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I added more reference. Can you please verify now?

Hi I added more reference. Can you please help me to improve the article. I need to add the picture with bio. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Ponraj_Vellaichamy — Preceding unsigned comment added by Vijay.manivel (talk • contribs) 15:24, 19 August 2015 (UTC)

Hello! Thanks for getting back to me. If you have a free license photo, go here. Make sure you provide evidence the subject either passes WP:GNG or WP:PROF. Regards, FoCuS contribs; talk to me! 16:10, 19 August 2015 (UTC)

Hi I made the changes. Can you please verify and let me know? Thanks for all the help. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Vijay.manivel (talk • contribs) 19:56, 19 August 2015 (UTC)

I need to assess the references (I'll do so shortly). Could you provide the name of any of the studies he's published so that I can find him more easily? FoCuS contribs; talk to me! 20:05, 19 August 2015 (UTC)

Hello! I don't have much papers. But I searched in google and found. Please search V. Ponraj. He is doing the research also in "Affordable healthcare in India". Prospects and Potential of Jatropha curcas for biodiesel production: https://books.google.com/books?id=5ALjQDcrzBQC&pg=PA181&lpg=PA181&dq=V.+Ponraj+research+studies&source=bl&ots=Y5H4o8z8WI&sig=CZ-b32Amk43sK93ry5Kcu3fpCdQ&hl=en&sa=X&ved=0CEsQ6AEwBzgKahUKEwjkvu6O_7XHAhXF1YAKHZNkAA0#v=onepage&q=V.%20Ponraj%20research%20studies&f=false

International Workshop on African Research & Education Networking, September 25-27 2005 CERN - Geneva, Switzerland - PLEASE SEARCH V.PONRAJ http://event-africa-networking.web.cern.ch/event-africa-networking/program.html

Papers(PLEASE SEARCH V.PONRAJ): http://event-africa-networking.web.cern.ch/event-africa-networking/workshop/slides/Pan-African-network-Brief-summary.pdf http://www.worldagroforestry.org/downloads/Publications/PDFS/WP15396.pdf

Vijay.manivel (talk) 20:57, 19 August 2015 (UTC)

I can't find enough sources about him. Seems to fail both WP:GNG and WP:PROF. FoCuS contribs; talk to me! 21:48, 19 August 2015 (UTC)

Hello! Can you tell me exactly what I need to produce?

Vijay.manivel (talk) 00:26, 20 August 2015 (UTC)

I did, twice. Extensive coverage in independent and reliable sources, or evidence he passes any of the criteria here. FoCuS contribs; talk to me! 01:47, 20 August 2015 (UTC)

Hi! Until i get all the academic sources, can i remove or comment those items and open for review?

Vijay.manivel (talk) 13:27, 20 August 2015 (UTC)

I don't understand your question. The article is currently a draft awaiting reviewal. Please be aware the submission's language must be neutral. Cheers, FoCuS contribs; talk to me! 13:29, 20 August 2015 (UTC)

Please check the draft now? Let me know. I send an email to Mr. Ponraj regarding more original sournce for his academis. I want to move forward and later i will add additional content.

Vijay.manivel (talk) 13:34, 20 August 2015 (UTC)

I don't think you understand what the problem is. The quality of the "sources" you've provided is severely deficient. There simply is no evidence he either passes WP:GNG or WP:PROF. The links you've provided are of publications which he edited or collaborated with in some minor role, and which are not widely cited in the field. We do not need more links to what he's written. We need to know why he passes any of the criteria listed on WP:PROF (I highly recommend you read this guideline so that we can have a serious discussion and I have no need to keep repeating this over and over again), or otherwise any evidence there are extensive independent sources that discuss his notability explicitly. Best, FoCuS contribs; talk to me! 14:31, 20 August 2015 (UTC)

Thank you! Vijay.manivel (talk) 13:52, 21 August 2015 (UTC)

Foundry United Methodist Church

As noted, my draft submission on Foundry United Methodist Church was rejected. I cannot find the draft anywhere on Wikipedia for revision. I did not save a copy of the draft. Can you please tell me where I can locate it?

Thanks, Stan Wellborn — Preceding unsigned comment added by Stan Wellborn (talk • contribs) 15:19, 21 August 2015 (UTC)

The draft was deleted because it was a copyright violation. Contact Jimfbleak to obtain the rest of the text. Regards, FoCuS contribs; talk to me! 16:08, 21 August 2015 (UTC)

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Alex Gilbert

Thanks for your comment!

