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Alexander Kemper

Hi EBY3221. Thanks for your feedback earlier on this page. I've taken your advice regarding fixing the first sentence but am wondering if you can expand on your comments regarding the ref formatting - what specifically needs improvement?

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Alexander_Kemper

Many thanks — Preceding unsigned comment added by PeterJohnson22 (talk • contribs) 19:34, 22 January 2015 (UTC)

Yash Aradhya

Hi EBY3221,

Thanks for your timely review and response.

As per your suggestions I have made the following changes on the page:

1. Citation - 7 new citation including citations from leading newspapers like Times of India (Owned Bennett & Coleman). 2. Increased Content in Introduction 3. Images are cropped according to specifications 4. Right side column information updated

Also I have a large database of Hard copy of articles in leading newspapers and magazines, is there anyway I could submit them as well?

I would be glad if you could review the page and let me know of any other changes that has to be done before submission. Link : https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Yash_Aradhya

Thanks for your help. Khizer91 (talk) 09:03, 2 February 2015 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Khizer91 (talk • contribs) 12:16, 22 January 2015 (UTC)

Alexander Kemper

Hi EBY3221. Wondering if you could give a quick review to this page, as it is very brief. Many thanks in advance. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Alexander_Kemper

Ronnie Dell

I edited the Ronnie Dell entry with facetious stuff because I am convinced he exists only fictionally in the play/film "Grease." I'll leave it to wiki wonks to make a "constructive" correction. The contents of the Ronnie Dell entry are absurd. The cited references do not exist. I abdicate my self-appointed duty to protest nonsense with more over-the-top nonsense. Thank you for being serious about keeping Wikipedia serious. (I mean that without sarcasm; writing cannot carry my true tone.) I value Wikipedia as a resource. Thanks again.

Alleging Content to be Tendentious

I am certain your recent post to my talk page was not intended to express a certain amount of hubris on your part, so I'll presume you mean this with all good intentions. Kindly focus your constructive edits, not the long history we've had with going back and forth on deletions of my work. I'm open to hearing an opinion, I don't assert or presume ownership of any Wikipedia page. That's a comment out of left field. I'll restore the content and provide appropriate citation as you've got a real stickler on this subject of my work and for some reason you're focused on removing all the hard work that I do. Why? I don't know. I will presume there is some reason or agenda that I'm unaware of...but in the meantime, please know that I am within my rights as you are to post content and edit it.

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Avaya

Avaya is head quartered in CA, it is a fact: http://www.avaya.com/usa/documents/mis20771210.pdf

I suggest you check the facts before you revert other peoples edits.

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John Crouch

Did you mean to put the comment on the AfD page rather than the talk page?Peter Rehse (talk) 15:16, 28 October 2014 (UTC)

• Yep. Thanks. EBY (talk) 15:34, 28 October 2014 (UTC)

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• Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus - Done. Cheers, EBY (talk) 04:29, 3 November 2014 (UTC)

RfD:Lance Wigwam or something

You did the right thing to list it, and even better to admit a mistake (so few do). Don't worry, it's sorted. Your humble gnome, Si Trew (talk) 23:26, 5 November 2014 (UTC)

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Probate

I deleted your citation that referenced a self-published book because I don't believe that it qualified as a reliable source. [I'm about to raise the question at WP:citing sources talk page.
However I also wrote 'possible conflict of interest' which, given your editing history, is most unlikely. Therefore I withdraw and apologise for that remark. --John Maynard Friedman (talk) 23:29, 12 November 2014 (UTC)

@John Maynard Friedman: I appreciate that. EBY (talk) 00:44, 13 November 2014 (UTC)

Just for completion, my attention has been drawn to WP:SELFPUBLISH, which is the relevant policy here. If the author of the self-published book is notable, then you should undo my deletion. --John Maynard Friedman (talk) 23:33, 15 November 2014 (UTC)

@John Maynard Friedman: I was just flying through and didn't double check if it was self-published (It was from Amazon, from another thing I was researching.) I will say that Probate article is egregiously written and looks like a "WikiHow" instruction. Appreciate the catch. And the comment. EBY (talk) 00:54, 16 November 2014 (UTC)

Yes, I agree - it needs the attention of an expert - or even a good editor: your little clean-up was just the sort of tonic it needs a lot more of. It also has a history of spam links, which is why I was so trigger happy. --John Maynard Friedman (talk) 23:00, 16 November 2014 (UTC)

