Template:Did you know nominations/Abadi Bano Begum

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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:38, 7 December 2017 (UTC)

Abadi Bano Begum

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• ... that Abadi Bano Begum pawned her personal jewelry to educate her sons Mohammad Ali Jouhar and Shaukat Ali? Source: Lives: A Study of the Hindu-Muslim Encounter
• ALT1 ... that Abadi Bano Begum took part in the agitation to release Annie Besant from prison? Source:Gandhi, Women, and the National Movement page 85

• Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Merle Chambers

Created by Fitindia (talk). Self-nominated at 09:46, 10 November 2017 (UTC).

• Hi Fitindia, nice article on an interesting and underrepresented part of history. Review follows: Article created 10 November; article of good length; article is fully cited inline to reliable sources; article has no apparent copyright or close paraphrasing violations; both hooks are in the article and cited inline, hook facts check out to reference. I don't have a preference over which is used; QPQ done - Dumelow (talk) 08:36, 13 November 2017 (UTC)

• The same QPQ is also being used for your nomination at Template:Did you know nominations/Duvvuri Subbamma. Yoninah (talk) 23:47, 2 December 2017 (UTC)

•  Done@Yoninah: thank you for pointing that out, I have added a different QPQ to Template:Did you know nominations/Duvvuri Subbamma. Thank you FITINDIA 10:21, 3 December 2017 (UTC)

• Thank you, Fitindia, the QPQ is in order. I just have a question about both hooks. You're introducing (linked) people who are not known to a general readership, and saying little about the subject herself. In ALT0, I would give Begum a short description and end the hook after "sons". Alternately, give her a short description and then describe her sons (like: "her sons, who became Indian Muslim leaders"). ALT1 seems to have less potential, since most people don't know who Annie Besant is. Yoninah (talk) 23:23, 3 December 2017 (UTC)

• ALT2: ... that Abadi Bano Begum a prominent voice in the Indian independence movement, pawned her personal jewelry to educate her sons?
• ALT3 that Abadi Bano Begum a prominent voice in the Indian independence movement, pawned her personal jewelry to educate her son's Mohammad Ali Jouhar and Shaukat Ali?

• Hi Yoninah, I have added a few more hooks. Please try and have a look. Thank you FITINDIA 13:08, 4 December 2017 (UTC)

• Thank you. ALT2 is the best, I think. ALT2 hook refs verified and cited inline. Rest of review per Dumelow. ALT2 good to go. Yoninah (talk) 23:55, 4 December 2017 (UTC)