:59, 23 February 2019 (UTC)
- I agree, that the previous close was properly done. bd2412 T 19:14, 23 February 2019 (UTC)
- Agreed. ɱ (talk) 20:19, 23 February 2019 (UTC)
Fair enough. IWI (chat) 21:03, 23 February 2019 (UTC)