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Happy editing! Cheers, 🇺🇦 Fiddle^Timtrent Faddle^Talk to me 🇺🇦 11:07, 20 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: sandbox (October 20)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Timtrent was:

This submission provides insufficient context for those unfamiliar with the subject matter. Please see the guide to writing better articles for information on how to better format your submission.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to User:LIUCAurora/sandbox and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
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🇺🇦 Fiddle^Timtrent Faddle^Talk to me 🇺🇦 11:07, 20 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, LIUCAurora! Having an article draft declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! 🇺🇦 Fiddle^Timtrent Faddle^Talk to me 🇺🇦 11:07, 20 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Feedback on initial edits

Well done for starting to edit Wikipedia. Some points to help:

note the reversion of your edits on Adele in Munich, and the reasons why. See the page View History at https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Adele_in_Munich&action=history
note the feedback on your Article for creation, which was your Sandbox content accidently submitted for review and publication. This process is for draft articles, not Sandbox content.
note the removal of the link out added to MacBook Air to the page on Apple. You link out only once, when the linked term is first used on the page. In this case the link had already been made earlier in the text. See Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Linking
note the removal of the link out to China on the page Catharina Weiss, which is termed 'over-linking'. See Wikipedia:Manual of Style/Linking
note the removal of the reference added to the page on Amami Ōshima which created the following incorrect reference highlighted in red:

References

1. Template:Cite web 'Bold text'

Anything highlighted in red is an issue which needs resolving. Check edits, including references, before publishing them and correct them if wrong.

Limelightangel (talk) 09:08, 22 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]