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Reviewer: My name is not dave (talk · contribs) 19:07, 24 October 2017 (UTC)


Immediate failure check

  • Copyright violations -- nothing of concern.
  • Any pressing tags on the article -- nothing of concern.
  • Edit wars? -- nothing of concern.

Criteria check

Lede

Criteria Remarks Pass/fail
Well-written Good. The prose is written tightly and concisely, with no problematic spelling errors or mistakes. There are no immediate MOS errors. Pass
Verifiable The lede shouldn't really contain any refs, and this is the case here. Pass
Broad in coverage Good. The lede covers his rise to president, what he represents, what he has done, his early life and views of him. A little nitpick, in the capacity of my own opinion, is that one thing which is missing here, and is prominent, is a mention of Zimbabwe's hyperinflation. But whatever. Pass
Neutral Yes! I enjoy the little bit at the bottom of the lede which attempts to represent opposing views of Mugabe. Pass
Stable? No edit wars in general. Pass
Imagery? There is a picture of Mugabe in the infobox that has no licensing issues. Pass

Overall: Pass

Early life

Criteria Remarks Pass/fail
Well-written This section is excellently written, there are no 'running sentences'. Pass
Verifiable Owing to the fact that I do not own the books cited in this section, I will good-faith accept them, as the majority of readers here would. Researching around the sources, the authors appear to be reputable and highly respected in their field. Pass
Broad in coverage The early life of someone should include information of where they were born, when, to whom, their education and some bits of early career, if the article is big enough to split the main career away. This article meets all of this. Pass
Neutral Statements are not taken out of context, they are quoted, and the section does not posit any extraordinary statements or signs of bias. Pass
Stable? Yes. Pass
Imagery? The image here identifies an inspiration of Mugabe's early ideas that would stick to him in later life. Appropriate. Pass

Overall: Pass

After reading the section below, I see that the University of London is referred to as London University. I don't believe this is the standard way to express the university's name and I see no indication that it was the historical name at the time of Mugabe's graduation. My name isnotdave (talk/contribs) 17:19, 30 October 2017 (UTC)
I have come across the term "London University" before, although it does appear that "University of London" is more correct and thus I shall amend this in the article. Midnightblueowl (talk) 20:59, 3 November 2017 (UTC)

Revolutionary activity

Criteria Remarks Pass/fail
Well-written First clause of the first sentence of first section, I would change to "While Mugabe was in the north", or something that is a bit specific as to where Mugabe was when the nationalist movement was founded. I clicked onto this section and found the first sentence a little vague, I had to scroll to find, again, where Mugabe was. Other readers, who may be interested in just his revolutionary activities, may end up getting confused in the same way.


"Being a teacher who possessed three degrees and had travelled elsewhere in Africa, Mugabe was among those invited to speak to the crowd." - this seems a bit of a non-sequitur to me. I would put the latter clause first and then the former clause last, to give it more sense. @Midnightblueowl: if you have access to the book sources cited here, maybe you could clarify this. If you don't, don't worry.

  • I haven't got the sources to hand, but I remember what they were referring to. Mugabe was among those chosen to speak because he was a teacher (a respected position in society), had three degrees (a very rare achievement at that time), and had travelled abroad (again, very few black Rhodesians had ever done this). It was the combination of these factors which set him apart from most of the other people in the crowd. Perhaps I could change this to "Having become a much-respected figure through his profession, his possession of three degrees, and his travels abroad, Mugabe was among those invited to speak to the crowd"? Do you think this an improvement? Midnightblueowl (talk) 22:24, 3 November 2017 (UTC)


'London University' -- see above.


It states that the Southern Rhodesian general election, 1980 happened in March. But if you click, it says February. Could this be clarified? In addition, it says that Mugabe was elected for the 'Harare constituency of Highfield' -- but wasn't Salisbury named to Harare after the election and when he came to power as Prime Minister?

