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Draft:John Vere Hopgood

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Your submission at Articles for creation: John Vere Hopgood (November 8)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by JMHamo was:

This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.

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JMHamo (talk) 23:21, 8 November 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Hello! Clc136a, I noticed your article was declined at Articles for Creation, and that can be disappointing. If you are wondering or curious about why your article submission was declined please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! JMHamo (talk) 23:21, 8 November 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: John Vere Hopgood (November 10)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by SwisterTwister was:

This seems acceptable but still needs any more sources than the listed five (5). Cheers,

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SwisterTwister talk 08:46, 10 November 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: John Vere Hopgood (November 10)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted because it included copyrighted information, which is not permitted on Wikipedia.

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/wia /tlk 15:43, 10 November 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Copyright information

Hello Clc136a, and welcome to Wikipedia. Your addition to Draft:John Vere Hopgood has had to be removed, as it appears to have added copyrighted material without permission from the copyright holder. While we appreciate your contributing to Wikipedia, there are certain things you must keep in mind about using information from your sources to avoid copyright or plagiarism issues here.

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Your submission at Articles for creation: John Vere Hopgood (November 13)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by SwisterTwister was:

This submission's references do not adequately show the subject's notability—see the guidelines on the notability of people and the golden rule. Please improve the submission's referencing, so that the information is verifiable, and there is clear evidence of why the subject is notable and worthy of inclusion in an encyclopedia.
What you can do: Add citations (see Wikipedia:Referencing for beginners) to secondary reliable sources that are entirely independent of the subject.

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SwisterTwister talk 06:51, 13 November 2015 (UTC)[reply]

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Your submission at Articles for creation: John Vere Hopgood (December 3)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Robert McClenon was:

This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.

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Robert McClenon (talk) 19:47, 3 December 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: John Vere Hopgood (January 24)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Onel5969 was:

This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.

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Onel5969 ^{TT me} 13:09, 24 January 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: John Vere Hopgood (January 26)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by RadioFan was:

This reads more like a resume or bulleted list of accomplishments than an encyclopedia article. Please focus on writing prose based on the references youve located and less of the lists.

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RadioFan (talk) 01:43, 26 January 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: John Vere Hopgood (February 25)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by LaMona was:

This sounds like a laudatory biography written by a loving family member. Things like "Attending Lanesborough Prep School, Guildford from 1930-1934, John V. Hopgood already showed his competitive and determined nature" "prepared him seamlessly for squadron life" are not encyclopedic. The article must consist of facts, not suppositions or interpretations, and only the facts that are relevant to the person's notability. This has now been declined 8 times. I would suggest finding someone, perhaps via TeaHouse, who can turn this into an encyclopedia article. Once that is done, however, there is no guarantee that this article will meet WP's notability criteria. (It's hard to tell from what is here.)

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LaMona (talk) 07:41, 25 February 2016 (UTC)[reply]