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Pizza in Croatia
- ... that Croatia has Italian food into the largest cities and towns introduced pizza to Croatia?
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Pizza in Croatia
- Comment: I have yes
Created by WhoWorldLive (talk).
Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has fewer than 5 past nominations.
WhoWorldLive (talk) 09:07, 10 November 2024 (UTC).
- Date ok, but length insufficient to qualify for DYK. Hook needs to be reworked, the grammar is not clear. Some of the existing article prose now need improvement, sentence like "Pizza serving Croatia like largest cities and towns in Zagreb ..." is not clear. The comments about random youtubers seems disproportionate, and the article instead ought to focus on history of pizza in Croatia and what (if any) traits that separate Croatian pizzas from its Italian origins. No qpq needed. --Soman (talk) 14:01, 10 November 2024 (UTC)