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Your submission at Articles for creation: Aerofly FS (April 3)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Girth Summit was:

This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.

The comment the reviewer left was:

With no sources at all aside from the manufacturer's website, we have no way of establishing notability or checking whether the content is neutral and accurate.

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GirthSummit _(blether) 14:17, 3 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, Turman! Having an article declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! GirthSummit _(blether) 14:17, 3 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Aerofly FS (April 3)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by AngusWOOF were:

This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.

This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject. Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Is this a video game? A simulation app? Who is the consumer for the product? Need sources that cover this to show notability.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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AngusWOOF (bark • sniff) 17:22, 3 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Aerofly FS (April 3)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by AngusWOOF were:

This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.

This submission appears to read more like an advertisement than an entry in an encyclopedia. Encyclopedia articles need to be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources, not just to materials produced by the creator of the subject being discussed. This is important so that the article can meet Wikipedia's verifiability policy and the notability of the subject can be established. If you still feel that this subject is worthy of inclusion in Wikipedia, please rewrite your submission to comply with these policies.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Please connect the newly added references to the article. Also remove the feature bullet lists, and rewrite in context of an article. It reads like a brochure for the app.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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AngusWOOF (bark • sniff) 19:17, 3 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Aerofly FS (April 4)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Liance was:

This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject. Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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-Liance^{talk/contribs} 13:40, 4 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Aerofly FS (April 4)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by AngusWOOF was:

This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Please include a reception section for the reviews and add the reviewers' names and magazines / websites they are writing from. Also needs history on the original version (what scenarios and aircraft did that support?) and the notable versions of the product. I only see coverage for FS 2.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

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AngusWOOF (bark • sniff) 14:14, 4 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Aerofly FS (April 19)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by AngusWOOF was:

This submission appears to read more like an advertisement than an entry in an encyclopedia. Encyclopedia articles need to be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources, not just to materials produced by the creator of the subject being discussed. This is important so that the article can meet Wikipedia's verifiability policy and the notability of the subject can be established. If you still feel that this subject is worthy of inclusion in Wikipedia, please rewrite your submission to comply with these policies.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Issues have still not been addressed below. Needs reception section, also development history.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Aerofly FS and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
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AngusWOOF (bark • sniff) 23:48, 19 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Ways to improve Victor Quesada

Hello, Turman,

Thanks for creating Victor Quesada! I edit here too, under the username SportingFlyer and it's nice to meet you :-)

I wanted to let you know that I have tagged the page as having some issues to fix, as a part of our page curation process and note that:-

Quesada appears to be a BLP and so needs to have inline citations in the text in order to be kept.

The tags can be removed by you or another editor once the issues they mention are addressed. If you have questions, leave a comment here and prepend it with {{Re|SportingFlyer}}. And, don't forget to sign your reply with ~~~~ . For broader editing help, please visit the Teahouse.

@SportingFlyer: Thanks, it's true the article was missing some citations / references but my wife has added some.Turman (talk) 08:25, 30 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]

@SportingFlyer: Would it possible to "untag" the page (ie. remove the template message) since some reference has been added ? Turman (talk) 08:30, 30 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Delivered via the Page Curation tool, on behalf of the reviewer.

SportingFlyer T·C 21:13, 26 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]

I've made some tweaks to the article and added categories, just so you know - it still needs some citations, though. Nice work...and welcome aboard! Happy editing! :-) --Ser Amantio di Nicolao^{Che dicono a Signa?}_{Lo dicono a Signa.} 21:38, 26 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]

@Ser Amantio di Nicolao: Thanks for your feedback and your changes.Turman (talk) 08:25, 30 April 2019 (UTC) @Turman: The Life section is still uncited and that to me is the most important part to cite for a living person biography. I'll take a look when I can and try and fix it. SportingFlyer T·C 18:37, 30 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Draft:Aerofly FS concern

Hi there, I'm HasteurBot. I just wanted to let you know that Draft:Aerofly FS, a page you created, has not been edited in 5 months. The Articles for Creation space is not an indefinite storage location for content that is not appropriate for articlespace.

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Thank you for your attention. HasteurBot (talk) 01:24, 24 October 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Your draft article, Draft:Aerofly FS

Hello, Turman. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, "Aerofly FS".

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been nominated for deletion. If you plan on working on it further, or editing it to address the issues raised if it was declined, simply edit the submission and remove the {{db-afc}}, {{db-draft}}, or {{db-g13}} code.

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Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia! Bkissin (talk) 16:08, 8 November 2019 (UTC)[reply]