I have added 2 new sources I have found for Draft:Alex Gilbert. Please look at these-

Thank You! Dmitry --DmitryPopovRU (talk) 06:22, 22 August 2015 (UTC)

12:11:47, 22 August 2015 review of submission by JW106


Hi FoCuSandLeArN Thanks for offering to help me out! Please could you tell me the reasons my Trevor Gray page has been declined again in detail as I'm still confused.

I'm wondering if it's because...: Sources are too list-orientated - discogs etc Too focused on 'apollo 440' references

Apollo 440 are obviously 'notable' artists but I'm wondering why the other founding members - Howard Gray and Noko (his sources are a joke!) - are OK having their own pages but not Trevor? Also note Paul Kodish's wiki page as the drummer of Apollo 440 where again the sources are few and list-orientated. Other musicians that have their own pages include Kirk Whalum who played sax on a Whitney Houston track but has NO sources on his page! So no verification! I'm just amazed Trevor Gray doesn't qualify if these pages exist!

Thanks for your help James JW106 (talk) 12:11, 22 August 2015 (UTC)

That other stuff exists is not a valid argument; we have almost 5 million articles and only a few thousand active editors. Articles that need cleanup and face possible deletion are sometimes not attended to in a timely fashion. As for your particular case, we need extensive coverage from independent and reliable sources about him, not about the band. If you think he passes our WP:MUSIC or WP:GNG guidelines himself, then you need to provide edivence he does, otherwise the contents should remain in the band's article. FoCuS contribs; talk to me! 15:30, 22 August 2015 (UTC)

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Draft: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Sypro_Management_Limited

Hi FoCuSandLeArN,

My article was rejected on account of the inadequate reliability of the references.

However, included are three established newspapers and three industry-leading publications?

Would there be any way to reconsider this decision?

Kind regards — Preceding unsigned comment added by 77.86.86.38 (talk) 08:36, 24 August 2015 (UTC)

You're on the right track. Per WP:GNG, we require extensive coverage from independent and reliable sources to establish the company's notability. My assessment was that the sources provided did not constitute strong enough evidence to establish this company's notability. The publications appear to be minor and local. If you can garner enough good references to improve the submission please resubmit when ready. Best, FoCuS contribs; talk to me! 17:52, 24 August 2015 (UTC)

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draft Krov Menuhin

Hi you left a comment on the above article. Thank you for looking this over. Do I need to add more citations? KarenMenuhin (talk) 01:17, 22 August 2015 (UTC)

You need to provide evidence he passes our notability guidelines, via extensive coverage in independent and reliable sources. I couldn't find any myself. FoCuS contribs; talk to me! 15:32, 22 August 2015 (UTC)

Have you checked the citations? His films were shown by BBC, ITV, Channel 4, PBS, TF1. These are documented and available through the program archives.KarenMenuhin (talk) 01:48, 25 August 2015 (UTC) There is evidence in archives, internet, books and journals. I have used many but not all in the citations. Could you clarify what more is required please?KarenMenuhin (talk) 14:30, 27 August 2015 (UTC)

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Draft:George Bryan Polivka

Hi. I was reviewing this draft and I saw your note. Did you see the Emmy Award in 1986? I was going to approve it, but then saw your note, and thought I might be missing something, am I? Onel5969 TT me 22:24, 24 August 2015 (UTC)

Hey there, @Onel5969:! If you found that ref, then go right ahead. I just made a cursory search and couldn't find anything solid. Regards, FoCuS contribs; talk to me! 15:46, 25 August 2015 (UTC)

Beck

Hi! I'm not sure I'm writing this in the right place, but I got your message on my draft page (about John C. Beck) and I would love your help. I'm Erikamaren. Thanks! Erikamaren (talk) 23:37, 24 August 2015 (UTC)

Hello there! The article needs a copy edit, but it won't be hard. I'll ping you here when ready to do so. Best, FoCuS contribs; talk to me! 15:46, 25 August 2015 (UTC)

Re: Draft:Svetlozar_Rachev

Yes, https://scholar.google.com.uy/citations?user=q_cJmxkAAAAJ&hl=en&oi=ao is the Google Scholar profile of the same person. I included a link to this page in a previous draft but it was rejected. I removed the link in the current revision to be on the safe side because I was not sure if such references are allowed; I am new to creating articles in Wikipedia. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Stoyanvs (talk • contribs) 13:12, 25 August 2015 (UTC)

Thank you. He certainly passes WP:PROF. I'll copy edit this soon. Regards, FoCuS contribs; talk to me! 15:53, 25 August 2015 (UTC)

The name of an article

How can I change the name of an article and thanks. Mostafa Elsherbini (talk) 14:30, 25 August 2015 (UTC)