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Verifiable Using the same sources as before. Other ones I have no concerns with. Pass
Broad in coverage Very broad. Covers everything you need to know and more. Pass
Neutral Yes Pass
Stable? Yarp Pass
Imagery? Appropriate. Gives a representation of some of the related people during this period of Mugabe's life. @Midnightblueowl: Why do you think the flag in this section might be of relevance though?


Overall: Pass

Prime Minister of Zimbabwe

Criteria Remarks Pass/fail
Well-written Good. Pass
Verifiable Uses same sources, mostly as previous. All good. Pass
Broad in coverage Very broad Pass
Stable Yes Pass
Imagery? Good use of imagery, especially showing Mugabe at 1982 age! Pass
Neutral? Yes Pass

Overall: Pass.

President of Zimbabwe

Criteria Remarks Pass/fail
Well-written All the other L2 sections have some sort of time period after their subject. Why not so here?


  • I don't quite follow; there are year ranges after each sub-title in the "President of Zimbabwe" section?Midnightblueowl (talk) 22:45, 3 November 2017 (UTC)
    Actually, there are a few choices here. Because it is actually the Prime Minister section header which is the only one with a duration period next to it. So you can either get rid of the "1980–1987" bit on the Prime Minister section header or add a period of duration on the revolutionary and President section headers. Or, we could just keep it the same, if you think it works effectively as it is. At this point, its something minor that can be discussed in future, like at an FAC or a peer review. My name isnotdave (talk/contribs) 09:29, 4 November 2017 (UTC) || Pass
Verifiable Uses same sources, mostly as previous. All good. Some new, online ones have come into play here, all from reputable newspapers (no tabloids). Pass
Broad in coverage Very broad, shows much of his actions and relations as president. Pass
Stable Yes Pass
Imagery? Why are there images of him in this section taken in the period before he became president? In addition, at the bottom of the article, there is a picture of him in 2008 and 2011. The one in 2011 is in the wrong section, so to speak. I think that it would be advantageous to choose either the 2008 photo in the 2008 to 2013 section or the 2011 one.
  • I've switched the locations of the 2008 and 2011 images. As for the 1980s image, I acknowledge that they are (chronologically speaking) in slightly the wrong sections, but the time periods being discussed are not far apart and we are restricted by which images we actually have freely available to us. Midnightblueowl (talk) 22:43, 3 November 2017 (UTC)
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Neutral? Yes Pass

Overall: Pass.

Ideology

Criteria Remarks Pass/fail
Well-written Good -- but the bottom section repeats what had been said above -- "During the 1980s, Mugabe indicated his desire to transform Zimbabwe from a multi-party state into a one-party state." This is relevant to ideology but it could be rephrased since it's not good practice just to say more or less the same thing again.
  • I've moved the paragraph to a different position of the section, although I have not rephrased it; I'm not really sure it could really be rephrased in a manner that would fundamentally eliminate any level of repetition, to be honest. 22:02, 3 November 2017 (UTC) || ...
Verifiable Uses same sources, mostly as previous. All good. Pass
Broad in coverage Very broad, shows a lot of views about his ideology. Pass
Stable Yes Pass
Imagery? None here, no worries. Pass
Neutral? Yes. Uses quotes to reflect upon the many opinions of Mugabe's ideology. Pass

Overall: Pass.

Personal life

Criteria Remarks Pass/fail
Well-written I can say for sure that I actually enjoyed reading this section. Pass
Verifiable Uses same sources, mostly as previous. All good. Pass
Broad in coverage As per above^^ Lots of interesting info beyond 'wife and kids' stuff. Pass
Stable Yes Pass
Imagery? Good Pass
Neutral? Yes. Uses quotes to reflect upon the many opinions of Mugabe's ideology. Pass

Overall: Pass

Reception and legacy

Criteria Remarks Pass/fail
Well-written Good Pass
Verifiable Good Pass
Broad in coverage Shows legacy and reception through his period in power. Good Pass
Stable Yes Pass
Imagery? Good Pass
Neutral? Many views represented here. Pass

Overall: Pass

Overall

I am putting this on hold, as there are a few issues that need to be resolved. Most are not urgent, but one is -- the problem with the election stating that it was held in March, when the election page stated that it was held in February. My name isnotdave (talk/contribs) 11:53, 1 November 2017 (UTC)

