Template:Did you know nominations/Ferrari 250 GT Lusso

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The result was: rejected by EncycloPetey (talk) 04:28, 23 December 2011 (UTC)

Ferrari 250 GT Lusso

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... that Ferrari 250 GT Lusso (pictured) is considered one of the most elegant models of Ferrari?

Created/expanded by Vibhijain (talk). Self nom at 09:25, 4 December 2011 (UTC)

I don't think it is ready for prime-time yet as some of the translation is a little unpolished. --Biker Biker (talk) 19:20, 5 December 2011 (UTC)

I have to agree, there is a lot of grammar which I cannot parse, like this bit in the LEAD: "With larger variation and being more luxurious". This is a bit sad, because the basic content is great, and the images are fantastic!. If the author (Vibhijain?) would like, I'd be happy to edit it with them. Maury Markowitz (talk) 18:40, 21 December 2011 (UTC)

Sentence structure unreadable; no improvement since this first pointed out on 5 December. --EncycloPetey (talk) 04:28, 23 December 2011 (UTC)