User talk:Sgwaxman

January 2018

Hello, and thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia. This is just a note to let you know that I've moved the draft that you were working on to Draft:Stephen Waxman, from its old location at User:Sgwaxman/sandbox/Stephen Waxman. This has been done because the Draft namespace is the preferred location for Articles for Creation submissions. Please feel free to continue to work on it there. If you have any questions about this, you are welcome to ask me on my talk page. Thank you. I dream of horses If you reply here, please ping me by adding {{U|I dream of horses}} to your message (talk to me) (My edits) @ 22:50, 30 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

@I dream of horses How do I have the draft I have created published so it comes up on wikipedia searches. Also, I am referenced on other wikipedia pages and don't know how to link it to what will hopefully be my page.: @I dream of horses:

Your submission at Articles for creation: Stephen Waxman (February 1)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by DGG was:

The tone of this is too promotional. Please remove all adjectives of praise , such a "pivotal" or even "entirely new". In reporting his work, it must be worded as "he studied X", not "He showed that X does ....." unless there is a third party reliable source meeting the standards of WP:MEDRS that shows that the work is accepted. This is especially true for any reference to a human disease.

It needs to sound entirely unlike a faculty web page -- and make sure that none of it is copied from a previously published source.

He should be referred to in the text of the articles as just "waxman", or "he"

In summary, please read WP:AUTOBIIGRAPHY. The talk p must have the statement of conflict of interest according to WP:COI, even if it appears otherwise obvious.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Stephen Waxman and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
If you now believe the draft cannot meet Wikipedia's standards or do not wish to progress it further, you may request deletion. Please go to Draft:Stephen Waxman, click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window, add "{{db-self}}" at the top of the draft text and save.
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DGG ( talk ) 05:09, 1 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, Sgwaxman! Having an article declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! DGG ( talk ) 05:09, 1 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Welcome!

Hello, Sgwaxman, and welcome to Wikipedia! Thank you for your contributions.

I noticed that one of the first articles you created or edited appears to be an article about yourself. Creating an autobiography is a common mistake made by new Wikipedians—as this is an encyclopedia, we wouldn't expect to have an article about every contributor. Your user page, however, is a great place to write about yourself, making sure to stay within user page guidelines. Just click your user name at the top of the screen when you are logged in, and edit it normally.

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Your submission at Articles for creation: Stephen Waxman (March 10)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Gryllida was:

This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.

The comment the reviewer left was:

1. Please check previous reviewer comment.

2. Please add sources as requested in inline comments.

This draft has potential for publication; I've added it to the work board of the neuroscience, medicine, and biography wiki projects which may be able to help further.

Thank you!

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Stephen Waxman and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
If you now believe the draft cannot meet Wikipedia's standards or do not wish to progress it further, you may request deletion. Please go to Draft:Stephen Waxman, click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window, add "{{db-self}}" at the top of the draft text and save.
If you need any assistance, you can ask for help at the Articles for creation help desk or on the reviewer's talk page.
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Gryllida (talk) 02:48, 10 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Stephen Waxman has been accepted

Stephen Waxman, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created.
The article has been assessed as Start-Class, which is recorded on the article's talk page. You may like to take a look at the grading scheme to see how you can improve the article.

You are more than welcome to continue making quality contributions to Wikipedia. If your account is more than four days old and you have made at least 10 edits you can create articles yourself without posting a request. However, you may continue submitting work to Articles for Creation if you prefer.

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Espresso Addict (talk) 14:21, 18 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]

coi

hi, Sgwaxman, do you in any way have a connection direct/indirect w/ the article subject Stephen Waxman, please leave me a note(please be aware of Wikipedia:Conflict_of_interest), thank you--Ozzie10aaaa (talk) 17:30, 14 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]