User talk:Katetwowiki

This user is a student editor in Wikipedia:Wiki_Ed/MIT/Workshop_in_Written_Expression_Fall_2017_Sec2_(Fall_2017).
Student assignments should always be carried out using a course page set up by the instructor. It is usually best to develop assignments in your sandbox. After evaluation, the additions may go on to become a Wikipedia article or be published in an existing article.

Tsinghua University

Tsinghua University_wikipedia

Comment 1: Some information in the "Present" section may need updates

Since the "Present" section is supposed to talk about the present situation, some information may need be updated to be more accurate. For example, the Schwarzman Scholars program of Tsinghua University has already started now.

Comment 2: Possible unneeded old information

The section "Academic" has given the most recent information about the number of schools and departments at Tsinghua University. Therefore, the data of 2003 in the "Present" section may be not useful here and can be removed. --Katetwowiki (talk) 13:06, 13 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Proposed projects

Topic 1: clean energy Currently, Wikipedia doesn’t have a page for clean energy while it does have a page for “renewable energy” which is included in clean energy. For this topic, I intend to: • give a definition to clean energy • make a classification of clean energy • introduce different kinds of clean energy • give a final judgement and make a prediction

Topic 2: sweet green rice ball Sweet green rice ball is a unique Chinese food usually made during the traditional Qingming festival. There is not a page for sweet green rice ball in Wikipedia. For this topic, I intend to: • introduce the history of the sweet green rice ball • put on some pictures of sweet green rice ball • give a recipe of making sweet green rice ball • talk about the nutritive value of sweet green rice ball

--Katetwowiki (talk) 03:25, 14 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Potential topics and related sources_assignment of Oct. 18th

Topic 1: clean energy Currently, Wikipedia doesn’t have a page for clean energy while it does have a page for “renewable energy” which is included in clean energy.

Sources: [1] Ottinger, Richard and Jayne, Mindy, Global Climate Change Kyoto Protocol Implementation: Legal Frameworks for Implementing Clean Energy Solutions (2000). Pace Environmental Law (PELR) Review, Vol. 18, 2000. Available at SSRN: https://ssrn.com/abstract=1341992. [2] Chalk, S. G., & Miller, J. F. (2006). Key challenges and recent progress in batteries, fuel cells, and hydrogen storage for clean energy systems. Journal of Power Sources, 159(1), 73-80. [3] Verhelst, S. (2014). Recent progress in the use of hydrogen as a fuel for internal combustion engines. International Journal of Hydrogen Energy, 39(2), 1071-1085. [4] Goldemberg, J. (2006). The promise of clean energy. Energy Policy, 34(15), 2185-2190. [5] Dincer, I., & Acar, C. (2015). A review on clean energy solutions for better sustainability. International Journal of Energy Research, 39(5), 585-606.

For this topic, I intend to: • give a definition to clean energy • make a classification of clean energy • introduce different kinds of clean energy • give a final judgement and make a prediction

Topic 2: sweet green rice ball Sweet green rice ball is a unique Chinese food usually made during the traditional Qingming festival. There is not a page for sweet green rice ball in Wikipedia.

Sources: [1] http://english.cctv.com/2017/04/04/VIDEQViPCheSxOovycT0bUg5170404.shtml (CCTV) [2] http://jiangsu.chinadaily.com.cn/kunshantravel/2014-10/16/content_18747896.htm (China daily) [3] China Highlight

For this topic, I intend to: • introduce the history of the sweet green rice ball • put on some pictures of sweet green rice ball • give a recipe of making sweet green rice ball • talk about the nutritive value of sweet green rice ball

Topic 3: department of precision instrument, Tsinghua University Sources: [1] http://www.tsinghua.edu.cn/publish/dpien/7814/index.html (official website) [2] http://www.tsinghua.edu.cn/publish/dpien/7818/2012/20120903151100415943495/20120903151100415943495_.html (official website) [3] http://www.tsinghua.edu.cn/publish/dpien/7819/2012/20120903141401238669250/20120903141401238669250_.html (official website) [4] http://www.tsinghua.edu.cn/publish/dpien/7819/2012/20120903141457094331781/20120903141457094331781_.html (official website) --Katetwowiki (talk) 03:47, 17 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Top two topics choices

Topic 1: clean energy Currently, Wikipedia doesn’t have a page for clean energy while it does have a page for “renewable energy” which is included in clean energy.

Sources: [1] Ottinger, Richard and Jayne, Mindy, Global Climate Change Kyoto Protocol Implementation: Legal Frameworks for Implementing Clean Energy Solutions (2000). Pace Environmental Law (PELR) Review, Vol. 18, 2000. Available at SSRN: https://ssrn.com/abstract=1341992. [2] Chalk, S. G., & Miller, J. F. (2006). Key challenges and recent progress in batteries, fuel cells, and hydrogen storage for clean energy systems. Journal of Power Sources, 159(1), 73-80. [3] Verhelst, S. (2014). Recent progress in the use of hydrogen as a fuel for internal combustion engines. International Journal of Hydrogen Energy, 39(2), 1071-1085. [4] Goldemberg, J. (2006). The promise of clean energy. Energy Policy, 34(15), 2185-2190. [5] Dincer, I., & Acar, C. (2015). A review on clean energy solutions for better sustainability. International Journal of Energy Research, 39(5), 585-606.

For this topic, I intend to: • give a definition to clean energy • make a classification of clean energy • introduce different kinds of clean energy • give a final judgement and make a prediction

Topic 2: sweet green rice ball Sweet green rice ball is a unique Chinese food usually made during the traditional Qingming festival. There is not a page for sweet green rice ball in Wikipedia.

Sources: [1] http://english.cctv.com/2017/04/04/VIDEQViPCheSxOovycT0bUg5170404.shtml (CCTV) [2] http://jiangsu.chinadaily.com.cn/kunshantravel/2014-10/16/content_18747896.htm (China daily) [3] China Highlight

For this topic, I intend to: • introduce the history of the sweet green rice ball • put on some pictures of sweet green rice ball • give a recipe of making sweet green rice ball • talk about the nutritive value of sweet green rice ball

--Katetwowiki (talk) 23:34, 30 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]

I'm concerned about "clean energy"

There is a page for "Sustainable Energy"; is that the same thing as "clean energy" (if I search on Clean Energy, it redirects to Sustainable energy).

I would be surprised if your clean energy article were not refused for this reason.

--Eric WritingMan (talk) 17:14, 1 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]

I'm also not sure about green rice balls....

It seems that a lot of it would be the same as the general "Rice Balls" article, no? (Maybe not.)

Your third topic looks like it might be a good possibility, although if you think that the green rice ball is substantially unique enough in history, nutrition, etc., you can go with that one, although I fear it might not be accepted by the Wikipedia community. However, if they rejected it, they might encourage you to add parts of it to the general rice ball article. In fact, you might consider that as a good option. Let me know what you think.

Also, it may help you to realize that you probably shouldn't put a recipe there, but rather a description (general, without specific amounts) of the ingredients and maybe how it is cooked (in an oven) rather than specific temperatures and times...

WritingMan (talk) 17:36, 1 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for your comments and suggestions. I decide to write on my third topic. I've started drafting my article and added a new part "Department of Precision Instrument" in the Wikipedia topic "Tsinghua University". --Katetwowiki (talk) 06:31, 6 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Maybe I could write on the third topic

Thank you very much for the comments. Maybe I could write on the third topic. --Katetwowiki (talk) 05:41, 6 November 2017 (UTC)[reply]