Talk:Secret Combination (song)

GA Review

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Reviewer: MarioSoulTruthFan (talk · contribs) 14:40, 6 May 2020 (UTC)

Infobox

• Remove radio single (see below)
• Need to change the release date
• Label: you forgot "ANT1 Group". ANT1 is the owner of Heaven Music and not the label.

I wasn't not aware of that, it's fine then. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 00:30, 10 May 2020 (UTC)

• No producer?
• Remove the alternative cover
• You then have the songwriters one has a composer and the other has a lyricist

 Done

Lead

• is a song recorded by → is a song by
• The song was written by Poseidonas Giannopoulos and Konstadinos Pantzis → composed by Konstandinos Pantzis with lyrics by Poseidonas Giannopoulos
• and was released on 6 February 2008 → wrong date + add labels
• The song served as the first single released from Kalomira's fourth studio album titled Secret Combination: The Album. → first time reading about this, add to the body of the article with a source
• To promote the song, a music video was made and Kalomira performed a small European tour in advance of Eurovision → To promote the song, a music video was created and Kalomira performed in a promotional tour + date and some places the tour went (2/3)
• The act was sponsored by J.Lo by Jennifer Lopez → wasn't it the wardbrobe to the music video?
• "Secret Combination" experienced commercial success, charting in several countries throughout Europe following its Eurovision appearance. → give examples (highest peaks)
• New comment add a mention from music critics and genre of the song.

 Done

Background and composition

• At the end of the first paragraph you have two sources use the information of both critics.
• The song was officially released to the media and radio stations → sources provided doesn't provide radio stations release
• The song was released in Greece as a digital download on 12 February 2008 and as a CD single on 28 March 2008 → not on given source

I couldn't find the old itunes links for Greece's initial release, so I've just changed it to the generic link they are using now. When itunes switched their link structure over, they overwrote older releases with the "worldwide".Grk1011 (talk) 15:40, 10 May 2020 (UTC)

Did you look on wayback machine, archive.is, webcitation and others? MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 16:03, 10 May 2020 (UTC)

Yes, but I couldn't find it. Grk1011 (talk) 16:11, 10 May 2020 (UTC)

• Initially, Kalomira → Kalomira

 Done

Music video and promotion

• J.Lo by Jennifer Lopez, → explain in the article what is this
• To promote the song, a music video was created. It premiered → The music video for the song was shot in-studio...(copy that sentece to here, the one which has the director)
• to watch through a → to watch what?
• The choreography was by Ivan Svitailof → The choreography was created by Ivan Svitailof
• To further promote the song, → when? + In order to further promote the song
• You can remove source number 12
• visiting Azerbaijan, Romania, and others → which other places?

 Done

National final

• Doesn't this final have another name? "Ellinikós Telikós"
• "A Chance to Love" performed by Chrispa and "Always and Forever" performed by Kostas Martakis. → add year of release in the beggining of the sentence. Not sure why the release year would be relevant?

To get an idea when the song was performed? 2008, 2009? MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 00:30, 10 May 2020 (UTC)

The sentence starts with 27 Feb 2008. 15:40, 10 May 2020 (UTC)

• two of which had appeared with Elena Paparizou in Kiev in the Eurovision Song Contest 2005. At the start of the show, the four dancers held her up, while she was lying down in their arms. The performance ends with each of the dancers, now shirtless and with one letter painted on each, lining up to spell the word "love" → not on citation given

Added. Grk1011 (talk) 15:40, 10 May 2020 (UTC)

 Done

In Belgrade

Semi-final

• Remove this subheader

Final

• Same as previous

 Done

Track listing

• Use {{spaced ndash}} so there is the right space between the version of the song and their runtime

 Done

Credits and personnel

I've changed the dashes, but the formatting of this section was requested in another GA review, so I believe these comments to just be a preference and not requirement.

It's guidelines, it hasn't to do with anyones preference Wikipedia:WikiProject_Albums/Album_article_style_advice#Personnel. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 00:29, 10 May 2020 (UTC)

Format changed to align with your style advice link, though I am leaving the locations subheader as it helps with readability. Grk1011 (talk) 15:40, 10 May 2020 (UTC)

• Remove the subheader locations, put the mixing and recording in the same sentece "Recorded and mixed at Prisma Studio (Athens, Greece); mixed at C&C Studio (Athens, Greece)"
• The personnel should be the other way around "first the person then the credit"
• Enginners, mixing? No names
• Use {{spaced ndash}} so there is the right space between the credits and the personnel

 Done

Release history

• Radio single is to broad and the source says 0 regarding radio release
• The label and formats are switched
• Once more issues with the physical CD single.

 Done

Charts and certifications

 Done

• This section should be above the "release history" one
• I see no certifications
• Use the Template:Single chart for the chart entries

See also

• Fine

Notes

 Done

• I only see digital versions, where is the physical CD single? Use the liner notes of the credits and personnel as a source

References

• Most of the sources regading chart are dead but will be fixed once you add the automatic entries
• The publishers for the charts will be automatic
• ESCToday → can't be publisher and work at the same time → is publisher
• Hellenic Broadcasting Corporation (ERT) → publisher

 Done

Overall

• Needs commerical performance section
• No critical reception section?

 Done

• You can now address the comments. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 20:54, 6 May 2020 (UTC)

@MarioSoulTruthFan: I believe I have addressed all of your comments. Please let me know if I missed anything or if there are other changes that are required. Grk1011 (talk) 16:58, 9 May 2020 (UTC)

@Grk1011: I left you a new comment and a couple of  Not donemost have to do with the release of the song. iTunes is not a physical format of CD single you need to give a look at that and other stuff. Also address the comments on "Credits and personnel" I left you the guidelines, it will be easier for you to see and the reason for the given date. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 14:19, 10 May 2020 (UTC)

This is getting a bit confusing as you edit conflicted me and added some new comments. Can you add further comments below so I can keep track of what is going on? Grk1011 (talk) 14:35, 10 May 2020 (UTC)

It's not confusing, look above, it has new comment and  Not done, you can't miss it. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 14:59, 10 May 2020 (UTC)

I believe I addressed the remaining concerns. Grk1011 (talk) 15:40, 10 May 2020 (UTC)

@Grk1011: I made some fixes, please take a look at them and see if you are ok with those. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 17:19, 10 May 2020 (UTC)

I made a couple more small edits. It looks good to me! Grk1011 (talk) 18:36, 10 May 2020 (UTC)