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Did you know... that during a bloody assault with his unit on the Western Front in 1914, Stephan Westmann was amazed to see the British stop firing and send stretcher-bearers to rescue his wounded German comrades?
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... that German infantryman Stephan Westmann, assaulting a British machine gun on the Western Front, was astonished when the British stopped firing and sent stretcher-bearers to rescue Germans? Source: John K. Rieth, Imperial Germany's Iron Regiment of the First World War (Badgley Publishing, 2017), pp. 103–104
ALTO... that German infantryman Stephan Westmann, assaulting a British machine gun emplacement on the Western Front, was amazed when the British stopped firing and sent stretcher-bearers to rescue Germans? Source: as above
ALTOa... that Stephan Westmann, assaulting a British machine gun emplacement on the Western Front with a German infantry unit, was amazed when the British stopped firing and sent stretcher-bearers to rescue Germans? Source: as above
ALT1:... that Stephan Westmann served in both world wars, in the first for the Germans, in the second for the British? Sources: for 1914–1918 war, as above; for 1939–1945 war, Paul Atterbury, "Poacher turned Gamekeeper: from German Infantry to British Medical Officer" in Antiques Roadshow: World War One in 100 Family Treasures (Random House, 2014), pp. 271–273
Overall: Nominated within five days of article creation. Both hooks are very interesting to me and are sourced. Plagiarism unlikely (see Earwig). However, @Moonraker: you might want to reword the first hook if you're going for it. In your source: 1) Westmann was speaking in "we" (the hook seems to indicate he was going at it alone); and, 2) they were not assaulting a British machine gun but they were ordered to attack and take a brickworks, which were defended by machine guns. Some parts in the article also need referencing (e.g. the part about Marianna Goldschmidt). Darwin Naz
Thanks for the review, Darwin Naz. You are quite right, Marianna Goldschmidt is from a source not referred to at that point, so I have added it. Do you see anything else that needs better referencing? I don’t agree with you when you say “they were not assaulting a British machine gun”. Westmann said “to attack these brickworks”, but we can’t use that word, it would be understood as a place where bricks are made, and the word here is clearly used to mean a massive structure made of bricks with machine-guns on top, a machine-gun emplacement. That is how Westmann “came under machine gunfire so terrific that the losses were so staggering...” I don’t see any suggestion that he was charging machine gun fire alone, that could not lead to British stretcher bearers coming out to rescue “Germans” (plural). But I have reworked it as ALTO, see if that is better. Moonraker (talk) 10:23, 17 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Hi @Moonraker: The way I see it - based on trench warfare of World War I - the “brickworks” cited in your source could pertain to or was part of a trench, a ditch, or some form of fortification - a facility rather than a machine gun or weaponry (artillery). Fortification or “machine gun emplacement” as you have written could be acceptable. Regarding the charge, would it be better to say "that Stephan Westmann and his German infantry unit(or regiment?) assaulting a British machine gun emplacement…" You can decide what course to take. Just ping me so I can proceed with the approval. Darwin Naz (talk) 11:27, 17 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Darwin Naz I don’t think we could add that there, as Westmann was describing his personal reaction, but I have worked your idea into ALTOa. Shall we leave it for the volunteer taking this forward to choose which one to use? Moonraker (talk) 11:38, 17 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]