Talk:Typhoon Ofelia

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Review: April 28, 2019. (Reviewed version).

A fact from Typhoon Ofelia appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know column on 10 February 2019 (check views). The text of the entry was as follows:

Did you know... that Typhoon Ofelia was the worst typhoon to hit eastern Taiwan in 30 years?

A record of the entry may be seen at Wikipedia:Recent additions/2019/February. The nomination discussion and review may be seen at Template:Did you know nominations/Typhoon Ofelia (1990).

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A fact from Typhoon Ofelia appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know column on 29 April 2019 (check views). The text of the entry was as follows:

Did you know... that Typhoon Ofelia was the worst typhoon to hit eastern Taiwan in 30 years?

A record of the entry may be seen at Wikipedia:Recent additions/2019/April. The nomination discussion and review may be seen at Template:Did you know nominations/Typhoon Ofelia (1990).

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GA Review

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Reviewer: 12george1 (talk · contribs) 04:37, 28 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Hi YE, I am going to review this article tonight.--12george1 (talk) 04:37, 28 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]

"was the first of two typhoons in 1990 to directly affect the Philippines within a week." - Wikilink to the 1990 Pacific typhoon season?

Done. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 07:59, 28 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]

"and on 00:00 UTC on June 24," ---> "and at 00:00 UTC on June 24,". The same thing occurs near the end of the MH section. While you're at it, wikilink Coordinated Universal Time in the lead section

Done. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 07:59, 28 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]

"Hualien City was the hardest it by the typhoon," ---> "Hualien City was the hardest hit by the typhoon,"

Done. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 07:59, 28 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]

I'm counting 56 deaths in the Philippines and 40 in China. So shouldn't the infobox say 96 deaths?

Good catch. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 07:59, 28 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]

"originated from the monsoon trough situated near the Caroline Islands." - Wikilink monsoon trough

Done. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 07:59, 28 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]

"According to the JTWC, however, this did not take place until 00:00 UTC on June 25 when it moved offshore" - Replace "it" with "the system/storm/cyclone/etc." to avoid suggesting that the JTWC moved offshore :P

Fair enough. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 07:59, 28 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]

"and was merging with a frontal zone" ---> "when it moved offshore and merged with a frontal zone"

Done. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 07:59, 28 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]

"twenty-tree were rendered missing due to flooding and mudslides." - Twenty-tree? :P

Fixed. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 07:59, 28 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Insert Template:1990 Pacific typhoon season buttons at the bottom of the page

Done. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 07:59, 28 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Not too bad. Hopefully you can get this done quickly.--12george1 (talk) 04:37, 28 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for the speedy review. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 07:59, 28 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Great! I will pass this article now.--12george1 (talk) 15:59, 28 April 2019 (UTC)[reply]