Talk:Lady Sia

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This is in response to the request at the CVG Assessment page. I have re-rated this article as B-class, Low-importance. Here are a few suggestions for cleanup for improvement and/or submitting it as a GAC-

Fix the informal tone- Ex. "cloaked guy", numerous, numerous contractions, "too much hack-and-slash", etc.

Anthropomorhics isn't a word- try Anthromorphs, the article you linked to.

Capitalize "Lady" whenever you use it- it's a title, so it's capitalized when it's used as such. On a related note, don't link Lady in the first word of the article- do it a few sentences later when you say her name, it looks better.

You don't need to say "Sia" every time you refer to her, a "she" will do fine sometimes.

I know most of these are style points, but that's because overall, the article is very good. Please polish it a bit, then submit it to Peer Review or GAC. --PresN 18:01, 26 February 2007 (UTC)[reply]

I came back to see if anything had been done, and I must say, you've done an amazing job with this article, DreamingLady. Keep up the good work! --PresN 04:52, 8 March 2007 (UTC)[reply]