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Draft moved

Hello, and thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia. This is just a note to let you know that I've moved the draft that you were working on to Draft:Reading pen (device). This has been done because the Draft namespace is the preferred location for Articles for Creation submissions. Please feel free to continue to work on it there. If you have any questions about this, you are welcome to ask me on my talk page. Thank you. Bobby Cohn (talk) 23:28, 4 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Welcome!

Hello, Jennie Jennie 1, and welcome to Wikipedia! Thank you for your contributions.

I noticed that one of the first articles you edited was Draft:Reading pen (device), which appears to be dealing with a topic with which you may have a conflict of interest. In other words, you may find it difficult to write about that topic in a neutral and objective way, because you are, work for, or represent, the subject of that article. Your recent contributions may have already been undone for this very reason.

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September 2024

Hello, Jennie Jennie 1, welcome to Wikipedia and thank you for your contributions. Your editing pattern indicates that you may be using multiple accounts or coordinating editing with people outside Wikipedia, such as Moapalmkvist (talk · contribs). Our policy on multiple accounts usually does not allow this, and users who misuse multiple accounts may be blocked from editing. If you operate multiple accounts directly or with the help of another person, please disclose these connections. Thank you. Wikishovel (talk) 08:11, 5 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Reading pen (device) (September 5)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by KylieTastic was:

This draft's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article. In summary, the draft needs multiple published sources that are:

in-depth (not just passing mentions about the subject)
reliable
secondary
independent of the subject

Make sure you add references that meet these criteria before resubmitting. Learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue. If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Clearly just marketing for the not yet available to buy device from readioo. (A new company founded in 2024, website registered April 2024). The "Social and educational impact" section is about vaguely related topics like Screen time. The lead and "Technology" section are unsourced and specific to the readioo. The lead is misleading as it makes it sound like this can work with in a more general way than it does, i.e. it only 'reads' specific books/printed material purchased from the company (currently 1 book and one board for pre-order). Lastly no attempt to actually include existing pen readers such as C-Pen readers.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Reading pen (device) and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
If you do not edit your draft in the next 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
If you need any assistance, or have experienced any untoward behavior associated with this submission, you can ask for help at the Articles for creation help desk, on the reviewer's talk page or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

KylieTastic (talk) 09:28, 5 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, Jennie Jennie 1! Having an article draft declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! KylieTastic (talk) 09:28, 5 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Reading pen (device) (September 5)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Ktkvtsh was:

This draft's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article. In summary, the draft needs multiple published sources that are:

in-depth (not just passing mentions about the subject)
reliable
secondary
independent of the subject

Make sure you add references that meet these criteria before resubmitting. Learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue. If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Reading pen (device) and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
If you do not edit your draft in the next 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
If you need any assistance, or have experienced any untoward behavior associated with this submission, you can ask for help at the Articles for creation help desk, on the reviewer's talk page or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

Ktkvtsh (talk) 18:59, 5 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hi, would you mind to mention the specific parts where I could improve on? For example, the comment left by the reviewer KylieTastic was helpful. Jennie Jennie 1 (talk) 19:09, 5 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Reading pen (device) (September 5)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by OhHaiMark was:

The content of this submission includes material that does not meet Wikipedia's minimum standard for inline citations. Please cite your sources using footnotes. For instructions on how to do this, please see Referencing for beginners. Thank you.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Reading pen (device) and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
If you do not edit your draft in the next 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
If you need any assistance, or have experienced any untoward behavior associated with this submission, you can ask for help at the Articles for creation help desk, on the reviewer's talk page or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

OhHaiMark (talk) 19:58, 5 September 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Reading pen (device) (October 18)

Your recent article submission has been rejected and cannot be resubmitted. If you have further questions, you can ask at the Articles for creation help desk or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help. The reason left by Tavantius was: This submission is contrary to the purpose of Wikipedia. The comment the reviewer left was: Little improvement since prior decline, and research by KylieTastic reveals this is just blatant marketing. Hence me rejecting it.

Tavantius (talk) 17:29, 18 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

paid editing

As previously advised, your edits give the impression you have a financial stake in promoting a topic, but you have not complied with Wikipedia's mandatory paid editing disclosure requirements. You were asked to cease editing until you responded by either stating that you are not being directly or indirectly compensated for your edits, or by complying with the mandatory requirements under the Wikimedia Terms of Use that you disclose your employer, client and affiliation. Again, you can post such a disclosure on your user page at User:Jennie Jennie 1, and the template {{Paid}} can be used for this purpose – e.g. in the form: {{paid|user=Jennie Jennie 1|employer=InsertName|client=InsertName}}. Please respond before making any other edits to Wikipedia. Theroadislong (talk) 19:30, 22 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hi, I confirm that I am not being directly or indirectly compensated for my edits. I am just a PhD students interested in such reading pen device that can help promote children's mental wellbeing and language development, so the purpose is to let the wide audience get to know such device. Jennie Jennie 1 (talk) 19:39, 22 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I'm afraid that "purpose is to let the wide audience get to know such device" is not a valid criteria for adding a topic to Wikipedia. Theroadislong (talk) 20:28, 22 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]