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Hello, thanks for reviewing my page. I realize that the page has been deleted but I had been trying to get approval for this page close to six months now, I must confess it has taken much longer than I anticipated and unsure about the copyrighted information in the last draft. I need your advice and assistance to get the next submission to meet all terms and conditions for approval. Thank you in advance}}

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Draft:Richard Banks (banker)

Thanks for your review of Draft:Richard Banks (banker). I have added some more recent information as requested - would you mind having a look now and seeing whether it is ok to be moved into the main workspace? Many thanks AndrewRT(Talk) 21:24, 19 November 2014 (UTC)

Many thanks AndrewRT(Talk) 21:54, 19 November 2014 (UTC)

AndrewRT No problem. EBY (talk) 05:34, 20 November 2014 (UTC)

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Thank you so much for writing back EBY. Fact is, the profile being created is different from the creator(being me), which I realised too late it will appear as conflict of interest. I went with the name of the profile to avoid confusion when its eventually approved. I am new at writing profiles on wiki and probably have not sufficiently mastered the art. I am learning from this experience and hope to become an editor as well(thanks for sharing the link to editing other pages). 

I might write again if I am encounter problems either requesting an article or otherwise.

Thank you, you have really been helpful.

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Ndidi Okonkwo Nwuneli You're welcome, good luck. EBY (talk) 19:02, 20 November 2014 (UTC)

Roy Watling

Hello,

Just would like some more clarification about why you have flagged the post for deletion. I have been over the 'Biographies of living people' section, and purposely left out most personal information regarding Dr. Watling. The information I have provided has mostly (22/25 references) been edited and published in peer review scientific journals.

Thanks

02:16, 21 November 2014 (UTC)

Deletions

Hi EBY, I'm a little concerned that you might be moving too quickly with your deletion nominations, and making some errors in the process. For example, Division of Afghanistan isn't a great article, but it doesn't qualify as A1 - that criterion is specifically limited to cases where you can't tell what the article is about, which wasn't the case here. Similarly, Milly Shapiro was a poorly sourced BLP, but it wasn't spam - indeed, most actor bios we have begin with some variation on "X is an actor best known for the role Y". I would also question some of your AFD nominations. Could you reconsider your approach to deletion tagging, and review the associated criteria? Thanks, Nikkimaria (talk) 16:28, 21 November 2014 (UTC)

Nikkimaria - Thanks for the note. I will say that those actor articles, when they went live, were not sourced and neither actor is over 10 years old. The same new editor made a few of those all at once, it certainly looked like a pattern that overcame WP:AGF. The other article is (a) an essay about (b) something that is not real. There is no current plan within the country to split the country into further divisions. I will nominate it for deletion again unless a source that backs up the claim is submitted. And, frankly, if there is such a plan it then information about it probably should start as part of the TWO current Wikipedia articles about the Subdivisions of Afghanistan and the Provinces of Afghanistan. We disagree what meets criteria, and I can certainly do better at understanding what fits in what boxes, but I appreciate you saying so civilly.EBY (talk) 21:37, 21 November 2014 (UTC)

I think you could make cogent arguments to delete both articles, actually, but the arguments you chose were not the right ones, and probably the way to do that would be either PROD or AFD rather than CSD. That being said, the potential division of Afghanistan is discussed in the literature - see for example this source - so I wouldn't say it isn't real, even if it doesn't end up happening and even if it doesn't merit an independent article at this time. Cheers, Nikkimaria (talk) 00:42, 22 November 2014 (UTC)

Nikkimaria Nope. There is no current plan to further divide Afghanistan, as the essay tense presumes. 2 years ago, some countries pitched some ideas but none on the basis of language. So it is an essay of an article that asserts, with tense, something not true and contains, outright, unsourced and untrue information. I looked at each of those sources before hitting delete and found the essay, as written, to be not only false but possibly politically inflammatory. Not sure if it was original thought, opinion, soapbox, or hoax - definitely WP:FORUM. If the situations were reversed and there was an essay put into Wikipedia article space stating that England was possibly being newly subdivided based on what kind of accent was spoken, based on an Afghani opinion piece from two years ago, how long would that survive? AfD instead of speedily delete, sure. This article? Nope. EBY (talk) 01:04, 22 November 2014 (UTC)