@Mostafa Elsherbini: Tell me which page you're talking about, please. FoCuS contribs; talk to me! 15:52, 25 August 2015 (UTC)

TLC: Tables, Ladders and Chairs (2014) to TLC: Tables, Ladders, Chairs and Stairs (2014) & Vengeance: Night of Champions to Vengeans Night of Champions (2007)

I'm afraid I can't fulfill any of those requests, given all the other Tables, Ladders and Chairs events are not listed as you want them to be; and the Vengeance event only occured that one time under that denomination, and so would not need the 2007 disambiguation. You could start two requested move discussions so that the bunch are changed, but you'd have to provide proper arguments for your request. Best, FoCuS contribs; talk to me! 16:09, 25 August 2015 (UTC)

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Broken Hill mining strike

Thank you for your edits, but to add articles to a stub category, you need to use a template such as {{mining-stub}} rather than writing it out ([[Category:Mining stubs]]) as with other categories, because stub categories are a maintenance rather than a mainspace category. Thanks, Rubbish computer 22:58, 26 August 2015 (UTC) Rubbish computer 22:58, 26 August 2015 (UTC)

@Rubbish computer: Thanks for pointing it out; I added the auto-filled cat through the AfC Helper Script, so honest mistake! Cheers, FoCuS contribs; talk to me! 23:02, 26 August 2015 (UTC)
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Draft Krov Menuhin

thank you for your help. You asked for evidence, there is evidence in BBC and US govt. archives, BBC genome project, books, journals and the internet. I have cited many but not all. What more evidence do you think is required please?KarenMenuhin (talk) 14:32, 27 August 2015 (UTC)

The more quality references you could provide, the better. The article is currently awaiting reviewal. Best, FoCuS contribs; talk to me! 14:38, 27 August 2015 (UTC)


Help, review

Hi, I've translated Chiesa di San Bartolomeo from italian wikipedia. Can you review my draft? Saint Bartholomew, Brugherio. Can you use as link Saint Bartholomew, Brugherio to publish it? Thank you for your support. FrOsmetti (talk) 15:47, 19 August 2015 (UTC)

Hello again! Thank you for letting me know. I'd be glad to review it and move it to mainspace when done (most likely later today). Ciao, FoCuS contribs; talk to me! 16:10, 19 August 2015 (UTC)

I've also translated to review:

Thanks again for your review. FrOsmetti (talk) 07:30, 21 August 2015 (UTC)

Re:Chiesa

  • In the italian article also there are some problems about this part. At the beginning, it was decided to include the farmhouses but at the end they were excluded. Maybe, it's better write "At first he wanted to include in the new church's borderline some farmhouses as Cascina de' Bastoni with the oratory of Maria Nascente, S. Cristoforo of Ottavo, S. Damiano, Sant'Albino, Sant'Ambrogio and S. Donato but at the end he decided to exclude from the property Cascina Bastoni, Cascina Sant'Albino, Cascina San Donato and Cascina S. Damiano".
  • "in 400° anniversary of the parish's translation" means that the copy of the ancient shrine of the seventeenth century was made to celebrate the 400th year of the translation of the relics of the Three Magis in the new church.
  • it refers to the Church of Saint Ambrose in Brugherio, which I'm going to translate, it is in draft Saint Ambrose, Brugherio

Also, I have a question about translation. Between the translation of Saint Lucius and this draft of Saint Bartholomew, which is the best one? In the first one I've translated by myself and in the second one I've also used google translate (as they suggest me). Do you think it's better to use it or not? Thanks! FrOsmetti (talk) 08:29, 20 August 2015 (UTC)

Thank you for your prompt answer. I think I understand what you were trying to say a bit better. I'll continue copy editing today. As for your question, I think Saint Lucius reads somewhat better. GTranslate is good for a big picture, as a sort of guide, but shouldn't be copied verbatim, rather improved upon. I see you've started on Sant'Ambrogio as well; that's fast! Best, FoCuS contribs; talk to me! 13:17, 21 August 2015 (UTC)
  • @FrOsmetti: I've moved the first, and will review the second this coming weekend. Let me know what you think. I have another question: was the facade done by Giacomo Moraglia or by Sorteni copying Moraglia's style? Oh, and just so you know, any punctuation goes before ref tags on Wikipedia. Cheers, FoCuS contribs; talk to me! 17:51, 21 August 2015 (UTC)
  • Now the facade is the one made by Sorteni because they had to take down it. However, the only element, that is different from the one desinged by Moraglia, is a lunette that replace a painting of the Magi.

