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Design paragraph needs a rewrite

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There's decent information in there but the writing is very odd with too many dashes, periods of ellipsis, eg's, ie's, aka's. Odd little phrases like "akin to ilium" and "it can be of little wonder". Can we just spell out the architectural influences without the flowery contentless prose?DavidRF (talk) 14:38, 15 December 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Flowery prose has been removed, I have replaced it with architectural history of the building from the main site of the Troy Savings Bank. Younvrknow (talk) 16:46, 4 November 2013 (UTC)younvrknow[reply]

Acoustics - needs own section

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The entry needs more information on the acoustics which are probably the main factor in the hall's fame. The acoustics warrant own paragraph. The hall should be noted if there is a category for renown acoustic music halls, etc.-Yohananw (talk) 09:56, 26 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]