  • Many thanks for taking on this review, My name isnotdave. I hope that you gained some interest from reading through the article. I think that I have responded to each or your comments; you may wish to counter-respond on a few points before moving forward with the review. Midnightblueowl (talk) 22:47, 3 November 2017 (UTC)
  • No worries. Going forward, it would be good to see this as a featured article. All in all it looks ready for such a feat, there could be a small reduction in article size, it is at 86k and is 13,595 words long, but this is a well-made article. My name isnotdave (talk/contribs) 09:34, 4 November 2017 (UTC)

Profile picture

The current profile picture is horizontally flipped, could we have it in the original aspect? Governor Jerjerrod (talk) 08:48, 28 October 2017 (UTC)


Why, uniquely in the context of this article, has the chap we knew in the 1980s as "Lord Carrington" been transmuted into someone we are asked to accept as "Peter Carington" (sic)? This isn't reverse snobbery, though a bit of pedantry might come in handy all the same - one of the pillars of the the Carrington peerage was the financing of the Jamaica and other Caribbean slave economies, and the notion that its current possessor might be available to all of us under the familiar form of address used by his erstwhile political friends and allies is fairly dubious, to put it mildlyDelahays (talk) 15:27, 28 October 2017 (UTC)

Remove a source please

: {{cite journal |last=Kebonang |first=Zein |title=Politics and Anarchy: Zimbabwe's 2008 Run-off Presidential Elections in Context |journal=African Journal of History and Culture |volume=4 |number=2 |pages=9–16 |year=2012 |doi=10.5897/AJHC11.043 |ref=harv}}

This is a predatory open access publisher.

First and Second Vice-President

I think the info about Vice-Presidents serving under Mugabe should be modified to reflect the fact that there are First and Second Vice-Presidents of Zimbabwe. Otherwise the dates in the info box become confusing. Haage42 (talk) 17:36, 14 November 2017 (UTC)

Semi-protected edit request on 15 November 2017

Mugabe has been confined to his house 105.184.51.114 (talk) 12:54, 15 November 2017 (UTC)

Note: The article is already being updated. If you don't have anything to add don't use this request again, it may be removed  — Ammarpad (talk) 13:05, 15 November 2017 (UTC)

Robert Mugabe's resignation

Mugabe's resignation was the best option else he would have spent his remaining lifetime behind bars Magnus Uriah Miracle (talk) 23:10, 24 November 2017 (UTC)

Good Article?

How did this meet the criteria for "Good Article" when there are only about four (4) references, used repeatedly throughout, for the entire article? 148.177.1.212 (talk) 20:44, 15 November 2017 (UTC)

The article uses seventeen sources throughout, not four. These sources include several biographies dedicated to Mugabe himself and a number of academic publications, appearing in peer-reviewed journals and edited volumes. This being the case, the anonymous IP's allegation is essentially baseless. It appears that their comment stems from an expectation from some readers that an article should be based on hundred of different press sources that can be freely accessed online; there are articles like that, and in some cases it is necessary as there are no other citations available, but generally these press sources are not the best material to use. Press articles usually only cover issues in a fleeting fashion and are sometimes sensationalistic. They lack the depth and level of understanding present in biographies and most academic sources; it is the latter that are therefore preferred as WP:Reliable sources at Wikipedia. Midnightblueowl (talk) 11:31, 16 November 2017 (UTC)
As the person who reviewed the GA, I would like to second Midnightblueowl's thoughts on the matter. Although basing an article on a single source should be avoided (and would make a GA review fail), the sources used here appear to be of excellent quality, even if a few are repeatedly used. Quality and not quantity. My name isnotdave (talk/contribs) 14:10, 17 November 2017 (UTC)

"Forced out of office"

Yes, that my be the case in practice, but the military is at least pretending he's still the President. Until they make him resign (or in the unlikely event they exile or kill him) he should still be considered to be in office. 100.40.28.53 (talk) 09:41, 16 November 2017 (UTC)

Deposition?