Thank you again for your review, I'm using differences between the article and the draft to improve the translation. Although, I think the link for italian wikipedia is missing Chiesa di San Bartolomeo (Brugherio). FrOsmetti (talk) 07:38, 22 August 2015 (UTC)

  • Pope Lucius refers to Pope Lucius I. FrOsmetti (talk) 09:16, 27 August 2015 (UTC)
  • I've changed in Saint'Ambrose article:
    • pagi that wasn't a dialect word but a latin one from pagus,
    • the Emperor refers to Frederick I, Holy Roman Emperor,
    • Ville Aperte isn't a government program but a project of Monza and Brianza province to promote artistic elements of the province,
    • Salus mundi is the name of the cross inside the oval in the tympanum,
    • "cloves blue starry ribs" stands for "blue sky with gold stars" that I've already changed,
    • in "glimpses which were undermining the plaster" there was a spelling mistake "pilaster",
    • "shovel on the altar" means altarpiece, I've already changed,
    • If there are not other problems or questions the article is ready to be moved

Thanks! FrOsmetti (talk) 10:00, 27 August 2015 (UTC)

Thank you, FrOsmetti; I've moved the article. Whenever you have other ones to review, let me know! FoCuS contribs; talk to me! 14:37, 27 August 2015 (UTC)

New articles in need of a review

Thanks again for your help. FrOsmetti (talk) 16:06, 27 August 2015 (UTC)

Oh, wow; you sure don't waste time! Ha ha, I'll get right on those! FoCuS contribs; talk to me! 17:45, 27 August 2015 (UTC)

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Schuman

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Carmen A. Puliafito - Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Carmen_A._Puliafito Wikipedia Carmen A. Puliafito is an American ophthalmologist. He specializes in retinal disease. Since 2007 he has been dean of the Keck School of Medicine of the ...

When you "Google" Dr. Schuman's name, there is no Wikipedia entry to be found. This is the first time we have ever worked on creating something in Wikipedia and I must say it has been a very long, drawn-out, and confusing process. Would you please provide some assistance and clarity in this process. Thank you.

Lori Ann Young youngla@upmc.edu Wallyl22 14:14, 31 August 2015 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Wallyl22 (talk • contribs)

Hello there Wallyl22. The article has been accepted by myself and is currently located at Joel S. Schuman. As for Google, that's because it takes a while for them to cache the Wikipedia article and present it in search results given it is newly created. It will be available in the near future, but its placement on search results is completely up to Google's algorithms to determine. On another note, now that you've declared your conflict of interest, please try not to edit the article yourself, but request edits subject to review on its talk page, or at Wikipedia:Edit requests. Regards, FoCuS contribs; talk to me! 16:34, 31 August 2015 (UTC)

23:35:44, 31 August 2015 review of submission by Sleaver2


Hello there. I would just like to inquire what exactly is missing from the citations. As can be seen, multiple articles and websites completely independent of the subject are included in the references including multiple from Canada's largest national newspaper, The National Post. I feel the precedent set by other author pages does not require more than this. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Tom_Dolby https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Tessa_Duder

There were only two references linked directly to her site which are now removed.

I fail to see how National Newspaper coverage and many independent articles about an award winning, internationally published author fail to be approved.

Please advise.

Thanks for your help! Sleaver2 (talk) 23:35, 31 August 2015 (UTC)

Hello. For someone to satisfy WP:GNG, they require to possess extensive coverage in independent and reliable sources. I'm happy with the National Post one, but the rest I don't reckon cut the mark. Furthermore, she doesn't seem to satisfy WP:AUTHOR. Cheers, FoCuS contribs; talk to me! 23:59, 31 August 2015 (UTC)

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Hello Thank you for your comments I have recently submitted an article about John Burgess, and it has been declined due to not proving notability and needing more references Would you please help me to rectify these issues Thank you. lauraFrankum62 (talk) 22:43, 1 September 2015 (UTC)

Hello there. I did provide a helpful comment on your submission indicating possible references that could be added. I don't consider myself entirely competent in assessing a record producer's notability, however I can advise you to provide extensive coverage (that which is exclusively about the subject) from independent and reliable sources. As for the decline rationale, you should talk to LaMona. Regards, FoCuS contribs; talk to me! 23:00, 1 September 2015 (UTC)

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I am asking does Phil need more citations? Judging by other Wikipedia biographies, there are very few people that have more qualifications the Phil Steel.

