Template:Did you know nominations/Nina Tonga

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 11:05, 14 July 2023 (UTC)

Nina Tonga

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... that Nina Tonga wanted to be a curator to represent Tongan people in the canons of art history? Source: https://www.auckland.ac.nz/en/alumni/our-alumni/40-under-40/a-z-list-of-profiles/nina-tonga.html
ALT 1 ... that Nina Tonga has Tongan heritage and wanted to be a curator to "write ourselves into the art history of Aotearoa"?
ALT 2 ... that curator Nina Tonga has Tongan heritage and is the first Pasifika person be a contemporary art curator at Te Papa, the national museum of New Zealand?
ALT 3 ... that curator Nina Tonga is the first Pasifika person be a contemporary art curator at Te Papa, the national museum of New Zealand?

- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Indigo Swing
- Comment: I reviewed ages ago, so I think I am in 'credit'.

Created by Pakoire (talk). Self-nominated at 10:07, 11 June 2023 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Nina Tonga; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.

Date, length checks out. I'll assume AGF on the past QPQ. But the hook doesn't correspond to any specific sentence in the article, at least not in an obvious way. 'Canon' isn't mentioned in the article. I'd suggest a reword for ALT hook. --Soman (talk) 18:54, 11 June 2023 (UTC)

There's no need to AGF, Soman, but what you do is open the old review and click on "What links here". If it's been used before as a QPQ, a link to the respective DYK nomination page would show up in that list. The only link that shows in that list is to this nomination so it's all good. Schwede 66 07:48, 19 June 2023 (UTC)

Thanks for your comments - I am rusty at DYKs. I have added some ALT's for feedaback. Pakoire (talk) 00:40, 12 June 2023 (UTC)

tick, hooks ok, albeit ALT2 and ALT3 would need a comma after Te Papa. --Soman (talk) 20:24, 7 July 2023 (UTC)

Comma's added. Maybe ALT 3 as its shorter?

Ok, let's go for ALT3 --Soman (talk) 15:40, 9 July 2023 (UTC)