User talk:Onyena22

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Winchester Science Centre

Please note that "centre", when used by itself, is not a proper noun and should use sentence case. Thank you Adakiko (talk) 11:09, 4 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Computers and society (September 13)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Bilorv was:

This submission reads more like an essay than an encyclopedia article. Submissions should summarise information in secondary, reliable sources and not contain opinions or original research. Please write about the topic from a neutral point of view in an encyclopedic manner.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Feedback I gave has not been taken into account, evident from the first sentence ("profoundly impacting society").

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

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— Bilorv (talk) 18:36, 13 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, Onyena22! Having an article draft declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! — Bilorv (talk) 18:36, 13 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]