Rather than more citations, good quality ones. We require, per our most basic notability guideline that you provide extensive coverage from independent and reliable sources. He doesn't seem to satisfy any of the criteria at WP:ARTIST either. Best, FoCuS contribs; talk to me! 18:33, 4 September 2015 (UTC)

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I removed the deeds to my father. Can you approve? https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Paul_David_Pope

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Gerald Schwarz submission

Hello. I was directed to this pages, but I don't know what you're looking for/needs to be done to satisfy the submission. It appears that the comments are directed toward a different article. Can you be more specific? Thank you! KravitzSchwarz (talk) 19:52, 8 September 2015 (UTC)

There's nothing you need to do. I'll copy edit the article myself shortly. Best, FoCuS contribs; talk to me! 22:34, 8 September 2015 (UTC)

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I have declined the speedy for that redirect. The Draft:Ischemic Cardiomyopathy was declined on 4 September and has not yet been resubmitted. It would have to be approved before it could be moved. CambridgeBayWeather, Uqaqtuq (talk), Sunasuttuq 23:40, 9 September 2015 (UTC)

CambridgeBayWeather That's exactly why I asked for the speedy. The AfC helper script can't accept the submission unless the page is deleted. I've just resubmitted it as a formality. Thank you, FoCuS contribs; talk to me! 23:46, 9 September 2015 (UTC)
OK. CambridgeBayWeather, Uqaqtuq (talk), Sunasuttuq 23:52, 9 September 2015 (UTC)
CambridgeBayWeather Submitted again. Appreciated, FoCuS contribs; talk to me! 23:56, 9 September 2015 (UTC)

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The message is in response to your comment that Brenda Elaine Stevenson does not meet the WP:PROF standards. According to the Wikipedia:Notability (academics) page, Stevenson must meet one of the following conditions. I have briefly addressed how she is qualified in at least six of those categories below:


1. The person's research has made significant impact in their scholarly discipline, broadly construed, as demonstrated by independent reliable sources. She has contributed to the field of slave studies and racial conflict studies. For example, she was the first scholar who contested that slave families were of a nuclear and male-headed structure within American slavery. She also was the first historian to publish a book about the lesser-known gendered influence that initiated of the 1992 riots of Los Angeles.

2. The person has received a highly prestigious academic award or honor at a national or international level. Stevenson has been distinguished for awards on both national and international levels. For example, she has received the Berlin Prize from the American Academy in Berlin; the Ida B. Wells Award for Bravery in Journalism from Women’s Enews; the UCLA Gold Shield Faculty Award; the Organization of American Historians, James A. Rawley Prize, Best Book on the History of Race Relations in the U.S; Gustavus Myers Outstanding Book Prize, amongst many other fellowships.

3. The person is or has been an elected member of a highly selective and prestigious scholarly society or association (e.g., a National Academy of Sciences or the Royal Society) or a fellow of a major scholarly society for which that is a highly selective honor (e.g., the IEEE).

She is a fellow of Gilder Lehrman, National Humanities Center, Center for Advanced Study and Behavioral Sciences, the Smithsonian Institute, Virginia Foundation for the Humanities and Public Policy, and UCLA.

4. The person's academic work has made a significant impact in the area of higher education, affecting a substantial number of academic institutions. 5. The person holds or has held a named chair appointment or distinguished professor appointment at a major institution of higher education and research (or an equivalent position in countries where named chairs are uncommon). She has been chair of both the History Department and Afro-American Studies at UCLA.

6. The person has held a highest-level elected or appointed academic post at a major academic institution or major academic society. 7. The person has made substantial impact outside academia in their academic capacity. She has been on numerous public radio stations, such as KCRW (Los Angeles), and feminist blogs, such as UnitedWomen.org and Cross-Generational Dialogues in Black Women's History, as an interviewee for her expertise in race relations and American history.

8. The person is or has been the head or chief editor of a major, well-established academic journal in their subject area. She is an editor of the Black Studies Journal and The Journal of African American History.

9. The person is in a field of literature (e.g., writer or poet) or the fine arts (e.g., musician, composer, artist), and meets the standards for notability in that art, such as WP:CREATIVE or WP:MUSIC.

I ask that you please reconsider publishing the article on Brenda Elaine Stevenson. If not, can you please provide me with feedback as to why she does not qualify, or give me some specific suggestions on how the article can be rewritten to meet the notability standards.

Thank you for your time and consideration.

Sincerely, ResearchAssistant952 — Preceding unsigned comment added by ResearchAssistant952 (talk • contribs) 02:21, 16 September 2015 (UTC)

Hello, ResearchAssistant952! I've posted your comments on the submission's talk page, so that future reviewers can assess them adequately. I cannot take care of this right now, but I'll pop in a few days from now to check on the draft if I can. Best, FoCuS contribs; talk to me! 19:33, 16 September 2015 (UTC)
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