15th november 2017 Mugabe was arrested, but nobody confirmed his deposition. At the moment, he's still the President. Moxmarco (talk) 12:46, 16 November 2017 (UTC)

Edit request for section "guerrilla war: 1975–79"

It is stated in the article that Mugabe met Ceaușescu in 1979, but the caption under the actual photo (you will see it when you enlarge the image) states that the meeting took place in 1976. If someone could try verifying and correcting this information. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 213.91.212.222 (talk) 14:28, 17 November 2017 (UTC)

Jew Communist?

Antismitic canard->.."where he met a number of Jewish South African communists who introduced him to Marxist ideas.[29]" WIKIFAIL - In fact it was NOT Jews it was the Jesuits, as the text shows.69.29.212.227 (talk) 10:28, 18 November 2017 (UTC)

While it is true that the link between Jews and communism is often used as an anti-semitic canard by the far-right, it is nevertheless unequivocally the case that there was a strong Jewish component in the southern African communist movement of the period. In many parts of the world, including South Africa, the strong tradition of left-wing Jewish intellectualism coupled with a level of social marginalisation led many Jews to embrace Marxism. In this instance, the text specifies the truth of the matter - it was indeed Jewish South Africans who introduced Mugabe to Marxism. 12:21, 18 November 2017 (UTC)

Don't see how religion is relevant here because presumably he'd have come into contact with lots of communists from different religions, unless it's something he specifically mentioned. Fourdots2 (talk) 13:10, 23 November 2017 (UTC)

Here, "Jewish" refers to the ethno-cultural group rather than the religious community with which it is partly coterminous. Midnightblueowl (talk) 10:37, 29 November 2017 (UTC)
The Catholic Church has had a long standing hate for communists, I strongly doubt it was Jesuits. ( SailingOn (talk) 23:46, 10 December 2017 (UTC) )

Semi-protected edit request on 19 November 2017

He is no longer president Change from President of Zimbabwe (Present) to till 2017 AnushPatel (talk) 15:11, 19 November 2017 (UTC)

Not correct: Mugabe has been dismissed from his party but still holds his role as president. The most recent report is that he has been given an ultimatum to resign by Monday or be impeached Anarcho-authoritarian (talk) 16:40, 19 November 2017 (UTC)

It has been announced on the news tonight (21 November 2017) that Mugabe has resigned. Vorbee (talk) 18:07, 21 November 2017 (UTC)

How many zimbabweans has Robert mugabe killed during 37 year rule

I was reading some articles, one called Genocide Watch and end genocide in Zimbabwe about the now resigned leader Robert Mugabe and the crimes against humanity he has been responsible for since 1980, it said Robert Mugabe has been estimated to have directly and indirectly killed 3-6 million, 1/3 of the population of Zimbabwe. Now that seems a bit high I was thinking hundreds of thousands I mean lots have died of disease famine and starvation as a result of his policies and actions , I mean how reliable is that figure to use ?. It has also been estimated between 1982 and 1985; at least 20,000 people, mostly Ndebele civilians, were killed by Mugabe's Fifth Brigade. Pursuing decolonization, which this article already states. I aware he has carried out terrible human rights abuses, and crimes against humanity in the last 37 years but could it be 3-6 million deaths shall I find these articles to see if they can be used as reliable sources, I mean we have estimates for the numbers of their own population other dictators have killed, off course we cannot be exact but I think these are quite reliable sources. ? Amy foster (talk) 22:54, 22 November 2017 (UTC)

some sources differ, one human rights group says hundred's of thousands have died due to deliberate starvation, there has also been political killings so it could be has high as 1 million, I don't think estimates like this are needed there is plenty on this article that lists his crimes against humanity and genocides. 217.42.186.248 (talk) 17:06, 24 November 2017 (UTC)

Party affiliation in infobox

Mugabe was recalled as party leader, but he was not expelled as a member. Refer to the minutes of the party Special Session. The infobox should say "1986–present". 24.7.14.87 (talk) 21:01, 26 November 2017 (UTC)