As I said, I think an argument other than A1 could support deletion. By the way, [[Ping|Nikkimaria]] will not result in a notification; try {{ping|Nikkimaria}}. Cheers, Nikkimaria (talk) 16:24, 22 November 2014 (UTC)

Bah. I long ago lamented that errors don't pay. I'd be rich if they did for the amount of times I've inverted brackets, spaces, pipes, colons, etc. I'm old school, type everything longhand and still make the same errors 8 years in. There have to be dinosaurs, so here I am. EBY (talk) 16:31, 22 November 2014 (UTC)

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Use of force law in Missouri

Thank you for your contribution to this new article! Please let me know if I may be of assistance. Djbaniel (talk) 07:17, 25 November 2014 (UTC)

After careful consideration, can you please elaborate on your use of the notability/neologisms tag? Please see my edit summary when I created the article. Djbaniel (talk) 07:30, 25 November 2014 (UTC)

@Djbaniel: - responded on article's talk page. Best of luck, EBY (talk) 07:42, 25 November 2014 (UTC)

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AFC etc

I see you have made several entirely valid comments when reviewing drafts, but have not declined the drafts. There is, of course, nothing wrong with this, since it leaves the draft in place in the queue. However, several days later there has been no action by the author.

If we did not have so many old drafts and a backlog I would be in 100% agreement with your approach. Since we have a backlog, may I suggest you consider a more rigid approach and decline those which really do not pass muster, leaving only the borderline ones with a simple comment? Indeed, with the borderline ones, consider accepting them, flagging the deficiencies, and letting the community decide. Fiddle Faddle 11:22, 27 November 2014 (UTC)

@Timtrent: - this was a case of "I've declined 100 articles in the last week and I just wanted to give a few a chance." Just fatigue from the bloodletting of AfC work. I'll get the scythe back out. EBY (talk) 14:08, 27 November 2014 (UTC)

I so know what you mean. When I get fatigued I just walk away for a while. Had to do that for a few days this week and last. Whet the scythe well :) Fiddle Faddle 16:32, 27 November 2014 (UTC)

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06:42:38, 6 December 2014 review of submission by Jimdoughertyonamission

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Hello. I'm a novice at creating Wikipedia pages but I'm flummoxed as to why Michelle Anthony doesn't meet the threshold of notability necessary for inclusion in Wikipedia. I tried to be exhaustive with references in order to substantiate the content and am afraid that by referencing her content too often I may have given a less than neutral impression about the piece (and it's not entirely inaccurate, I'm a fan of her music).

I would ask you to reconsider this piece with any edits that would maintain the neutrality of the piece. As evidence of her notoriety, I submit that she collaborated with less notable artists and on less notable projects than are already included in Wikipedia, and in the most successful period of her career there was not as much online publishing as there is now. I've found additional links to critiques of her work that no longer exist, which aren't especially helpful in the context of a Wikipedia article but that substantiate her notoriety at the peak of her career.

Would you please help me to properly share this information despite my own shortcomings as a contributor? Jim Dougherty (talk) 06:42, 6 December 2014 (UTC)

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17:12:28, 19 December 2014 review of submission by 87.149.173.208

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For secondary reliable sources independent of the subject see e. g.: References 1 and 5 = Institute for the History and Theory of Architecture of the Swiss Federal Institute of Technology in Zurich. Not a secondary reliable source? (See there.) Reference 2 = The Academy of Architecture of the Università della Svizzera Italiana (University of Lugano). Not a secondary reliable source? (See there or biblio.arch.usi.ch/it/fondi.html) Reference 11 = Archives of the Canton of Aargau in Switzerland. Not a secondary reliable source? (See there.) 87.149.173.208 (talk) 17:12, 19 December 2014 (UTC) Merteuil

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Title (and content) of article: Use of Force Doctrine in Missouri

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Hello. I did some editing of the above article on the Draft page and then, because I thought it was ready to go, I copied it into article space. I'm sorry if this was not the correct way to handle this, but I figured we might as well get the piece out in the open where others can take a look at it. Hope this is OK and that I did not mess up the system too much. Sincerely, GeorgeLouis (talk) 22:55, 14 January 2015 (UTC)

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As this is the first time I am submitting an article on Wikipedia there were few citation errors and reference errors. I have rectified the same and ensured all the citations are from reputed media houses.

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Eric Stover edit

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