User talk:Linyaf/Orange chicken

Peer Review

Hi Linyaf, I found your article is interesting, because I love to eat orange chicken. I like you are adding Popularity and Nutrition Facts for the article and supported by various resources. I suggest you could add a brief description of the article's major sections in the lead. I also create the sub-page with your peer review for helping you to develop your article. SpiritedSeagull (talk) 07:05, 23 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]

"Though called Chinese food in North America, orange chicken is rarely found in Chinese restaurants in China."

Comment: Just a very minor thing, but I feel that the word "though" has a slight tint of persuasion to it.

"Andrew Cherng, owner and founder of Panda Express, said that orange chicken is just a variation of General Tso's chicken, another dish that is almost unknown in China. Journalist Jennifer 8. Lee says that both "General Tso's chicken and Orange Chicken are Americanized mutations of sweet and sour dishes found in China.]

Comment: I would be careful here. By adding in many quotations about what people think, it makes the the article more opinionated.

PaulSereeyothin (talk) 04:48, 24 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Peer Review #2

Hi Lanyaf, I also found your article very interesting as I love Orange Chicken. I really liked the sections that you added and thought they fit with the topic very well. The only note that I had was I thought you could add additional sources that weren't surrounded around Panda Express. I hope you enjoyed the notes that I added and that you find them helpful! Feel free to message me on Discord if you have any additional questions.

Claymeg18 (talk) —Preceding undated comment added 05:44, 24 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]