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- 1. The history section is not clear, due to the changing names of the department. Perhaps a description that better than the reference page is required to demonstrate the relationship between names and disciplines.
- 2. Adding more abbreviations of the institutes/departments is necessary, which can alleviate readers' memory.
- 3. Should link the technologies to their links.
- 4. Biased sources, which are all from official introduction page.
Sunt727 (talk) 01:59, 29 November 2017 (UTC)
Thank you for your good suggestions, Sunt! --Katetwowiki (talk) 17:58, 11 December 2017 (UTC)
Comment from Vacuum Dyson
[edit]In general, the wikiproject is exhaustive, nice. And there are some suggestions for you to write better.
1.Maybe it will be better if you say it is an introduction of a department of Qinghua University.
2.As SUNT stated, use abbreviation will increase fluency.
3.Add more detail about its history.
Vacuum Dyson (talk) 16:36, 29 November 2017 (UTC)
Thanks for your good suggestions, Dyson! --Katetwowiki (talk) 17:58, 11 December 2017 (UTC)