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I left the following feedback for the creator/future reviewers while reviewing this article: What a cool article to write. When I saw it first I thought it was a joke, but it is entertaining, informative, and definitely well-sourced. well done! WhoWorldLive (talk) 07:40, 10 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Did you know nomination

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A pizza served in Croatia
A pizza served in Croatia
Created by WhoWorldLive (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has fewer than 5 past nominations.

WhoWorldLive (talk) 09:07, 10 November 2024 (UTC).[reply]

  • Date ok, but length insufficient to qualify for DYK. Hook needs to be reworked, the grammar is not clear. Some of the existing article prose now need improvement, sentence like "Pizza serving Croatia like largest cities and towns in Zagreb ..." is not clear. The comments about random youtubers seems disproportionate, and the article instead ought to focus on history of pizza in Croatia and what (if any) traits that separate Croatian pizzas from its Italian origins. No qpq needed. --Soman (talk) 14:01, 10 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Article is currently at AfD and therefore this must go on hold.--Launchballer 16:56, 11 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]