Talk:Tropical Storm Trudy (2014)

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Text and/or other creative content from this version of 2014 Atlantic hurricane season was copied or moved into Tropical storms Trudy and Hanna with this edit. The former page's history now serves to provide attribution for that content in the latter page, and it must not be deleted as long as the latter page exists.

Proposed Trudy Image

The image in the article shows Trudy as a tropical depression. But I have found one that shows it as a tropical storm, near its peak intensity. Here are the images:

Existing Image
Proposed Image

Damien4794 (talk) 12:22, 3 November 2014 (UTC)[reply]

GA Review

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Reviewer: Hurricanehink (talk · contribs) 19:08, 13 November 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Anything else for the lead? Like preparations? :P
- Hush you...(added a bit) ~ Cyclonebiskit (chat) 19:25, 13 November 2015 (UTC)[reply]
"Located over warm waters of 86 °F (30 °C) and within a very moist region with low wind shear, intensification was a certainty as the depression approached Mexico." - garden path sentence. This implies that intensification was located over warm waters.
"as stalling just on of offshore" - I'm guessing you mean "on or offshore", but just had to check
- Was just offshore, guess I had a brain fart in the middle of that thought. ~ Cyclonebiskit (chat) 19:25, 13 November 2015 (UTC)[reply]
"The depression dissipated early on October 19 as it moved slowly northeastward over Mexico." - maybe explain what this means? For the longest, even I didn't understand what dissipation meant, especially how it could regenerate. Maybe combine a bit with the following sentence, something like "The low-level circulation dissipated early on October 19, and the depression ceased to be a tropical cyclone."
Maybe add when TD 9 formed?
"A total of 35 shelters were opened along the eastern portion of the state" - which state?

All in all, a cute little article. No major issues. Lemme know when done so I can pass. ♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 19:08, 13 November 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for the review, Hink! Made all the corrections~