Talk:Randeep Hooda

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Date	Process	Result
January 30, 2016	Good article nominee	Listed
May 16, 2016	Peer review	Not reviewed

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Needs some neating Jon Ascton (talk) 04:33, 31 July 2009 (UTC)[reply]

GA Review

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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 14:03, 29 January 2016 (UTC)[reply]

I'll finish this one today JAGUAR 14:03, 29 January 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Initial comments

I would definitely recommend merging the last sentence of the lead "In addition to acting in film and theatre, Hooda regularly..." into the paragraph before it, in order to improve prose flow per WP:LEAD

Done

"in Melbourne in Australia" - just Melbourne, Australia would do fine
"After D Hooda worked on a series" - a comma is needed between 'D' and 'Hooda'

Done

"a US-Trained Obesity Medicine Specialist"- does 'Obesity Medicine Specialist' need to be capitalised? Even if so, I would definitely un-capitalise 'trained'

Done

"Hooda belongs to a Jat family,[6] As a child Hooda studied" - full stop needed after 'family'. Alternatively, de-capitalise 'as'

Done

The very last sentence in the Early life and background section needs a citation

Added

"Randeep has been honored by Sandeep Marwah with the life membership of International Film And Television Club of Asian Academy of Film & Television at Noida Film City" - unsourced

Removed

"in the role of a violent criminal"[28] Rajeev Masand wrote" - missing full stop. Needed after the quotation mark

Done

Ref 14 is dead

Fixed

On hold

This is a comprehensive and decent article, well done on all the work put into this! Once all of the above are addressed, I'm sure it will have no problem passing. JAGUAR 14:56, 29 January 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for taking up the review so quickly! Made all the ends mentioned! Waiting to hear back from you. All your help is greatly appreciated! :) Numerounovedant Talk 21:40, 29 January 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for addressing them! Without further ado I'll promote this. Good luck at college!

JAGUAR 01:22, 30 January 2016 (UTC)[reply]

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The Equality Ratio

Obc,sc st are having representation/reservation 27%,15% and 7.5% respectively.Obc sc st constitutes 95% population of India but they are getting roughly 49% reservation. Rest 51% Government seats are of general class having population only 5% in India. Hence general caste is enjoying 51% govt jobs. Besides this,they dominates media ,news agencies,news channels,news papers,private sector,corporate world,Mutual Funds,tv industry,Share Markets,temple trusts etc. Almost all top CEOs,MD,Directors of private as well as govt companies belongs to general category. Concept is equal representation of seats as per the population of a community. General category should be given 5% seats as per equality ratio,but they are enjoying 51% govt jobs. For equality among people of India,reservation in billion dollor private sector is must of obc sc and st. Jat community is numerically one of the largest community of North India,but there representation in vital sectors is very low. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 168.235.207.122 (talk) 15:13, 25 February 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Now the time has come for the jat tribe to be unite with gurjar and meena tribe for the sake of farmers in north. Save farmer tribes by saving jat gurjar meena unity. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 49.34.67.145 (talk) 19:00, 14 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]