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The result was: promoted by 97198 (talk) 05:59, 8 December 2017 (UTC)
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Duvvuri Subbamma
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that Duvvuri Subbamma was a child bride and was married at the age of ten?Source: Women's Movements in the Global Era
Created by Fitindia (talk). Self-nominated at 12:05, 15 November 2017 (UTC).
- Hi Fitindia, review follows: Article created 15 November; article exceeds minimum length; no apparent copyright violation; article is fully cited inline to reliable sources; hook is cited in the article and checks out to the source (confirmed by preview on Google Books); I would probably amend the hook to mention her independence movement work and remove "child bride" as it repeats "married at the age of ten"; - Dumelow (talk) 09:34, 21 November 2017 (UTC)
- ALT1: ... that Indian independence activist Duvvuri Subbamma was married at the age of ten? Source: Women's Movements in the Global Era
- Dumelow the hook you constructed sounds and looks much better, Thank you so much . FITINDIA 09:49, 21 November 2017 (UTC)
- ALT1 hook ref verified and cited inline. I removed the link to child marriage so the hook won't look like a sea of blue. QPQ done. ALT1 good to go. Yoninah (talk) 23:44, 3 December 2017 (UTC)