User talk:Warren363

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Your submission at Articles for creation: Genovation Cars (January 9)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by SeraphWiki was:

This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Probably notable but language is too promotional

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SeraphWiki (talk) 09:52, 9 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

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Your submission at Articles for creation: Genovation Cars (February 28)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Theroadislong was:

This submission appears to read more like an advertisement than an entry in an encyclopedia. Encyclopedia articles need to be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources, not just to materials produced by the creator of the subject being discussed. This is important so that the article can meet Wikipedia's verifiability policy and the notability of the subject can be established. If you still feel that this subject is worthy of inclusion in Wikipedia, please rewrite your submission to comply with these policies.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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Theroadislong (talk) 17:39, 28 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

AfC notification: Draft:Genovation Cars has a new comment

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Genovation Cars. Thanks! Bkissin (talk) 18:56, 10 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Genovation Cars (April 11)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Heliosxeros was:

This submission appears to read more like an advertisement than an entry in an encyclopedia. Encyclopedia articles need to be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources, not just to materials produced by the creator of the subject being discussed. This is important so that the article can meet Wikipedia's verifiability policy and the notability of the subject can be established. If you still feel that this subject is worthy of inclusion in Wikipedia, please rewrite your submission to comply with these policies.

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EROS ^message 10:46, 11 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Draft:Genovation Cars

Greetings. To cut down promotional tone, try to reduce lines which are technical. Cuz, with technical info, it'll seem like the article was extracted from a brochure. Eg. In February, 2016 the GXE piloted by Johnny Bohmer, set IMRA certified records of 209mph top speed and 190.48mph in the standing mile, Fastest Standing Mile (Electric Car), Fastest Top Speed (Electric Car). If any question persist, do ping me or contact the AfC Helpdesk, link embedded on your declination banner. EROS ^message 03:30, 26 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]