Done –Ammarpad (talk) 08:41, 27 November 2017 (UTC)

Semi-protected edit request on 28 November 2017

X - "is a disgraceful Zimbabwean politician" Change to Y - "was a Zimbabwean politician"

REASON - the word "disgraceful" is unnecessary JG10PSU (talk) 18:05, 28 November 2017 (UTC)

Done –Ammarpad (talk) 18:26, 28 November 2017 (UTC)


Edit request

Could someone please add the following under the article's wives and children section:

Mugabe's sons Robert Mugabe junior and his younger brother Bellarmine are known for posting their lavish lifestyle on social media, which has drawn accusations from Tendai Biti that they are wasting Zimbabwean taxpayers' money.[1]


Sources

  1. ^ https://www.economist.com/news/middle-east-and-africa/21726097-scions-despots-post-pictures-their-lavish-lifestyles-social-media The offspring of Africa’s strongmen are living it up

Edit request

Frankly, the frequent references to Rober Mugabe being a socialist yet 'adhering to conservative economic policies' are factually incorrect and are not portraying the Zimbabwe socialist development between 1980 to the early 2000's.

Twice is this mentioned: Once in the header section - "despite his Marxist rhetoric and professed desire for a socialist society—adhered largely to conservative economic policies." and again in the body under his prime minister section "Mugabe's government continued to make regular pronouncements about converting Zimbabwe into a socialist society, although did not take concrete steps in that direction".

Both these statements are factually incorrect. Under Mugabe, Zimbabwe massively expanded socialist policies such as health care, education, ownership of public enterprises and the complete disregard for private ownership of land. These qualifying statements after making mention of Mugabe's Marxist background and staunch belief in socialist policies is revisionist in nature and does not accurately reflect what is now the failing state of Zimbabwe. How can someone say that, however in the same sentence mention that Mugabe forcibly removed property rights from white landowners and distributed it to the native population. [1]</nowiki>

In the other Wikipedia article on the Economic History of Zimbabwe [2], Wikipedia makes reference that "Initially the government followed a corporatist model with government management of the economy... the government propagated a whole range of new economic policies, introducing a minimum wage and virtually eliminating the right to fire workers. Total spending on education nearly tripled (from Z$227.6 million to Z$628.0 million), as did government spending on healthcare (from Z$66.4 million to Z$188.6 million), between 1979 and 1990. Expenditure on public-sector employment rose by 60%, and on the civil service by 12% per annum over the course of the 1980s. Central government expenditure tripled and increased its share from 32.5 percent of GDP in 1979 to 44.6% in 1989. Interest rates were artificially capped."

None of these policies are 'conservative' free market policies and are socialist in nature. In the 90's, Mugabe's government tried to implement some conservative economic controls over the economy to encourage job-creating growth by transferring control over prices from the state to the market, improving access to foreign exchange, reducing administrative controls over investment and employment decisions, and by reducing the fiscal deficit. This failed due to severe drought and international trade policies. Following in the 2000's, Mugabe's government forcibly repatriated white farming land (again, not a 'conservative policy') and caused the economic decline we see today.

It is a lie and missinformation to say that Mugabe adhered largely to conservative economic policies as if to paint Western Free Market principals over a failed state. Could Wikipedia please remove these qualifying statements as they are incorrect as the Mugabe's government did not 'adhere to conservative economic policies'.

Sources

Semi-protected edit request on 24 October 2017

Remove the words "world health" at the beginning of the article, they are out of place and were probably added accidentally. 194.108.6.18 (talk) 09:16, 24 October 2017 (UTC)

Done Gulumeemee (talk) 09:27, 24 October 2017 (UTC)

Infobox proposal

I think this article's infobox is too big. At the same time I wouldn't want to omit any information. After a little experimenting, I have two solutions to offer: version 1 and version 2. I'm partial to the first version, but I'm open to discussion. Thank you. Jay D. Easy (talk) 02:07, 11 August 2018 (UTC)

The info-box is perfectly fine before you meddled with it. Just look at people like PM Theresa May who have 16 offices on their page, let alone Mugabe with barely 5. 213.205.242.94 (talk) 17:24, 12 August 2018 (UTC)

