Talk:Wonder World Tour/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: HJ Mitchell | Penny for your thoughts? 01:12, 5 March 2011 (UTC)

Well, this looks like another excellent article, but I'm sure I can find something to criticise. ;)

• Quotes need a ref right after them, not just at the end of the sentence/paragraph, for example:
  • "more of a mature show" (in development)

•  Done

• • "Normally, in a rock show you don’t need someone calling the show. In this one we had to take a more theatrical approach with someone calling cues every step of the way because there was so much going on at once between props and automation" (towards the end of development)

• It already had it. -- ipodnano05 * ^{leave@message} 23:24, 5 March 2011 (UTC)

• Can you find a more original way of ending a quote than "Cyrus said"?

• Where? -- ipodnano05 * ^{leave@message} 23:24, 5 March 2011 (UTC)

• You don't need to link Los Angeles

• Can't find it. -- ipodnano05 * ^{leave@message} 23:24, 5 March 2011 (UTC)

• Ditto London and, unless qualified, London refers to the city in England

• Can't find it either. -- ipodnano05 * ^{leave@message} 23:24, 5 March 2011 (UTC)

• Don't put quote marks round a blockquote per MOS:QUOTE

•  Done

• Punctuation should go after quote marks per MOS:PUNCT (for example, "Breakout." at the start of Concert synopsis)

•  Done

Since GA doesn't require absolute MoS compliance, I'm happy to pass this, but the above should probably be looked at when you get a chance. Excellent work. :) HJ Mitchell | Penny for your thoughts? 01:52, 5 March 2011 (UTC)

Thanks :) -- ipodnano05 * ^{leave@message} 23:24, 5 March 2011 (UTC)