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Your submission at Articles for creation: Huang Dejian (May 17)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by RPSkokie was:

This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

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RPSkokie (talk) 16:49, 17 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, HollyNaylor! Having an article draft declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! RPSkokie (talk) 16:49, 17 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Draft:Huang Dejian

Just to let you know, I have started a copyedit of Draft:Huang Dejian, which you have significantly contributed to. My edits will predominantly be focused on removing any peacock terms and cleaning up the article to meet the standards outlined in the Manual of Style.

There's still some cleaning up required on this article, but I have made a start on it.

Regards, ContributeToTheWiki (talk) 17:12, 18 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Huang Dejian (May 23)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by CurryTime7-24 were:

This submission is not suitable for Wikipedia. Please read 'What Wikipedia is not' for more information.

This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Unacceptable according to WP:NOTCV and WP:PROMO.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

If you would like to continue working on the submission, go to Draft:Huang Dejian and click on the "Edit" tab at the top of the window.
If you do not edit your draft in the next 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
If you need any assistance, or have experienced any untoward behavior associated with this submission, you can ask for help at the Articles for creation help desk, on the reviewer's talk page or use Wikipedia's real-time chat help from experienced editors.

CurryTime7-24 (talk) 00:35, 23 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]

AfC notification: Draft:Huang Dejian has a new comment

I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Huang Dejian. Thanks! Theroadislong (talk) 06:39, 24 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Theroadislong thank you for your feedback, this is much appreciated. Please may I ask if there is any other part of the submission which may be unacceptable to Wikipedia? I have checked the guidelines thoroughly but any other feedback would be most helpful. HollyNaylor (talk) 08:37, 24 May 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Huang Dejian (October 6)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Johannes Maximilian was:

Please remove the external links from the body.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

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Johannes (Talk) (Contribs) (Articles) 20:03, 6 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Huang Dejian (October 24)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Theroadislong was:

This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines on the notability of people). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

The comment the reviewer left was:

largely unsourced, where did the content come from?

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

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If you do not edit your draft in the next 6 months, it will be considered abandoned and may be deleted.
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Theroadislong (talk) 15:21, 24 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Concern regarding Draft:Huang Dejian

Hello, HollyNaylor. This is a bot-delivered message letting you know that Draft:Huang Dejian, a page you created, has not been edited in at least 5 months. Drafts that have not been edited for six months may be deleted, so if you wish to retain the page, please edit it again or request that it be moved to your userspace.

If the page has already been deleted, you can request it be undeleted so you can continue working on it.

Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. FireflyBot (talk) 16:05, 25 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]