Do not support the proposed changes. The previous info-box was perfectly sufficient and many important iterations were removed from your recent edits. You should always gain consensus before making drastic changes to the info-box. You have also removed valuable information such as the list of Deputy Leaders/Second Secretaries of the ZANU-PF Party, the ZANU/ZANU PF distinction in the Leader role; the specifics regarding Tsvangirai’s term date tenure and the “Zimbabwe Rhodesia” predecessor for example. I also object to the change regarding the political parties from the long variant to the shortened variant. Therefore I oppose the changes which you proposed (although you actually just uploaded your preference without even waiting for some comments from fellow users regarding the matter which many would appreciate) although I thank you for your constructive edits. I have therefore reverted until more comment and would appreciate not edit-warring from now - at a later date your variant 1 is implemented in some manner could you please not simply revert the whole thing but instead look at the edits closely regarding the list of deputies etc which were also removed. Thanks. JLo-Watson (talk) 22:38, 12 August 2018 (UTC)

Note for improvement

This article contains a vast plethora of knowledge on former president Mugabe. The only recommendations I would suggest would be to speak more in depth on his undeniable persistent grip on power he did his very best to maintain and perhaps what type of man we conclude he is based on this. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Rferguson ug (talk • contribs) 12:39, 29 January 2018 (UTC)

This entry makes Mugabe sound like a retired revolutionary when in fact he was a vicious dictator for many many years longer. Cbertozz (talk) 09:09, 17 August 2019 (UTC)


Up-to-date

This article shows what an up-to-date encyclopedia Wikipedia is. It was announced on the news on September 6 2019 that Robert Mugabe had died, and already on that date the dates of Robert Mugabe had been put in. Vorbee (talk) 06:39, 6 September 2019 (UTC)

Nkomo as Matabele

Nkomo was not Matabele tribe, he was Kalanga sub-tribe of the Shona, allied to the Matabele.

10:30, 6 September 2019 (UTC)~ Noel Ellis — Preceding unsigned comment added by Noel Ellis (talk • contribs)

Edit of Died hospital details in Personal details of Info table

Right now the hospital name is Woodbridge Hospital, where as source article mentions Gleneagles hospital. Please either correct hospital name or correct source. Gudaas (talk) 11:49, 6 September 2019 (UTC)

Corrected with new source. Thank you. -- CalDoesIt (talk) 12:11, 6 September 2019 (UTC)

Heavily edited due to death

Hi all, Albeit when the template was placed on by other editors and was removed twice because it was not being heavily edited at the time, I am contemplating placing the following template on the page. Any feedback will be greatly appreciated. Thank You!

Chickensarebleepssorryuncle (talk) 18:54, 6 September 2019 (UTC)

Semi-protected edit request on 6 September 2019

Mugabe died peacefully on 9 September 2019 as one of the African greatest, although also controversial. Joraimite (talk) 06:54, 6 September 2019 (UTC)

 Not done Please, describe clearly the change you want to make and why. --MarioGom (talk) 23:27, 6 September 2019 (UTC)

Semi-protected edit request on 11 September 2019

In the Gukurahundi section, Please correct the name of Ntabazindune, to the correct name, Ntabazinduna. Mbotsellasie (talk) 09:49, 11 September 2019 (UTC)

 Done Thanks! NiciVampireHeart 23:47, 11 September 2019 (UTC)

Semi-protected edit request on 29 September 2019

Please add a text about Mugabe finally being laid to rest. Please also add this link from CNN :

https://edition-m.cnn.com/2019/09/28/africa/zimbabwe-robert-mugabe-buried-intl/index.html?r=https%3A%2F%2Fwww.google.se%2F&rm=1

Please add all of this under "Post-presidency" - "Illness and death".95.195.207.212 (talk) 10:17, 29 September 2019 (UTC) 95.195.207.212 (talk) 10:17, 29 September 2019 (UTC)

 Done NiciVampireHeart 23:03, 29 September 2019 (UTC)
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