User talk:TheDragonFire/Archives/2018/10

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Hi Dragon, I hope that i can use your assistant , i have created a page, which after publishing, this message appeared on top: This article contains content that is written like an advertisement... But its not, still, i have reduced some sentences and also deleted some words that might have sounded too flattering, though the info was actually true, what else can be done to make the entry legit? Could you please advice? Hilit.schenkel (talk) 08:05, 29 September 2018 (UTC)

You appear to be editing in violation of our paid-contribution disclosure policy. You are additionally ignoring strong warnings contained in our conflict of interest guideline. It is therefore not surprising that you have failed to write in a neutral encyclopedic tone and have failed to provide reliable secondary sources. I have left clear instructions on how to avoid being blocked on your talk page. Beyond that, you will need to read the extensive policy pages linked from those maintenance banners, and learn how to write professional encyclopedia articles. This is complex, but I'm afraid that you're the one getting paid to do this, rather than most of the unpaid volunteers on this project. TheDragonFire (talk) 09:55, 29 September 2018 (UTC)

Thanks for your feedback, I have answered on the other page also, i have invested some time and i did not intend to disrespect Wiki guidelines, In my opinion the subject is noble, the entry appears already in other language, i have translated it, i have expanded the skinny version of it and i made big research for it, i also corrected it after the advertising message and if needed i will correct it further. Hilit.schenkel (talk) 10:17, 29 September 2018 (UTC)

I have answered your questions and i have read the pages you have placed on my Talk page, i would like to continue and edit the page, Can i do that? you told me to hold ..Thanks! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Hilit.schenkel (talk • contribs) 14:08, 29 September 2018 (UTC)

If you're not getting paid to edit, then go right ahead. It's very hard to write about companies in general, and something felt off to me, but I'm sorry to have roasted you if it wasn't justified. TheDragonFire (talk) 14:18, 29 September 2018 (UTC)

Thank you TheDragonFire, all fine, i am here to stay, so let it be in hard way ((-: Hilit.schenkel (talk) 14:54, 29 September 2018 (UTC)

I have no idea if you received my last message, i have deleted some text, replaced website links with third parties ones, i have edited the upper box , still have issue with the logo, and added few references, would be highly appreciated if you can go over the text and share with me if i am in the right direction, Thanks Hilit.schenkel (talk) 17:03, 29 September 2018 (UTC)

RED A03

Thanks for your time! cheers --Marc Lacoste (talk) 15:18, 18 October 2018 (UTC)