Talk:Parvez Elahi/GA1
GA Review
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Nominator: Titan2456 (talk · contribs) 02:36, 24 August 2024 (UTC)
Reviewer: Saqib (talk · contribs) 13:15, 8 September 2024 (UTC)
I generally don’t write GA reviews, but I felt compelled to share my 2cents on this BLP. Honestly, it’s far from reaching GA status. GA articles are typically broad in their coverage, but this one is lacking. For example, it includes only a single paragraph about his five-year tenure as Chief Minister of Punjab and doesn’t address his role as President of PTI. Additionally, his term as Deputy PM is missing details about his performance or actions during that time. The BLP also neglects his service as Federal and Provincial Minister in various ministries and fails to document his performance. Furthermore, it lacks information on the numerous corruption allegations and charges against Elahi. And some paragraphs are not sourced at all, which means they contain W:OR
Please avoid nominating such BLPs for GA unless they are thoroughly prepared and near ready for such a status. Overall, this BLP is an incomplete BLP of one of Pakistan’s prominent politicians.--— Saqib (talk I contribs) 13:15, 8 September 2024 (UTC)